Due to the hacking experience, and the fact that spyware seems to come with each e-mail from MNFF, I will no longer be posting Prophecy's Child here on MNFF> I have moved over to SIYE. I have posted the first 10 chapters there, re-editing and adding content along the way. If you are interested in still following this story, it can be found at http://www.siye.co.uk/siye/viewstory.php?sid=11975
I'd like to thank all my loyal readers for following along with my story to this point. If you choose not to come to SIYE, I understand. Thank you for letting me attempt to entertain! Until we meet again...
adding you to favs if I can stay logged in long enough to get it done!
Author's Response: Yeah, the whole staying logged in thing can be a bother. But thanks for sticking it out and trying to add me to your faves list...you're on mine too:)
Great work with the riddles and the entire chapter!!! Fluffliness with a touch of mystery, great combo! I look forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Thanks again!! I had a bit of trouble working out the verses, but I guess they came out alright. I'm hoping to submit chapter 9 tomorrow. Glad you came back for more :)
Okay...someone please step on the snake and put it out of my misery. I reallllly hate snakes, but it is a perfect form for both Bellatrix and for Malfoy. I see only one problem. I now have to come up with another way to determine IF people are animagus and what forms. Back to the drawing board. Confused yet? I had thought about a sensor as well. I'll think of something. Great Chapter as usual. Will truly miss this story when you are done! 10/10 of course!~~~Kat
Author's Response: Well, this is just more proof that great minds think alike! Did I mention that I'm a wonderful Legillimens? Teeheehee (I probably spelled that wrong :( ) I'm sure you'll be able to come up with something just as creative....again. Maybe a potion they have to drink.....or something along those lines. I had planned on two more chapters (including 11 which is now submitted) but the person who edits my stories before I type them up seems to think I'll have to go three more. Anyhoo, I already have plans for a Ginny/Draco fic, I hope you'll read, even if you don't like the pairing!
Wonderful chapter!!! I about fell out of my chair laughing at the "Hot lips" comment. Of course that was after about crying at the fact that putting a ring on Ginny's finger felt SO right. I kept saying someone needed to step on the snake..now look what's happened, she got away. I like the idea of the sequel, although I could be biased. The though of Ginny and Draco together kinda makes me ill. LOL~~~Kat
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm not a Ginny/Draco shipper either, but an idea for a fic with them kinda popped into my head. I'm toying with the idea of just writing it and a sequel to this at the same time, kinda take turns submitting chapters. I'm glad you liked Ron's little *pet name*. It was fun to write :) Thanks so much for being such a faithful reviewer!
Most excellent chapter. Great explanation of the creatures and the emotions from the characters!! Another winner!~~ Kat
Author's Response: Thanks so much....you always have the nicest things to say! I'm glad you enjoyed my latest chapter....I enjoyed yours!!
Great writing once again! I really like the way you are introducing the snake known as Bellatrix. Keep up the fantastic work!!! ~~ Kat
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review!!! Bellatrix (disguised as the snake) will be coming into the story in a bigger way in chapter9. Chapter 8 mostly concerns Ron, Harry, Ginny, and Hermione exploring beyond the arch (finally!!)
Very nice description of the new guy. Keep up the good work!~~Kat
Author's Response: Thank you! An artist always loves to hear his work is appreciated.
The Romantic Maniac
Very well done. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks. I hope to see chapter11 for the Prophecy's child soon. Chapter10 was very good.
I have to agree with Crafty. I think Ginny is going to faint. Or think she is delisuional and shake her head a few times to clear it. Another wonderful chapter. Gotta love fluffiness! Poor Ginny though, being sick. I hate that icky feeling. Keep up the great work hon!!
Author's Response: yeah poor ginny it stinks being sick.....
Another great chapter. Your description of Potter Manor was very well done. I love the longer chapter as well.....But won't Hermione find the Potter History book if she is staying there?? Oh well....Update soon!~~Kat
Author's Response: Thanks!!!!....chapter 5 is long too.....Ginny locked both the portrait and the book somewhere....but they will resurface in chapter 7.......thanks for reading!!!!
I thought the story was well written. If it takes someone too long to figure out who Harry was getting married to, perhaps that person needs to pay better attention to the clues. And besides, this is a FANFIC....which means a lil ooc is allowed. 10/10 ~~~Kat
Author's Response: thanks for defending me, i totally agree plus it is a big three years between 15 and 18 so people are allowed to grow and change right?....... anyways im glad you enjoyed it and you will just have to keep reading to see if someone finds out and how.....hehehe
Still loovin it...moving on to the next chapter!~~ Kat
Author's Response: *smiles*
Still laughing....trying not to get in trouble as I read this at work...ROFL....Very nicely done!
Author's Response: dont get in trouble now....lol....thanks so much for all the reviews, i really apperciate it....i hope you continue to read and enjoy....
Another great chapter. The only thing I really saw was and error in the first line of the song Iris. You put And I'd I've up the world.....it's actually And I'd give up the world. A little thing, but since you love the song, thought you mgiht want to know. 10/10 again. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: your absolutly right about the typo....i already went back and fixed it....i typed the whole song from memory and didnt really reread it...opps...thanks for the 10!!!
I agree with Czarina.....Hermione sees the book, finds out that they are married. That was the first thing that popped in my head when I read that Hermione was going to be staying with Harry. Another wonderful chapter. Looking forward to ch 7 soon.~~~Kat
Author's Response: thanks!!! Im looking forward to seeing what everyone thinks of chapter 7.....
Lilian, hmm...with the nickname Lily perhaps?? Great start. Took me a while to find the sequel, sorry about that. 10/10 yet again!~~~Kat
I was rereading this, as I have not been back to MNFF for quite a while. I am up to chapter 18 so far. One word I see repeated pretty frequently is irregardless. That is not, nor has it ever been a word. It's a common mistake, but one that can rip a person right out of the story. The word you are looking for is regardless, meaining without regard. The other word would very simply translate to not without regard, and is completely inappropriate.
You've got a great story, I just hate to see it ruined by a simple mistake that keeps being repeated.
Author's Response: eck!!!! You know what? I actually know that it\'s not a word! That\'s the sad thing! I don\'t know, I suppose at 3 am my mind gets hazy! I\'ll definately be doing a complete story editing overhaul once the story is complete because (maybe it\'s me) but I see manyyyyy errors! Thx for pointing that out, I need readers like you!
Very..ummm...interesting. Funny, but really strange. Somehow thouigh, it doesn't stretch my imagination too far to see Dudley playing with Barbie Dolls!! LOL
Author's Response: Thanks for checking out my humor fic, Kat. It's great to have faithful reviewers :)
You have a very good beginning here. The only problem I see is that it is a little bit choppy. Definitely a good start to the story though.~~~Kat
Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion. I'll try improvising.
I love the fact that they both forgot their pact in the aftermath of the battle. I know from the previous story that Molly doesn't know til it actually comes to pass. But does Lily ever find out? Very good start! 10/10~~~Kat