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The name's Juliet.
Yes, Juliet as in Romeo and Juliet.
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Take My Heart Away by Hatusu
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 959]

Summary: Past Featured Story Hermione goes back in time with one mission: to kill Tom Riddle before he ever comes to power. A difficult task, correct? An impossible one, she realizes, as a love between them grows stronger than anything she has ever known. Now Hermione has a choice to make. Will she condemn the Wizarding world to almost certain destruction, or will she take the life of the one boy she has ever loved?

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 39417 Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/27/05 Updated: 12/17/06


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 5: Late Night Suspicions

Ooh... She doesn't trust him much, does she?


~Juli

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 6: Sunset Tears

Oh! I thought she was going to tell him for a minute there. That wouldn't have been good now, would it?

~Juli

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 7: Enemies Closer

Ooh... Ouch. Great chapter - nice suspense. The plot thickens... If I may dare to use such a cliched term.

~Juli

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 8: Best For Them

Yes, Harry did seem to notice that, didn't he? Told Dumbledore something about that, I seem to recall. Voldemort reminds me a bit - a bit of me. Or something like that.

~Juli

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 9: Empty Space

Oh, wow.

That was spectacular. Beautiful moment, and so... So right.

Tom reminds me too much of me.


Scary thoughts there.

~Juli

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 10: Sillver Slippers and Peacock... Hats

Oh... So true.

Excellent. Love this chapter... Hermione/Helen so worried, Tom so dangerous - and this Minerva / Dumbledore situation! It adds a nice spark to an empty spot in the story

~Juli

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 11: Moonlight Masquerade

Oh! How could she do that to Tom? How could she?

*gasp* I'm taking the side of Tom Riddle. *shudder*


How could YOU leave me hanging like that? Must keep reading, don't have time for any more review...

~Juli

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 12: Moonlight Masquerade, Part II

Oh... That was wonderful.

I SOOO want to be Hermione.

~Juli

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 13: Of Puzzles and Riddles

Now there's the Dumbledore we know - sharp. Too sharp, perhaps.

Wonderful chapter.

~Juli

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 14: Price of Immortality

Woah.

That was wonderful. This is an awesome story... I can't wait for the next chapter. You are doing wonderfully, don't worry.

~Juli

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 15: Pieces of Agony

Oh! *tear* This is definently going on my favorites list. Wonderful... Absolutely great. I love the "thousand pieces of agony" part.

~Juli

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 15: Pieces of Agony

Wait... It stops?!? I so didn't realize this was the last chapter so far!


You're going to drive me mad, you are. Write quickly! This is absolutely magnificent.

~Juli

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 11/20/06 Title: Chapter 17: Worst Nightmare

Awww, how sweet!

Loved this chapter, too... It brings up a lot of questions, but you've moved your characters along spectacularly... I love how grown up Hermione seems, how elegant Tom is becoming, and how Malfoys are... Always Malfoys. xD Great one, again!

~Juli

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 11/04/06 Title: Chapter 16: See You Cry

Wow.... This was awesome. Perfection to the utmost. You did excellently with the Quicksilver Quills, and you deserved every bit of it - This has become my favorite story EVER.

The development of emotion in this chapter was incredible - the soft side of Tom Riddle that we never imagined could appear, the side we all knew would come out, but at the same time never suspected... Wow. I loved it. When he said her name - well, that was like magic or something. Spectacular.

I also loved this part -

Stop blubbering, you utter moron, and let me get a word in. What I did last night was a huge mistake, but I know that the House of Slytherin will follow me whether I care for the girl or not. Who are you, to question my authority? Dont kid yourself, Malfoy.You will follow me to the gates of Hell if I ask it of you and you will do it without question. Is that not true?

That was incredible, and so fully in the character of Tom Marvolo Riddle that I was blown away. Amazing job with the utter scintillation of that dialog...

The whole piece literally glows. Jo would be proud, I think.

Don't make us wait too long for the next chapter! You might kill some of us.

~Juliet

Author's Response: Wow what a wonderful review! Thanks so much for all of your support; you have no idea how much it helps me. :) Ah yes, Tommie does have a soft side, doesn\'t he? I love that Tom Riddle kid... he\'s an amazing creature, no? Ah the little passage you quoted above-- though less than syntactically aesthetic (now that I look at it), I really tried hard to convey a little bit of \'Lord Voldemort\' in Tom\'s character there... glad that you think I pulled it off. :D Ah, I\'m kind of glad Jo doesn\'t know this story exists... I cringe to think of her reaction to a Voldemort/Hermione story... :P Thanks again!

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 12/17/06 Title: Chapter 18: Black Rose

Wow.


*breaths* That was utterly amazing. You kept me guessing until the last minute... I loved it.
Wish I could say more, but I seem to have become speechless with amazement.
Wow.

~Juli

 

Dementor's Kiss by Mex
Rated: [Reviews - 47]

Summary: A poem about how you feel after a dementor kisses you.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 38 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
07/09/05 Updated: 07/09/05


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: Dementor's Kiss

Ooh... This is wonderful. I love it - The swallowing part goes so well... Beautiful. Bravissima!

~Juli

 

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Rated: [Reviews - ]

Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/18/06 Title: None

Ah! Interrupted... xD Very entertaining story you've got going here. Good work!

~Juliet

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/18/06 Title: None

Ooh... Getting scandalous, now, aren't they? Can't wait to read on!

~Juli

 

One Will Live, One Will Die by muddy
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 37]

Summary: A poem about Harry and Tom

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 53 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
08/03/05 Updated: 08/03/05


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: 1

Very good - I liked the subtle hinting about the future. Very strong.

 

The Veil by acire
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 61]

Summary: A short poem about the Veil.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 32 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/31/05 Updated: 08/31/05


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Veil

Ooh... I like the sailing part a lot, made me thing of a ship's sail, and with a veil... Well, in short, this is amazingly beautiful. Wonderful poem!

~Juli

 
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