Favorite Quotes: " "You moron, Dudley!" " ~Harry, HP Book #5~(Makes me laugh hysterically every time I read it)
" "Make way for the heir of Slytherin, seriously evil wizard coming through..." " ~One of the Weasley twins, HP Book #2~
" "We tried to shut him in a pyramid, but Mum spotted us." " ~George, HP Book #3~
" "You haven't got a letter on yours," George observed. "But I suppose she thinks you don't forget your name. But we're not stupid-we know we're called Gred and Forge." " ~George, HP Book #1~
Favorite Books: Harry Potter Series(obviously), Inheritance Series, Shadow Children Series(I know the author's son). I like many more books, but I can't think of them right now. Oh, The Chronicles of Narnia.
Favorite Movies: Harry Potter movies, The Chronicles of Narnia: The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe, Seven Brides for Seven Brothers, Beverly Hills Ninja, The Sound of Music, A Walk to Remember, Eragon(you MUST see this movie!), and Ella Enchanted(I know it sounds wierd, but I do like it!).
Favorite Things To Do: Read, swim, do karate(I know, I know), play the piano, and watch football( and obviously read fan fiction!).
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Last Login Date: December 7th, 2007.
This is good. I can't wait to see how you develop the story. Hurry and update!
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m working on chapter three now.
This is really good. I like the way you made your character believable. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
This is so sad. I was thinking about writing about this, but you took it. Phooey.
Author's Response: Aw, well you can still write your own version of the events - this isn\'t the only \"Halloween 1981\" fic out there. Just so long as you don\'t use my song! :] Thanks for the review!
oh my gosh! that was soooo incredibly sad! my eyes are watering. keep up the good writing - can't wait for other stories.
Author's Response: Thank you! A little angst is sometimes, a good thing. :) I\'m glad you enjoyed it.
i always want to leave meaningful reviews, but I can't seem to ever do it. So here goes...
i always want to leave meaningful reviews, but I can't seem to ever do it. So here goes...
Author's Response: Thank you! :). I worked very hard on this story to get it just right.
Hi, this is a really good story.
In the beginning, I liked how Severus and Draco came to the Shreaking Shack, and the old hag was there. Your real strenght there was having Richelle snap and yell at him. You would expect husband and wife to rush into each others' arms, but you did a really good job on that.
I also really liked the way you characterized Snape. You portrayed him as he was in the books, but you also added a little twist. You made him care. You made him want Richelle to care too. I think that that is a really important part of the story.
Another thing I liked was when Snape and Richelle had their fight. Snape knew excatly how to act to get Richelle to calm down. This shows that they had a really well developed relationship, and you showed that really well.
The only thing I would suggest is that you make the family line a little more clear. After reading it a couple of times, I understood who was related to whom, but it took me a little while.
Overall, I think this is a really well developed story, and I can't wait for future chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the nice review. I appreciate the praise and the critique. I think the family \"lines\" are a little blurred because I kept changing my mind about them... Originally, I only planned 5 chapters, but I have written a side story that serves as background and I am considering writing more. Again, thank you for reviewing -- it\'s nice to know that someone has read it.
That was really cute, CJ!
I felt that the rythm was a little bit off, but other than that, I thought it was a really good poem!
Author's Response: Thanks, Jamie! Can you PM me to describe why you thought the beat was off so maybe I can change it? Thanks! CJ
Uh-oh. Lupin found out. Now they're in trouble. Hurry up with the next chapter!
Author's Response: Will do.
Holy cow! This is great! Tisk tisk on Harry and Ginny. Update soon!
Author's Response: Will do
Cute. I've always wanted Remus to have some romance in his life. He hardlly ever does in other stories. This is great.
This was so sad. It has a lot of deep meaning. I think that Hermione would probably go back to being a Muggle. Kudos for the story. I think it is a really good plot-line. Can't wait for future work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the nice review! I\'m glad you read so much into the story. <3
This is a great story. I loved how you portrayed their feelings all through the story. I liked the change from Lucius being abusive to Narcissa. I thought their realationship was very cute and loving. Overall, a great story to read!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, james_fanatic. I\'m glad you liked it, especially about the change from the common fanon portrayal of the Malfoy family.
Good job with the story. It was really well written, and I think you did a good job on expressing Snape. This was a really good story.
Author's Response: Thanks, great job betaing this fic. You really helped. =) -VL
I really liked this story. It's so hard to find pairings like Hermione/Cedric. I think that they are really sweet together.
My favorite line was by Ron in the very last part. That was hilarious! Just like Ron. Good work.
Author's Response: *squee* A review already! =]
I\'m so happy you liked it. It was hard writing it, but I rather liked the outcome. Even though, for a while I thought it was overly fluffy.
My favorite line is also the ending with Ron. Lol. Thanks for your review!
I really enjoyed this story, and I really like your writing style.
I think Luna's characterization was done really well. You showed her in all her glory: she was quirky, silly, and straight - forward. That is what makes Luna wonderful. I really liked how you portrayed her. Many people cannot do a good Luna because she is so hard to write. It takes real tallent.
I think that Snape was a little OOC. I'm not saying that's not good. In this story, it was necessary to have Snape a little OOC because the story just wouldn't have worked any other way. But, back to my point. There were a few moments when Snape doubted himself, and we just never see that in the books. I also think Snape is more serious in the books than he is in this fic, but I think that was partly what you were trying to go for.
I do like the way you did the banter between Luna and Snape. Luna didn't even mean to do it. It was part of her nature, and I think you did really well on that.
A lot of people would say that you need to include more details on the setting and so forth, but I disagree. I think that the way you write makes the story all the more special. You don't rely on details to make the story good. Details are good, but in your story, you don't need them because it is mostly just interaction between the two characters. I really like how you wrote that.
I also like the humour you put into the story. You can include little comments by Luna or by Snape that are just hilarious! You make Luna so realistic! She makeds Snape more at home around her. She seems to bring out the good things in him, and I like that about this story. I think you did a really good job.
This was a really great story. I thought this was a really sweet story. I loved how you kept Draco in character. Some people can't do that, and you did a really nice job on that. I also really liked Roxanne. She was really sweet and had a really strong will. I loved how she just wouldn't give up and how you showed how she felt empty when she didn't know how to fight back. Very well done.
Author's Response: *Squee!* Hi Jamie! :D I\'m really glad you liked this story, and I\'m extremely relieved that I could manage to keep Draco in character! (I was quite worried about that, to tell the tuth). Thanks for the sweet review!
Oooooh. Priz, that was very good! I liked the line(s):
Celestial diamonds covered the skies,
Shining as her world was ending,
Emulating the spark that left his green eyes.
She could feel her soul descending.
It just felt very sad and touching, those lines. Good job!
Author's Response: Jamie! Thank you so much hun :D I really appreciate the feedback! Glad you liked it *huggles*
Oooooh! This was such a good poem. I think the way you incorporated Harry's emotions was really good. I liked how you made the reader actually believe Harry's emotions. Nice job on this.
Author's Response: Thanks Jamie! I\'m happy to hear that my writing is believable! ; )
THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY!!!!!!!!
I liked how you kept Malfoy in character. He was still his arrogant self while still able to have feelings about Pansy and being a Death Eater.
I liked how you described things throughout the story. I could always picture what was happening and what everything looked like. You didn't over - describe things, which is good because that tends to make stories boring.
I also liked the way you portrayed Pansy. The books don't tell a lot about her, and you used your freedom on that. I think that you did an excellent job on choosing what her personality was like and portraying it how you wanted to.
I really liked the idea of Pansy and Draco falling for each other. Malfoy needed her, and she came back for him. She was always there for him, and he needed that. I really like how you made them have their relationship.
Finally, the end. The end, I think, was the most powerful out of the whole story. Draco and Pansy couldn't be together because they would just be miserable without having each other by their sides, so they had to end their relationship. I think you did that very realistically. They both wanted to be together, but they both knew it coudn't happen.
I really loved this story, and it is going in my favorites.
Author's Response: Oh, my, thank you so much! I did my best to keep both Draco and Pansy in character and portrayed nicely, and I\'m glad you liked their characterizations! And yes, them remaining together just would not have worked. <3
Thanks so much for this wonderful review. And I saw you left a review for this story in the Fiction Junction as well! Thank you so much! :D *huggles*