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I think I'm back... It's been years, I know, but I've missed the fanfiction world.


About my stories: (for anyone who cares to read them, though I really wouldn't suggest it...)

I started posting these when I was young. REALLY, really... young. It's glaringly obvious just how inexperienced I was at writing (and life?), but I don't have it in my heart to delete my fics, which may or may not be a reflection on my real life (I'll take "Hopeless Pining and the Inability to Let Go" for $1,000, Alex).

In fact, I don't want to to delete them. At all. If I continue them, I plan to just build off of what I have, even if what I have isn't so great. (By the by, I wouldn't suggest doing that in other areas of life. Like, say, construction.) They may be embarassingly underwritten, but they're mine!

Right now, though, I'm just trying to catch up on everything I have missed (namely, all the excellent stories that have popped up/been finished while I've been away from Fanfiction Land). Though, the site is so much more quiet then it used to be! (For obvious reasons. *sigh* I wish J.K. Rowling would sell out and write another Harry Potter book.)

Well, that's about it. I wish I could think of something more entertaining and eye-catching to put on here, but it seems my talent for wit is inversely proportional to my age.


About my username:

I was barely past tweenaged (yes, I said tweenaged) when I made this account, which of course meant that I had to have an overbearing and debilitating obsession with some celebrity or another at the time (not that I'm generalizing or anything), and would simply not have survived if I didn't firmly cement my adoration "4eva".

My victim of choice was, quite obviously, poor (or should I say "exceedingly rich"?) Mr. Radcliffe. I'm happy to say I've recovered from that addiction, (largely by moving on to other, older celebrities *cough*) though I still have the tendency to lash out in a verbal torrent of anger when anyone says he's "not even that cute". You've been warned.


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Reviews by radcliffe4eva

Marked by the fischer king

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 1 Reviews
Summary: His house beneath the shadow of a storm cloud, the man once knwon as Peter Pettigrew must choose between right and wrong.
He has ten minutes to decide whether he will die or join a group of wiizards so powerfull they will defeat everything in their way.

this is my first one shot
is only rated 3rd to fith for use of the four letter exclamation that literally means "curse" i didnt want to be rejected for improper rating.
Reviewer: radcliffe4eva Signed
Date: 03/18/07 Title: Chapter 1: First and last chapter: A Man Uncertain

That was pretty good. I really don't like Peter Pettigrew (at all - ever), but you seemed to portray him in a very realistic manner. I liked it, but I'm kind of curious as to why Peter thinks of Lily so much? Anyways...My only real 'criticism' is I think you put to l's in "Lily", when there's only one. But other then that, it was pretty much perfect. I look forward to more of your stories! :-)

Author's Response: thanks! sorry about the \"l\"s. :-) i just made up the qwhole idea of him liking lilly. james liked lilly. remus seemed to have a very close relationship even if not romantic with her. even snape likes her. it seems she was a pretty popular girl. i thought it made sense that a nothing like peter would be super into her. a big story is coming soon, The Administration. if you add me to your favoirtes youll know it as soon as its published.

Heal Over by Crows

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 17 Reviews
Summary: Just another sweet and super-fluffy Lily/James songfic with a sailboat and a cat.
Reviewer: radcliffe4eva Signed
Date: 03/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: Heal Over

That was sweet! Very nice job! Out of curiosity, who is the song by? Once again, very good job! :-)

Author's Response: It\'s by my fovorite singer, KT Tunstall. Thank you for my very first review! I love you!! ;) It\'s taken a looooooong time for my story to be validated and you have NO IDEA how happy this makes me! crows

Moving On Ain't Easy by MrsGinnyPotter1987

Rated: Professors • 32 Reviews
Summary: The Final Battle is over and as expected Harry defeated Voldemort. Its time for everyone to move on with their lives but some are finding it harder than others. Everything and everyone has changed, but some people are finding to move on and some people can't help but hold a grudge.

Rating just in case.

This is my first attempt at writing my own fan-fic so I hope you all enjoy!!
All reviews get a reply!
Reviewer: radcliffe4eva Signed
Date: 04/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: It's All Over

Very good! I like how you described how it was immediately after the war - people tend to jump around to either right before or some time after. I'm eagerly awaiting your next update - this looks like it's going to be a good story. :-)

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you liked it! I hope it turns out to be a good story to lol

Hey, You! I Don't Like Your Girlfriend by Kerichi

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 69 Reviews

He was Muggle-born, a Hufflepuff, and a slob. Andromeda Black could not understand why a boy with messy hair and untidy ways was so popular until she realised no one enjoyed life like Ted Tonks. It wasn't a secret that he liked her...and she didn't like his girlfriend.

Reviewer: radcliffe4eva Signed
Date: 04/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Hey, you!

I loved it. It was perfect. I just about screamed when I saw the title. :-)

Author's Response: Gracias! It\'s a great line. I don\'t think a female over a certain age hasn\'t had that same exact thought at one time! :D

Does True Love Last Forever? by Prongsies_Girl_93

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 31 Reviews
Summary: Remus Lupin and Sirius Black told Harry that Lily started going out with James in their seventh year, when James 'deflated his head a bit'. But, for some of us, that was a little vague. Here's the true story of how Hogwarts' Dream Couple got together.
Reviewer: radcliffe4eva Signed
Date: 06/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Well, I liked the beginning quite a bit actually. Ideas, huh? I noticed you mentioned the fact that Sirius has a girlfriend, who is James's cousin - interesting idea, actually. But, eh, it's a first to second year fic, so any of my ideas wouldn't really work... Hmm. I guess you could write about Kirsten's relationship with the Marauders (e.g. Is she with the Marauders often? What's her relationship with Lily? Her house? Odd habit of hitting Sirius 'round the head when he bugs her?) Eh, well, I tired. I hope you come up with more soon - I rather like your writing style! :-)

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you so much! I love your writing too! Thanks so much for the ideas!

Blood on the Moon by Charmed_S

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 12 Reviews
Summary: A different perspective to the usual Marauder story. Friendship, violence, love... Look at the known story from Remus's pont of view.
Reviewer: radcliffe4eva Signed
Date: 04/30/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: A Red Moon

Oh poor, poor, Remus and Romy... An interesting idea about Remus having a little brother, poor thing... Has anyone ever told you your rather descriptive? In a good (and kind of morbid) way - but I get that it's to set up the rest of the story. Really good job, I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Lol - yea I guess I was a bit overly descriptive (and was reading Edgar Allan Poe - so that should explain the morbid bit) -- but the rest won\'t be this way, this was just to show Remus\'s situation. It gonna be funny once he starts school promise! And thanks for reviewing =)

Reviewer: radcliffe4eva Signed
Date: 05/14/07 Title: Chapter 2: 2. A Lamenting Birthday-Song

I'm not entirely sure, but doesn't a reverse sun mean delays, an inflated ego, or bad judgement, and the reverse chariot mean not being able to see where and how to use your energy, and therefore wasting your energy? Hmmm....

I loved your interaction between Remus and his parents - it was very realistic.

On a side note, I noticed that you said you liked Poe, are you a fan of The Raven?

Author's Response: Hey -- the tarot meanings not really... the ones you talked about are the more daily uses they have these days. But actually, the reverse sun is one of the biggest symbols of loss in tarot, and the reverse chariot has a different and a deeper meaning.. but I\'ll explain that later in the story.. Actually on the side note, I absolutely love The Tell Tale Heart, And thank you soo much for Reviewing.. Promise the next chapter\'s gonna be way more interesting...

Reviewer: radcliffe4eva Signed
Date: 05/14/07 Title: Chapter 2: 2. A Lamenting Birthday-Song

Yeah, never really was good with the whole Tarot card thing... Either way, I forgot to ask in the other review if there was any particular reason that you had Remus show signs of lycanthropy before the full moon? If the answer to that gives away the plot, I don't expect you to answer it. I'll just have to wait...drat. :-)

Author's Response: Well yes there is a reason, like Thomas said, the wolf has a certain amount of control over the human as the human has over the wolf (during full moon obviously).. and that should be enough for now - cause yeah, it is gonna become pretty important.. But I mean I think that statement makes it pretty clear about how that piece of info\'s gonna become effective! Thanks for the review - and attentionn.. that bit was really important, I\'m so happy you caught it! :D

Memories Fading by Lalalalatina

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 8 Reviews
Summary: There is no such thing as tommorow,
All there is for her is today.

Hermione lived through the war, but lost everything...
Reviewer: radcliffe4eva Signed
Date: 04/30/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, that was beautiful! Poor Hermione...

Author's Response: Thanks to you for the review! I agree- poor, poor, poor Hermione...

Black Dog by aqua_dragon

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 4 Reviews
Summary: This is my poem/tribute to Sirius Black.
Reviewer: radcliffe4eva Signed
Date: 05/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Black dog

Very good job, especially since this is the first poem you've posted here. You're word choices make the poem somewhat dark - but it works out perfectly. I haven't had to speak Italian for a while, but doesn't "Omen di morte da solo nel mondo" mean "Omen of death alone in the world"? Once again, very good job, and thanks for reviewing my story too! Hope you post more soon! :-)

Author's Response: thanx for your response. i\'m just getting my Beta readers (ie my friends) to see if it is worthy enough. love ur story thanx again! Aqua_dragon

Something to Celebrate by EmmeElle

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 33 Reviews
Summary: Lily has big news for James, but she has to come to terms with it herself first. Will she manage to find happiness and hope in an era of despair?
Reviewer: radcliffe4eva Signed
Date: 05/13/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow. I loved it! You had me cracking up with the whole "high-five" thing. That was hilarious. I felt so bad for James when he thought Lily was having an affair. Poor thing. Anyways, great job, and I hope you post more stories in the future! :-)

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you liked the story. I have submitted another one, but it hasn\'t been validated yet. Keep an eye out for it, and thanks for reviewing!!

For The Sake of the Children by BeautifulDreamer07

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 50 Reviews
Summary: Minutes from becoming a parent for the first time, Harry Potter reflects on the beauty of his wife, Ginny, and how lucky he is to have one such as her. Nothing can shatter his perfect life with his beautiful wife...but a few surprises over the course of Ginny's labor will leave Harry reeling...
Reviewer: radcliffe4eva Signed
Date: 05/15/07 Title: Chapter 1: For the Sake of the Children

Please inform Marky the plot bunny that that ending was very sad. Please inform yourself that you did an excellent job writing this story! ;-D

Author's Response: Lol! Ah thank you for that. :). I shall inform Marky. He is quite the sly old bunny. And consider me dually informed. ;)

Forbidden Forest? Who Said Forbidden? by Rikku

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 21 Reviews
It's Lily’s and the Marauders’ fifth year at Hogwarts. Voldemort is getting stronger, lessons are getting harder and life is getting increasingly more difficult. One thing keeps repeating itself throughout the school year though; the frequent visitors of the Forbidden Forest!

What happens when Lily and her friends accidentally stumble across something in the forest they shouldn’t have?

Reviewer: radcliffe4eva Signed
Date: 06/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Annoying Cousin

Very good! I like the fact that you've made Lily sort of estranged from her mum - I don't see many people do that. I hope your next chapter gets validated soon... I noticed you were asking why some reviews were posted twice. You were right, when people push the "submit" button more than once before the next page loads, the review is posted as many times as you click it...

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review! Yeah, I figured Lily wouldn\'t look like her mum very much, mostly due to the fact that she is a witch when her mum isn\'t. And thank you for answering my question about the \"double reviews\"! I hope the next chapter gets validated soon too, but if it does get rejected, blame me! Then I obviously wasn\'t good enough to check for errors...

Reviewer: radcliffe4eva Signed
Date: 06/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Annoying Cousin

Very good! I like the fact that you've made Lily sort of estranged from her mum - I don't see many people do that. I hope your next chapter gets validated soon... I noticed you were asking why some reviews were posted twice. You were right, when people push the "submit" button more than once before the next page loads, the review is posted as many times as you click it...

Author's Response: I can see a lot of people post reviews twice.. lol.. ;)

Reviewer: radcliffe4eva Signed
Date: 06/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Annoying Cousin

Its also posted twice when you hit the back button... Whoops. :-)

Author's Response: So I see.. lol :D

Latest Mistake by On A Wire

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 8 Reviews
Summary: Ginny has made a lot of mistakes. None of which have measured up to her recent one.
Reviewer: radcliffe4eva Signed
Date: 07/31/07 Title: Chapter 1: Velvet

I'm not a Harmony shipper at all, but I'm finding you're story quite interesting. I really hope you update soon. :)

The Banebrewer by Grace has Victory

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 13 Reviews
Summary: Wolfsbane Potion is illegal, but the illicit brewing continues. Ariadne Lupin can preserve the human mind of a werewolf, but can she reverse the mindset of a whole civilisation?
Part IV of The Moon-Cursers.
Reviewer: radcliffe4eva Signed
Date: 01/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: Trod by the Gallant and True

I can see that it's been over a year since anyone reviewed this story, so I don't know if you'll even read this, but I had to say something anyway.

I haven't read this last part of the series yet, because I went ahead and clicked on the last chapter, realized Remus was at Hogwarts, noted that one of the chapters was entitled "The Last Kiss", and promptly realized that despite my hopes, you'd probably killed off Ariadne. And now reading some of the other reviews (of which this wonderful series deserves far more) I know for sure what happened. I'd had the feeling that she had to die when I noticed that you'd mentioned that you'd updated your stories to be DH compatible, but I'd hoped, somehow, she wouldn't, because you managed to make such a wonderfully realistic, very human character that it is hard to let her go. I've read a lot of fanfiction and books, and I have to tell you that yours is one of the few pieces of literature that created such a real character and such real relationships that I felt almost as if *I've* quite literally lost a real person in my life.

Needless to say, you are a wonderful author. I'm sure I'm going to need to break out the tissue box when I finally bring myself to read this! In short: thank you for this wonderful story.

Author's Response: Dear Radcliffe4eva, Oh, dear, it's ages since you wrote this, and I didn't notice there was another review after all this time. I'm so sorry! Yes, I confess. I killed Ariadne. I always was going to kill her. It always was a story about the darkness hating the light. But thank you so much for telling me that you felt she was a friend. I think she is the best character I've ever created and it did hurt to stamp on her so brutally. The amazing character portrayals are one of the factors that keep drawing me back to Harry Potter. Rowling draws each one so perfectly. I am so glad to have a reader tell me that I have also brought a fictitious character to life. You won't need the tissues until chapter 19, so happy reading until then. Best wishes, GhV

Alexandra Quick and the Lands Below by Inverarity

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 275 Reviews Past Featured Story

Seventh grader Alexandra Quick returns to Charmbridge Academy. This year she faces bullies from another wizarding school, a secret Dark Arts club, and the machinations of her father, but her greatest trial yet awaits her in the dangerous Lands Below.

This is the second book in the Alexandra Quick series.

Reviewer: radcliffe4eva Signed
Date: 04/11/10 Title: Chapter 37: Enemy of the Confederation

I was really hoping you were going to miraculously revive Max. Honestly, you're writing is so terribly good you've gotten me moping around my house because he died - and I don't normally mope for fictional people.

I'm off to read to read your third fic of this series, now, because your writing is absolutely fabulous. (Though it would be even more fabulous if Max came back *cough*hint*cough.) ;)

The Resilient by Misdemeanor1331

Rated: Professors • 701 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: Sequel to "An Aversion to Change."

It's Voldemort's world now: a world of corruption, betrayal, greed, and violence. A world of evil thoughts and evil deeds, where no one can be trusted, especially those closest to you.

But through it all, there must be strength. There must exist those who will stand up to totalitarian rule, who will say no when others submit, who must survive despite their condition. There must exist the resilient.

Eventual Draco/Hermione with plenty of plot. Very dark, so read at your own risk!

Reviewer: radcliffe4eva Signed
Date: 06/10/10 Title: Chapter 9: Mirror, Mirror

Draco = "the Master" ?

An Aversion to Change - Alternate Ending by Misdemeanor1331

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 48 Reviews
Summary: For those of you who won't be reading the sequel, or for those of you who are but don't like it, or maybe even for those reading the sequel and enjoying it, but interested to see what else I came up with.
Reviewer: radcliffe4eva Signed
Date: 05/30/10 Title: Chapter 1: An Aversion to Change - Alternate Ending

I liked this ending much better. :)

Author's Response: Thank you!