Hey! my name's sarai, i enjoy writing, reading, dancing, singing, swimming, and acting. i have 4 cats and a horse.
I am a hopless hp fanatic. i have read all of the books 15 times, and i know just about every peice of hp trivia there is. (if you doubt this, contact me and put me to the test!) I can even recite the first chapter of the first book. sad huh?
My absolute FAVORITE SHIP EVER has got to be Lilly/James. I'm such a hopeless romantic. =P. I also ship Ron/Hermionie and Harry/Ginny.
be sorted @ nimbo.net
actually, i think I'm more of a Ravenclaw myself, but the sorthing hat never lies...
There are not enough surpurlatives in the english launguage to express how wonderful your writing is. I ABSOULUTLY LOVE YOUR STORY! Your writing style is wonderful, your plot is steady and original, and your character devealopment is supurb! I would give it a 1,000,000 if I could! FOR THE LOVE OF THE SIXTH BOOK, WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
she IS dead!!!!!!!!!!! :'( :'( :'( WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!! QUE HORROR! QUE HORROR Y LASTIMA! (translation: what horror! what horror and what a shame!)
HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ARE YOU EVEN ALIVE???????????????????????????????????????????? QUICK, EVERYONE, SEND FOR THE DETECTIVES, I THINK SHE'S BEEN MURDERED!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! COME BAAAAAAAAAAAACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :'( :'( :'( :'(
Summary: Dealing with girls had never been Ron Weasley's 'cup of tea'. So, he will seek and find some advices from his most reliable sources: his brothers (!) to solve his personal riddle, as known as 'Hermione Granger'.
You're a fraud. A complete, utter fraud. I read the exact same story at another fan fiction site:Veritaserum. Here's the link in case you don't belive me:http://www.veritaserum.com/fanfiction2/fanfiction/story.php?id=510
it's wrong to steal other peoples work. You are a F-R-A-U-D!
Author's Response: Hey, Granger, thanks for reading and recognizing my story, even on another site! Indeed, I posted the same story on Veritaserum, as "Patricia" (my real name, or 'P' in "Neli P")! I suggest you read my personal information before posting such an accusation!
im sorry i accused you... i was just so mad because ive had work stolen and i kno how it feels...i shouldn't have said that without any back-up info, and im really sorry. :( on a different note, i love your story and i think it's realy funny and sweet.
please accept my appologies
Author's Response: Appologies accepted and THANKS for the rectification :)! I know how hard all authors have to work to bring up a good story, and trust me, I am TRULY sorry that your work had been stolen! BTW, I read that you are working on a R/Hr story? I am looking forward to read it on Mugglenet (and Veritaserum too ??*wink*) :)
Summary: One-shot fluff. How Ron finally admits his feelings to Hermione, and what sparks him to do it.
OK, one word: AAAAAAAAAAW! :) soooo sweet! you are such a wonderful writer... write more!!!!
It was very good! I liked it a lot ! :) i wish it was longer though...could you put in some more "suff" into the plot so it doesnt go along as quickly? just some advice. all and all though, great fic! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your advice. Actually, the second chapter is in the queue, waiting to be approved. Sorry to say...it's a cliffhanger. It's more Ron and Ginny-ish than Hermione, who has a little part at the end. Better stop now, otherwise I'll tell you the whole story...lol. But really, thanks so much for your reviews; they really help encourage me a lot. Bye!
Summary: Bearing in mind the events of book 6, this story now no longer fits into the overall plot of Harry Potter. However, I shall continue to write it regardless, keeping it as a separate story. Therefore, please remember that it will not be influenced by book 6. It's the beginning of Harry, Ron and Hermione's seventh year at Hogwarts and change is in the air. Unfortunately, Ron seems to be the only one who doesn't sense it.
YOUO ARE A GREAT WRITER!!!!! are you sure you aren't jk rowling in disguise? :P i LOVED IT!!!! FOR THE LOVE OF THE SIXTH BOOK WRITE MROE!!!!!!!
Great writing! I love it!!!! Good plot, solid too, character devealopment is good, and personal touches make it outstounding!!! DARN THOSE NITPICKY REVEIWERS WHO WONT LET YOU POST THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DARN THEM ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *shakes fist in air*
Anyways, great fic!
Author's Response: Thanks for the support!!! I'm currently going over my third chapter. I'll try to submit it, but if it gets rejected, I'll most probably post it on harrypotterfanfiction.com. Anyway, I'll tell you if I do.
Summary: Ron and Hermione sort out their feelings after Ron kisses Hermione during a ball and she leaves. R/Hr with hints of H/G. One-shot.
This story is so good! You have quite a talent for writing and you can really express raw emotion quite well! :) It's such a sweet story, and actually expresses real fealings that people feel after their first kiss. WONDERFUL JOB!!!!!!!! FOR THE LOVE OF THE SIXTH BOOK, WRITE MORE! -Sarai
Summary: It's nearing Valentine's day, and Hermione falls asleep in the common room again. When she wakes, she finds a gift and a number of notes from her, 'Secret Admirer'. With the given clues, will she figure out who it is, and will he be the oh-so-special-one she dreams of it being? Everyday, she receives a new clue, and everyday, she comes closer to figuring out who it is.
~* By Vicky (hermioneclone12) and Nickle. GUYS!!! The last chapter is up!! Enjoy!!
GREAT FIC!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
QUICK, BEFORE I EXPLODE!!!!!!!!
*turns red and wildly runs around the room*
ok, you get the point right? UPDATE!
Author's Response: UPDATINGUPDATINGUPDATING UPDATINGUPDATINGUPDATING UPDATINGUPDATING!!!!!! We will.
i love it! sounds exactly like JK Rowling wrote this...kinda creepy actually....any way, i love it! absolutly brilliant!!!!!!!!! *10*
Author's Response: Thanks! I assure you, I'm no JK Rowling, though! Just your average, everyday lunatic...:)
wonderfull. brilliant, amazing, awsome. higly talented. 10. absolutly great. funny. perfect.
that's basically what i was thinking while i was reading...you get the drift. :)
Author's Response: What a wonderful drift, lol! Thank you for all the lovely compliments, I love them all. Thanks a bunch!
Summary: James Potter: Marauder. Lily Evans: Prefect. They're both seventh years at Hogwarts. They're also about to have a pretty interesting year--complete with a few detentions, pranks, confusion, and laughter--in which they get through school, make some trouble and maybe, just maybe, sort out their feelings for each other.
Thanks to all you who have made it possible for this story to be in the Top Tens. It was a very happy moment when I first saw my story on the list, and I love being able to go back and see it there now. Still. Yay!
Throughout the latter half of 2010, and the first half of 2011, I re-edited this story. The changes were mostly to fix stray (and annoying) grammar and spelling errors, but also to rework some plot points in an effort to stay truer to canon. I also updated the style; having written this story so long ago, my writing has definitely developed (and I would say gotten better), so I edited to reflect that. (I apologize for the errors that were in the story before all this editing. I found them immensely distressing when I reread my chapters. Heartbreaking, really.)
Big “thank yous” go to the three people who helped edit/nitpick the first edition of this novel: violagirl, fairiesandcream, and Omagus.
And yes, this story is up on Fanficition.net under the penname: Io.Sono.Emilia.
Of course, as a disclaimer, I’m not JK Rowling. The Potterverse does not belong to me, but I am in it and love it.
Aww, how cute =) I love the ending, it made me laugh out loud. I could just perfectly picture everything, you describe the scenes so well. I feel so bad for Sirius though; I hope Nikeia gets better soon! This is quite a good story, update soon and keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Haha. Thanks. I actually write them as if I have a movie playing in my head and I want every detail to be written down. Thanks soo much. I\'ve siad this once, and I\'ll say it again- I do not kill Nikeia, it just takes a while for her to get better.
this is a really amazing stroy; you are quite a good author =). the characters are so human, and you've captured greif really well. most authors really dont portray it correctly, but i felt almost excatly the same as James when my mother died. you really are very good at capturing emotions...keep writing! =)
Author's Response: Thanks. I\'ve lost my father so i understand how it feels, even though i was five. But I\'m very happy that it comes across correctly. thank you for the compliments. :-)
good chapter, as usual. one question though. at the end of the chapter, you said "The sallow skinned man scowled and shot another jet of light at them which they quite lazily deflected with their wands." wouldnt Avada Kedavra be harder to deflect than that? or was he using a different curse? anyway, i really love the story, the emotions are perfect and the writing really flows in a quite lovely way. keep up the good work =)
Author's Response: well, if it was Avada Kedavra i would\'ve said that it was a green jet of light. There are also green curses, other then the Killing Curse, which is impossible to deflect, I beleive. Thanks much!
I love sam's ending line: "well, that was a stupid move!" So simple and innocent, yet so true and more serious than he probably intended. A wonderful job! I actually feel bad for Stacey; she was just trying to live up to her family's expectations. Anyway, you really have created a wonderful story here, one of my favorites!
Author's Response: YAY! Someone actaully feels sorry for Stacey. Phew. I mean, a few other people have said that, but not many. Kids can be deeper then we think...watch them. Thanks, much!
Summary: It's winter vacation of the trio's sixth year at Hogwarts. Hermione and Ron start yet another row, this time about Ginny. But there's more to it than that. Will Hermione and Ron ever find the answers to their problems? Or will they keep bickering forever?
A/N: This is a two-chapter fic.
aww =) it's a cute story with a good plot, but i do have one bit of constructive criticism. Try to vary your sentence structure a little bit. I noticed that they all sounded similar (she did this, then this, then she said this, then she did this, etc). Try to vary it a little bit. other than that, this is a great story!
Author's Response: LOL. Thanks. I\'ll try to fix that.