lol... love the forehead part... sirius is going to be dead if remus really did get to him...
Author's Response: Sirius will be quite dead. It's so great writing Sirius and Remus fighting with each other like that. Thanks for reading!
wow i just loved how sirius did that to remus... please don't let remus really murder sirius... lol... j/k... i hope the new chapter comes along soon and i hope it is good too... i really like this story...
Author's Response: Ooh Remus couldn\'t kill Sirius, just whack him a bit with a stick. I hope the next one comes along soon too, it\'s a nice mix of fun and seriousness. Thanks for reading!
wow... great chapter... harry is such a prat sometimes...
Author's Response: yeah, sometimes i feel bad about portraying him that way, but... thanx for the review!
WOW... long but WOW... I can't wait for the next chappie... good luck not having writers block
nice already and it's just the first chapter too...keep up on the good work
Author's Response: Why thank you! I\'ll try!
oh my gosh... my little sister is in the other room and know all this stuff but it was so hard not to laugh...
Author's Response: I\'m glad that you enjoyed the fic and hope that you didn\'t get into any trouble with your sister!
R.I.P. Dobby. :( We will always miss the house elf that tried to save Harry Potter in his second year and almost killed him in the process, and yet you still became a hero. *tears*
i liked it... especially how you have snape crying and then the whole timer tuner passages that would confuse anyone that reads it... i liked it a lot
Author's Response: The idea was to hit the reader with as many AU\'s as possible in a short amount of time. I am glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for the review!
Lol. wow great chapter. can't wait until the next one. well yea until then keep up the great work...
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :D
okay the whole lot of that famil sould be placed in slytherin and aunt glenda is just as bad as aunt marge in the prizoner of azkaban...
Author's Response: Mean ol' family! But deep down, they've got some heart. It just takes a kind soul to appreciate their sort of... well... let's call it "tough love," shall we? More like, "incognito love," but you get the general idea. Hahah, thanks for reading.
Alex finishes the chapter and starts yelling in a sing-song voice "AH HA! AH HA! GRACE GOT WHAT SHE DESERVED!" WooHoo! Now she's doing a victory dance for saying that. :)... great chapter... lol... can't wait til the next one...
~Allie (who happens to be a bit hyperz...)
i love the fact that you had McGonagall write one of the school books fro salem...
Author's Response: She just seems the type to write a textbook. I am much more keen to write fiction myself, :P Thanks for reading.
ok so i'm guessing max is hermione in this story, sadie is harry, and kelsey is ron... grace happens to be a lot like malfoy and the quints seem to be a lot like crab and goyle... just taking a guess is all... ok now onto the houses... lupa is definably slytherin, horribilis is definably hufflepuff, noctowl is ravenclaw, and finally steda is gryffindor... just thought i'd put my two sense in this...
ok so i wrote all that above this part while reading the chapter and now i'm gonna comment on the dream... it seems like you were foreshadowing something that's gonna happen later in the story... oh well... these are just my thoughts... oh and i have the feeling that i'm babbling again...
Author's Response: I love babbling! So babble away! Let\'s see...: Sadie is a mirrored of Harry (with a much different personality), Kelsey is similar to Ron, but has a few important differences. Grace is definitely similar to Malfoy, though the Quints are truly unique and unlike Crab and Goyle (they aren\'t total dunderheads). Max, ironically, is more like Luna than Hermione. You got the mirrorings of the houses right, except for Horribilis; though they share pride and a sense of justice with Hufflepuff, they stand more on their own than with a comparison. I\'m glad you see the mirror images of Hogwarts though! The dream... I think I\'ll keep that one a secret. Thanks for reading.
Wow... this was actually pretty good... can't wait til the next chapter!!!
Wow Roxy. That was really intense.
I'm not good at reviewing, not until I take Bine's class in July, but this was really good.
The first word to come to mind when I finished this was, intense. As I already said, it was really intense.
I just blinked away the tears that formed in my eyes while reading and I just stared at my computer screen for, like, a minute before I started this review.
You are a really skilled writer. That is shown in this one-shot well. You make the reader feel the emotions running through each characters' mind. The lost love between Severus and Lily and the pain that Lily felt when she saw the Mark. Lily's uncertainty of whether she chose the right man.
This makes us wonder if Lily and Severus ever talked again. We know from Severus' memories that Lily hated him after SWM, but did she ever forgive him? If she did, and he didn't take the Mark or join them, would Severus have been Harry's father, or would the Dark Lord never have fallen that Halloween night? These are questions that flit through everyone's mind while reading, and they are more likely to come to the surface of your readers while the read this then other stories here.
I can't wait to read something else from you, most likely not at 10.50 at night. Lol.
Keep up the great work.
:O Petunia Evans actually used the word magic. :O It's a miracle :)
Author's Response: Yes, I figure a lot had to happen for magic became a four letter word to Petunia.
His fears? Flying...his own wand...fitting in...sticking out! His best friends? A passionate fire-breathing cousin, and a cool, aloof Death Eater's son. His destiny? Anything but ordinary!
Join Albus as he experiances his first year at Hogwarts and begins the journey out from under his father's collosal shadow, if he can survive it of course!
Meet the new Tenacious Trio, Albus Potter, Scorpius Malfoy, and Rose Weasley
AWWW!!! POOR ALBIE!!!
Poor bludger LOL! Thanks for reading.
Special thanks to my awesome beta, SometimeSelkie.
wow... i wonder what severus feels for hermione??? update soon please...
Author's Response: Severus is like a box of chocolates.... lol. \r\nStay tuned, more to come!
wow, snape actually gave hermione a compliment. draco's right, hermione should have written that down...
Author's Response: To bad Muggle tape recorders don't work in the Wizarding world. But there's always penseives!
awww... that was sweet of severus to kiss hermione unexpectantly.
Author's Response: They seem to know just how to push each other's impulse buttons.