Summary: The first war with Lord Voldemort is constantly getting worse; people are dying left and right, dementors are attacking people on the Death Eaters' orders, and nobody knows who is trustworthy anymore. Lily Evans, in her seventh year at Howarts, does not want to be a part of the war -- but some things are unavoidable.
good, pretty good, not great though. you started the story off with a bang, well i want a few more bangs, i keep expecting something to happen, an dthen it kinda doesn't. i still LOVE this story though, you don't know how many times i've checked to see if this chapter was update yet.
hmmm, pranks for snape, well is his hair's supposed to be so greasy why don't they dunk it in some sort of vegeable oil, or something sticky thaty he wouldn't be able to get out all day. or they could simply shave all his hair off. Or maybe die it pink and spike it, haha, i don't know.
chapter: 7/10 (i'm a pretty harsh reviewer aren;t i?)
Author's Response: thanks for the pranks :] I like them a lot. Thanks for the critisism too, something somewhat big happens in chapter five, and chapter seven is sort of interesting. I\'m nearly done with chapter 8, which is sort of more just dorcas and lily\'s arguement, and a few snape pranks toward the end, but i won\'t be able to update for a while because the comp i have everything saved on is broken. never fear though, i have chapters 3-7 in my inbox.
Author's Response: Oh, I forgot, Lily and Dorcas\'s arguement isn\'t even mentioned until chapter 7. Oh well, a little spoiler for you.
Lily's thoughts are a sacred place. People think that head of hers stores valuable information for he next Potions assignment but those people are so wrong. In fact her head is filled with rather rude and amusing thoughts but she's strong as steel and keeps that in her instead of out.
But the arrival of a Veela causes her blood to boil and her thoughts to rapidly twist and churn in anger and all. Not only is ths Veela pretty, and french, she's also flirtacious. A dangerous mix. So what's this got to do with anything? Well, for one she's been messing around with a ton of boys making many girls so annoyed including our Lily here. Her thoughts start to leak which equals an hour of witty comments and laughing fits. This causes many heads to turn. Including one of those with messy hair.
hahaha, great chapter! update soon! (sooner tan ladt time that took bloody froever!)
Author's Response: Yep, I\'m writing the 3rd chap. just now!
Summary: James' emotions get the better of him and Lily is no longer sure how she feels. What happens is an amazing story of love and how sometimes, you just can't wait.
Warning is for fairly mild content
awww, that's soooo sweet, i LOVED it!!! your an amzing writer, the only thing i could say was that at some points it was slightly boring, but i still loved it!
Author's Response: Aw thanks so much. That\'s such a huge compliment! I know it was a bit boring in some parts but i felt most of it was necessary. Thanks for reviewing!
Summary: Lily has big news for James, but she has to come to terms with it herself first. Will she manage to find happiness and hope in an era of despair?
awwwwww, that was soo sweet! i LOVED LOVED LOVED it!
Author's Response: Awww that review makes me feel so good! Thank you!
Summary: Lily Evans never really questioned what she was told. She was told that she had everything, that others wanted to be her. She was told that she perfect. She never had a reason not to believe them all -- until it all falls apart.
This is for 'The Spring Challenge: To Laugh or Cry'. I am Kask of Slytherin.
that was wonderful!!!! really really talented writing! the pacing was perfect and her tone was just the best it could be for her!i love how you made her like taht and i loved how she chopped off her hair! i had a character do that once, except she chopped everything off. but i LOVE this story, one of the best one-shots i've seen!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! *hugs*
Summary: James and Lily are married and Lily is acting strange and emotional. More so than usual that is. However, James may have an idea as to what may be causing Lily's strange emotions.
awwwww! i LOVED it! that was such a sweet story! perhaps you might consider a sequel??? for me? *flutters eyelashes* I LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED it!
Summary: Lily Evans started her fifth year at Hogwarts thinking that it was going to be her best year yet. She had an amazing boyfriend, great friends, and excellent grades. What could possibly go wrong?
Then, with a turn of events, she finds out that her vision of a perfect year couldn’t possibly be more wrong. She finds that her and her boyfriend don't make such a great couple after she finds him doing the worst thing a boyfriend could do. If that wasn’t bad enough, within the mix of confusion and break-ups, a certain messy haired Gryffindor gets involved in the midst.
She thought that this was going to be the perfect year, but it turns out, it's going to be far from it...
cute chapter. really short, but cute. update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I hope to have the first real chapter up soon!
Summary: James and Lily didn't wake up one morning and find they were in love with each other...but two mornings in particular were a help. So were two letters written in purple ink.
pretty good plt. writing was okay. i don't want james to comfort her a s a "afther" tho...that's kinda creepy since he ends up marrying her.
good job, looking forward to your next stroy!
Author's Response: The point was that because he had gone through the same thing, he knew what she needed--and it wasn\'t a kiss. Also, she had just lost her father, so she needed someone to cling to. He doesn\'t always act like her father, it\'s just right now because that\'s what she needs. Obviously later things develop, but for now Lily\'s too distraught. I\'m sorry that was a long response, but I felt that was important to explain. Thanks for your review!
Summary: Deep within the ruins of Godric Hollow, scattered among the fragmented remains of what had been, lies the tale of the end.
A Lily/James one-shot.
excellent story!!!!!!!!!!!! sooo sad tho, lamost crying! what happened to the Diary tho? that was like my favorite story ever and then it was deleted! please say your going to write it again!
Summary: During the first war, people married young, married because they were afraid, married for protection. But love grows, well, it did for Lily Evans.
excellent story, great writing! slightly confusing tho.
Author's Response: Hope it wasn\'t too confusing! Thanks!
Summary: James would do anything to get inside Lily’s head. Lily would do anything to get away from James. Lily was brewing a banned potion. James went to find her. Lily made a mistake and the potion exploded. James got his wish, but is it much more than he bargained for?
After a year the Epilouge is now up! Come read for a bit of fun!!
Runner up QSQ - Best Chaptered Canon Romance
Reason for Nomination:
This is the most unique take on how James and Lily really got to know each other. The story is hilarious and keeps you laughing throughout, but it never lets you forget the serious stuff. Plus, she somehow manages to end each chapter with a nice cliffhanger.
very good story! very original!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I love feedback!