Due to the hacking experience, and the fact that spyware seems to come with each e-mail from MNFF, I will no longer be posting Prophecy's Child here on MNFF> I have moved over to SIYE. I have posted the first 10 chapters there, re-editing and adding content along the way. If you are interested in still following this story, it can be found at http://www.siye.co.uk/siye/viewstory.php?sid=11975
I'd like to thank all my loyal readers for following along with my story to this point. If you choose not to come to SIYE, I understand. Thank you for letting me attempt to entertain! Until we meet again...
Good chapter, but something is bothering me about Luna. It was clearly stated in OOtP that her mother died experimenting with her potions or spells. And that Luna could see the thestrals because of the fact that she had seen her mother die. So the dying in childbirth is not sitting too well. The rest of it is working out well though.
Author's Response: I don't remember reading that, so I'm sorry. The fic is mostly done, so I can't change it. She did see her mother die, but from the inside. That was how I justified it, but I must have not added that note on this site. Again, sorry. I work with my imagination, and this is what called to me.
Just saw your request for read and review on CraftySlythern's review page as I was leaving one for her. Hope you don't mind that I followed it here. Story was great, but I agree the explanations could have been a bit more fluid. Love the fact that Harry got there at the end and the house cup was brilliant!~~Kat
Author's Response: I don't mind at all. I'm actually really happy that you did. The more reviews, the better I always say. LOL!!!! I'm glad you liked it, and you are the third person I think to say the explanations could have been better, and after rereading it, I have to say I agree. Thanks so much for your constructive critism, and you review.
Harry and Ginny have both fought thier way through hell and back. In the literal sense as well. I see them working as a couple because no one else could every understand them the way they understand eachother. Very well written...and I like the fact that you have Ginny reliving some of it. Things like that do not just go away, they scar.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I completely agree. Life is complicated and sensitive. There are many things in life that can scar us, and make us feel at our lowest of lows. Even through what Ginny is like in OOP, I still feel she is scarred with what happened her first year. I'm glad you liked the first part. Heed that it gets lighter from here (from what I have posted) but deeper things are still to come. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Very good start. I love the way everyday things are getting in the way. Keep up the great work!~~~Kat
Very well done yet again! I will be definitely keeping an eye on this one and adding it to favs. It's just the right combo of fluffiness, cuteness, and a lil angst thrown in here and there. 10/10~~~Kat
Author's Response: why thank you! I've submitted chapter three, hopefully it'll get accepted!
Fudge did not put his own son in Azkaban. That was Bartemius Crouch. Besides that, is a great chapter. ~~~Kat
Author's Response: thanks for pointing that out! somebody told me that awhile ago, but it wouldnt let me change my chappie... oh well, i'll try again soon. thanks for the review!
very well done again! of course, never expected less. you are really a great writer. Looking forward to the next update.~~~Kat
Tears at work again. You get me into so much trouble here. Great chapter. I only wish we had something like that ceremony outside of Potterverse. ~~~Kat
Great Chapter as usual, keep up the wonderful work!~~ Kat
You've done so well capturing emotions even in the strongest of situations. For that I congratualte you. Excellent chapter once again!
Why do I get the feeling that Harry is going to blast Fudge in the press?? hmmmm....anyway, fantastic chapter. You really have the emotions down to an art. Keep up the great work.
I love the hostility between Harry and Snape. Also like the parts where Ron is dreamwalking. All in all, another 10 for another great chapter!!
Fantastic. I laughed, I cried, and now my emotions are just stuck on smile. You've done such a wonderful job with this story!!! Hope to read more from you soon!~~Kat
Very nicely done! I hope Harry gets his money back from his idiot Uncle. Way to go with Dobby to the rescue!
I get the feeling we have not seen the end of Rita Skeeter. I also get the feeling she will wish we HAD seen the end of her. Great work on the chapters and both stories!~~~~Kat
Very funny and very poignant chapter. This is a great story. Please keep the updates coming!!~~~Kat
Another great chapter! Loved Dumbledore's comment about not wanting to see Jeremy in his office again. Still don't get why Ginny is being punished, since she was the one kidnapped. It's not like she left the grounds willingly.
Author's Response: Ginny is being punished because she left school grounds without permission. Now, yes, you can argue she thought it was a note from Anna and she was lured, but the other side of that is Snape would have a fit if she and Harry weren't punished and Fudge is looking for a last shot of redemption. Or, at least, that's my take on it. So, I left it at a in-school suspension - nothing too harsh. Thanks for sharing your opinion - I appreciate it!
Exit Catarina, enter Anna...again....Too bad Catarina never got to meet her. Glad that Harry and Ginny didn't tell Nathan to bugger off. Great Chapter!!
Author's Response: I know - I think Catarina and Anna would have gotten along famously! Yes, Harry and Ginny are going to need Nathan...Thanks!
I just read both stories back to back, saving my reviews for the end. I have to say this is all fantastic! The attention to detail....even down to the looks the cat gives..I have 3 cats, so I KNOW those looks. Grats on such a wonderful piece of work. Please keep up the fantastic writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you're enjoying them - I've had so much fun writing them. And yes, our cats keep us humble, don't they?!
Ginny tells about her feelings for Harry, through her encounters with Mr. Padfoot.If you are a H/G shipper AND a Sirius's fan, this story is for you! Please, Read & Review!
Very well written. I am so glad that you kept Ginny's fiery spirit intact. I also think that Ginny/Harry is the way to go. He needs someone strong, and that she is. Keep up the excellent work! 10/10 ~~~Kat
Author's Response: Thanks, Katastrophe, for such a nice review. I totally agree with you about Ginny and Harry. And I sincerely hope we will have some of H/G romance in the next book.