My name is Kriti. All I have to say about myself is that I love the Harry Potter books, all the amazing Fan fiction written on this site (to the point of addiction actually! ;) ), and I am a proud Hufflepuff on the beta forums. I don't have a story up yet (I hope I'll have one soon) but honestly it's a great pleasure to read and review all your stories, so I really don't care. =D
I do have a drabble thread and a banner thread. So, if you like reading drabbles, do check them out, and if you like my banners and want one, I'm open for requests! :)
(I do have banners for these, but am unable to work out how to put them up.)
Finally, all I have to say is-
"Write to be understood, speak to be heard, read to grow..."
-Lawrence Clark Powell
Summary: Right before Harry's third year, Fred and George tried to shut Percy in a pyramid. How, exactly, might that have been accomplished?
Wow! It was nice. I wouldn't say I was rolling with laughter after I read your story, but there definitely was a pleasant smile on my face. I was going to leave without leaving a review if I hadn't seen some of your negative reviews. I agree with you on that- if you cannot say something constructive, don't bother at all. What problem I think people have with your fic is that it is short, and when you seem to start making an impression on the reader's mind, the story is already over. I understand that this is a missing scene from POA and so you cannot extend it further, your best shot would be to maybe show a few scenes before this- something about Percy do something really irritating or something.. Then your story, I feel, would have a more lasting impression on the reader. All in all, I would say I really like your work- your humour isn't something for which we need to leave our brains behind; we can take them along and enjoy some intelligent laughter, small maybe, but intelligent. :)
Summary: The reign of Voldermort comes to an end, and with it ends the prestige and power Lucius Malfoy once had in the Wizarding World. In order to regain the respect of his fellow wizards and to make them believe that he has turned over a new leaf (which he actually hasn't) and has graciously accepted muggles and Mudbloods, Lucius asks Hermione, a Mudblood, to marry his son, Draco, a pure-blood. Obviously, they both refuse, but Lucius isn't going to give up easily. After all, he wants his status back. He still has a few tricks up his sleeve and is determined to play match-maker. What happens next is a series of events that serve only to bring Hermione and Draco closer, both literally and figuratively speaking. Read to find out how this one unseemly proposal causes absolute chaos in their lives! THIS STORY IS NOT HBP and DH COMPATIBLE! Hey all! Check out my personal info for the expected date of the next update. =)
that was awesome.. u do take up a lot of time 2 update but what you finally give is incredible!!! keep up the good work and plz plz plz update faster this time!!!
oooh!!! amazing chapter as always!!! How do you write so beautifully??? Please tell me.. And then what happened??? You seriously caught me off-guard with the fight and 'i hate you's.. and plz plz plz update soon.. i beg of you.. i can't bear the suspense.. anyway, how many chapters left in the fic.. i think you are wrapping it up now.. Well, this is the first story i ever read on MNFF and i am in love with it.. i think i'll be really sad when it finally ends but i have wanted to know how it ends, since 2 years!! this is my most fav harry potter fan fiction and right now, i so wanna know what happens next.. Please do update soon.. ;) =) =) =) =)
a chapter after a long long tym.....
it was a really funny 1 (they generally r) nd i especially liked ur description of draco bloody malfoy nd hermione bleeding granger. also the healing paste incident was really cute. overall this chap. was amazing nd it had 2 b cuz u simply rock!!!!!!
Summary: For the rest of the Ministry, the interdepartmental challenge was merely a failed attempt to restore trust between workers. But for Draco Malfoy and Hermione Granger, it was the catalyst for an unexpected relationship built on passionate letters, concealed identities, and secret meetings – and the beginning of an end that neither of them could ever have imagined possible, not even in their wildest dreams.
Post-war. Based somewhat on the story of the Phantom of the Opera. Also contains R/Hr, so don't read if you can't stomach that ship.
Status: Complete. Thanks for reading, everyone!
one word- cute!
Summary: Over 3500 reads and counting!!! _____Okay so I had said this was to become my version of book seven but I just don't like that they are already together I want to develop that over a series if I'm going to write one, not smack dab at the beggining so I will post the sequel to this story and that will be it. I will write a book seven but I want it to be better than what this story allows!! So look for Harry Potter and the Final Riddle later!! The sequel to this story (5 A.M. Revelations) has been validated sp please go read!
It's late at the Burrow the night after Bill and Fleur's wedding and Hermione has alot of things on her mind that she needs to get out. Will a certain redhead be able to help her or will he be as cluless as ever? Please Review!! this is my first HP fic!
Please look at the banner I made for this story!! it's on my author profile!!
I quite liked your story. I especially liked the title. It was appropriate, interesting and catches one’s eye. An appealing title makes a lot of difference to the story.
You started with the story well. The communication between Ron and Hermione was done very well. They seemed to be totally in character and in control of their emotions as they generally are in front of each other. I liked how they finally end up kissing each other with Ron explaining to Hermione how he adores her. It was really sweet and adoring. But I think Hermione seemed to be out of character in the scene after the kiss where Harry catches them and Ron says that he hasn’t packed. Hermione seemed very odd giggling like that. I know she just had her first kiss with her crush from forever, but I still think Hermione would be more mature about it.
It was very witty how you left an open ending for a sequel. I really liked Harry’s monologue in the end and can’t wait to read it. All in all, it is a good and interesting story and I am going to read the sequel ASAP!
Summary: After the downfall of Voldemort, Hermione decides to take a break and return to the Muggle world. Deciding to go on a Muggle cruise, Hermione realizes that it was the biggest mistake of her life. Now, she's stuck on a boat with her worst enemy. Fights and bickering continue to take place between them and maybe a little something else too...
Hermione makes new friends and meets up with an old friend, Jessie: an arrogant girl who treats Hermione like dirt and desperately tries to seek Draco's attention. (Slightly AU)
Thanks to some of my awesome readers, this story has been translated into Chinese and Vietnamese. For information on how you can see the translated version, please check my profile!
Status: Working on chapter 26. In the meantime, you can have a look at my new one-shot, Kiss Kiss, Bang Bang!
Please note that the date of my last update is incorrect. Apparently there are some glitches in the system regarding to this. Chapter 25 was updated on the 7/09/09!
Nominated for a Quicksilver Quill award in the Non-Canon Romance category
Please leave a review before you leave! It means a lot! You can check out the banner of this story on my author's page!
well. even i was thinking of the titanic sceane when i read that. A good chapter though i thought i'll see more of the ball in it. Hopefully, you'll the next chapter sooner and finally see what happens! we've been waiting so long!! so. pleeeaaassse update soon!! one more thing is that you've copied that "merlin's pants" joke directly out of DH so it really didn't feel right or funny.. Anyway, a well written chapter and i'm dying to know what happens next!!! =) do update soon!
Author's Response: I thought I would actually write in some of the ball scenes, but the chapter was getting to be too long, so I decided to just write one whole chapter based on that night, so hold on tight for the next one! Oh, really!? I honestly didn\'t know that merlin\'s pants was in DH...it probably got stuck in my head somehow without me knowing how and where I got it from - oh well..! Anyway, really glad you enjoyed the chapter overall...! Thank you so much for your review!
interesting twist.. do update soon.. wanna find out more!
Author's Response: Hey! Thank you for reviewing...means a whole lot to me =D I\'ll try my best to update real soon !
cute!!!!! plz update soon!
Author's Response: I will don\'t worry *smiles*
Summary: A Sequel to Born the Day You Kissed Me
After losing Draco Malfoy, Hermione Granger is determined to have him back…so determined that she will go as far as inventing a spell that reverses the affects of the “Obliviate” curse. In this anticipated sequel, Hermione and Draco’s lives will collide, along with opportunities for Hermione to perform her new creation on her most valuable subject. However, when a new relationship between the two forms, will Hermione be able to summon the courage to expose their lost love? Will she reveal to him the missing portion of his life? Or will she simply accept the new Draco and without spells, attempt to revive the love that she knows is buried down deep in his soul....
This story is pre-HBP/DH CH 16 Coming Soon
this is a good story! just keep up the good work!
Summary: Harry has sworn off loving Ginny...at least until the war is over, but will Ginny go along with that or will she have something to say?
Both your stories, ‘3 A.M. Confessions’ and ‘5 A. M. Revelations’ have been more about character interaction than actions. In such a case it is obvious that you’ll have more of dialogue. But I have found it difficult to follow it in your stories. I think you should use more tags to explain who is saying what. In some place one of the characters has said something, and then you added a tag. After that you have continued the same character’s dialogue in a new line. I think it would be easier for the reader to understand if you continued the dialogue on the same line after the tag.
I think one of the strongest points in your writing is your characterisations. I have found that in both ‘3 A.M. Confessions’ and ‘5 A. M. Revelations’. In this story the interaction between Harry and Ginny was very natural and flew without any struggle. It is very rare for authors to make their characters converse believably and you do a very good job with that.
This story is a sweet and interesting one-shot. You knew how you wanted to go about our story and it shows plainly in your writing. You are a good author and I would love to read more of your fiction.
Summary: What does Lord Voldemort do in his spare time? Well, that's an excellent question. Who would have known that the Dark Lord has a blog? (He also has a loyal following of readers, most of whom are Death Eaters and who post their comments.) Voldemort dispenses advice on everything from murder methods to germ protection to Power Rangers to shoes, and gives an account of the life of an evil overlord. But is he posting too much personal information online? And will Harry read it and find out more about the Dark Lord than Voldemort ever intended? Read and see.
WARNING: Extremely OOC behaviour from almost all.
RUNNER-UP in the 2007 Quicksilver Quills Awards for Best Humour fic! Also nominated like 21 times, because apparently my readers are as insane as I am!
ur story is really funny unlike many others which i have tried in the humour section.. newayz keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I tend to enjoy most of the humour stories I\'ve read.
ur story is really funny unlike many others which i have tried in the humour section.. newayz keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Double posts... the bane of Voldemort\'s existence.
LOL!!!! LOL!!!! LOL!!!! twas hillarious! plz do update soon! i luv ur fic! =)
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'ll try to update ASAP!
hey! amazing chapter and quite surprising actually! really liked d filch and R.A.B. idea. and u r planning to write a sequel??!!?? that would be gr8!!
newayz lemme say it once more, hilarious fic!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I do indeed plan on sequeling. The Filch idea was my favourite part of the chapter, so I\'m glad you liked it, too!
wow! that was superb! thats the word1
but the next chap is gonna b the last.. i'm sad :(
but gr8 work! hope 2 see more stories by u
Author's Response: Thank you! You will definitely see some of my stories up in the near future. I\'m sad that the blog is ending, too! I\'ll miss writing it!
Summary: During the construction of Hogwarts, the founders are all doing their part to create the first school of its kind. Everyone except Salazar Slytherin, that is. When Godric dreams of the nightmarish project Salazar is undertaking, it is up to him to set things straight. Warning: This story does not completely comply with canon, merely to explore possible alternative reasons for Slytherin's departure from Hogwarts.
Forum Username: Gigi
Challenge Prompt: Dreams
You have given a very interesting account of how the Chamber of Secrets was founded. Although it is accurate according to cannon, I think it is still interesting. All the four founders seemed very much n character. Gryffindor was brave, impatient, and impulsive. Ravenclaw was intelligent, wise and didn't hurry into decisions. Helga was motherly, helpful and forgiving. Even though Salzar seemed to be in character, I would have liked to see more emphasis on him and his thoughts. Your main focus was understandably on Godric, but an example of what you called Salzar's 'ambition' would have been good to see.
What bothered me in your story is some of the expressions and phrases you used. Expressions like ‘Bollocks’ and ‘Bloody hell’ sound completely out of place. I know you can’t possibly use the language used at that time, but such blatant use of Americanisms can be avoided.
All in all I would say your story is very interesting and a good read. Your descriptions and narrations are good and I will look forward to reading more stories of yours.
Summary: It's the sequel to "The Dark Lord's Blog," guys! (And girls... and, I don't know, gender-neutral people and centaurs and walruses and parameciums and shrubs and stuff.)
Several months have passed since Filch came into possession of Voldemort's magical powers, and he has taken over Hogwarts.
With Filch serving as The Dark Lord Snoogerblossom, the position of Hogwarts caretaker/janitor is open. Seeing as Voldemort wants his magical powers back, he and his extremely attractive new sidekick, Mungo Phelps, go undercover at Hogwarts, with Mungo posing as a transfer student and Voldemort posing as the new janitor. Wacky high-jinks ensue.
Join Voldemort as he tries to get back his magic, kill Harry Potter, steal Gryffindor's sword to make a shiny new Horcrux, romance Minerva McGonagall, discover Sirius's secret to becoming a chick magnet, and swallow a teaspoon of his pride to mop up spills the Muggle way and wear an unflattering uniform! WARNING: Extremely silly and very out-of-character.
If you haven't read "The Dark Lord's Blog," well, what are you doing? GO READ IT NOW! Just click on my author name and you'll be directed to my chaotic author page, which lists all my wacky stories.
This is on hiatus, dudes. Ooh! But it was twice nominated by nice (and insane) people for the Best Humour Fic award in the Quicksilver Quills thingy!
Also, some wonderful loony nominated Mungo Phelps for Best Male OC, making him if possible even more conceited! (No one had the heart to tell Mungo that he was designed as an example of a terrible OC.)
EXCITING NEWS! "The E-Journal of an Evil Janitor" is now continued as a Twitter blog! Go to Twitter dot com and find thedarklord666. Voldy's waiting!
hehehe... awesome!! plz update sooner.. cant wait..
Author's Response: Thanks! But I\'m not sure how soon I\'ll be updating...
Summary: After a mishap during a heated argument, Hermione and Draco find themselves taken back in time to when the Marauders ruled the halls of Hogwarts and find out that they share a deeper connection than hate. The question is will they ever get back if the only way is to get along? As Hermione and Draco try to get back to their own time as well as fulfill an unwanted destiny, they deal with a disturbed Sorting Hat, unwanted suitors, the constant squabbles of James and Lily, awkward moments galore, and maybe even a little love.
Hey! cute story! i hope u'll update soon!
Summary: How it could have ended differently for Hermione and Draco...
Link to A Thousand Words: http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewstory.php?sid=19465
well.. i prefer the original epilouge.. it was superb!