Penname: Gryiffnclaw [Contact]
Real name: robert neal
Member Since: 11/07/06
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Father of one, Grandfather of one bundle of magic.
Lover of The "Harry Potter" series, and thinking I need to put my degree in english to some good use.
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St.Lace's, Lemonhouse by Bartzina
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 15]

Summary: The gang goes to a magical mystery Christmas party in London, and somewhere along the line, Rita and Hermione have themselves a truly enchanting little encounter.

Categories: Same-Sex Pairings Genre: Warnings: Slash

Word count: 3586 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/17/04 Updated: 12/17/04


Reviewer: Gryiffnclaw Signed
Date: 11/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: 1/1

Not too bad, but watch your spelling.
Stairs are the things that you go up and down. Stares are for looking at someone over long.

 

A Silent Wish by FictionalBadGuyLover
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 69]

Summary: Hermione and her friends go to a club and Hermione finds herself in a awkward situation between desires. She is blind from all that is ture, except for a moment, but only at a glance.

Categories: Hermione/Other Character Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 1803 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
09/11/05 Updated: 03/19/06


Reviewer: Gryiffnclaw Signed
Date: 11/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: At a Glance

the first thing I might add is that the back part of a shoe is the heel, not heal.
Your pace was well done, and content focused.
Well done.

 
Reviewer: Gryiffnclaw Signed
Date: 11/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: At a Glance

the first thing I might add is that the back part of a shoe is the heel, not heal.
Your pace was well done, and content focused.
Well done.

 

Shattering Truth by carteblanche
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 29]

Summary: Harry Potter has succeeded in defeating Voldemort once and for all. Evidently, he must then proceed to have a happy and wholesome life. He will live to be the youngest Minister of Magic, while retaining the title of Best Seeker in the World, and will eventually die at the ripe old age of 98, surrounded by his loving family composed of Ginevra Weasley (97 but still stunning) and their 10+ children (and numerous grandchilren, of course). Right?


Well, wrong. At least according to me.


A rather slow-moving, sort of sad one-shot. If you find time, please R&R!

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 4454 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/28/06 Updated: 05/07/06


Reviewer: Gryiffnclaw Signed
Date: 03/16/07 Title: Chapter 1: Shattering Truth

Bah!!!!

 

Friends, Love, and Dreams by NorskHeksen
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 35]

Summary: Set during Prisoner of Azkaban, the trio are in the hospital wing after their adventure. Hermione takes the time to reflect on her relationships with Ron and Harry.

Warning is for sexual references, nothing graphic.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 1591 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/11/06 Updated: 06/12/06


Reviewer: Gryiffnclaw Signed
Date: 12/13/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very tastefully done!
Being older, (make that REALLY old), I some times forget that time when I was filled with many passions, longing for a thing I knew nothing about.
Your wonderful story reminds me of that time of teriffying love.....
Your Servent,
Robert

 
Reviewer: Gryiffnclaw Signed
Date: 12/13/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very tastefully done!
Being older, (make that REALLY old), I some times forget that time when I was filled with many passions, longing for a thing I knew nothing about.
Your wonderful story reminds me of that time of teriffying love.....
Your Servent,
Robert

 

The First Time by RahNee
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 30]

Summary: It wasn’t the first time he’d held her as her world receded into darkness. Harry is a steadfast presence in Hermione’s darkest hour and during her journey to healing. H/Hr with implied D/Hr, character death

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 8643 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/16/06 Updated: 11/23/06


Reviewer: Gryiffnclaw Signed
Date: 01/20/07 Title: Chapter 1: The First Time

Again you blow mw away with your passion and your still.
I reminds me when I was young and in love so deep I thought it would drown me.
I would have died happy.
Thank,
Bob

Author's Response: Thank you, Bob, for your kind words! You made me think about what it is like to be in love... le sigh. I\'m so glad you enjoyed it!

 

Keep Your Glory by coppercurls
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: Harry throws in the towel after defeating Voldemort and tries to escape from everything that has happened.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Substance Abuse

Word count: 295 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/30/06 Updated: 12/04/06


Reviewer: Gryiffnclaw Signed
Date: 12/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: Keep Your Glory

Nicely done!!
Your feel for the subject is exceptional.
I have added you to my lists of favorites.
You Servant,
Bob

Author's Response: Bob, thank you so much for your review. I love poetry so it is always nice to know that I am doing it properly. Thanks again for the kind words!

 

Don't Tell Me Truth Hurts by SomberBallad
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 26]

Summary: After Harry has defeated the Dark Lord the trio must face the demons that still surround them and deal with the change that has affected them all.



A dark and angsty Harry/Hermione romance.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 3049 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/08/07 Updated: 01/13/07


Reviewer: Gryiffnclaw Signed
Date: 01/14/07 Title: Chapter 1: Underground

Very nicely done.
I know from first hand experience how trhe horrors of war can change people, and you have captured that very well.
I hope to hear more from you.
Keep up the good work!!
Bob

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I very fortunately have had no experience with war but I can only image how hard it must be so I\'m glad I was at least able to do it jussice. Thank you very much for the review, it is a great affirmation to me.

 
Reviewer: Gryiffnclaw Signed
Date: 01/14/07 Title: Chapter 1: Underground

Very nicely done.
I know from first hand experience how trhe horrors of war can change people, and you have captured that very well.
I hope to hear more from you.
Keep up the good work!!
Bob

Author's Response: Thanks again :)

 

Last Kiss by HarrynHermione_06
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 14]

Summary: He'd never forget that day. He'd never forget, and he'd never forgive himself for letting it happen. What happens when the thing you care about most is taken away from you in one mistake? Based on the Pearl Jam song Last Kiss.


Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 1985 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/26/07 Updated: 06/08/07


Reviewer: Gryiffnclaw Signed
Date: 06/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Last Kiss

Nicely done, but "Last Kiss" was a song that was written in 1962 by Wayne Cochran, and became a hit by J. Frank Wilson and the Cavaliers in 1964.
You worked it well into the story, and even brought a tear to the eye of this old guy.

 
Reviewer: Gryiffnclaw Signed
Date: 06/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Last Kiss

Nicely done, but "Last Kiss" was a song that was written in 1962 by Wayne Cochran, and became a hit by J. Frank Wilson and the Cavaliers in 1964.
You worked it well into the story, and even brought a tear to the eye of this old guy.

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