heya im emma
im 16 and i absolutly adore harry potter and anything related.
i have always loved writing ever since i was tiny and the amount of rubbish stories i have written over the years is incredible.
so i decided, now that i am all grown up and (hopefully) know how to write well i have decided to put my love of harry potter and my love of writing together.
i am hoping that making my own will help pass the time until the seven book comes out.
which, now that i think about it, i am kind of hoping it never does, because it is going to be the last one and that is just going to kill me
i also write poetry you can read them at poetrypoem.com/monkey5 (read shrink or no other way, if you read any)
I LOVE YOU JULIET
made by me!! how great am I?!?!?!
so much sexual tension
i still love this story
the conflict between harry and draco seems so real.
its exactly how it should be in that situation
this story is so well written
oh i love it
x x x
Author's Response: Thank you very much! It is nice when it is appreciated, because I did put a lot of hard work into this.
oh dracos so clever
i love him...
Author's Response: I do too. Thanks for your review!
of course he cant find it from oxford street
that place is the most confusing place on earth
one second your on trafalgar square, next your on carnaby street, then oxford street and then suddenly your in covent garden
and this is coming from someone who shops in central london every week
i cant help feeling bad for draco
x x x
Author's Response: I went to college there, so I know! (Great Marlborough Street, which is why I mention the Marks and Spencers there - I love that Marks and Spencers.) And you get carried along by the crowds if you don\'t know where you are going - a bit like getting sucked into a river current. Sometimes you find yourself getting carried along with the crowds even if you want to go in the other direction. I did write a ton more about him being completely bewildered and lost, but it meandered away from the story too much, so I ditched it. I really wanted to put it at Christmas time, so he got sucked into Hamleys, but I thought I had better not. Of course, you have just been there, done the Holiday Rush if you go every week - but hopefully you avoided being sucked anywhere you didn\'t want to go. All the same, I think it would have been terrifying for him after the old world atmosphere of the wizarding community. Anyway, thanks for your review.
oh its so sweet
i love neville too
i love everyone
oh i am in such a loving mood
i love this story
x x x
Author's Response: You have made my day. Life can\'t get better than having a story appreciated. I have always liked Neville, so of course I wanted to include him. Thank you for your lovely review.
ok... i didnt realise that was all the chapters you had written
now im depressed
way to ruin such a loving mood
you better write more
x x x
Author's Response: Am writing... Give me a few days though! I am so glad you like it so far.
this chapter's so sad
it probably doesnt help that im listening to imogen heap... all her songs are very depressing in case you didnt know
its really well written as well
i love this story
one of the best fan fics ive read
Author's Response: Imogen the author?? I ADORE HER STUFF!!!!! Hope Potter and everything?? SOOO brilliant.
thats was slightly disturbing
i loved the black heart
it was really good imagery and it was extra good to the fact that it was actually literal
i was quiet suprised ginny didnt overcome her not using unforgivable curses thing because i think that would have made it a bigger climax
now im just waiting for the nice chapter where ginny goes to india and finds her son and everything is fine and dandy... but i wont be too suprised if that doesnt come
Author's Response: It is, but that\';s how death is, i suppose. Disturbing... I never thought about the unforgivable thing, but you have a point,. one more chapter.... you\'ll have to wait and see!
this is really good
its dark but has subtle humor put into it
ginny and hermione's anger for each other is just pure class
Author's Response: I like to think i\'m funny.... read on my friend, and you can tell me. :-) Pure class?? Why thank you!!!
it so unfair on harry
i didnt think theyd actually send him to st brutus's
Author's Response: Yeah, St. Brutus\'s is pretty bad, isn\'t it?
this is so good. I was slightly sceptical at first but im really enjoying it.
Author's Response: Glad to know it\'s growing on you! :-)
i feel i have learnt something today. i never knew that about bumblebees. i love your logic behind it. i think its amazing when people come up with things like that. Great story.
emma x x x
Author's Response: Well, I can\'t exactly claim credit for that one. It\'s a story I\'ve heard several times over the years. I actually have no idea if it\'s really true or not, but it seemed to fit. Thanks!
its so sweet. even though i knew it was ginny i was getting kinda worried that you would make it hermione just to confuse people... then i would have had to kill you...
Author's Response: Yeah, I couldn\'t make it anybody other than Ginny. That would just be wrong. Even though I did support H/Hr for a long time (until I read OotP, anyway). Now I refuse to accept the idea of Harry or Ginny with anyone but each other. ;-)
oh its so exciting. i loved this story so much. the plot was incredible and im even glad that harry and ginny didnt actually get together because they always seem to straight away and its thing like that which make your story good.
im going to go and start reading the sequel now, even though my arms are starting to seize up because ive been on the computer for too long. oh well, this is much more important than being able to move.
emma x x x
Author's Response: I\'m glad you\'re so excited! Take my advice and get up and stretch every now and again, though -- it\'s good for you. :-)
this was really good
cant believe ron would steal from harry though... actually thats a lie, i kinda can
and i cant imagine snape giving ron an O even if it was up to that standard
Author's Response: Thanks. My justification for Ron stealing from Harry is that he was REALLY desperate, plus his sense of judgement was impaired by his tiredness. Yes, Snape is a bit OOC, but I couldn\'t think of a better ending.
thats so sad
i like the way it is written
the way harry's and ginny's stories imitate eachother
emma x x
Author's Response: thanks. They are perfect for eachother and they screw it up and they think the same things. So life goes.
oh thats so sad
that wasnt fair
why would you kill off ron??
and everything was about to get all happy and perfect
oh, it was so mean
x x x
Author's Response: I know - it was very sad. You\'re right, it wasn\'t fair at all. I completely agree - it was mean, especially when everything was about to get all happy and perfect. But if there\'s one thing I do try to do in my writing, it\'s make things real. And I felt that all those things are completely true - and it\'s real. Unfortunately it\'s not a happy ending - as in life, there aren\'t always happy endings, which is one of the saddest things in the world. So I am really glad that you felt all of that - as that\'s exactly what I was trying to convey! Thanks for reviewing!
this is really good
the story is really sweet
how i love cliches
x x x
that was really funny
he eh he
keep it up
Author's Response: Thank you. I have a few more stories in my, I think.
ginny's interior monologue was really good
it added a new depth to the story
x x x
Author's Response: Thank you, hun. I thought it might show a bit more happening just below the surface that we never see in canon. Thanks for reviewing and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! ~Moony
that was so exciting
i do not like dick
im glad ginny has finally come to her senses
cant wait until the next chapter!!!
today was such a good day, announcment of the release date of deathly hallows and now this!!! WOOP
Author's Response: Yeah, even I was started to get annoyed with Ginny by this point. Thanks for the review, I\'m glad you liked it!