Penname: Neli P [Contact]
Real name: Patricia
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I became a "PotterManiac" after reading Chapter 12 ('The Mirror of Erised') of "The Philosopher's Stone". I love all the books, but with some strong Veritaserum, I might admit that my favorite books are "Goblet of Fire", "Half-Blood Prince" and "Prisoner of Azkaban" ;).

I am a TOTAL, PROUD 'Harry/Ginny', 'Ron/Hermione' shipper, as you will certainly notice in my FanFic ...

And some of the stories I submitted to MNFF are also posted on Veritaserum (the 'other HP site', not the potion of course *LOL*) under my real name "Patricia" :) :)
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The Seekers by Cassie Payne
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 57]

Summary: What happens AFTER they climb out of the portrait hole?

Funny, but he had never thought of using the Invisibility Cloak in his schemes to woo Ginny.



Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4511 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/29/05 Updated: 07/29/05


Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 08/12/05 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter Twenty Four and 1/2

Great job! I hope JKR saved 'the best for last' and we'll have more H/G fluff in the 7th book (because, *fingers crossed*, they will get back together!). This story was beautifully written. I particularly loved the 'Gin Gin/ Har Har' part :), it was very sweet. You should write more, I can't wait for your version of the 'particularly happy moment by the lake'. :)

Author's Response: :)

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 08/12/05 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter Twenty Four and 1/2

Great job! I hope JKR saved 'the best for last' and we'll have more H/G fluff in the 7th book (because, *fingers crossed*, they will get back together!). This story was beautifully written. I particularly loved the 'Gin Gin/ Har Har' part :), it was very sweet. You should write more, I can't wait for your version of the 'particularly happy moment by the lake'. :)

Author's Response: Thank you - I'm hoping for a reunion too, but I think we'll see more emotional development out of Ron and Hermione. But what do I know, I thought R/H would happen in book six.

 

Summary: In the summer after HBP, Ginny tries to find a way to deal with her separation from Harry. Contains spoilers.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3554 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/11/05 Updated: 08/11/05


Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 08/28/05 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Great story! So sad but also so true! I must say I LOVE how you write 'Ginny-attending-her-brother's-wedding' (Ron's in "Great Divide" and Bill's in this one): her dress, he thoughts, and the way she longs for Harry without letting it show. Good job, as always! :) :)

 

Broken by Huskers
Rated: [Reviews - 248]

Summary: Nine years has passed since Harry defeated Voldemort. Nine years that he spent in a coma. He wakes, to find that life has passed him by. How do you go on, and can love be found after it has been destoryed?

This story was written pre HBP and takes none of that new cannon into account. Also, it might be better defined as a series of one shots than an ongoing story.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 35962 Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/05/05 Updated: 11/17/05


Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 09/19/05 Title: Chapter 1: June 2008

What a wonderful first chapter! It is ... touching ... that Harry takes his father and godfather's names and disappear somewhere to find (I guess) some peace... :) What, and the other guy's name is Bill?????? Hmm!!

Author's Response: Thanks. Seemed appropriate for Harry to use those names if he was going to hide from the world. Bill, there is no significance to his name. Just seemed like a good name for a 50-60 year old resort owner in the north woods of Minnesota.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 09/19/05 Title: Chapter 2: March 2013

The chapter is Great, as usual! Ok, I know it's after a coma and all, but I don't like seing Harry like this... it breaks my heart a little bit :( Again, Bill is quite intriguing...

Author's Response: Well, it is supposed to break your heart as to the state Harry is in. And Bill, he's a Muggle version of Dumbledore.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 09/19/05 Title: Chapter 3: March 2015

'She was as broken as he was'... Now you've done it, Huskers, I got the teary eye!! This is a very different FF, and I suppose the 'relax & peace' mood of the first chapter just got us soften for the next chapters! Great job!

Author's Response: Yes, it is a different type of fan fic. Hope it works for you guys.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 10/01/05 Title: Chapter 4: August 2016

It is soooo sad, really, that scene Harry turned his back on her! What has Ginny done to upset him that much?? My wild guess is she had "fraternized with the enemy" to save him somehow, and he could not forgive her for that!! About the little girl, 'brown hair and green eyes'?? And Ginny doesn't know her birth parents?? Pleazzzzzeee, the next chapter!! :)

Author's Response: No, she did not fraternize with the enemy. I might be able to have her do something to betray Harry, but certainly not Malfoy. The next chapter is in the queue and should be up soon.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 11/17/05 Title: Chapter 13: March 2021

"Her mother and her father do".... OH, how sweet * sniff *. Whatever might happen to the "After Voldemort", I wish it could be something like this, really! :) It has been a great story and I am so glad you gave us a sample of your GREAT talent here. Don't forget to send us an owl for your book signing, OK?? Cheers, :D :D

Author's Response: Thank you "Neli P" and not just for your comments, but for all the work you did helping me to edit, Blood Traitor and Unlocked Mind. I really appreciate every bit of help you gave me.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 10/26/05 Title: Chapter 10: December 2018

OMG! OMG! I am amazed by the love, the forgiveness, the "angel"! Everything was perfect. Wow, you have "evolved" so much as an author since your last story, as it is possible. Great Job, Awesome Job. Keep writing more, OK? :)

Author's Response: Thank you for your comments, especially about my having evolved as an author. I've got a few more chapters for this story, but after that I'm pretty much done with my HP fan fic quill. I won't say never, but I want to do something of my own, that maybe I can get published some day. Thanks again Patricia, your comments and help have been much appreciated.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 11/14/05 Title: Chapter 12: July 2020

Amazing! I have always loved the way you pictured Lily and Ginny's relationship (they only met in "minds" but their feelings and their bond are so real and strong). The "windows" concept is excellent, and I am glad Ginny finally chose the right one. Last but not least, I loved the Ron-Fred-George-Harry fighting scene, you did a great job with reminding we're still in HP world. Hey, when you mentionned "Susan", is it Susan Bones? :)

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you mentioned the Ron-Fred-George-Harry fight at the begining. There is so much that happens in this chapter, that things get lost. It is one of the reasons I tried to write shorter chapters for this story than in my other works. Unfortunately, this chapter kept growing on me. And yes, it was Susan Bones.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 11/03/05 Title: Chapter 11: June 2019

My first reaction was: Wooo Hoooo, they're married! Then Hermione's reaction just made me so sad. Huskers, you are doing an awesome job with describing how Hermione felt "betrayed" by the 2 persons she loves: first Ginny left, and let her 'pick up the pieces' with Harry, then he left, then showed up (out of nowhere) with the cause of their heartache for the last 10 years... Pfeww, I guess Hermione is the only person whose love for Harry is "exclusive and unique" enough not to blow up in front of Ginny. Great, great, great! 100/10 :)

Author's Response: Yes, you can see where Hermione would be upset. A point to make, Harry may have left England, but he never "left" Hermione or Ron. They have always know where he was, and they visit him some times. Remember, Hermione set up the guest rooms in Harry's house. Hermione's 'hurt' over Harry's marriage, has less to do with who, than it does with not being there. She was there for all the bad, and wants to share in his happiness. And yes, her relationship with Harry is very unique.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 10/21/05 Title: Chapter 5: December 2016

Excellent chapter again! Stephanie is such a witty, clever girl. She certainly understands more about Harry and Ginny's pain than Harry and Ginny themselves. I liked the way you "connected" Harry and Stephanie. Can't wait to read the next chapter :)

Author's Response: I'm not sure Stephanie understands it better, she is just a very caring girl, who has a great ability to give of herself.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 10/21/05 Title: Chapter 6: October 2017

OMG! OMG! The guilt, the pain, the love... all too heavy to bear for Ginny. Huskers, you did an AWESOME JOB in bringing out the "human" side of Ginny's character. I LOVE this chapter, even if/ because it made me cry ;) 1000/10.

Author's Response: Thank you. I really tried to write a more human story this time around, and I'm pleased to see that people are enjoying it and think I did a good job with it.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 10/21/05 Title: Chapter 7: October 2017 Continued

Wow. The "Saving Stephanie" scene was soooo poignant :) I loved the idea of Harry pouring his love for his friends and for Ginny into Stephanie. And the flashes about loosing people he loved made it even more meaningful. Now, I hope that Harry realizes why Ginny had left him... And I know I've done this before in your other stories, but you'd better get Harry and Ginny back together at the end. Otherwise ^_^ * LOL *

Author's Response: Thanks again, and I'm not sure what Harry is supposed to understand about Ginny leaving him. It was not for Stephanie, because she had already left him at that point.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 10/21/05 Title: Chapter 8: August 2018

Cute! Cute! Cute! They actually have a "real family breakfast" :D, I wonder what question "she was not ready to answer" ... :) :)

Author's Response: Breakfast is always tastey. As to the questions, Ginny has lots of them to answer for to her familly.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 10/21/05 Title: Chapter 9: September 2018

Awwww! That is definitely more like the Harry I like :) :) And a Weasley is not a Weasley if she is "filthy rich", isn't it? *LOL* Actually, I'm very glad you bring back that "Weasley money issue" in this chapter. It is one of the reasons I love this family so much! And Stephanie still ROCKS! I can't believe she's been adopted ;) Update soon, OK?

Author's Response: No, the Weaselys do always seem to be poor, course if Harry and her to come back together, she won't be poor any longer. Glad you like Stephanie.

 

Moment of Clarity by Melindaleo
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 38]

Summary: A HBP Missing Moment (so beware, spoilers ahead). Ron told Harry that Ginny had visited the hospital wing while he'd been unconscious. We know what Harry's overactive subconscious imagined happened during that visit...but what was Ginny thinking?

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4947 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/19/05 Updated: 09/19/05


Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 10/01/05 Title: Chapter 1: Moment of Clarity

Wow, just WOW! And after all that, "He" still has to split up with "Her" at the end!! Boys really were stupid! :D :D... I absolutely loved your story. The emotions, the reactions and even the humor... everything is perfect! Any other "missing moment" like this one on the way?? Like the "particularly happy moment spent at the lake", perhaps?? *wink* :)

 

Summary: The seven women who loved Ron Weasley.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 6323 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/10/10 Updated: 10/10/10


Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 09/16/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww ... So sweet!
Molly's, Ginny's, Rosie's and of course Hermione's made me cry. I
t was also a very nice touch with Angelina's (my heart still aches for George).
And a special BRAVO for making Lavender (a tiny) bit more likeable to me ;)
Simply wonderful, really!

 
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