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I'm onbsessed with Harry Potter (like everyone on this site) i love reading, writing sad poems, and watching romances. I play basketball and love ballet.

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Someone To Watch Over Me by MagEd

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: 2009 QSQ Awards Winner for Best Chaptered Canon Romance

Before the chosen one was ever born, his parents had to meet, fall in love, and defy Voldemort three times. Easier said than done. Things were never easy for Harry Potter's parents, but it gets a whole lot harder when Death Eaters kidnap Lily. This is the story of Lily and James, the trials they face, and how James finally wins Lily's heart. (pre-Deathly Hallows)


“I’ll always protect you.”
Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 06/26/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Put on Your Poker Face

that was an amzing chapter! the stag was james, no? i love emma, she's like one of my all time favorite characters! please update really fast!!!!

Author's Response: Emma is cool! Excited for the scene from her POV? I am! Thanks for the review, I\'m glad you liked this chapter.

Not a Maybe Thing by HoneydukesAddict

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lily knew that James was nothing but trouble. He was rude, conceited, and indifferent to anyone that wasn't in his group of friends. She had known him to be that way for six long years.

But their seventh year comes, and Lily slowly begins to see that he is no longer the boy he was. Now Lily sees herself more clearly, and she isn't sure she likes what she sees.

This is the almost-forgotten story of Lily and James's romance, and what they went through to become the heroes that were Harry Potter's parents.
Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 02/17/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Great chapter! your a really good writer! The last part is just a teeny bit cliche, but whatever. it's still a wonderful story!

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 01/16/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Good chapter! Please update quickly!

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 12/25/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

cutes tory, a litle bit of a slow start, but i still really like it!

The Perfect Cliché by MagEd

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Here's the story of awkward situations. The story of a stubborn girl and a determined boy. The story of broom closets, bra straps and declarations of affection. Here's the fairy-tale story of how Lily Evans finally fell for the bullying toerag James Potter. *one-shot*

Edited 10/26/08.
Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 12/31/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i'm almsot positive i reviews this befire, but i just read this story yet again and it is sooooooo sweet!!!! i love this story! I love James!!!! hwya ren't guys in real life like that?!!!!

Promises, Principles, and Socks by Gmariam

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: James Potter has resolved to get over Lily Evans and move on with life during his seventh year at Hogwarts. An incident after Potions changes all that when their verbal spat in the corridor turns into something more. As Lily struggles with her principles, James tries to win her over once and for all.
Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 11/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

I loved it! It was very good and very romantic!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m glad you liked this story. :) Thank you for leaving such a nice review, I really appreciate it!! ~Gina :)

The Epic Tale of the Hogwarts Food-fight by Gin_Drinka

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: "Some mistakes are too much fun to make just once."

After Lily Evans, Head Girl of Hogwarts, starts a food-fight with James Potter, Head Boy of Hogwarts, they are both given detention for the rest of the year, and are assigned a 'detention journal', which the staff say will help to settle their 'overwhelming and disturbing differences'. We have come across Lily's journal; her take on why the whole affair ever started, her intriguing relationship with one ‘supreme git of the galaxy’, the extents to which she will go for revenge and where it will lead her...

"And if for some unknown reason you come across this, Potter, and the paragraph above does not manage to penetrate your unusually thick head and convince you of my stupendous dislike of you, I hope the following sentence helps: I HATE YOU!"
Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 05/14/07 Title: Chapter 2: Third detention...and my growing list of deranged people

it's great!!!! i love it!!!!AMAZING!!!!! it's just a teensy bit unbelievable however that Lily wouldn't even consider that the guy who sent her the flower was James.

Author's Response: First off, we have the fact she doesn\'t want to consider that it was him. And then, Lily isn\'t used to him doing sweet things, and that\'s exactly what the flower was like to her. There are hundreds of guys in the school, and she isn\'t exactly undesirable. I think it perfectly natural that she wouldn\'t consider him. WE knew it was him cause this is JL...ah well, I knew people would think this, and I understand it. ah well, LIly is demeneted anyway, lol.

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 05/16/07 Title: Chapter 7: Sixteenth detention...and the day I was hospitalized in hell

it was sooooooo good and sooooo funny and you reallly really need to update, like quick!

Author's Response: The next chapter is with my beta, so hopefully I\'ll submit it soon. Thanks, I\'m glad you thought it was funny.

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 8: Seventeenth detention...Potter is the bane of my existence

so sorry about your sister! that was a great chapter and of you don't update emmediately i shall be very very upset!!!! i LOVED it! and i'm really curious about the whole terry thing. he's cheating on her isn't he? I love James tho, great characterization on your part! please update soon, this story is hilarious!

Trick or Treat by Hallie Black

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: It’s the Marauders’ first Halloween outside of school, and, persuaded by Lily’s assurances that it will be great fun, they agree to spend it ‘the Muggle Way’. But how can anything go as planned when you’re with Sirius Black and James Potter?

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 01/23/07 Title: Chapter 1: one shot

WOW! that was really funny! great job!

Reverse Attrition by delta

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: She had always noticed him. Him, with his sleek hair and posh manners, his upturned nose and poignant eyes, and trademark smirk of his. She had always hated him. Hated the way he hated her and her kind, hated the way he could be so smart and yet couldn't see past his family’s preconceived notions of right and wrong. He was a bad boy with a sharp mind – the kind of kid she wouldn't usually have looked at twice.
Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 12/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: Reverse Attrition

Reall beautifully written story!!!!!! I'm not usually a draco/hermione fan but this was very well written, you had great descriptions and it was neat how you did a pair that isn't usually out together, good story!

Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful review! I\'m glad you read it, even though you really don\'t read d/hr much. :)

You Make Me Feel Confused by darkpink_lily

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: As Lily Evans and her best friends enter their fifth year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, they can hardly wait to see the school again - nor can a certain foursome of Gryffindor boys. But none among the fifth-years imagines the paths ahead of them - the bonds that will grow between them; the ways they will drift apart; the loves they will find - and, least of all, their own destinies.

Hi, to the few people who are actually waiting for this story to be updated. Hopefully Chapter 2 will be up soon, I just have to fix a few technical things. Sorry for the long wait but I've been having trouble getting the chapter up.
Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 01/23/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/ Chapter 1: How the Marauders came to be, at least officially

It's really good! I like it! your second chapter is 'access denied' though, I HATE it when soriies are like that! Wonderful job!

Author's Response: Thanks! It says access denied because I already submitted the next chapter so hopefully it will be up soon.

To Be With You by KASK

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Lily always picked the wrong guys for her. She was always left broken hearted. James was the one who wanted to be with her the whole time and knew that they would be perfect together. He just needed to wait for Lily to realise it. He just needed to wait for his chance....

This is a songfic to To Be With You by Mr. Big.
Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 04/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: To Be With You

really sweet!

Author's Response: Thanks! =D

Confessions Of Lumpy Poo by Soupdragon

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •

Lily's thoughts are a sacred place. People think that head of hers stores valuable information for he next Potions assignment but those people are so wrong. In fact her head is filled with rather rude and amusing thoughts but she's strong as steel and keeps that in her instead of out.

But the arrival of a Veela causes her blood to boil and her thoughts to rapidly twist and churn in anger and all. Not only is ths Veela pretty, and french, she's also flirtacious. A dangerous mix. So what's this got to do with anything? Well, for one she's been messing around with a ton of boys making many girls so annoyed including our Lily here. Her thoughts start to leak which equals an hour of witty comments and laughing fits. This causes many heads to turn. Including one of those with messy hair.

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 06/15/07 Title: Chapter 2: "Snails covered in ze bread crumb..."

hahaha, great chapter! update soon! (sooner tan ladt time that took bloody froever!)

Author's Response: Yep, I\'m writing the 3rd chap. just now!

Let Me Count the Ways by Moonysgirl79

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James' emotions get the better of him and Lily is no longer sure how she feels. What happens is an amazing story of love and how sometimes, you just can't wait.

Warning is for fairly mild content
Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 04/16/07 Title: Chapter 1: Let Me Count the Ways

awww, that's soooo sweet, i LOVED it!!! your an amzing writer, the only thing i could say was that at some points it was slightly boring, but i still loved it!

Author's Response: Aw thanks so much. That\'s such a huge compliment! I know it was a bit boring in some parts but i felt most of it was necessary. Thanks for reviewing!

Something to Celebrate by EmmeElle

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lily has big news for James, but she has to come to terms with it herself first. Will she manage to find happiness and hope in an era of despair?
Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 05/14/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awwwwww, that was soo sweet! i LOVED LOVED LOVED it!

Author's Response: Awww that review makes me feel so good! Thank you!

I Am Lily by KASK

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Lily Evans never really questioned what she was told. She was told that she had everything, that others wanted to be her. She was told that she perfect. She never had a reason not to believe them all -- until it all falls apart.

This is for 'The Spring Challenge: To Laugh or Cry'. I am Kask of Slytherin.

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 07/23/07 Title: Chapter 1: I Am Lily

that was wonderful!!!! really really talented writing! the pacing was perfect and her tone was just the best it could be for her!i love how you made her like taht and i loved how she chopped off her hair! i had a character do that once, except she chopped everything off. but i LOVE this story, one of the best one-shots i've seen!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! *hugs*

Mystic Lasanga by social loner

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: James and Lily are married and Lily is acting strange and emotional. More so than usual that is. However, James may have an idea as to what may be causing Lily's strange emotions.
Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 05/31/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awwwww! i LOVED it! that was such a sweet story! perhaps you might consider a sequel??? for me? *flutters eyelashes* I LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED it!

Purple Ink by Nymphea

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James and Lily didn't wake up one morning and find they were in love with each other...but two mornings in particular were a help. So were two letters written in purple ink.
Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 10/13/07 Title: Chapter 1: Purple Ink

pretty good plt. writing was okay. i don't want james to comfort her a s a "afther" tho...that's kinda creepy since he ends up marrying her.

good job, looking forward to your next stroy!

Author's Response: The point was that because he had gone through the same thing, he knew what she needed--and it wasn\'t a kiss. Also, she had just lost her father, so she needed someone to cling to. He doesn\'t always act like her father, it\'s just right now because that\'s what she needs. Obviously later things develop, but for now Lily\'s too distraught. I\'m sorry that was a long response, but I felt that was important to explain. Thanks for your review!

Eternity by Secret

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Deep within the ruins of Godric Hollow, scattered among the fragmented remains of what had been, lies the tale of the end.

A Lily/James one-shot.
Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 01/23/08 Title: Chapter 1: Eternity

excellent story!!!!!!!!!!!! sooo sad tho, lamost crying! what happened to the Diary tho? that was like my favorite story ever and then it was deleted! please say your going to write it again!