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Member Since: 11/19/06
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Hello, welcome to my authors page, nice of you to stop by.

If you wish check out my favourite stories, there are some magnificent stories on there that are well worth a read.

I hope to have some stuff up soon, so watch this space!

(also i apoligise for my spelling, it's not my strong point, but i try and do it the best i can.)

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Take My Heart Away by Hatusu
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 959]

Summary: Past Featured Story Hermione goes back in time with one mission: to kill Tom Riddle before he ever comes to power. A difficult task, correct? An impossible one, she realizes, as a love between them grows stronger than anything she has ever known. Now Hermione has a choice to make. Will she condemn the Wizarding world to almost certain destruction, or will she take the life of the one boy she has ever loved?

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 39417 Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
06/27/05 Updated: 12/17/06

Reviewer: Onbegrepen Signed
Date: 01/20/07 Title: Chapter 18: Black Rose

I read this on ages ago and have just stumbled across it on here. How wonderful to come across a wonderful story i read before which i forgot about. I would just like to say this story is one of a kind and totally fab. Your writing style and plot are really engage the reader.

Congratulations on such a wonderful piece of writing.



Summary: A poem about a character seeing something very unexpected within themself. Not a long poem, but hopefully worth the read. It does not really pertain to one character alone, but if you can guess which one I had in mind I will certainly offer you my congratulations!

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 158 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
12/13/05 Updated: 12/13/05

Reviewer: Onbegrepen Signed
Date: 12/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Misshaped Dream

What a wonderful poem! I love the rhyming scheme you used.

I really like the way you havn't said who the poem is actually about, it gives it that sense of mystery, and so evrey reader is going to picture it in a diffrent way and think of a different character when reading it.

This was really good and you created some good imagery.



You and I by Foxy Wolf
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 9]

Summary: It’s November 9th 1997 and Ginny Weasley has awoken from a disturbing dream. She misses Harry terribly. She thinks of the six years she has known and loved him; and she knows that the dream was about the two of them and her feelings about their relationship.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 122 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
01/02/06 Updated: 01/02/06

Reviewer: Onbegrepen Signed
Date: 12/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Dream

This was truly beautiful, the imagery you created was wondeful.
This is a lovely poem, keep writing, you are a brilliant poet!


Author's Response: Thank you very much for those wonderful words :-)


Summary: When Salazar and Godric had their Great Schism, it hurt Helga more than she liked to admit, but she had to release her sorrows somehow. Luckily, there was a magical artifact to confide in. An Extra-Credit entry to the 2006 Valentines Romance Challenge.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1518 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
02/27/06 Updated: 02/27/06

Reviewer: Onbegrepen Signed
Date: 01/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: n/a

This was great, i really enjoyed it. I love the pairing of Salazar/Helga and this protrayed their relasionship in a realistic light. I liked what you done with the sorting hat it made it original.

Overall this was really good.

*adds to favourites*


Author's Response: A favourite? Wow! I didn\'t think it was that great...but I really appreciate it! This is a pretty peculiar pairing, isn\'t it? Have a nice day! *D*


Senses by Gryffinpuff
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 569]

Summary: Sense: a word of so many meanings. This is a story about senses. The common sense notion of self preservation that is lost when friends are in need, the senses of the body that can be damaged so easily, and the intuitive senses of the heart that tell you when things have changed. R/Hr focused with a little bit of H/G, not a lot of fluff, with rotating views between the characters on a truly horrific day.

Quicksilver Quills Runner-Up - Best Romance, Canon

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 44591 Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
05/01/06 Updated: 05/01/07

Reviewer: Onbegrepen Signed
Date: 11/29/06 Title: Chapter 13: Common Sense

Wow that was a great chappie! I am hooked on this story, can't wait to find out what happens to Ron and Hermione. You are a really great writer!

Another excellant chappie.


Author's Response: Thank you =) Hope the last few chapters don\'t disappoint!


Iduna by Gryffinpuff
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: Iduna Snape is worried about her brother. He's been different this summer. Changing. She feels as though she's lost her best friend. Can she do anything to save him?

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 3224 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
07/08/06 Updated: 07/11/06

Reviewer: Onbegrepen Signed
Date: 11/20/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

I read this fic quite a while ago, but have only recently made an account on mnff. I really like you writing style and thought your charaterization of Snape was very well done. This is the first fic i've read that has had an OC i've liked.

I love your spin on Snapes charater and Iduna was wonderful! Also it is a lovely name!

Great fic, loved it!


Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for coming back and leaving a review! I\'m really glad you enjoyed it. I really loved Iduna, and kinda lost it as I wrote the outcome of this fic. Her name actually comes from Norse Mythology. Iduna was married to the God of Poetry and was keeper of the apples of youth ;)

Reviewer: Onbegrepen Signed
Date: 11/20/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

I read this fic quite a while ago, but have only recently made an account on mnff. I really like you writing style and thought your charaterization of Snape was very well done. This is the first fic i've read that has had an OC i've liked.

I love your spin on Snapes charater and Iduna was wonderful! Also it is a lovely name!

Great fic, loved it!


Author's Response: Double Post!


One Last Golden Day by Gryffinpuff
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 86]

Summary: The war has been over for nearly a year. Voldemort fell, but at a heavy price, leaving the wizarding world’s three beloved heroes prisoners in their own minds. After a year of talking with Healers and tearful visits to St. Mungo’s, Arthur Weasley is desperate. He’ll do anything to help them, even venture into the Department of Mysteries to obtain a possible cure…

Received highest marks and Order of the Hospital Wing, First Class in the Harry Hospital Wing Project!!!

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations

Word count: 10182 Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
07/22/06 Updated: 09/03/06

Reviewer: Onbegrepen Signed
Date: 11/20/06 Title: Chapter 5: Hope

Wow, this nearly brought me to tears! Which is unusaul for me. I loved this, it was something different and intresting. I've never read a fic with Aurther as the MC, and after reading this i really like his charater.

Really good, your're a great writer!

- Onbegrepen

Author's Response: Thank you! I really liked working with Arthur, and I\'m glad you found it unique and moving. Thanks for reading!


We're All Mad by Ithinkrabis2people
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: Luna ponders her place in the world ...

MUSIC - "We're All Mad", by Natasha Bedingfield from the album "Unwritten." (Seriously, listen to this song and tell me that it isn't perfect for Luna ...)

Song lines are in bold.
Flashbacks are passages in italic.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3362 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
08/19/06 Updated: 08/26/06

Reviewer: Onbegrepen Signed
Date: 12/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: We're All Mad

I saw your excerpts over at the boards and thought i'd pop over and read the whole fic, and i'm glad i did.

This was a really lovely and heart-warming peice of writing. You write Luna really well and the bit with her and her mum was wonderful!

I reallt like your style.

"I always have faith in my heart. It's all I need to get me through ..."
Using that as a last line, was a good idea. It really finished it of perfectly and is my favourite line out of the whole fic.

Keep up the good work! This was fab!



Meet the - Children? by Winged Artemis
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 244]

Summary: Lily Evans is a cheeky, brainy, hopeless romantic seventeen-year-old Head Girl with a sour temper. James Potter is an arrogant, hilarious, prank-pulling seventeen-year-old Head Boy with an immature head on his shoulders. Lily loathes James and James loves Lily. Blahblahblah.

However, when a mysterious locket and a very wacked Headmaster inform the two of them that their son is in grave danger, James, Lily, and of course, Sirius, are magically transported to the future to meet James and Lily's son and the state that the magical world is in.

A twist of mystery, fun, romance and some Sirius humor! And with a wee bit of J/L, H/G, and R/Hr!

WARNING: Tree climbing Dumbledores, valuable pieces of jewelry, and an ecess of sugar are contained inside - oh, and HBP is disregarded.

See profile for update information.

Categories: Mystery Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 11269 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
11/15/06 Updated: 09/08/07

Reviewer: Onbegrepen Signed
Date: 11/26/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two - To the Future

This is really good and an intresting concept, i am looking forward to where you are going to take this.

I can't wait for Harry to meet Conner, Erin and Garrett, and i hope he relises that they are actually his parents and Sirius.

I found out about this story when i saw your banner on the forums.

Well done, keep it up!


Author's Response: Thank you! In the next chapter, Harry and Ginny will meet the three of them and they\'ll go somewhere and....yeah. Glad you like it! I\'m a bit more than half way done with it, and I have to send it to my beta and through the queue, so it\'ll be anywhere from a week to a month for the next one to be up. Thanks so much again!

Reviewer: Onbegrepen Signed
Date: 12/19/06 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three - Meeting and Eating

"When it's Remus' 'time of the month', we're always quite supportive," James added.

That line really made me laugh.

I like this fic and am very eager for Harry to relise that they are his parents! Can't wait for that.

Brilliant writing keep it up, you very good at making me laugh!

Btw, i've added this story to my favourites.


Author's Response: Thanks a ton! I\'m glad you liked it! I have to give credits to my Beta for that line, but thanks again!

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