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I'm onbsessed with Harry Potter (like everyone on this site) i love reading, writing sad poems, and watching romances. I play basketball and love ballet.

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Someone To Watch Over Me by MagEd
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 1664]

Summary: Past Featured Story2009 QSQ Awards Winner for Best Chaptered Canon Romance

Before the chosen one was ever born, his parents had to meet, fall in love, and defy Voldemort three times. Easier said than done. Things were never easy for Harry Potter's parents, but it gets a whole lot harder when Death Eaters kidnap Lily. This is the story of Lily and James, the trials they face, and how James finally wins Lily's heart. (pre-Deathly Hallows)


“I’ll always protect you.”

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 185106 Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
09/17/06 Updated: 01/16/09

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 01/23/07 Title: Someone To Watch Over Me

i'm sure it's an amazing chapter because I love your story but i can't read it because of ACCESS DENIED!!!!!! dun dun dun1 i hate those two words!!!!!!!! thank you for updating!

Author's Response: In my humble opinion it\'s an amazing chapter! Thanks for the review, hopefully the wonderful mods will have it validated soon.

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 02/08/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: You Lose

no way...... this is going to take forever.

Author's Response: I\'m sure it can\'t be much longer.

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 01/23/08 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Where We Really Belong

ohmygosh!!!! brilliant chapter! wonderfully written! i loved it! i can't believe emma tried to commit suicide, that's so unexpected! wow. and that's really surprising her opinions about lily, i hadn't thought of it that way! excellent job! update uber fast!

Author's Response: She didn\'t exactly try and commit suicide, but she certainly teetered on it. I do like the surprising twists though, I\'ll admit ;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 06/20/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Put on Your Poker Face

accees denied?!!! what is this madness?????? please update soon!

Author's Response: I know, have to wait until the mods approve it. . . .

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 03/21/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Peanut and Prongs

WOW! i loved this chapter!!! great job. honestly i love the dark stuff just as muvh (if not more) then your fluffy things, so please tell more about what happened to her! 10/101

Author's Response: I\'m going to guess you meant to do 10/10 not 10/101, right? Cause you\'d really be squashing my ego. . . . :) Thanks for the review, I\'m glad you hear you appreciate a little darkness--it does make it different, doesn\'t it?

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 06/14/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Cats, Cards, and Corkers

OHMYGOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this was such and amazing chapter and i am sooooo mad at james!

but PLEASE, pleasepleaseplease please don't do the typical james-apologizes-said-he-never-meant-any-of-it-,-will-never-happen-again CRAP! and then lily believes it and cries and they live happily ever after. that would be extremely lame. don't have lily be a sissy, make her ANGRY!!! and she better not just automatically take him back.

wait is it some other guy under the polyjuice potion??

update QUICK!!! (as in now, update right now)

Author's Response: Don\'t worry, don\'t worry, Lily is not the person to take these things laying down. There is a very angry Lily in the next chapter, as you\'ll see. . . . Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 06/14/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Cats, Cards, and Corkers

after fruther thinking i decided to leave you another review and tell yuou that i think james = polyjuice potion. hahaha. this kind of thing has been done a LOT, so please make your version different/quirky/not the usual sobbing lily, etc. UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE!

lurve the story!

Author's Response: You\'re not the first to suggest Polyjuice potion! Believe me, I try extremely hard not to be typical!

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 06/18/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: What a Tangled Web We Weave

ohmygosh!!!! amazing chapter! i LOVED it1 PLASE update quick!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 01/03/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: The First Day

Wonderful chapter! And I'm begging you! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon!

Author's Response: I\'m glad you like it! The next chapter will be up as soon as it\'s validated.

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 09/20/07 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Conversations and An Invitation

wow! great chapter! it was extremely well written and the pacing was great! if that was afast update it must ahve taken forver to get through, because i've been witing FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i lovelovelove this story, it's one of my favorites, anf if you don't update quickly, i'll castrate YOU! (hahaha)

Author's Response: It actually took over a week to be validated . . . I swear, it really was a fast update! Thanks for the review, I\'m glad you liked it, and the story as a whole! ;)

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 04/02/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: I'll Hold Your Hand

amzing! you are a wonderful wonderful writer and when you publish some best selling novel you better remember that i said you would!

but please update soooooooooooon!

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I\'ll try to get the next chapter up as fast as I can!

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 02/07/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: You Lose

Oh my gosh! i am SOOOOOOOO frusterated!!!!! I just got an email saying it was updated and I STILL can't read it???????? grrrr. sry i keep reviewing, but i am very frusterated!

Author's Response: I\'ve gotten those e-mails before where it tells you it\'s updated but they haven\'t actually validated it soon. Hopefully that means they\'re about to validate it!

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 07/13/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: The Doubt That Brought Faith

that was such an amazing chapter! i loved it! the whole nightmare thing with emma was good too! so Lily killed Ted then? I knew it!!!!! Poor Lily! that guilt must be horrible. i hope Emma doesn't blame her for it! I love James, he's amazing, you've given him the perfect character in this fic! PLEASE update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! Did Lily kill Ted? You\'ll see. . . . And I\'m glad you like how James\'s character is written!

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 02/05/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: You Lose

ARGH! this must be the zillionth time i've checked and it's STILL not validated!!!! argh!

Author's Response: Hopefully it won\'t be much longer!

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 02/11/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: You Lose

FINALLY! whahoooooooooo! it's been validated!!!!! I LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED this chapter! you are an amazing writer! this is one of my favorite stories! please update soon! please please please please please!

Author's Response: I know, I was so happy when I got the e-mail saying it had FINALLY been validated! I\'m glad it was worth the wait, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 01/15/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: A Natural Phenomenon

Wonderful! wonderful! wonderful! i just read it over again and it's still wonderful! PLEEAAASSSSSSEEEEEEEEEE update soooooooon!

Author's Response: Good to know it never gets old :)

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 06/21/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Put on Your Poker Face

still access denied!!!! UGH!!!!!! so frusterating, i want to read it soo bad? perhaps a little hint to what is coming will not make the waiting so bad? *hint hint* thanks for writing such an amazing story!

Author's Response: It should be accepted soon! A hint, huh? Hmm . . . there\'s a scene a lot like one from Uncle Fred Calls Him Dick. Does that count? ;)

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 04/05/08 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Where We Really Belong

when will there ba an update?!!!

Author's Response: I can only submit a single chapter from all of my stories at a time, and currently the next chapter of one of my other stories is in queue. But as soon as its accepted, i\'ll submit the next chapter of this (its been written and ready to go since before Christmas!)

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 01/09/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: A Natural Phenomenon

Wondeful chapter!!!!!!! Please please please please update quickly!!!!!!

Author's Response: I\'ll try!

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 11/08/06 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: What Makes Life Worth Living

Love the story, but But it's kind iof like your switching themes, now it seems completely focuse on lilly/james getting together, lilly seems to have kind of gotten over it already, It seems like she would still not really be able to concentate on so much other stuff with the experiance of the death eaters stil in her mind. I LOVE the story, keep writing!

Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it and thank you for the review. I know, it does seem a little confusing that should would get over something that big so quickly. But she has not, there is a lot more about what happened to her yet to be explained, such as \'the game\' she talked about in the second chapter right after they found her. I suppose I\'ll hold my weak defense on the fact that James asks himself whether or not Lily is doing as well as she seems to be. Thanks again for the review!

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