Favorite Quotes: " "You moron, Dudley!" " ~Harry, HP Book #5~(Makes me laugh hysterically every time I read it)
" "Make way for the heir of Slytherin, seriously evil wizard coming through..." " ~One of the Weasley twins, HP Book #2~
" "We tried to shut him in a pyramid, but Mum spotted us." " ~George, HP Book #3~
" "You haven't got a letter on yours," George observed. "But I suppose she thinks you don't forget your name. But we're not stupid-we know we're called Gred and Forge." " ~George, HP Book #1~
Favorite Books: Harry Potter Series(obviously), Inheritance Series, Shadow Children Series(I know the author's son). I like many more books, but I can't think of them right now. Oh, The Chronicles of Narnia.
Favorite Movies: Harry Potter movies, The Chronicles of Narnia: The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe, Seven Brides for Seven Brothers, Beverly Hills Ninja, The Sound of Music, A Walk to Remember, Eragon(you MUST see this movie!), and Ella Enchanted(I know it sounds wierd, but I do like it!).
Favorite Things To Do: Read, swim, do karate(I know, I know), play the piano, and watch football( and obviously read fan fiction!).
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Last Login Date: December 7th, 2007.
Oh, that was so sad. It makes me want to cry. Thanks for that.
I thought this was a very good story, and I took pleasure in reading it. But rather than just say that, I will tell you why
I thought the setting for this story was perfect. You put Sirius and Lily in the place that had been part of their home for the past seven years. You put them where they were probably the most comfortable, and that made it easier for them to talk to each other. I also think it just ... fits. The way you had the one little candle flickering and how you had Lily with her notebook out, just sitting there. I really liked it.
The characterization was done really well. I know you have had people comment on this before, but I thought I'd do it anyways.
I liked how you did Sirius. You kept him in his sort of "self-loving" manner shall we say? You kept him swaggering and thinking he was the best until he talked to Lily. I think you made him really sensitive and wise when he was talking to Lily. For once, he was serious (no, not a pun) about something. He was because he wanted to help Lily.
I think Lily was in character pretty much the whole time, but I think it was just a little unrealistic to have Lily spilling her heart out to Sirius. I think it would have made it even better than you have written it if Lily would have been a little more unsure of if she should tell Sirius. Maybe she could have stuttered or stopped more often when she was talking to him, or something like that. I do like Lily's characterization, I just wanted to make a tiny suggestion.
I think the best thing about your story was the idea. You made it so appealing. Lily was in need of help. Sirius was being his usual self, wandering about at night, and stumbled upon her. Lily finds herself telling Sirius everything about her. Not just blurting out everything, mind you, actually taking comfort in the fact that Sirius was there for her. I think that is the best part of the story. Sirius was there for Lily. She didn't have anyone, and Sirius turned up. She finally found someone to love and someone to love her back.
I really enjoyed this story, and I wish you happy writings in the future.
Author's Response: Oh wow, I really appreciate the depth of your review! Thank you! And yes, I completely agree that Lily probably should have been more hesitant to talk to Sirius, but this was in response to a quote that went something along the lines of: \"anyone can be trusted with your life, but only a few can be trusted with your world\" [which I should have put at the beginning of this fic]. That\'s the only reason that I wrote comfortable!Lily, but yes, I agree with what you said. :) Thanks again for the fantastic review!
This is really good, Analisical! I really like it!
I think that you kept the Twins nicely IC. I didn't have to go correcting their sentences in my head. ;)
I really like your plot, and I can't wait for the next chapter! *huggles*
Author's Response: Aw, thanks Jamical! *huggles* You\'re the best...;)