Summary: "Some mistakes are too much fun to make just once."
After Lily Evans, Head Girl of Hogwarts, starts a food-fight with James Potter, Head Boy of Hogwarts, they are both given detention for the rest of the year, and are assigned a 'detention journal', which the staff say will help to settle their 'overwhelming and disturbing differences'. We have come across Lily's journal; her take on why the whole affair ever started, her intriguing relationship with one ‘supreme git of the galaxy’, the extents to which she will go for revenge and where it will lead her...
"And if for some unknown reason you come across this, Potter, and the paragraph above does not manage to penetrate your unusually thick head and convince you of my stupendous dislike of you, I hope the following sentence helps: I HATE YOU!"
it was sooooooo good and sooooo funny and you reallly really need to update, like quick!
Author's Response: The next chapter is with my beta, so hopefully I\'ll submit it soon. Thanks, I\'m glad you thought it was funny.
so sorry about your sister! that was a great chapter and of you don't update emmediately i shall be very very upset!!!! i LOVED it! and i'm really curious about the whole terry thing. he's cheating on her isn't he? I love James tho, great characterization on your part! please update soon, this story is hilarious!
Summary: It’s the Marauders’ first Halloween outside of school, and, persuaded by Lily’s assurances that it will be great fun, they agree to spend it ‘the Muggle Way’. But how can anything go as planned when you’re with Sirius Black and James Potter?
WOW! that was really funny! great job!
Summary: She had always noticed him. Him, with his sleek hair and posh manners, his upturned nose and poignant eyes, and trademark smirk of his. She had always hated him. Hated the way he hated her and her kind, hated the way he could be so smart and yet couldn't see past his family’s preconceived notions of right and wrong. He was a bad boy with a sharp mind – the kind of kid she wouldn't usually have looked at twice.
Reall beautifully written story!!!!!! I'm not usually a draco/hermione fan but this was very well written, you had great descriptions and it was neat how you did a pair that isn't usually out together, good story!
Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful review! I\'m glad you read it, even though you really don\'t read d/hr much. :)
Summary: As Lily Evans and her best friends enter their fifth year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, they can hardly wait to see the school again - nor can a certain foursome of Gryffindor boys. But none among the fifth-years imagines the paths ahead of them - the bonds that will grow between them; the ways they will drift apart; the loves they will find - and, least of all, their own destinies.
Hi, to the few people who are actually waiting for this story to be updated. Hopefully Chapter 2 will be up soon, I just have to fix a few technical things. Sorry for the long wait but I've been having trouble getting the chapter up.
It's really good! I like it! your second chapter is 'access denied' though, I HATE it when soriies are like that! Wonderful job!
Author's Response: Thanks! It says access denied because I already submitted the next chapter so hopefully it will be up soon.
Summary: Lily always picked the wrong guys for her. She was always left broken hearted. James was the one who wanted to be with her the whole time and knew that they would be perfect together. He just needed to wait for Lily to realise it. He just needed to wait for his chance....
This is a songfic to To Be With You by Mr. Big.
Author's Response: Thanks! =D
Summary: The first war with Lord Voldemort is constantly getting worse; people are dying left and right, dementors are attacking people on the Death Eaters' orders, and nobody knows who is trustworthy anymore. Lily Evans, in her seventh year at Howarts, does not want to be a part of the war -- but some things are unavoidable.
interesting..nit my favorite chapter but definitly very good writing!! i LOVELOVELOVE this story! i ckeck, i like everyday for updates...so please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you (: I\'m hoping to get a chapter in before the queue closes for the holidays.
I LOVED it!!!! so much better than the last two!!!!! GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT job!!! you really really need to update however, two weeks is way way too long!!!! Please update quick!
Author's Response: thanks, i\'m reallyyyyyy glad you liked it.
wonderful! i LOVe your story, update quickly!
Author's Response: thanks :D chapter 3 is in mods right now !
ohmygosh! that was a GREATGREATGREAT chapter! i LOVEDLOVEDLOVED it!!!! you must update quickly! poor james, but poor lily too! now she's lost him...
Author's Response: thank you!! and i wouldn\'t say she\'s quite lost him ;]. an update as soon as my beta emails me 8!
Amazing, one of my favorites ever! pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase up date quick!
Author's Response: aww thanks :] chapter 2\'s in mods
amazing. that was sooooooooooooo good! i LOVED LOVED LOVED it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you did wonderful, and sirius and marly had better get back together! i feel so bad for everybody riht now! i loved deathly hallows thought it was best yet! please update soon, this last update took way too long! your stroy is too amazing to have to wait so long! great job!
Author's Response: Thanks, I\'m glad you liked it :]. Deathly Hallows was my favorite too. I\'ll update as soon as the queue opens =] .
hmm, good writing, but it was a little dull. i'm kinda a little dissapointed actually, your other chapters were so amazing! update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, sorry, this chapter was sorta boring. The next chapter is a bit better, and the one after that is pretty interesting.
good, pretty good, not great though. you started the story off with a bang, well i want a few more bangs, i keep expecting something to happen, an dthen it kinda doesn't. i still LOVE this story though, you don't know how many times i've checked to see if this chapter was update yet.
hmmm, pranks for snape, well is his hair's supposed to be so greasy why don't they dunk it in some sort of vegeable oil, or something sticky thaty he wouldn't be able to get out all day. or they could simply shave all his hair off. Or maybe die it pink and spike it, haha, i don't know.
chapter: 7/10 (i'm a pretty harsh reviewer aren;t i?)
Author's Response: thanks for the pranks :] I like them a lot. Thanks for the critisism too, something somewhat big happens in chapter five, and chapter seven is sort of interesting. I\'m nearly done with chapter 8, which is sort of more just dorcas and lily\'s arguement, and a few snape pranks toward the end, but i won\'t be able to update for a while because the comp i have everything saved on is broken. never fear though, i have chapters 3-7 in my inbox.
Author's Response: Oh, I forgot, Lily and Dorcas\'s arguement isn\'t even mentioned until chapter 7. Oh well, a little spoiler for you.
Lily's thoughts are a sacred place. People think that head of hers stores valuable information for he next Potions assignment but those people are so wrong. In fact her head is filled with rather rude and amusing thoughts but she's strong as steel and keeps that in her instead of out.
But the arrival of a Veela causes her blood to boil and her thoughts to rapidly twist and churn in anger and all. Not only is ths Veela pretty, and french, she's also flirtacious. A dangerous mix. So what's this got to do with anything? Well, for one she's been messing around with a ton of boys making many girls so annoyed including our Lily here. Her thoughts start to leak which equals an hour of witty comments and laughing fits. This causes many heads to turn. Including one of those with messy hair.
hahaha, great chapter! update soon! (sooner tan ladt time that took bloody froever!)
Author's Response: Yep, I\'m writing the 3rd chap. just now!
Summary: James' emotions get the better of him and Lily is no longer sure how she feels. What happens is an amazing story of love and how sometimes, you just can't wait.
Warning is for fairly mild content
awww, that's soooo sweet, i LOVED it!!! your an amzing writer, the only thing i could say was that at some points it was slightly boring, but i still loved it!
Author's Response: Aw thanks so much. That\'s such a huge compliment! I know it was a bit boring in some parts but i felt most of it was necessary. Thanks for reviewing!
Summary: Lily has big news for James, but she has to come to terms with it herself first. Will she manage to find happiness and hope in an era of despair?
awwwwww, that was soo sweet! i LOVED LOVED LOVED it!
Author's Response: Awww that review makes me feel so good! Thank you!
Summary: Lily Evans never really questioned what she was told. She was told that she had everything, that others wanted to be her. She was told that she perfect. She never had a reason not to believe them all -- until it all falls apart.
This is for 'The Spring Challenge: To Laugh or Cry'. I am Kask of Slytherin.
that was wonderful!!!! really really talented writing! the pacing was perfect and her tone was just the best it could be for her!i love how you made her like taht and i loved how she chopped off her hair! i had a character do that once, except she chopped everything off. but i LOVE this story, one of the best one-shots i've seen!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! *hugs*
Summary: James and Lily are married and Lily is acting strange and emotional. More so than usual that is. However, James may have an idea as to what may be causing Lily's strange emotions.
awwwww! i LOVED it! that was such a sweet story! perhaps you might consider a sequel??? for me? *flutters eyelashes* I LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED it!
Summary: Lily Evans started her fifth year at Hogwarts thinking that it was going to be her best year yet. She had an amazing boyfriend, great friends, and excellent grades. What could possibly go wrong?
Then, with a turn of events, she finds out that her vision of a perfect year couldn’t possibly be more wrong. She finds that her and her boyfriend don't make such a great couple after she finds him doing the worst thing a boyfriend could do. If that wasn’t bad enough, within the mix of confusion and break-ups, a certain messy haired Gryffindor gets involved in the midst.
She thought that this was going to be the perfect year, but it turns out, it's going to be far from it...
cute chapter. really short, but cute. update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I hope to have the first real chapter up soon!