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Vomica Domintor by AlwaysSS

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Hermione Granger and Severus Snape create a new potion together and discover some secrets about each other along the way.

This story is AU after book five.

Special thanks to my awesome beta, SometimeSelkie.

Reviewer: lupins_girl2006 Signed
Date: 07/09/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

i like this story... the chapters are a bit short but you make that up by updating fast... at least once a week the updat is here and so i aprove of the short chapters... i'm always babbling and this is no exception... oh well... i wonder what's gonna happen at the ministry tomorrow???

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I promise to keep updating quickly. The MODS usually take longer than I do ;) Stay tuned!

Reviewer: lupins_girl2006 Signed
Date: 07/18/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

awww... that was cute... wait... there's an un-edited version... cool...

Author's Response: Yes, you can see the un-edited version on Ashwinder or Fanfic.net - same penname, story name & chapter #.

Reviewer: lupins_girl2006 Signed
Date: 07/16/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

yes i must agree... that was a very intimate hour and a half for the too... lol... can't wait to see whats next in the hallway...

Author's Response: It had to turn intimate at some point. Stay tuned for more!

Reviewer: lupins_girl2006 Signed
Date: 07/03/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

i wonder what it is that dumbledore wants severus to tell hermione... *ponders for a bit*... oh well i guess we'll find out soon enough...

Author's Response: Yes, Severus\' secrets will come out soon. Stay tuned!

The Marauder's Map... In The Wrong Hands! by Sainyn Swiftfoot

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: In the dead of the night, someone steals Harry's Marauder's Map.

What happens?

Insanity, hilarity and catastrophe, of course! (This wouldn't be a humour story if it didn't, would it?)

As different people try to activate the Marauder's Map, the four infamous Marauders answer back, in their own wonderful style.
Reviewer: lupins_girl2006 Signed
Date: 07/20/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: In Which Parvati Patil Is Shocked

lol... i'm guessing prongs was referring to all of his friends in that one paragraph and that Ms Dun-Bar is lily... lol... i can not wait to see what the map says to malfoy...

Author's Response: Alexandra, Wow! You've figured out everything... (Not that you've got to be, like, a nuclear physicist to do so, but all the same...) You'll see what happens in the next chapter: "In which Malfoy has Misadventures with the Marauder's Map!"

A Different View On Love by helz_belz

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James would do anything to get inside Lily’s head. Lily would do anything to get away from James. Lily was brewing a banned potion. James went to find her. Lily made a mistake and the potion exploded. James got his wish, but is it much more than he bargained for?

Now Complete!

After a year the Epilouge is now up! Come read for a bit of fun!!

Runner up QSQ - Best Chaptered Canon Romance

Reason for Nomination:
This is the most unique take on how James and Lily really got to know each other. The story is hilarious and keeps you laughing throughout, but it never lets you forget the serious stuff. Plus, she somehow manages to end each chapter with a nice cliffhanger.

Reviewer: lupins_girl2006 Signed
Date: 01/25/09 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: Sorry for the Inconvenience

OMG! You, my dear friend, is a genius! Lol. Remus, kissing James, as Lily! *wipes tears out of eyes* I can not wait until the next chapter.


Author's Response: Thanks for the complement. When people review like this it really encourages me to write. Chapter Ten is nearly finished, but I have to send it to my beta's before I can add it to the queue. :)

Reviewer: lupins_girl2006 Signed
Date: 12/07/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six: Concurrent Concussions

UH OH. James slipped up! "I need to speak to Lily."

Oh what, oh what is going to happen next?


Author's Response: Next eh? James will be doing some fast talking in the next chapter, I can promise you that. Other then that, you'll have to be patient. (The next chapter is called, patience is a virtue after all)

Thanks for the review Allie :)

Reviewer: lupins_girl2006 Signed
Date: 02/13/09 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten:: Every Man's Worst Fear

OMG! This story just keeps getting better and better.

It was probably all the chocolate I ate at the party, he thought to himself. But I couldn’t help myself, I was really craving some.

As soon as I read this I imed Carole on aim and said "OMG! James has his period!" Lol.

It’s probably just stress, he thought to himself, or tiredness. It’s not like this is a usual situation.

Yea, sure James, keep thinking that.

“Ew,” said Sirius, pulling a face. “I’m eating and hangover here. Give a man a break.”

Brilliantly said.

Honestly, boys are complete wusses.

I agree 110%!

“So, those ones goes on the outside,” James pointed at the blue packet in Lily’s right hand. “I understand that. But those ones,” he pointed at the small pink box in Lily’s left hand. “Did you say that you actually put them up your…”

“Yes, James,” Lily cut him off, “but for now, we should probably stick with these.” She handed him the blue packet.

James twirled it around in his hands. “So you girls really do this every month? I have a whole new respect for you.”

“Like I said, it’s really not that bad.”

Oh God! James and Lily talking about pads and tampons! *dies*

I can't wait until the next chapter. James on his period is such a funny thought! >.<

Keep up the great work!


Author's Response: Hehe, thanks for the awesome review. Carole as in Equinox Chick? It's awesome that you guys are like reading it together. That makes me smile.

Yea, sure James, keep thinking that.
LOL! Now you're making me laugh :) Anyway I have about 2,000 words to write for the next chapter. Thanks again for the review.


Author's Response: Hehe, thanks for the awesome review. Carole as in Equinox Chick? It's awesome that you guys are like reading it together. That makes me smile.

Yea, sure James, keep thinking that.

LOL! Now you're making me laugh :) Anyway I have about 2,000 words to write for the next chapter. Thanks again for the review.


Author's Response:

Reviewer: lupins_girl2006 Signed
Date: 12/29/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: Patience is a Virtue


Oops, still hyper from the cheesecake. *gigglesnort*

This is such a cute tale. I can't wait until next chapter.


Author's Response: Awww thanks! Cheesecake is awesome. Next chapter is almost written. Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: lupins_girl2006 Signed
Date: 05/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: Why Am I Doing This Again?


Helen *giggle*, that *giggle* was *giggle* SUPERB!

I can't stop laughing! *wipes eyes*

Harry James Potter, perfect name indeed. Lol... Man, I wish I could see the look on McGonagall's face! *dies*

I love this story! Keep up the great work girl!


Author's Response: Thanks Allie. Haha, McGonagall's pie encrusted face? I think they should somehow slip it into the upcoming movie... Anyway, I'm really glad you liked it. Chapter 12 shouldn't be too far off...

Reviewer: lupins_girl2006 Signed
Date: 11/20/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five: The Moronic Moose

Gah! YOU EVIL, EVIL PERSON! lol. What a cliffie you have given us! A fight between Lily anf Roger. I say Lily will win. She was always stronger then she appeared. Plus, she's been through a lot and that might kick in the adrenaline to kick Rogers arse as well.

I can't wait until the next chappie.


Author's Response: Hehehe. I have often written a review along those lines, abusing one of my favourite authors for leaving me in suspense. But never fear, I have written chapter six and will submit it as soon as I get it back from my betas. As for the outcome of the fight, if I told you, it would defeat the purpose of a cliffhanger :P. Yes, I am a little evil....

Thanks so much for the review - they inspire me to update and keep writing.


No Way To Escape by jenny b

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: What do you do when you realise that the one person you thought you would be with forever isn’t really the one you want to be with forever?

What do you do when you are suddenly and inexplicably drawn to someone you never thought you could love?

What do you do when that person happens to be Draco Malfoy?
Reviewer: lupins_girl2006 Signed
Date: 10/22/08 Title: Chapter 1: No Way To Escape

AHHH! I just reviewed and it didn't go through! I'm mad now.


Aww. Poor Draco!

I can't believe Hermione and Draco had a one night stand, or that Hermione got drunk, and off of wine too!

And SPEW. That was great that you continued SPEW. :D

I am really happy I read this. RL and school get in the way and I haven't read a fanfiction story in a while.

Great job, poor Draco, bad Hermione, pregnant Ginny, and Harry and Ron being Harry and Ron! Lol.


Author's Response: Thank you, Allie! What a lovely review. :)

Sirius, Baby by Equinox Chick

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This is my blatant attempt at romancing my favourite man. It is sung to the tune Santa, Baby.

I am Equinox Chick of Hufflepuff and this is my entry for the Winter Snows Extra Credit- Christmas Carol Parody.
Reviewer: lupins_girl2006 Signed
Date: 12/25/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sirius, Baby

Lol. Oh my Godrics! Careoleyadora that was funny. My oldest sister loves that song. It's much better not!

Author's Response: Ha ha! Glad you enjoyed it and glad you recognised the song. i had a lot of fun writing it. *wink*.


Pretty Green Eyes by IndigoPassion

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Ellie has always been green-eyed with jealousy over her older sister’s ability to do magic, and Marie has always taken pleasure in flaunting her magic in her younger sister’s face.

Refusing to acknowledge her own feelings, Ellie can’t help wondering, what was this feeling in the pit of her stomach, which only came when Marie was near?

It’s all left to Ben, the older brother, to sort everything out. But will Ellie ever manage to see the simple pleasures found in watching, or will her jealousy never go away?
Reviewer: lupins_girl2006 Signed
Date: 01/14/09 Title: Chapter 1: That's Magic.

Awwwwwwwwwwwww. That was cute Lexy. Jealousy is an evil thing, but Ben has a point.

And Marie was a bit snobbish. She thought that since she could do something special and was the prettiest that she was the best.


Author's Response: Yes, Al. Jealousy is bad. Never submitt to it.

Like, ever. Or you will pay for it later. Uhuh

Thank you very much for liking and reveiwing :) -Lex

Falling From Grace by IndigoPassion

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Born to and raised by the Hawthorn family, Melody and her sister are everything a respected Pureblood family could ask for. However, when Belladonna is sent to Beauxbatons, Melody is faced with the prospect of entering Hogwarts alone.

Fully expecting to be placed in Slytherin or Ravenclaw, Melody is given the shock of her life when she becomes a Hufflepuff.

With her sister in another country, her family miles away, and friends no longer talking to her due to the disgrace of being placed in another House, Melody has never felt so alone. To top that, the people surrounding her are from social backgrounds completely contradicting of her own. People she never expected to spare a second glance, she is forced to live with: Muggleborns and Halfbloods.

Everything that she has ever been taught or led to believe is being challenged. All that her parents have told her is being proved wrong, and Melody no longer knows what to believe. Everything is completely unfamiliar, and she is scared she may be changing. But Melody needs to learn that sometimes change can be a good thing. And sometimes, it can be exceptional.
Reviewer: lupins_girl2006 Signed
Date: 01/21/09 Title: Chapter 1: A letter to Aunt Clara

Wow Lex! That was really really good. I'm interested in seeing what happens next.

Let me know when your second chapter gets accepted. :D


Author's Response: Yay! A pity reveiw. Lol. Thank you, and of course I will. Lol, I'll probably scream it at you :P

The Broom Cupboard by Cirelondiel

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story

Your relationship with Fred existed almost entirely within a broom cupboard.


You and Fred: a Hufflepuff and a Gryffindor, two complementary souls. In a world where nothing is certain, you find comfort in a dusty third-floor storage room.

Reviewer: lupins_girl2006 Signed
Date: 04/30/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Broom Cupboard

Chelsea! This was written beautifully. I usually don't read second person, mainly because I am never allowed to write it in school.

I found one mistake, but it's not big. When she, er, me, I think (?), lol, wakes up and asks "How do you do it?". You are missing the second 'do'. Other than that, fantastic!


Author's Response: Thank you, Allie! I'll fix that mistake up sometime, thanks for pointing it out. :D

It Takes a Wolf to Prank a Dog by Equinox Chick

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Now in his seventh year, Remus Lupin is a calm and responsible student. His friends know this and often take advantage, knowing that he never takes it to heart.

But sometimes, just sometimes, Moony longs for revenge, especially when Padfoot takes things one step too far.

But Padfoot is wise to Marauder pranks, so for April Fool's Day this year, Moony enlists the help of four girls who are also champing at the bit to humiliate the 'too damn adorable' Sirius Black.

I am Equinox Chick of Hufflepuff and this is my entry in the April Fool's Day Challenge set in the Great Hall.

Thank you to Alyssa (Harry4lif) and Wendy (Kiley) for their help in beta'ing this tale.

The song featured in this story is Hot Legs by Rod Stewart which was a huge hit in the early part of 1978 and seemed to lend itself very well to Sirius Black!

Disclaimer Sirius and Remus are not mine *sigh* but belong to JK Rowling as do James,Lily and Peter. The Harley-Queens however are my rather fluffy invention.
Reviewer: lupins_girl2006 Signed
Date: 05/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! Wow! Er... Did I mention, Wow!?

That was brilliant Carole!

I suppose Sirius will never learn not to mess around with Remus, will he? Plus, Remus is cuter and can get the girls to help him with stuff. Just kidding. Well, not really.

Will you ever pick one? Lol. Keep up the great work girl. I love your writing style!


Author's Response: EEEP! I never responded. Hmmm, no I'm not sure I will ever pick one, but Remus could well be edging it at the moment. Thanks for the review, Allieatrix.

A Second Chance by Equinox Chick

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: "I don't need help from filthy little Mudbloods like her!" **

Fifteen months have passed since Severus Snape shouted those words in fury. He's had fifteen months without Lily and it hurts like hell. Over the summer holiday he's made a decision - he wants her back. But first he needs to speak to her before the Hogwarts Express leaves King's Cross.

This story was originally written for the Hufflepuff Back to School challenge last year.

** indicates a line taken directly from Snape's Worst Memory - Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix. I am not JK Rowling but I doubt you're surprised by that revelation.
Reviewer: lupins_girl2006 Signed
Date: 05/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

AWWWWWW! *sniffles*

For someone who doesn't like Severus Snape, you did an excellent job with this Carole! *squishes*

Now, that is angst!Teen!Severus. I wonder how you would write Professor Snape.

Keep up the great work... Man, I didn't realise how many stories you have up... *shakes head*


Author's Response: EEEP! I never responded to your review, young Allieatrix. Thank you! I'm pleased you like it, especially as I know what a fan you are of Snape, so your opinion matters a lot. I do write Professor Snape in my Tonks fic, by the way. He's not the main focus but he's definately there (and about to turn up again). Thanks for reviewing. Carole xxx

Every Breath You Take by Equinox Chick

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Breathing. It’s easy, isn’t it?
In. Out. In. Out.

But what if it’s not easy? What if your body struggles for breath? What happens if you cannot get enough oxygen into your lungs? What happens if your lungs contract so tightly that you’re forced to use all your strength simply to breathe?

And how on earth do a wizarding family cope with a Muggle condition that could kill?

This is Lily Luna Potter's story of living with asthma.

I am Equinox Chick of Hufflepuff and this is my entry for the Written World Challenge, Spring Term 2009. It has been written to garner support for Asthma UK.

I do not own any of these characters - they all belong to JK Rowling.

FACT: Asthma can kill.
Reviewer: lupins_girl2006 Signed
Date: 03/29/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Muggle Wisdom

Caroley! This is a really touching story (of course it is. It's real life to you). I was kind of sad to see that you haven't updated it since last April, almost a year ago. I would love to see how things turn out for the Potters as well as Harry and Dudley's confrontation.

Please update soon Carole. This is such a great touching story. Asthma isn't a laughing matter for anyone, no matter how severe it may be. And to have someone in your family that has it only makes writing about it that much easier, when it comes to knowledge, and that much harder, when it comes to emotions.

I love your writing and I hoep things are going well at home, considering everything you have to go through with your daughter's asthma and your dad's death.

Hugs and love goes out to your family from everyone here on MNFF.

~Allieatrix *HUGGLES!*

Author's Response: Thanks Allie. Yeah, I should update, as I know what's supposed to happen. I'm off on holiday soon. The last time I did that finished seven chapters of one story ... ha ha. Thank you again for the lovely review, I really appreciate it. ~Carole~

Second Chance at Life and Love by mudbloodproud

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: “Is it true five years have passed since that night? That I have been dead for five years?”

Hermione had known love with Ron. But, now he was married to someone else and Hermione was alone with only her work at the Ministry to keep her busy.

But, when she was asked by Minister Shacklebolt to handle a problem, would Hermione find love with someone from her past?

Sirius Black’s life was cut short when he fell through the Veil in the Department of Mysteries. But, somehow, he inadvertently found a way to come back through the Veil.

When he was told it was five years after he fell, Sirius didn’t believe Kingsley. Sirius found himself being held in a room in the Department of Mysteries. A prisoner again.

When the door opened and a grown-up Hermione walked through it, Sirius was stunned. How could this be the same girl he had known?

This is the story of a lost girl, a man back from the dead, and a love story that will be talked about for years.
Reviewer: lupins_girl2006 Signed
Date: 05/11/09 Title: Chapter 2: Explanations


Terri! This story just keeps getting better. I can't wait until the next update!

Keep up the great work girl! *squishes*


Author's Response: Allie,

Thank you. I will be updating soon. I am glad you like it.