Summary: In this riveting sequel to the "acclaimed" Veiled Revelations, Voldemort has risen to his full strength and is threatening both the wizarding world and the muggle world in an attempt to gain total control. A small group of people - the Order of the Phoenix - are all that stand in his way. Join James Potter, Sirius Black, Remus Lupin, Peter Pettigrew, and Lily Evans as they battle the most evil wizard the world has ever seen. (Reviews are always nice and appreciated - and Erik has rated this story 6th-7th years as a result of her incorrigible pride).
THat had been really good. I've been reading it for four days, & I have to say, never read any fiction about the Marauders' lives more accurate than that to the information the books gave us. I always got annoyed at other fics, like when they shunt Remus from the begining, or make Peter seem not at all Marauderish, I mean, They wouldn't have kept him around unless he had something in him, & he definitly did. He had the courage to turn on them, & the brain to work a scheme on Sirius. maybe not the best in those two fields, but he still had something. & I loved how you made it all very realistic, how they grew distant, & the perfect reason as to why Sirius thought Remus was the spy, & trusted Peter with his best friend's family's life, & also how he grieved for his brother, because the lack of emotion which he showed in OotP when he told Harry about Regulus could have been a good mask to something powerful behind it. He is a Balck after all, & I always thought he was more than cabable at hiding certain emotions.
All in all, this was great. the best I read about their life (& I read quiet a respectful number, or at least tried & got bored halfway)..
Summary: Hermione is slowly losing her marbles and develops an unhealthy obsession with Snape – to his horror. The task of saving what is left of her sanity falls upon him of all people. What's wrong with Hermione and can he help her?
Ooh, I loved it! It's really funny, & totally original! Hilarious!
Summary: A different sort of alternate universe... It is a world under the thumb of an ancient emperor. Muggle society has been oppressed beyond recognition. Wizards rule over all, their only laws defined by power. This is the story of a rebellion, a family, a traitor, and the long road that leads home at last.
I loved the chapter. But honestly, I almost forgot everything about th story. Though, reading through I remembered, & I had a memorable session where I forced one of my best friends to sit & listen to me try to tell her the whole story without spoiling too much. I really wanna know what's happening with Fred & George. God, you & Jo are of the same mind, being so mean to them! Lol. It's completely tragic.
Can't wait for the reunion. & I love the way you portray Sirius. He's completely my favourite character!
Author's Response: Dude, I suck sometimes when I go through a dry spell of no writing. Apologies for leaving things hanging so long.
Oooo! I love this story! I've never been a big fan of AU, not because I don't fancy the concept, it's just that most authors don't muster what it takes to write a good one, & I'm a picky reader, but still I loved this one! It's great! I love it! & I have absolutely no idea how I'm going to wait for the next chapter after reading 19 continuously!
I'm a huge Sirius fan, &, though I admit I sort of hate it when he's described with dark brown hair & brown eyes (There are people who support a jet-black set of locks on their heads, really. & my father has greenish gray eyes.) I always had a rush when you mention him in the story. His personality is described as good as I, & I believe anyone, would wish for.
I almost wanted to kill the old owl because he locked him up!
Anyway, I can't wait to see how Harry would accept the drastic change in his life if he "dies" from the plague & joins the rebelion, & how his friends would take it (Especially Draco).
Please update pronto!
Author's Response: Welcome to AU then! I\'m gald you buy and enjoy my take on Sirius, and I hope you keep enjoying the story :D Thanks for the review!
Oooh! I'm so glad you updated!
Haha, I have to say, this Isobel has quite a character!
Anyway, I really loved the chapter!
Don't worry too much about it all taking too long to update. One might forget a bit about the story, but while reading the new chapters, I remember tiny details! Your story is really unique & original, no one can mix it with any other thing.
Summary: Regulus Black, on Voldemort, life, death, and his beloved, insufferable, arrogant brother. One-shot, mild HBP spoilers.
Aaaw.. I loved it! I never thought of Regulus as the guy who considered Sirius some sort of a role-model, even though I believed he is indeed RAB. I believe he loved Sirius, & that Sirius had loved him back too. But I never looked deeply into it.. Superb!
Summary: *COMPLETED!*What happens when you put a hopelessly "romantic" man-hussy and a girl with a soft spot for bedtime activities (not THOSE activities, silly!) together in a dark bedroom? Well, I don't happen to know either, so I suppose we'll find out together, won't we? Come with me, Tia C. Spencer, on a lovely ride through the countryside... er, lakeside... okay, so we won't actually be riding NEXT to anything, but it will be lovely, I promise you that. How can it not be, with me as your illustrious (and quite possibly mad) companion?
And no, contrary to beliefs very likely impressed upon you by this summary, I'm not a gormless prat.
Well... not entirely.
Omg! I loved your fanfiction. I wish I had been with it since the begining, but, well, I only found about it's existance when it won that Quicksilver Quill award. Congratulations, you really earned it.
there are loads of things I liked about your story. How it wasn't boringly long (god, some fanfictions just start spiffingly & then just get so. bloody. sleep-inducing.
It was very entertaining. I always like to read stories from the point of view of a complete nutter who's in love with Sirius Black, my object of my current obsession. & I loved every character you wrote about, how realistic they seemed & how close they were to how I really imagine them. I like a lot of, say, Siriuses(!!) in FF, & I always tell that to the author, but yours is just what imagine him! Everyone was amazing, Lily, Remus, Peter, James, Reglus. & Snape. Even though we now know more about him that we used to, the new information hadn'[t affected your story. Lily would have gone completely berserk at what he'd done to Sirius (WHAT WAS THAT FOR! You nearly gave me a heart-attack when I read that part, & how Tia was so slowly describing him as a lifeless heap on the ground!) As she'd severed ties with him in 5th year.
Anyway, wonderful story. I'm com;letely in love with it, & it's totally a favourite!
Summary: Harry, Ron, and Hermione make a trip to Godric's Hollow to visit the Potters' graves. There, Harry speaks to his parents for the first time, and in so doing, discovers that the dead are never truly lost. (One-shot. Bring your kleenex.)
Aaaaw.. It was really good, & very heart-wrenching.. I'm goign to check your other story, by the way.
Summary: Tonks is rich in family and friends, but the wages of a new Auror keep her short of funds. A side job brings something into her life money can't buy.
*Nominated for a Quicksilver Quill for Best Romance- Canon.*
Oooh! .I loved it.. I'm actually a Sirius fan, & I read Dog's Life. That;s what made me want to reaqd the story. I love stories that have Sirius in it, but not as the main charactar, because that doesn't compelle the author to twist his personality the least.
I'm a dog lover too! I've been so since I was a child. & I hate cats. I think Newfoundlands are a bit too cute for for Sirius. I think of him as a mongrel too. A Newfoundland might look like a bear in his built, but his face is kind. I think that Snuffles would have a mischeivous, aristocratic face.
I'm a R/T supporter, anyway. & I loved the story. Tonks had always been one of my favourite characters.
Author's Response: Happy New Year! I\'m so thrilled you read the story and like Sirius! I think you\'d like my Marauder Era Sirius story Semi Charmed Life- same personality, different dimension of the Potterverse- but even if you don\'t, thanks for liking him in this one! ^_^
Summary: The story of the wonderful life of Sirius Black told by the one and only, Sirius Black!
CHAPTER 5 SUBMITTED!
Ooo! I love it! I wish you'd update! I can't wait to see how Sirius would act in such a sticky situation! Should be reeeaaaallllyyy fun! Haha! Poor bloke, probably gonna squirm - much to James' Delight - all night long! LOL!
Anyway, I love your story. I've really been just looking for some Sirius, light reading (No pun intended, I swear!) & I'm glad I found this, it's wonderful. Please update!
Winner of the QuickSilver Quills Award, categ. Best Marauder Era.What did being a Marauder truly mean?... Let's just say that some tunes cannot be played by a lone musician; and those four's lives were certainly not soloists' scores. In class or in detention, in Quidditch matches or full-moon wanderings, fleeing before monsters or confronting dark wizards, they wrote, measure after measure, their own eight-handed piece.
Messrs Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot and Prongs, are proud to present a Symphony for Quartet.
Wow. This chapters is great! & Has a lot of Sirius-ness in it! I loved it.
You know, updating a story each month isn't that bad for your readers. There are loads of authors who update only once a month & their stories aren't very impressive. Yours thoguh have every right to take a full month for a chapter to be written.
Great chapter! I'm sorry I didn't review sooner, but I was on vacation out of town, & the net was so slow, it was infuriating to open a webpage. So I only managed to get as far as opening the link in my email to the story (I can't ignore fanfiction alerts. =D), & I had to switch off the net while reading. And, well, I didn't happen to stop by after that.
Anyway, the chapter was great. I can't wait for mroe updates!
Summary: A Mary Sue Parody fic! Infinity Babe has moved from New York to Hogwarts with her 'oh-so-evil' parents. Can Harry and the gang stop her from warping canon? Not to be taken seriously. Rated PG-13 for a reason. Scriptfic.
Outrageously impressive! Loved it, can't wait for the next chapter!
Summary: When her old pal Rory calls in a favour, Tonks searches for a missing girl with the help of her new love Remus and his 'dog' Snuffles
*Sequel to Once in a Blue Moon*
*Ch 20 Quote*
It was the happiest Christmas of my life.
Aaaaw! I loved it! & I particulary loved the scenes with Sirius in them. :D.. I can't say all I want about this, because I have to go & study for my Geography test *gags*. But It was wonderful. I'm going to stop reading at this point, at least 'till I finish my exams. Your stories are addictive! Way to go!
Author's Response: I\'ve got to find a way to lure you over to the General/Marauder Era cat to read my Sirius romance Semi Charmed Life! It\'s a different dimension of the Potterverse, but Sirius is the same! ^_~
Summary: CHAPTER 10 COMING SOON!!! - THANKS EVERYONE FOR THE COMMENTS! Rating: PG-13
Do you think it’s easy to run from your family?
When Sirius Black is ten years old, everything in his life is black and white. He is a wizard. He is the heir to his most noble house. He is eager to please and willing to be everything his parents have ever dreamt for him.
Then, at Hogwarts with the ability to explore the world differently he starts to question what he has been taught his whole life and finds that even though he is a brilliant wizard and studies and most things come easy to him there is still so much he needs to learn about life outside of Grimmauld Place.
Follow along with me as Sirius Black’s world starts Fading Into Grey.
Disclaimer: not mine etc.
o m g.. I've never had read any fanfiction that touched me so much! maybe Between Npow & Then, but this is just really well-written. You had made out Sirius's thoughts in a very plausible way, & did not make hiom jump into new emotions & stuff, & did not, for example, make him hate his family since ever, or hate his brother.. Oh, god.. I love how you had worked this.. It's really really really good, & I love it. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hiya! Thank you so much! The reason I started writing this story is because I couldn\'t find a Sirius story that I found believeable...so I\'m thrilled that you feel the way you do! Chapter 9 is probably 90% complete so keep posted! Thanks again for reading!!! =D
Omg. I have never read a better story about a young Sirius. I have read great stories about the young marauders, but since Sirius is my favourite onem, I appreciate this one above all. This chapter had been wonderful. I feel really sorry for Regulus. & Sirius must be feelign really down. Can't wait 'till next chapter's out!
Summary: "He didn't have a plan, but that had never stopped him before."
After 'Snuffles' is revealed to be a fugitive Animagus, Sirius must convince the woman he loves to make him her most wanted.
Outtake to chapter 11 of A Wolf in the Moonlight
Aaaaaaaaaaaw! I loved it! I'm such a pathetic romantic sap! but I don't give a damn! I really really loved it!
Author's Response: You are a romantic soul who has the right priorities in life! ^_^ Thank you!
Summary: Damaged by the war, Harry flees everything that used to be familiar to him and instead roams the night, haunted by unsolvable questions -- what truly killed Voldemort? And what lurks in the Forbidden Forest, where the trees seem alive?
As his investigation progresses, everything Harry has learnt is called into question as he discovers the most jealously kept secret of the Wizarding civilisation.
Oh, wow! I loved the chapter. Amazing.
I loved the Harry/Hermione confrontaion. How you had described the DoM. Very exciting & hooking. How it all ended up. How Harry felt pain & regret, & how he missed the Hogrwarts days. & how he finally gave in to lust.
I liked how you ended the chapter, BTW. can't wait for the next one!
Wow. THe Chapter was amazing.. I loved it. & That was a really nasty cliffhanger! Maybe I should hate you for it... :D
Anyway, I love the tense interaction between Daphne & Harry. It's so mysterious & adds an unusual touch of romance into the story. Though, I'm not sure I should call it romance. Lust would do better, maybe.
Martin is really a nasty piece of work. He & Umbridge should get together. But killing him was a dramatic act, don't you think? Harry now knows how dangerous his power is, & how difficult it is to control it, mroe than he ever did, I think.
Oh, & I'm soooooooo happy Harry had slept! That's a great improvement. Though I can't see Harry letting that happen again. Daphne singing him to sleep everynight? Unless they get closer to each other, I don't think Harry would get over his pride & let that happen.
I wonder if he would blow his cover in his anger. To Hermione about his secret mission, or maybe about how he knew everyone is conspiring behind his back. I don't know i I want him to or not. All this secret-keeping attitude he has must have made him really frustrated (Never mind the fact that it made me frustrated too, I want to see him telling someone!) & he's bound to let it out sometime. But that would be baaaaaaaad for his quest's sake..
I can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder how he would confront her. Or would he at all?
Oh, wow. This answers a hell load of questions. Amazing chapter. Can't wait for the next.
I hope we find out soon what Daphne's got to do with all of it, & what does Lily finding the queen's maid's sword & James finding the wizard's -Whom her & her army's spirits killed means.
can't wait for next chapter!