My name is Charlotte White, and I'm 18 years old, and I live in Cumbria, near the Lake District, North-West England. I'm obssessed with Harry Potter, and I love writing, so fan fic is like my all-time favourite thing to do! And I can't think of anything else to write, so bye.
~ Chaz xXxXx
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its even BETTER as a series
Very well written. The chapter was quite short but that worked for this type of spoof fiction. I thought it was really funny, and I espescially liked the Finding Nemo 'wooooosh' joke. Keep it up. ---- Moose xXx
No change. Still brilliant. Keep writing. Love You Loads
Wow this is great. And you have loads of reviews. No one has reviewed my fic :(. but yours is so FUNNY! keep going.
I don't think Harry's stupid. In fact I think your Harry is very in character (apart from his till liking Cho post OoTP, but that's your call lol) Anyway, well done, this fic just keeps getting better and better! MORE! loves, moose
I liked it! An interesting perspective, few fics have a Tom Riddle with friends, as opposed to Crabbe and Goyle type aquaintances. It surprised me to see Tom with a female best friend....remind you of another famous wizard? I think it was well written, though quite short. Keep it up!
See what I have been driven to? Reviewing my own story? Why have I no reviews!!! Is it really that bad???????? I go to the corner to cry :(:(:(:(:(:(
Do I even need to tell you how much I love this? You know how much I love this. But I've just told youb twice, no three times, how much I love this, anyway.
So, overall, an interesting contributiojn to the conversation, as always.....
I'm talking crap.
LOVE THIS! BRING ON CHAPTER....damn I lost count...
Author's Response: Thanks for your input - I guess I have to do a semi-sequel now... And by the way, I lost count too...in my original copy of this I remember titling Chapter Ten "Chapter Nine" and then getting confused when submitting it...oh well.
So good!!!!!!! Love this fic! Love all your fics!!! Update soon!! Read My fic!!! Love this fic!!! Might have said that already!! What is five minute theory????? Is it an Americanism???? Or am I just thick????? Love this fic!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
Author's Response: Not an Americanism - if you look back a couple chapters you'll see that Delia and Felix have some unexplained argument about "five minutes" It hasn't been explained yet and this was the first time I really referred to it as a "theory." Update coming soon!
Is cutting off the american way of saying pushing in?
anyhow.. YEY!!!!!!!!!!! you updated! And yey! I want to be in your next chapter! And YEY! My name is Charlotte! And yey! Somethign else!
Author's Response: *thinks* Now when did I use the phrase "cut off"...hmm...sometimes I'll say something like so-and-so was talking, but then whats-her-face cut her off...like interrupeted...oh well it doesn't matter. Thanks for the review!
Sorry. But this story is just so good. plus, I really should be doing my homework. Anyhoo......ha ha ha Voldy said Anyhoo. ha ha ha ha ha ha ha that's funny
ha ha sorry im drunk
Actually no im not im making excuses im just weird
love this story! almost as good as mine
only joking. tis much better! LOVES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! moose
Author's Response: Thank you for your rambling review! Anyhoo, new chappie should be coming soon!
I Love this story! I love all your stories! Why can't my story be this good? I have like four reviews!
Anyway....YOUR fic. It's so good!!!!!!!!!
I really don't have anything else to say lol.
Author's Response: Always glad to get reviews, especially for this story, because it is my *sniff* neglected story (this one gets significantly less reads/reviews, but oh well). Review much appreciated! LOOK FOR UPDATES!
Twas well funny, in fact it was my type of mumour that I thought no one else possesed. Saying that, go read my fic "Read and See" and review it cos no one else has :(.
I will refrain from putting that on all my reviews. Right. YOUR STORY. Was sooo brilliant. keep writing! love Moose
Author's Response: Will do! Thanx for the review! I will post another chapter as soon as I get my stupid work in....What a drag....
Absoltuely great. I think youve portrayed Ron just as I see him; with very simple emotions, in a way he's very naive and childlike. He doesn't understand the whys and the hows, all he understands is that Harry is in trouble and he will do anything to help him. Its so sweet!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review hpmaniac666! That's exactly how I picture him as well. Not very perceptive of the little details, but very perceptive of the big picture! Wow, I'm rambling again.
Lol that was funny though i defo isn't my prefered type of humour.
Mind you, I have like 3 reviews and you have loads, so I guess I should take a hint.
Or you could all go read my story "Read and See"
Or you could not
Author's Response: thanks WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE i didn't even have sugar today!
I agree honeydude....:@ I hate unfinished fics!
YEAH!!! RANDOM HUMOUR FIC!! Very funny and random, plus I like fic set out as plays, it always makes them more spoofy! P.S....don't people with like 100 reviews make you sick. I have like three. I think we should boycott stories with too many reviews lol!! Well ok not really UPDATE SOON. Your going in my faves!
Wow! I'm ipressed. You have ver developed narrative skills, something I'm very jealous of (I prefer dialogue) I LOVED the dream at the begining, I felt really into it, and I laughed out loud at the however many second sit was that Harry counted. My dog looked at me a bit funny. And when even your pets think you're weird, you have a problem. Wonderful ending, definately made me want to read more.
Now, what did I read about you reviewing the stories of people who review yours......I'm waiting! LOL, joking. Though feel free. Loves MOOSE!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I am just waiting for my next chapter to get passed and then you can read it!!!
Chapter two was definately worth the wait....update soon, this is good stuff!!!!
LOVES!! Chaz xx
Author's Response: Well, thank you. I'm glad it was worth the wait. Wait until next chapter. Thats even better.
YEY!!!!!!!!!! I love this fic! It's in my faves!!!!! Now, when you say Proffessor Weasley, which Weasley are we talking about?
Author's Response: thanks so much! I can hardly believe that people are liking this so much!! Oh, and I mean Ron Weasley. But, more of that will come about later...