About me... well, thats a good question...
I'm shortish, (small in general actually), with brown hair and greeny/pale brown eyes.
My interests are horse riding, reading, acting, drawing, dancing and writing, so most of my time is spent on my computer, with my horse or at rehersals for shows. I do go to sixth form as well, but that doesn't count. I also spent far to much time with my friends instead of doing homework and coursework.
My favourite HP characters are Remus, Sirius and Tonks, but I couldn't tell you what my favourite book is, they're all great!
I've actually posted three fics now, but I have several others in progress, and thousands of plot bunnies hopping round my head, most of which will probably never be written! I write original stories too, but most of these are pretty bad, theres only a few I actually like.
Anyway, I'm going to shut up now, this is probably very boring to read....
Wow, another amazing chapter! How the hell do you think of these ideas? Great story though, loved Oblivious too.
I liked this fic, I think Sirius and Regulus interacted well with each other, and both were characterised well. It was a pretty dark fic in some respects, but that reflects well the atmosphere of the time it was set during. The thoughts of both were also well written to supplement their speech.
There were a few small errors, mainly in capitalisation, Order wasn't capitalised in a few places and Dark Mark should be capitalised as well. Other than that, it was a really nice fic and I liked it a lot!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read this and review - sorry for taking so long to respond. I\'m glad you liked it, but I\'ll go back and change those capitilisations now.
Lol! This fic is slightly odd, but I think that makes it even more funny! I really liked the book from the first chapter, and the whole revenge thing was very funny, if slightly OOC. But hey, snowball fights cause everyone to act weirdly!
Ron's drunkeness was handled very well too, although I can spot a few grammatical or typing errors (desired instead of sesired for example). I really liked the story though, it was an interesting take on a snowball fight and very funny.
Author's Response: Thanks! : ) I love hearing that people love my stories! It makes my day! *huggles* I\'m really trying to keep the Ron OOC to a minimum, so please forgive me!
Wow, good chapter. Keep going with the story, I want to know what happens!
Wow!! Think that's exactly what they'd all say in respose to those predictions, love the girldfriends bit too!
Author's Response: Thank you! There\'s nothing better than being IC.
Wow! My family is looking at me very strangely now, seeing as I've just spent the last five minutes laughing uncontrolably!!! I love the bit at the beginning about not eating the opposing team, and Voldemort and Harry are so OOC in the commentary its hilarious!
Loved the rulebook thing as well, great idea!
Author's Response: Nice username! I\'m glad you liked it. Yeah, I would be a tad scared to have to play against Fenrir and Nagini... and pretty much everyone else on the Death Eaters\' team except for Draco and Stan Shunpike, for that matter. The concept of Voldy and Harry sitting in the commentator\'s box together just makes me giggle... and Mind_Over_Matter is pretty much responsible for the rulebooks. I can\'t remember who made Voldy and Harry commentators. Cheers! --Schmergo (Schmerg_The_Impaler)
I really liked this, Peter has a personality! So many fics show him without one, its nice for him to have one for once. It was a great characterisation of him, and paves the way for the type of person he'll become in later life too. Great story!!
I thought this was a really well-written story, and a good characterisation of Harry. The start is good as it could be about any character, then you drop clues as to who it could be before revealing his name.
The part about asking questions is also very good, it is realistic to the story and the use of it at various points thoughout the story emphasises the importance of being able to ask questions to Harry.
The only critiscm I have to make is that the thoughts and words of other people should be in italics, like the 'Harry, Harry . . . .' part.
It was a really good story, I really liked reading it!
I really liked the start of this story, it was a very powerful beginning and it sets the scene well. I particularly liked the way you introduced Elle, and I think she's a good character, well developed in the chapter and beliveable. The way she interacts with the various other characters is also done very well.
The only critisms I can make is the use of commas, as a few more are needed in places, and Death Eaters should be capitalised.
Its a really good chapter, and I'll definately be reading more of this story!
Author's Response: Thank you, I am glad you liked it. I always like to know when people read my story.
This is an incredibly emotional fic. I like the importance you place on names, giving the fic a common theme that runs through it, and showing the emotions Andromeda feels about various members of her family in a natural way.
The characterisation here is also realistic, especially for two characters we know so little about. Ted is caring and loving, helpful towards his wife, whilst Andromeda is strong and rebellious, but not oevrly so. The way you have written both characters also makes them compliment each other well, and leads to the successful interaction.
I like this fic, a lot.
Wow, a very moving fic... That made me cry too... *grabs tissue and carries on with review*.
The fic was amazing at capturing the emotions of Harry and Catherine, and also the action and confusion of the scene with the Erkling. It makes me wish I could write action. Amazing, in short. the last few paragraphs were particularly poigant, with the meeting between Harry and Catherine described really well, and really tugging on the heartstrings.
The only problem I can spot with the fic is where you use 'drug' to refer to Harry dragging his ankle, I think it should be 'dragged' not 'drug'. I loved it though, a very emotional piece.
Author's Response: Thank you Ash I think I learned more from my DADA class than I ever thought I would.
WAHAY!! It was validated! *squees*
Okay, randomness over. But, as your beta, I think I'm allowed to be a little hyper...
Anyway... I love this story, and you already know what I think of it pretty much, so this review will be completely empty of any concrit. I'm sure you won't mind. But, well done! (and thanks for the thanks!)
Ash (who thinks this review makes no sense)
Author's Response: It does make sense, dear! Thanks for reviewing!!! :D Oh, and I\'d have been a total moron if I didn\'t thak you for all your amazing work! *hugs* ~Priz (who is equally hyper since this is my first story :D)
I love this poem! Again, not much concrit from me, because you've already heard my thoughts on this poem. But, I just thought I'd show my beta-ly support for your poem, cuz we all love getting reviews! Lovely word use, by the way, you have a great vocabulary. I'm still not sure about the punctuation, but that's probably my poetry skills not yours.
Anyway... Glad this got validated, go the next fic!
Author's Response: *squee* Heya, Ash! Thanks for dropping by! I\'m really glad you like my word choice *blushes* I\'m not very sure about the punctuation either.... Anyways, thanks for the lovely review! And go Dave!!! :D
Woooh! It got validated! I would give you a concrit review, but you already know what I think of it, so well done for getting it validated!!
Author's Response: Hi! I just wanted to say, you\'re critisism had been really helpful so far!