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I became a "PotterManiac" after reading Chapter 12 ('The Mirror of Erised') of "The Philosopher's Stone". I love all the books, but with some strong Veritaserum, I might admit that my favorite books are "Goblet of Fire", "Half-Blood Prince" and "Prisoner of Azkaban" ;).

I am a TOTAL, PROUD 'Harry/Ginny', 'Ron/Hermione' shipper, as you will certainly notice in my FanFic ...

And some of the stories I submitted to MNFF are also posted on Veritaserum (the 'other HP site', not the potion of course *LOL*) under my real name "Patricia" :) :)
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Summary: Harry, Ginny, Ron, and Hermione struggle to fill their roles in the two prophecies. Time is growing short and the finally battle looms. Who will decide where and when it takes place? Will the foursome find the key to Harry's victory in time?

This is the year seven sequel to, Harry Potter and the Blood Traitor. Read that first, or you will have no clue what is going on in this. Now that HBP is out, and I have continued to post my story, Harry Potter and the Unlocked Mind, I thought I would take a second to say this. Unlocked Mind will not be modified in any way to accomodate any of the cannon from HBP. Unlocked Mind, while not posted, was essentially finished before the release of JKR's book. Any similarities that my version of year seven has that may tie it to JKR's version of year six are coincidence.


Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 134286 Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/02/05 Updated: 09/01/05


Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 06/18/05 Title: Chapter 4: The General Begins to Plan

The "memories sharing" are very romantic :) Hey, I hope we will find out what did Ginny and Hermione find in the vault, in a next chapter perhaps?? This story is awesome, I can't wait for what is coming next :D

Author's Response: Wouldn't it be cool to share memories like that?

The potions vault, they are going to come up with something, what it is, who knows. Will it be a clue to how to defeat Voldemort? Maybe there is nothing in all of those notes that will help them find out what Riddle has done to himself. Maybe they will find a way to use a potion to help Harry fight Voldemort. So many possibilities, and so little ability from the author.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 07/29/05 Title: Chapter 11: Something Amiss

GREAT chapter! I just 'got over' HBP, so I do wish the Ginny-Draco part happened FOR REAL(!). I love the idea of the new wand: no "priori incantatum" will be involved at the next Harry-Voldemort encounter. I am glad you won't change the story to suit HBP. It is ... sort of ... comforting to know that ".... " is still there, you know ... * teary eye *

Author's Response: Yep, Draco needed to really be put in his place, and it never happened in HBP. What did happen is his failure to kill Dumbledore. Voldemort is going to be pissed. I think Draco will be lucky to live through it, and may even go into hiding instead of going back to his Master. He could also end up becoming Harry's spy, because we found out he was not capable of being a DE at the end of book 6. Does he take that step in book 7, or does he fight for good? Bummed about Dumbledore are you???

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 07/29/05 Title: Chapter 12: Bluff Discovered

The 'birthday chick' was fun * LOL * You know what, I got a bit worried at the "sacrifice his queen to save his king" thing... Am I overreacting?? Again, this is an excellent chapter, as usual. Good job!

Author's Response: Yeah, that was fun with the birthday chick.

no comment.

Glad you liked the chapter.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 07/29/05 Title: Chapter 13: The Room with the Locked Door

Even with the sad story about Snape's family, I still don't trust him, sorry (that has nothing to do with your excellent writing, BTW). And Hermione and Ginny should double-check their potion before believing Snape did nothing with it...

Author's Response: Somewhere, you have to make the leap of faith and trust. Has Snape earned it?? I thought he did at the end of OtP when he told Dumbledore whre to find Harry. Course I was wrong. I still don't buy him as evil for HBP. I know he is, and belive he is in JKR's mind, but that part of the story did not work for me. Too much to get into too explain it here.

it wasn't a potion, but notes that he was messing with. And of course they will check them. Ginny might trust someone like Snape with her life, but I'm not sure she even trusts Ron and Hermione with Harry's. She will be checking on everyone. Remember, she has her own version of the chocolate frog cards.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 08/21/05 Title: Chapter 18: Stalemate

Awesome chapter again, Huskers. My favourite quote: "He already knows where you are, doesn't he?". Voldemort is so evil, but appeared so foolish at that moment (GO, Ginny :D!). Draco's 'change of heart' was a nice move too. I agree with you that the only things that can change his mind is his mother's death, and the feel of love or friendship he never had known (even with his buddies Crabe and Goyle). Update soon, OK?

Author's Response: Thanks. Voldemort does look like a fool a few times in the chapter, doesn't he? The price you pay for underestimating people. I too think that the only thing that can change Draco's mind is his mother. I'll update as soon as they open the queue.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 08/11/05 Title: Chapter 14: Repercussions of Eternity

OK, the "mind sharing" is very cool, but I guess sooner or later, this would not be enough. Anyway, I think that Voldemort has never loved - emotionnaly or physically-. H/G and R/Hr truly love each other, that we know. Perhaps sharing their love 'physically' would give them an edge over Voldemort? Love is, after all, the power he never understood? Great chapter, Huskers, I am off reading the next! :)

Author's Response: Yes, sooner of later, hormones will just take over and demand to be dealt with. Any experience of love would be something that could be used to fight against Voldemort. Thanks for the review and I hope you like the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 08/11/05 Title: Chapter 15: Sacrificed

This chapter was a true roller-coaster ride! You have skillfully dragged us from horror, to romance, to strategy (BTW, you're scaring me with what you are intended to do with Ron's chess games), then back to the epic promises. What can I say after that? GREAT would be a small word! :) Last thing: GO, Hermione, you're the GIRL! :D

Author's Response: There was a lot in this chapter, wasn't there? Ron's game of chess should scare you. If you have not figured it out yet, he is not playing chess. He is figuring out how Harry is going to destroy Voldemort.

Happy that Hermione got some, are you??

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 08/12/05 Title: Chapter 16: Setting the Board

The theory about the Dementors was truly amazing (or should I say ... scaring). You have mentionned that this story will follow its course after HBP, and I guess all the chapters have been finished before HBP. Yet I find that there was a parallel between 'creating the Dementors' and 'splitting the soul into Horcruxes'. Where am I going with that? I think you are a real Seer (I don't mean like "Professor Treloony"! It was a sincere compliment)! :D

Author's Response: There is quite a parallel there. It is nothing that I planned on. I never would have come up with the horcruxes the way JKR did. I only took it as far as the dementors. I see that they were split into good and evil. And it will be expanded on in a later chapter.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 08/12/05 Title: Chapter 17: Whose Trap Is It?

WOW! That was soooo sweet (!) I'll have to read that chapter again just to enjoy how Ginny made a fool out of Bellatrix and Lucius Malfoy. Voldemort and Ginny's exchange was also excellent, and you pictured the 'balance of power' between them magnificently. So far, I guess you made 'Ssssnape' a good guy who simply carried on the game? In this chapter (in the dungeon scene) he was too silent to persuade me (!). Again, an "O" for this amazing chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah, she did get one over on Bellatrix and Lucius. I can see Voldemort being just like this. It is kind of how JKR wrote him in the scene with Frank Bryce at the begining of GoF. Still don't trust Snape, eh?? Well, there is a reason Ginny is only allowing him into the dungeon with her and Voldemort. I'll lwt you try to figure out what it is. But remember he did help Lily brew the potion that saved Harry as an infant.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 06/09/05 Title: Chapter 2: Weddings

That was one of the most BRILLIANT wedding chapter I've ever read, and that means something, considering how difficult is it to write about weddings. I LOVED the vows, poetic and truthful. It was clever to 'bring back' what Harry and Ginny saw in the Mirror of Erised, it added an deep touch of emotion to the ceremonies. Great job, Huskers. 100/10 and BRAVISSIMO! :) :)

Author's Response: Thank you. This chapter took forever to write. Actually, it was the vows that were such a pain in the arse. Glad you liked it, and I appreciate your continued loalty and dedication to reading/reviewing my stories.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 06/13/05 Title: Chapter 3: It Begins

I liked the way you used Occlumency and Legilimency in this chapter: it was a very "creative" way for the newlyweds to "communicate" without the 'sex thing' :D. And of course, your interpretation of the First prophecy was very nice too! Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like the Occlumency and Legilimency. And it is kind of neat the way it gives them a connection without going into the sexual realm.

I'm also glad you like my interpretation of the first prophecy. I actually have a few more thoughts on it than those in my story. The big one is, can someone other than Voldemort kill Harry? I know almost every story says only Voldemort can kill him, even my story takes this view, but the prophecy does not say that, in any way, shape, or form.

Just something to think about.

 

Summary: They say that true love conquers all. Harry and Ginny, and Ron and Hermione will be able to put this to the test during the new term to come. With a deranged killer on the loose, new friends, a new Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher, and Voldemort planning his final attack, it will be a year of trials and tribulations. And what exactly is the Year of the Dragon? You'll just have to read to find out!

CHAPTER 14 IS UP! CHAPTER 15 IS IN QUEUE!



Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 58249 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Published:
06/15/05 Updated: 05/27/06


Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 07/08/05 Title: Chapter 1: Summertime Surprises

Great start! Yeah, I am soooo glad you made Ron's dreams come true for the year to come (Headboy, Quidditch captain AND ... a REAL Firebolt). That is the way I see it too (well, had a peek at the Mirror of Erised :)). Loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you! I made him Headboy and Quidditch Captain, because Harry is going to be rather busy himself!!

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 07/08/05 Title: Chapter 2: Draco Malfoy?!

OMG! Crafty, you just set the "fox to mind the geese": Draco and Snape at the Burrow? And Draco and Luna????? That one is original (Ok, you noted that Draco was drugged)! Name for the pup?? "Fresh Pickled Toad" (I swear, I have not looked (yet) at your next chapters) ^_^.

Author's Response: Yes, I try to be original when I'm writing :) Cool name!!!

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 07/08/05 Title: Chapter 2: Draco Malfoy?!

OMG! Crafty, you just set the "fox to mind the geese": Draco and Snape at the Burrow? And Draco and Luna????? That one is original (Ok, you noted that Draco was drugged)! Name for the pup?? "Fresh Pickled Toad" (I swear, I have not looked (yet) at your next chapters) ^_^.

Author's Response: :)

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 07/08/05 Title: Chapter 3: The Killer at Large

Brrr! Poor, Draco (there, I said it!), Lucius is absolutely berserk ... and scary. Great chapter again, and a special two-thumbs-up for the BRILLIANT "filling and drilling" thing * LOL *. Is it just me or Snape is too quick with the calming potions to shut Draco up?? :)

Author's Response: I'm SO glad you liked Hermione's shirt :) I meant for my readers to be feeling sorry for Draco. And I just figured that Snape wouldn't want to deal with Draco too much, so he gave him the Calming Draught to....well...calm him :)

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 07/09/05 Title: Chapter 4: Happy Birthday, Harry

You did an absolutely terrific job with Fred and George :). I love them too, so it is always a little difficult to write them well in FanFic (for me anyway...). BTW, I think I know what to ask for my next birthday: a Pensieve! *LOL* That is brilliant!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Fred and George are SO fun to write!!!

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 07/09/05 Title: Chapter 5: The Letter

* sniff * Ok, the only way Draco Malfoy could make me feel sorry for him is ... being OoC (!). The letter was indeed very touching, and incredibly true, I loved it! I've never thought of Draco and Luna being together, but why not after all, as JKR said that she will not be with Neville, and I really can't see Harry with someone else than Ginny or Ron with another girl than Hermione :) Please update soon, I love how your story goes. ^_^

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm having fun making a new Draco. And I thought Luna could use a friend :) I'm really anxious for the next chapter to get out of queue (grrrrrr......been there a week.....grumble). Hopefully it will be up soon! I saw that you had some fics I hadn't reviewed yet, so I promise to get to them!!!

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 07/29/05 Title: Chapter 6: Hogwarts, Sweet Hogwarts

The Sorting Hat's song was AWSOME! I am amazed by the "message of peace" in that song. By the way, Draco in this story may not be as OOC as I thought (!) Just to let you know: when I read about him crying in Moaning Myrtle's toilet (HBP), your "Letter" just came to my min :O. I hope that tells you how great your story is! :) You definitely deserve an "O" for this story!

Author's Response: I'm so glad no one has thought the Sorting Hat song sucked! I would have been devastated :( I'm so flattered that my fic came to mind while you were reading about Draco in HBP. What a compliment!

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 07/29/05 Title: Chapter 7: Lurking in the Forest

Wow, Professor Charlie Weasley, wow! Sooo much better than Professor Snake... I mean Snape (Urgh!!!). The "Voldemort's name thing" is pure genious, I loved it :). I also like the way you respect Luna's loony character in her relationship with Malfoy... Ok, if I call him Draco, will you hurry with the next chapter, PLEASE :)

Author's Response: HAHAHA! Professor Snake! Glad you liked Professor Charlie's antics. And yes, what would Luna be if she wasn't loony?

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 07/29/05 Title: Chapter 7: Lurking in the Forest

Wow, Professor Charlie Weasley, wow! Sooo much better than Professor Snake... I mean Snape (Urgh!!!). The "Voldemort's name thing" is pure genious, I loved it :). I also like the way you respect Luna's loony character in her relationship with Malfoy... Ok, if I call him Draco, will you hurry with the next chapter, PLEASE :)

Author's Response: Ditto :)

 
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