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I'm onbsessed with Harry Potter (like everyone on this site) i love reading, writing sad poems, and watching romances. I play basketball and love ballet.

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Not Another Cinderella Story by Nymphea
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 49]

Summary: Lily Evans is determined not to become another Cinderella story.



And it's not just Cinderella that bothers her: so often a character begins her story insisting that she doesn't need a man’s protection, when—lo and behold—she’s saved by a handsome man and they ride off into the sunset despite her “determination” otherwise.



And if you started to think that their stories probably began much the same way as this one, well, you must not know just how determined Lily Evans could be.


Not an average James/Lily fic...(but still some fluff)...please read and review!


Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4292 Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/26/07 Updated: 09/16/07


Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 09/17/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: I'd Rather Have You

it's a cute srory, but this is moving WAY too fast!!! the first chapter i would've stretche out a ton! an di deinitely wouldn't have covered a year and a hlaf in two chapters. it just seems kinda rushed 2 me. but it's stilla great story!

Author's Response: Thanks for the constructive criticism...maybe someday I\'ll fix it so the timing makes better sense.

 

Purple Ink by Nymphea
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 60]

Summary: James and Lily didn't wake up one morning and find they were in love with each other...but two mornings in particular were a help. So were two letters written in purple ink.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1420 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/16/07 Updated: 09/27/07


Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 10/13/07 Title: Chapter 1: Purple Ink

pretty good plt. writing was okay. i don't want james to comfort her a s a "afther" tho...that's kinda creepy since he ends up marrying her.


good job, looking forward to your next stroy!

Author's Response: The point was that because he had gone through the same thing, he knew what she needed--and it wasn\'t a kiss. Also, she had just lost her father, so she needed someone to cling to. He doesn\'t always act like her father, it\'s just right now because that\'s what she needs. Obviously later things develop, but for now Lily\'s too distraught. I\'m sorry that was a long response, but I felt that was important to explain. Thanks for your review!

 

Eternity by Secret
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 21]

Summary: Deep within the ruins of Godric Hollow, scattered among the fragmented remains of what had been, lies the tale of the end.

A Lily/James one-shot.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 2686 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/03/08 Updated: 01/12/08


Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 01/23/08 Title: Chapter 1: Eternity

excellent story!!!!!!!!!!!! sooo sad tho, lamost crying! what happened to the Diary tho? that was like my favorite story ever and then it was deleted! please say your going to write it again!

 

Safety by KASK
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 30]

Summary: During the first war, people married young, married because they were afraid, married for protection. But love grows, well, it did for Lily Evans.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2186 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/04/08 Updated: 01/12/08


Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 01/23/08 Title: Chapter 1: Safety

excellent story, great writing! slightly confusing tho.

Author's Response: Hope it wasn\'t too confusing! Thanks!

 

A Different View On Love by helz_belz
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 364]

Summary: James would do anything to get inside Lily’s head. Lily would do anything to get away from James. Lily was brewing a banned potion. James went to find her. Lily made a mistake and the potion exploded. James got his wish, but is it much more than he bargained for?

Now Complete!



After a year the Epilouge is now up! Come read for a bit of fun!!

Runner up QSQ - Best Chaptered Canon Romance


Reason for Nomination:
This is the most unique take on how James and Lily really got to know each other. The story is hilarious and keeps you laughing throughout, but it never lets you forget the serious stuff. Plus, she somehow manages to end each chapter with a nice cliffhanger.

~~hestiajones

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 51560 Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/23/08 Updated: 04/08/11


Reviewer: NeLLyRaE Signed
Date: 07/23/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: Why Am I Doing This Again?

very good story! very original!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I love feedback!

 
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