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I am a 14 year old who has read every Harry Potter book at least 20 times and cant wait for the next one!
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Through the Fire by Croyez
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 250]

Summary: It all starts out with a meeting. Little do Harry and Hermione know what problems and dilemmas will surface along with their secret relationship. Hearts are shattered, prophecies are spoken, disappearances occur, dark plans are schemed, and discoveries beyond their understanding are made. Can their relationship withstand the perils it is subject to? Will their fate and worries stand in the way of true love? They can only hope not…

The air was suddenly filled with Hermione’s screams. They reverberated off the walls, echoed in the space…in Harry’s head…he felt as if he were sharing her pain, as if he were the one under the curse. He couldn’t take it. He couldn’t see her in such pain, maybe even wishing, like he had earlier, to die…for it to end…

He didn’t notice it when his hand began loosening its grip on the edge. He didn’t notice it until he began to fall to the ground, but as soon as he did, he pointed his wand at Voldemort. He felt seventeen years of suffering, seventeen years of mystery and trials…he felt hatred like he had never experienced before, pouring out of him. He felt every single thing that had happened to him on Voldemort’s account, rising to the surface, almost drowning him in a mix of emotions.

And then, he yelled, with all his might, “Avada Kedavra!”

He wished for it all to end…for it to be over…

The Last Chapter (Twenty) is up on [July/12] Thank you so much, Stephanie!

H/Hr, and Book 1-5!Hermione! will only sink when there are none loyal to them. So there.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 120337 Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
11/06/04 Updated: 08/04/05

Reviewer: shoeger52 Signed
Date: 01/23/05 Title: Chapter 8: The Letter

how do u do it? how can u take a brilliant story and make it a very brilliant emotional fan fic. you have so much potential my friend made a 200 page fan fic and i thought that it was a good 1 this is 10 times better u need to keep going with it and never stop! shoe

Author's Response: Wow...thanks so much! I am very flattered to receive such praise. =)
For the record, I have 84 pages. =) Just felt like saying previous writing consisted of twenty-page stories. You can't imagine how happy I am that my story is long and isn't boring.
But all has an ending...I'm not sure how many chapters I'll have with this fic, just that they'll be more than fifteen. =)
Again, thanks a lot! =)


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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69

Reviewer: shoeger52 Signed
Date: 01/25/05 Title: None

i want more story it needs a little more romance they just kinda are always together kissing make them do something like a adventure it isnt like some others i read and really u need more bad dreams and visions of Voldemort*gasping* plz i want more chapters faster! *eating cookies* i want more more more

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Chapter eight was submitted yesterday, so now we wait for the mods...Don't worry, Harry and Hermione will have more romance. And there will be plenty of adventures. The plot is going to start to form in ch. 8. This is not going to be a short story. I have big ideas and plan to have at least 15 chapters, so plenty of time for everything. I hope you stick with me. Sean

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