what the heck is up with all the SHUCKs? it's SHOOK for goodness' sake!!!!!!
Author's Response: Sry!!!! ^_^
refreshingly, ominously creative...
thank you soooooo much for writing this. seriously...
interesting. but I think you sort of changed the mood abruptly last minute here; it sounds a bit too expository when you talk about the fate and everything.
still, you gotta love those last sentences! thank goodness you wrote them, they make this ending awesome. good luck with future pieces, this one was a success.
yes! i knew he had it in him!
you make this inconceivable idea irresistable!
wonderfull, just absolutely awesome
i almost cried- you are incredibly talented!!!!!!!!!!!
now THAT is the most awesome thing I've ever read.
this is my second time reading... but i'm addicted- i can't wait for the next chapter! question: are you a harry/hermione shipper also?? because you kept making all those references to how subtly similar tom and harry are...
wait- 'reminded her intensely of draco malfoy'? and she's attracted to tom... hmmmmm... lol... wow... okay, sorry, this is a very annoying review. fantastic closing, by the way.
Oh my gosh. I haven't reviewed yet because I've been so sucked in, but this fic is tremendously, exceptionally creative and I just hope you know that. It's refreshing to read because you have a very patient, relaxed writing style. Keep it up.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I\'m so flattered that you liked the story so much.
SOMEBODY is the opposite of an H/G shipper!!! wow...
Author's Response: Haha...yep..let\'s face it, canon shipping gets dull.
favourite moment: "...and little pieces of hail were pelting everyone. everyone except her."
very good. just too short- update soon! i hope you'll get inside the marauders' heads mroe later on.
Author's Response: Thanks for the favourite moment! It\'s funny, you\'re the second person to say it\'s too short and it\'s actually my longest chapter so far. Don\'t worry, more James POV coming soon! Thanks for reviewing!
greatly entertaining! love how you are procrastinating on the contents of The Plan, and also it's good the way we're left wondering what's gonna happen with lily being the nurse and all. cannot wait for next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I am completely holding out on you readers, but don\'t worry! More about The Plan in chapter five (which is half-way done). I\'ll try to update ASAP!
absolutely LOOOOVE. your style is admirable and teh story is nicely concise and interesting. PLEASE gimme another chapter!! you're one of my faves! :-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I\'m so glad you like my syle of writing! I\'ll try to write a chapter ASAP, but since I\'m performing a musical all weekend it will probably be sometime in the middle of the week. I\'m so glad that this is one of your favourite stories, and thank you for reviewing!!!