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Well, I'm 20and I just was recently introduced to the wonderful world of fanfiction. I'm very canon on my ships....Remus/Tonks, James/Lily, Harry/Ginny, and Ron/Hermione. Love 'em all. Have to say though, Tonks is my favorite character. I wish I was a metamorphomagus....maybe I just like the amazing characterization of her that Kerichi does in the wonderful Lover's Moon series. Go read that if you havent checked it out

My first story is now up! Please read and review Cutting Down His Shadow. I will love you forever if you do!

Alright, people have been a little confused as to who's who in the story. OK so here we go.

Meera Chanduramani: The daughter of Lord Voldemort (deceased in Second Wizarding War) and Dhara Chanduramani.

James Potter: Son of Harry Potter and Ginny Weasley.

William (Bill) Weasley: Son of Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger.

Daniel (Dan) Thomas: Son of Dean Thomas and Lavender Brown

Emma Thomas: Daughter of Dean Thomas and Lavender Brown, twin sister of Dan.

Eleanor (Ellie) Longbottom: Daughter of Neville Longbottom and Luna Lovegood

Oedipus (Ed) Malfoy: Son of Draco Malfoy and Pansy Parkinson

Blanche Weasley: Daughter of Bill Weasley (deceased in Second Wizarding War) and Fleur Delacour.

Sirius Weasley: Son of Bill Weasley (deceased in Second Wizarding War) and Fleur Delacour, older brother of Blanche Weasley

Brian Finnigan: Son of Seamus Finnigan and Romilda Vane.

Mallory Finnigan: Daughter of Seamus Finnigan and Romilda Vane, twin sister of Brian.

Katrina Wood: Daughter of Oliver Wood.

Theodore (Teddy) Lupin: Son of Remus Lupin and Nymphadora Tonks.

Everybody else is either completely original characters, whose parents were not part of HP canon, or they are characters from canon that we know and love.

As of 3/22/2009
My muse is back! Thank the literature gods. College stress and other factors lead to extreme business for quite some time, and when I got back to the story, my muse decided to go into hibernation. Sad times. But it's awake now and the next chapter is being typed up as I speak. Yay!!!!
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A Past Reclaimed by nuw255
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 1455]

Summary: Sequel to A Stolen Past. Please read that story first, as this one really won’t make sense if you don’t.

Harry Potter has rejoined the Wizarding world after a year-long absence, but still has no memory of his time at Hogwarts. Will he ever get his memory back? Will he be able to pass his classes without it? And most importantly, will he ever be able to defeat Lord Voldemort? Read on as the last of the mysteries introduced in A Stolen Past are finally revealed.

This is a story of friendship and mystery, with a healthy dose of H/G thrown in for good measure.

Categories: Mystery Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Violence

Word count: 129677 Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/15/06 Updated: 03/17/07


Reviewer: patelnotpatil Signed
Date: 03/13/07 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Dangerous Surprises

Oh my god. I think I just died laughing. Puff the Magic Dragon???? HAHAHAHAHAHA

That was scary about the whole Ginny-throwing-herself-in-front-of-Bludger deal. I'm glad you didn't kill her off though. :D

Can't wait for another update!

Author's Response: I\'m glad you enjoyed Puff. *sigh* I\'ve always wanted to call Draco that.

I\'m glad you didn\'t want me to kill Ginny off, but then, I just couldn\'t do it. After all, I had to keep her around so she can witness Harry\'s death. *gasp* Am I kidding? Or not?

 
Reviewer: patelnotpatil Signed
Date: 03/18/07 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Beyond the Veil

YAY! Happy endings are WONDERFUL! I love the idea of the Love Room killing off all evil...that's why Remus isn't a werewolf. And I so totally called that the False Death Charm would be a key part of the last chapter. hehe. My two favorite lines definitely were "It takes more than a bloody curtain to kill Sirius Black!" and "Stubby Boardman!!! Can I have your autograph?" When I read Luna's line, I inhaled my Sprite because I started laughing hysterically. Yay! It's kind of sad that this story is over though. Oh well, at least there's still more H/G goodness to look forward to in Magical Myths!! Wow I think this is the longest review I've ever left...

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really loved writing both of those lines (and a few others as well). Don\'t you just love Luna?

 

Cruciatus Cursed by Moony 62442
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 199]

Summary: Everything in life has a “what if?”

What if Voldemort didn’t try to kill Harry in the Atrium of the Ministry of Magic? What if he used the Cruciatus curse instead? What if Dumbledore didn’t come to the rescue until ten minutes after the curse had been executed? And what if Harry had been held under said curse for all ten minutes?

All the answers and more lie ahead…

Slightly AU as it is an alternate ending for Order of the Phoenix. Check out info. on this story on my profile!

***Nominated for a Quicksilver Award***

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded, Violence

Word count: 29776 Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/14/06 Updated: 09/30/07


Reviewer: patelnotpatil Signed
Date: 04/17/07 Title: Chapter 12: The Dark Arts

CREEEEEPY!!!!!!! Harry is doing the Dark Arts!!!!! Uh, holy shit? Pardon my french. Lol. But OMG yikes, I kind of feel bad that Wormtail just died (I think)...wait, what am I talking about, no I don't! It's fitting that Harry should kill the man who betrayed his parents. Stupid rat. Anyways, I bet you Voldemort's not so happy that Harry's so powerful!!! Competition...oooo...I mean, he has to realize that Harry is going to get his memory back at some point and then all that raw power is going to be channeled into rage towards HIM. What's going to be left? A pile of Riddle dust. Let's hope that Harry doesn't kill anyone else before that happens though...

Author's Response: Hee why thank you for the change in languages, hun. Very entertaining! XD Now don\'t count your chicks before they hatch! We dunno if he killed him or not. Though it does look that way doesn\'t it? : ) Riddle dust? Oooh is that patented or can I use that in future?? ; ) Thanks a bunch and I hope you enjoy the next chapter! ~Miss Moony

 
Reviewer: patelnotpatil Signed
Date: 03/12/07 Title: Chapter 10: Initiation

I love this story!!! Wow....Harry the Death Eater, now there's a twist I would never be able to think of. And I love your characterization of Snape and how he feels torn between his dislike of the Potter family and his conscience telling him to do his duty to the Order! Can't wait to read more! I hope it gets a little bit happier!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! It just popped into my head one day, so I am glad to know that random ideas can be a hit.^^ I see Snape as a bit more \'human\' (if you will) that he is portrayed. Well, in his thoughts, anyway. I hope to get the next chapter up soon and here is a spoiler for ya: There will be a (fairly) happy ending. ^.^ Thanks again! ~Moony

 
Reviewer: patelnotpatil Signed
Date: 04/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: Cursed

Lol, you are more than welcome to use Riddle dust...if you mention my name in the author's note! hehe. Also, do me a favor and go read and review my story Cutting Dow His Shadow! *shameless promotion* hehe

Author's Response: Haha! I will definitely do that for you, no worries^_^ And hey, there is nothing wrong with some promotion, shameless or not! ; ) I\'ll go read and review right now! ~Miss Moony

 

Dear Snarky Severus by Kerichi
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 41]

Summary:

Albus Dumbledore is a man of many secrets. One of them is his secret identity as an advice columnist, the Wise Wizard. When he coerces Snape to fill in, readers discover the Sagacious Sorcerer answering their queries would be better named Snarky Severus!

 



Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Substance Abuse

Word count: 2076 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/29/07 Updated: 01/29/07


Reviewer: patelnotpatil Signed
Date: 01/29/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

that was the best humor fic i've read in a while.

this totally made my day!

omg I can't stop laughing...

Author's Response: Yay, you like Snarky Severus! I think he\'d be fab as a columnist, but probably chagrined that his carefully crafted \'bad\' advice led to good for those he loathes, lol.

 

Into the Dark by Kerichi
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: On the brink of becoming a Death Eater, Severus finds that in the blackest of rooms, someone will hold him and say, 'I'll follow you into the dark.'

*Follows More Than a Feeling and The Potions Master's Apprentice*


Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations

Word count: 3612 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/03/07 Updated: 03/03/07


Reviewer: patelnotpatil Signed
Date: 03/13/07 Title: Chapter 1: Into the Dark

I just finished reading the entire Eris/Snape series and I must say, I adore it! Eris is a wonderful OC, and I like your characterization of Severus. Are you planning on continuing this story? I hope so! I want to see what becomes of Eris.

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, you read this too! You made my day. Funny you ask, :D, but even though I won\'t have another Snape/Eris fic, they might just come up again in the R/T HBP story to come once Moonlight and Shadow is finished. Be a good mystery, Tonks meeting a mysterious \'Lady of the Wood\' and then finding out...*Gasp!* Snape has a cat! ^_~

 

Summary:



What do you do when the man who murdered your best friend turns up and claims to be innocent?




What do you do when you realise you slowly start trusting him again?




What do you do when you fall in love against your will – with a man half your age?





This is a McGonagall/Snape fic about trust, friendship, shame, and love. It’s canon compliant otherwise; set immediately after HBP except for a mini prologue.




This fic also is my attempt at continuing the at Book 7, so you also have the war against Voldemort, the search for the Horcruxces, and the way they run Hogwarts during that year included in the plot.




Side characters like Ron, Hermione, Moody, Lupin, Tonks, Neville, Augusta Longbottom, Draco, Hagrid, and the rest of the Weasleys get their fair share of the story.




It is done novel style, which means that some apparently minor issues mentioned in early chapters will become important in later chapters. I do recommend you read them in the right order.




To be on the safe side, I rated this “Professors” because it contains violence, sexuality, character deaths, and torture - although none of them described in detail.




Also I now have added an AU warning - my story contains two detals that we will not see happening in "Deathly Hallows". I made the Sorting Hat a Horcrux, and Arthur Weasley will become interim Minister for Magic in my last chapter. Well, I wrote this before those rumors were shot down as non-canon by JKR, and I'd not like to change my plot now - so, sadly, my story has become a bit AU. You have been warned ;-)






Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 66463 Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/09/07 Updated: 05/02/07


Reviewer: patelnotpatil Signed
Date: 04/30/07 Title: Chapter 11: Memories

AWWWW!!!! This was such a sweet but so tragic chapter! It seriously made me tear up. Sigh. Please, oh, please don't kill off Snape. McGonagall needs some happiness in her life.

Do Hermione and Madam Pomfrey realize that McGonagall and Snape have a relationship or they just think that they were really close friends?

Author's Response: Thanks again for your comments. As for Hermione... I\'d say she\'s a smart girl, but she will explain fully how much she has realized (in the last chapter, I mean). Now, Poppy... no, I\'d say she thinks they are just friends, that\'s why she came up with that survivor\'s guilt explanation - which is a fairly common experience in suchlike situations after all.

 
Reviewer: patelnotpatil Signed
Date: 03/27/07 Title: Chapter 5: Fighting Passion

wonderful. absolutely wonderful. I have never read a Snape/McGonagall fic before this, and you did a wonderful job of keeping them in character while having them fall for each other. I can't wait to read more, update soon please!

Author's Response: Thank you. Thank you so much. (*Big grin on my face*) - Next chapter will be on queue in, oh, maybe half an hour...

 
Reviewer: patelnotpatil Signed
Date: 05/06/07 Title: Chapter 12: Through the Eyes of the Others

Aw! It's over! I feel bad for Mad-Eye though! Poor guy...ah, well, he'll get over it, right?

But yay! They're openly together! And people are ok with it, sort of...

Sequel? Maybe? Just to show like, public opinions of the Snape/McGonagall romance. And I want to see Snape propose and the wedding and everything! Hehehe...

Author's Response: Poor Moody, I know - I was a bit mean to him. But he\'s a tough one, he\'ll get over it I guess. And about the sequel thing: well, I\'ve said no before because all I have in mind is just what you suggested - a series of vignettes showing other folks\' opinions on that relationship, and how they react when they find out by and by... but it does IMHO not (yet?) qualify for a real story wih a plot and all. I\'ll think about it, I promise. After all it\'s quite flattering that quite some readers have asked for a sequel (*blush*)

 
Reviewer: patelnotpatil Signed
Date: 04/19/07 Title: Chapter 10: The Killing Curse

NO!!!! Don't die Snape! You're too stubborn of a bastard to let Voldemort win! NO!!!!!

I seriously cried when Snape used all that energy to save Minerva. I want a man to do something like that for me...

I really hope you don't kill him off!!!! It'd be too sad, after all that they've been through...

Author's Response: A bit worried, are you, huh? ;-) I agree it\'d be so sad if he died, but after all, real love makes one willing to sacrifice yourself - ah, you\'ll see what happens next. I promise I\'ll update soon.

 

Time after Time by Kerichi
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 11]

Summary:

If you're lost, you can look, and you will find me.... After Tonks finds a Time-Turner in a 'suitcase of memories,' a stumble leads to a trip back to 1976. When she goes to Hogwarts to ask Dumbledore for help, she finds Remus.

 



Categories: Remus/Tonks Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations

Word count: 2307 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/22/07 Updated: 03/22/07


Reviewer: patelnotpatil Signed
Date: 07/31/07 Title: Chapter 1: Time after Time

Ok random story, I was watching TV and they were showing a preview of a new show, I think it's called Journeyman. Anyways it's about a guy who travels in time, and then they used the song Time after Time! I was like, "THEY SO STOLE THAT IDEA FROM KERICHI'S STORY!"

lol ok, I'm done being a dork now.

Author's Response: If the show is good, I\'ll say \'Great minds think alike.\' If it\'s crap, I\'ll still think using the song is a fab idea! ^_~ Thank you for telling me that! You\'re not a dork, you\'re a savvy soul with a great memory!

 

Summary: It's the sequel to "The Dark Lord's Blog," guys! (And girls... and, I don't know, gender-neutral people and centaurs and walruses and parameciums and shrubs and stuff.)

Several months have passed since Filch came into possession of Voldemort's magical powers, and he has taken over Hogwarts.

With Filch serving as The Dark Lord Snoogerblossom, the position of Hogwarts caretaker/janitor is open. Seeing as Voldemort wants his magical powers back, he and his extremely attractive new sidekick, Mungo Phelps, go undercover at Hogwarts, with Mungo posing as a transfer student and Voldemort posing as the new janitor. Wacky high-jinks ensue.

Join Voldemort as he tries to get back his magic, kill Harry Potter, steal Gryffindor's sword to make a shiny new Horcrux, romance Minerva McGonagall, discover Sirius's secret to becoming a chick magnet, and swallow a teaspoon of his pride to mop up spills the Muggle way and wear an unflattering uniform! WARNING: Extremely silly and very out-of-character.

If you haven't read "The Dark Lord's Blog," well, what are you doing? GO READ IT NOW! Just click on my author name and you'll be directed to my chaotic author page, which lists all my wacky stories.

This is on hiatus, dudes. Ooh! But it was twice nominated by nice (and insane) people for the Best Humour Fic award in the Quicksilver Quills thingy!

Also, some wonderful loony nominated Mungo Phelps for Best Male OC, making him if possible even more conceited! (No one had the heart to tell Mungo that he was designed as an example of a terrible OC.)


EXCITING NEWS! "The E-Journal of an Evil Janitor" is now continued as a Twitter blog! Go to Twitter dot com and find thedarklord666. Voldy's waiting!

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4020 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
03/25/07 Updated: 04/30/07


Reviewer: patelnotpatil Signed
Date: 04/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Not A Loyal Slave In The World

He'sssssss back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have been anxiously awaiting the sequel, and now I am very happy to have it! :D :D :D. I definitely just read this instead of doing my biology homework, but who cares? It's second semester senior year. MOVING ON! This was as funny if not funnier than all the previous entries in the Dark Lord's blog. You really have a gift for humor. Ever thought of becoming a comedian? Hehe.

Author's Response: Why, thank you very much! Hmmm, it would be fun to be a comedian, and I do love to be onstage (I generally think myself as a comedic actress). Maybe I could write and star in crazy screenplays for movies?

 
Reviewer: patelnotpatil Signed
Date: 05/01/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Enter The OC. Dramatically.

bahahahahaha

Shoes! OMG Shoes! I loveeee that video and I definitely loved the references.

This story just keeps me laughing and its great. I'm getting weird looks from my teachers again...once again, on MNFF instead of doing homework...oh well, this story is much more entertaining, and I'm a senior. The end.



Author's Response: SQUEEE! You got my \'shoes\' reference! And heck, I read fanfiction instead of doing my homework, and I\'m a freshman! No worries!

 

Almost Me Again by nuw255
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 443]

Summary: Harry Potter disappears immediately after defeating Lord Voldemort, and the circumstances all point to him being dead. But when has Harry ever been known to just roll over and die? Join Harry on a journey of self-discovery to find the family he never knew he had.

Post-Hogwarts H/G

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 58359 Chapters: 14 Completed: No
Published:
04/07/07 Updated: 10/31/07


Reviewer: patelnotpatil Signed
Date: 05/14/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Searching for Answers

AHHHH this story keeps getting better and better!!!! Oh my goodness. Brian is so far in denial, he's in Egypt! Hehe sorry, bad joke. Anyways, I love that Hermione figured out what happened. What else is new? And poor Harry, talk about a shock. I hope he has enough sense to go back and talk to Ginny about what happened now! Loved it, loved it, loved it. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you! Your joke about Brian may be bad, but it\'s absolutely right. I\'m very glad you liked the chapter. Harry will eventually go back and talk to Ginny, but it\'s not happening until he has no other options left -- the idea is too frightening to him. ;-)

 
Reviewer: patelnotpatil Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Job Interview

I like this a lot! Dudley Dursley is still a dumb brick, although I bet you Petunia and Vernon were hit with Avada Kedavra. I'll put money on it, even! And yay! These mysterious red-headed teenagers might be exactly what Harry needs...;)

Author's Response: Thank you! You\'re right about Dudley, and your guess about Vernon and Petunia is a solid one based on what Dudley said. Next chapter: Harry goes chasing after redheads. ;-)

 
Reviewer: patelnotpatil Signed
Date: 04/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Final Battle

Woohoo! I can be obsessed with two Nuw stories again! My life felt incomplete once A Past Reclaimed was finished, but now I have this!

Wonderful beginning. I love Ginny's reaction to being called by her maiden name, hehe. Ugh, Snape. He's always such a evil jerk in your stories. Can't wait to see what crazy plot twist you have up your sleeve for this story! Especially to figure out what spell that Snape used on Harry...

Author's Response: Glad you\'re enjoying it! Hopefully a new chapter will be ready soon so you can see where the story is headed. :-)

 
Reviewer: patelnotpatil Signed
Date: 04/18/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: John Doe Wheatfield

so wait, Harry has to wait another 24 years to get his mind back to the point where he was when he was...for lack of a better word, cursed? Ahhh! Another New/Nuw nailbaiter here, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: In a way, you\'re right. But I\'m probably not going to be that mean. Anyway, thanks for reviewing! The next chapter is in the queue, and I hope it gets posted quickly. :-)

 
Reviewer: patelnotpatil Signed
Date: 07/13/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Defense Against the Dark Arts

I feel like Ginny isn't being very understanding of Harry right now. I know she's happy to have her husband back and wants things to pick up right where they left off, but she has to give him some time to adjust to the situation. Maybe it's just me though....

Overall, great chapter, I think it's hilarious that Harry keeps reaching for his gun and not his wand. Haha. And at least Brian isn't being a jerk.

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad you liked the chapter, though I think that, given what she\'s having to deal with emotionally, Ginny is doing a remarkably good job of giving Harry time and space. I mean, if any women I know were in her shoes when Harry said that her age was part of the problem, I don\'t think there would have been much of Harry left! ;-)

 
Reviewer: patelnotpatil Signed
Date: 07/20/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Explanations

I'm so glad Harry told the kids up front what happened. Saves them a lot of useless speculation. That's so cute that Lily and Harry are playing chess together :D. I also love the "Constant Vigilance" game. Hopefully Harry gets himself together so that he can deal with Ginny :D

Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked the chapter. With Harry thinking like a teenager, and the memory of his being kept in the dark during the start of the war relatively fresh in his mind, he\'s not going to keep any secrets he doesn\'t feel are necessary. I\'m also glad you liked the chess and the Constant Vigilance Game. Unfortunately, Harry will have to do some growing up before he can \"deal with Ginny.\" We\'ll have to see if he\'s up to the challenge. ;-)

 
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