Penname: Kbpkrissy [Contact]
Real name: Kristina
Member Since: 11/06/04
Website: http://www.livejournal.com/users/kbpkrissy/
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Name: Kristina
Age: 20
From: North Carolina, USA

I am also a librarian at Mugglenet Interactive
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Christmas Magic by Asphyxiated
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 80]

Summary: Ask anyone and they’ll tell you there’s something exquisite in the air around Christmas Eve. But what? Witness the magic of Christmas twirl two unsuspecting 7th years into each others arms… as Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger find out exactly what ‘Christmas Magic’ is all about.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4453 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/06/04 Updated: 02/12/05


Reviewer: Kbpkrissy Signed
Date: 11/07/04 Title: Chapter 1: Christmas Magic

That was by far one of the most beautifuly written stories I've read that deal with Ron and Hermione. The dialogue was perfect, the description was just right. It all blended it a wonderfully perfect mix! You had me grinning like a chestire cat when the two of them finally kissed. :D I look forward to reading more works by you in the future.

 

Late-Night Antics by FlooCrookshanks
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 48]

Summary: Snape chasing Fawkes, drunken parties in Gryffindor Tower, marigolds, cats, phoenix poo, floo powder, Dumbledore's false teeth, and eyeballs. Discover the bizarre events you never knew happened at Hogwarts!

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 8574 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/06/04 Updated: 02/22/05


Reviewer: Kbpkrissy Signed
Date: 11/06/04 Title: Chapter 1: Who Let the Fawkes Out?

Sweetie, you already know what I think of this story!!! I could praise you for hours over this! I reread it and laughed.. a lot! Good thing I went to the bathroom before I read this or I would have pissed my pants!!! :D Lovely job sweetie, and you know I can't wait for DFT!

Author's Response: Krissy, you're too sweet, hun :D Thanks for EVERYTHING! I'm working on DFT right now, so get your bum ready to beta! :D

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Kbpkrissy Signed
Date: 11/07/04 Title: None

As I said when you reviwed my story, I would return the favor by reviewing yours! This was an excellent start and I'm anxious to see where this is going and how our Draco is going to play into it. I hope you don't mind if I give you some constructive criticism, from one author to another? Make sure to use British terminology and spelling. Mom= Mum... even when not in speech. O.K.=okay. There, they're, their There: as in a place, there. they're: they are. their: shows posession. Do you have a beta reader? Perhaps having one will help just catching these small things that can take away from the already beautiful and amazing story that you have. I truly enjoyed what I've read thus far and look forward to the next chapters.

Author's Response: Thanks! Oh I don't mind constructive criticism at all. I seem to catch everyone else’s mistakes, but never my own. Yes, I know the difference between the "there’s", but I never seem to catch all that either. I probably do need a beta reader *looks out at the large expanse of authors hoping to find one willing to beta*, now it's just a matter of finding one! Thanks again for the compliments and the help!

 
Reviewer: Kbpkrissy Signed
Date: 11/07/04 Title: None

I didn't know any other way of responding except by this... I'm willing to help by betaing your story if you would like. Email me if you would like - kbpkrissy@yahoo.com

Author's Response: Oh! I didn't mean to sound like I was trying to get you to beta read, just someone in general. It doesn't sound as though you really want to, so don't worry! Sorry if I came off like that!

 

Summary: Voldemort is after Harry Potter, a boy "...born to those who thrice defied him...". But ever wonder what Lily and James did to defy him thus? This is a story about passion, both love and hatred. Follow James and Lily through their 7th year as they unite as Head Boy and Girl, ultimatly fall in love, and deal with the rising Dark Forces and the feared Dark Lord. Final chapter up!

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 27559 Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/20/04 Updated: 12/14/04


Reviewer: Kbpkrissy Signed
Date: 02/16/05 Title: Chapter 13: Refusing to Stay the Darkness

That was such a touching story. I like how you managed to keep James and Lily as in character as possible. There were a few spelling errors that I caught in a few paragraphs. For instance, it's Lucius Malfoy. And then Imperious is actually spelled Imperius. I got that befunddled the first few times I tried to spell it. But anyway, on with the story. I really like how the relationship between James and Lily progressed. It was more believable as you took it at a more slow pace than most. The fights with Voldemort and how James would always protect Lily is just so heartwarming and sweet. The ending nearly made me cry. I think were I more awake right now I would probably be balling. It's like we all know what's going to happen to James and Lily but we still hold on to some shard of hope that perhaps it doesn't happen, but then we all realize that it must because then Harry wouldn't be the same in the future. Anyway, I've rambled and I apologize. This was a lovely story and I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for writing it!

 

No Inhibitions by GringottsVault711
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 82]

Summary: Ron accidentally takes a potion to free him from his every inhibition - with 'interesting' results. Will this finally be the push that makes him reveal to Hermione his true feelings? Not so much fluffy as funny.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2879 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/30/04 Updated: 11/30/04


Reviewer: Kbpkrissy Signed
Date: 12/02/04 Title: Chapter 1: No Inhibitions

Lovely!! I laughed and smiled very much! During the part with Professor Snape, I couldn't help but laugh! I hope I didn't wake my roommate up. *snort* Very well written and all the characters were perfectly in character. Bravo. :)

 

The Pensieve by Beci
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 29]

Summary: After another blazing row with Hermione, Ron decides to borrow Harry's invisibility cloak, but as he is searching for it a startling discovery opens the door to something he had never imagined.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1673 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/02/04 Updated: 12/02/04


Reviewer: Kbpkrissy Signed
Date: 12/02/04 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

This is very good. I really liked it, however there are some odd characters within your story. I don't know if it's a formatting error or what, but it made it hard to read.

Author's Response: Yeah I see what you mean. They weren't in it when I submitted it. I think I'll resubmit it, that should sort it out.

Author's Response: Right, problem sorted I hope. Thanks for bringing it to my attention. Hope it didn't annoy ya too much!

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