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The Life of a Clock by KitKat517
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: Molly Weasley is the owner of a very interesting clock. You know which one I’m talking about; it keeps track of all of the Weasleys every day. That clock probably knows a whole lot about the Weasley family. What is a day in the life of this clock like? How much does it know about the goings on in the Weasley household? You’ll have to read to find out.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 265 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/19/06 Updated: 09/21/06


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/13/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Life of a Clock

Lovely. Simply... Perfect.

The rhyme scheme was all over the place, but for one, I think that added to the clockiness and beauty of the poem itself. You fit every family member perfectly... I'm a bit confused as to Ron's part at the moment, but I'm sure I'm just being my usual blonde (brunette, actally) self... Beautiful, indeed. Bravissima!

~Juli

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I spent the weekend fixing stuff that (still) hasn\'t been fixed and/or cleaned up from hurricanes Rita and Katrina. This was a nice review to come home to. What you said about Ron worried me at first because I thought I had forgotten him. Before I submitted it for the mod\'s approval, I kept worrying I had forgotten someone. I went over it again and again before I thought \'hey, why don\'t I make a list?’ I didn\'t have any good reason not to make a list and plenty of perfectly good reasons for making the list (including how much I like to make lists), so I made a list. Anywho, the point is, I lost the list so I quickly clicked the little link and reread the poem. Now, I must go for I have a creative writing project to start and finish by tommorow. *shakes head at self and berates self for procrastinating*. Thanks for taking the time to look at the rhyme scheme and to review.

 

Behind those Emerald Eyes by makinmagic323
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 2008]

Summary: Ten years have elapsed since Dumbledore's death and McGonagall has Hogwarts back on its feet again. Hermione and Malfoy both teach at the school. But when a new teacher is hired to teach Defense Against the Dark Arts, everyone seems to feel that they've met him before. A story of mystery, passion, friendship, and jealousy… not to mention that Harry Potter has been missing for ten years and Voldemort is dead. (All violence is mild).

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There have been errors when this story gets submitted for validation, so the mods have to do it manually. Therefore it does not show when it has been validated -- but it has!!

Thank you to all my reviewers!!!

Disclaimer: I own my imagination, JK Rowling owns Harry Potter.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 40191 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Published:
09/20/06 Updated: 01/16/09


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 03/26/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Black Cat

Ooh... I liked this chapter.

So sorry about not leaving a review last chapter... I just, well, didn't like it that much, and couldn't think of anything nice to say.

This one, however, is excellent.

I loved Draco writing notes to her... And the dialog was so - oh, I don't know, real? Which you don't see too much of now. :)

I LOVE the last line.

Good work!

~Juli

Author's Response: I always feel the last line of anything should be the best part -- leaves you with a good feeling. (I HATE bad endings, haha). And don\'t even worry about the not-leaving-a-review thing, I do it all the time myself =) The third chapter is also one of my favorite - I liked writing the cat bit. Thanks for letting me know your thoughts!

 

Summary: Past Featured StoryWhat does Lord Voldemort do in his spare time? Well, that's an excellent question. Who would have known that the Dark Lord has a blog? (He also has a loyal following of readers, most of whom are Death Eaters and who post their comments.) Voldemort dispenses advice on everything from murder methods to germ protection to Power Rangers to shoes, and gives an account of the life of an evil overlord. But is he posting too much personal information online? And will Harry read it and find out more about the Dark Lord than Voldemort ever intended? Read and see.


WARNING: Extremely OOC behaviour from almost all.


RUNNER-UP in the 2007 Quicksilver Quills Awards for Best Humour fic! Also nominated like 21 times, because apparently my readers are as insane as I am!



Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 12002 Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/23/06 Updated: 12/04/06


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 11/05/06 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: R.A.B. and Romance

You bet I'm SO going to make a Cruci-Os box on Photoshop! I'll let you know when it's done. xD

~Juliet

Author's Response: You rock!

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 11/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Don't Try This At Home

Oh!

Cruci-Os... *gasps for breath* Oh, my goodness... Ah. I love the Bellatrix thing - I'm currently writing a fic with a Bella / Voldemort ship, actually - "Defining Black". But anyhow.

This is one of the better humor fics I've seen, and certainly one of the most original. Lovely - I love the comments section, and the Cruci-Os, and the "MrsVoldemort", and all the run-ons, and the Cruci-Os, and... Well, did I mention I adored the Cruci-Os?

Great start - can't wait to read the next chapter!

Fondest laughter, your friend,
Juliet

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I like the Cruci-o business, too. I was worried the story would be rejected for the run-ons, but apparently not. Hmmm.

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 11/04/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: A Selected List of Imbeciles

"Suggested that we change our name to Death Nibblers so as not to imply gluttony..." Ah! Stop! It hurts! "Watermelon in a shopping cart..." Eeeee! *falls onto floor and continues giggle fest*

"daddylusciouslocks" I sooooo agree! He was delicious in the 2nd movie. Not to mention in the books. So sleek, so cold, so... Ahh.

Bellatrix needs to become less ditsy on the computer. *frowns, then breaks down laughing again at the reminder of Cruci-Os* Never ever ever gonna forget that one.

Yet another lovely day on the blog - must check out the next!

Again, with fondest giggles and much thanks

~Juliet


Author's Response: Ahaha, thank you! I hope you didn\'t break anything. Yes, Lucius is so pretty. I must admit I have a soft spot for him.

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 11/04/06 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: R.A.B. and Romance

"1. Rashid Antoine “Stubby” Boardman: I beat him in “Battle of the Bands” in seventh year with my band, Tom and The Riddles. He’s been jealous of me ever since." Ah! *collapses on the floor laughing again* You're going to kill me, and you don't even know me. *frowns, and can't*

Minerva... Now, that's a new one. Awesomely original. Can't stop laughing!

Fondest chortles (no snorting, mind you), while eating Cruci-Os,

Juliet

Author's Response: Frowns and can\'t... ahahaa. I\'m glad you thought my story was funny! (And if anyone can make a \'Cruci-O\'s box on Photoshop, the Dark Lord will reward them beyond belief!)

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 11/04/06 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Fan Mail

Ooh... I love the reader's comments and question thing you have going here. Very awesome. The blog was good, too - I love the musical thing, and this, well, this was great:

"If I have to hear him perform one more rendition of the less family-appropriate songs by the Black Eyed Peas, I swear I am going to start having seizures." Ahh... The mental images are great, aren't they?

So. Other than the fact that I'm completely obsess with a Lucious Malfoy character - LuciousLocks forever! *heart*

Let's see... I'd like to hear what Lucious would say to that. xD I'd like to hear what Moldy Soy-Shorts himself would have to say about that. Soymilk Cappucinos, indeed. What a waste.

~Juliet


Author's Response: Thank so, so much! Moldy Soy-Shorts... that\'s really funny! I love reading all of your reviews-- they really make my day.

 

Behind Blind Eyes by alisonlynn
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 11]

Summary: He wasn't blind. He could see. He just chose not to. Harry Potter had seen to many horrible things in his life. He had seen them so no one else had to. He had felt them so they didn't. He had lived through them so everyone else wouldn't. But now they were over. And he never wanted to see anything ever again.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 877 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/23/06 Updated: 09/28/06


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: Behind Blind Eyes

I love it! Absolutely adore it. Harry... Yes, it is a Harry thing to do. Very emotional, very descriptive, and oh, so powerful! The ending was awesome - ray of light in the darkness. I love this one! You MUST keep writing.

~Juli

Author's Response: YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that is SO nice!!!! i\'m so glad you liked it!!!!!! if you want to read the sequel, this site keeps rejecting it, but its on harrypotterfanfiction.com. Thanks for reviewing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Just Another Broken Promise by ladylollypop
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: Ginny writes a poem about the love lost and the broken promises left after harry's death.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 169 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/27/06 Updated: 09/29/06


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/13/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, Ginny...

Brava - you fit her character perfectly. I see so many that make her out to be so... Thick, and fluffy. If that makes any sense. But this is WONDERFUL.


This part was my favorite :

What happened to my fairytale, the happily ever after?
I prayed for you to come back home.
Oh father, I have lost all faith,
My prince shall not return.
I’ll just stay here with the memories,
I’m just another broken promise.



Bravissima!


~Juli

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/13/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, Ginny...

Brava - you fit her character perfectly. I see so many that make her out to be so... Thick, and fluffy. If that makes any sense. But this is WONDERFUL.


This part was my favorite :

What happened to my fairytale, the happily ever after?
I prayed for you to come back home.
Oh father, I have lost all faith,
My prince shall not return.
I’ll just stay here with the memories,
I’m just another broken promise.



Bravissima!


~Juli

Author's Response: hey sorry its taken me soooooo long to reply, my internet has been down. thanks for the review and im glad you liked my poem, personally i didnt think it was very good, it was just something to do during my time off school. thanks again it means alot to me! ~Chloe

 

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Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/08/06 Title: None

Ooh, wow, nice attraction into the story. Really pulls the reader in - I'm dying to see more! Absolutely loved it.


Good luck continuing - I'll be following!


~Juliet

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/08/06 Title: None

Ooh, wow, nice attraction into the story. Really pulls the reader in - I'm dying to see more! Absolutely loved it.


Good luck continuing - I'll be following!


~Juliet

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you\'re enjoying it so much.

 

Obliviate by Emerald_Eyes
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: When he died I couldn’t accept it, it was like everything I knew was wrong, and all my nightmares came true, because of something which seemed unreal, to me anyhow. I couldn’t go on living like I was waking up to nothing. I had to do something to change it, and I did.

Excerpt:

He’d died and left me alone and it was his entire fault. He should have fought harder and if he really did love me he would have lived. He wouldn’t have died like that, he was stronger. He was a legend everyone in the whole world knew about and a stupid avalanche had killed him. It was wrong. It was unreal – it hadn’t happened.

He couldn’t be dead. Just couldn’t.


Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 7655 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/30/06 Updated: 10/07/06


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: Obliviate

Oh!


*sniff* That's a tissue story right there... Goodness. I loved how it started out without a clue as to who the female in question was. For a moment there, when they said "Mrs. Potter", I thought they were talking about Lily.
I simply adored the ending... Very shocking, but very true. Her emotions were so real, it was breathtaking. Wow. Everything was so... Ginny. And finally, we got a new take on her name - Virginia, instead of Ginerva.


A wonderful start - I look forward to seeing more from you!


~Juliet - 10/7/06


Author's Response: lol i wanted to hide her identity for a qhile tokeep you guessing XD lol and it did hopefully and aww fanx u made my day with the wonderful review XD -x-roxie-x-

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: Obliviate

Oh!


*sniff* That's a tissue story right there... Goodness. I loved how it started out without a clue as to who the female in question was. For a moment there, when they said "Mrs. Potter", I thought they were talking about Lily.
I simply adored the ending... Very shocking, but very true. Her emotions were so real, it was breathtaking. Wow. Everything was so... Ginny. And finally, we got a new take on her name - Virginia, instead of Ginerva.


A wonderful start - I look forward to seeing more from you!


~Juliet - 10/7/06


Author's Response: i love double posts lol XD

 

Full Moon by NickiGrint
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: Just a little poem I thought up about Lupin and Tonks. My first Fan Fiction ever! Please Read and Review!

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 102 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/01/06 Updated: 10/04/06


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: Full Moon

That was lovely! Excellent show of Remus' feelings. Brava!


~Juli

Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you!! I\'m glad you liked it!!

 

Out of the Blue by lady magician
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 31]

Summary: Ginny Weasley is tough girl. But she, like everyone else in the world, experiences sorrows that come with being human...She finds her escape in the magical world of poetry...And she makes sure that nobody knows how she feels inside...Post-HBP Ginny's feelings after the break-up...

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 480 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/02/06 Updated: 10/05/06


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: Ginny's Story

Oh! That was so... Ginny. I loved it! The rhyme scheme was simple, but utterly beautiful. I love the part about Destiny.

Bravissima!

~Juli


Author's Response: Thank you so much for ur review! I\'m delighted that u think my work is grand! i\'m always working to please u people!...I\'m also happy that u think i got ginny right on que, because we all know it isnt like Ginny to express herself in such a way. :-)....thank u for the compliments!...i love the destinay part too...that stanza was what practically set my story off.... Currently im making the earliest drafts of one from harry\'s PoV...this includes me stealing my little brother\'s notebooks, and using old school notebooks *grins*...when i DO get sum real work done, it\'ll be up...this isn\'t the last you\'ll see from me! Thanks again, EtherealElation, and i promise to read any works u might have up/ will write! your\'s Sincerely, and until next time, Lady Magician

 

Summary: Lily: Smart, sharp, and would never even dream of getting in trouble. Head Girl.
James: Clever, crafty, and Hogwarts' main source of mischief. Head Boy.
Lily hates James, James knows not what to think of Lily, but when they must work together to ultimately protect the lives of their friends, who knows what can happen?

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 17186 Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Published:
10/02/06 Updated: 05/01/07


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: Cockroaches

Ooh... Nice.


One question, though... Why was Snape calling Potter slime? Isn't it usually the other way around? And he calling her mudblood when he isn't even Pure... He sounds a bit like Draco, if you ask me. Without the Mud-Pure stuff. 'Cause Draco was pure. Anyhow... That was really good... Really sets the stage for the story! Looking forward to continuing.

~Juli

Author's Response: I should have done more research, shouldn\'t I? But If you look, he did call Lily a Mudblood in the memory that Harry saw. Thanks!

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 2: Frustration & Friends

Urg... Perplexing. But cool. I would develop May's character a bit more... You were probably planning to, but just a tip. We know Lily and the others, but because May is new, we need some insight. Maybe give some personal history on her in future chapters... Great Chapter 2 - Hurry up on 3! And 4 and 5 and...


Yeah.


~Juli

Author's Response: Thanks for the tip! My friends said the same thing...I\'m writing the third chapter, and i\'ll include her there. Thanks, as always.

 

Not Known by atkarid
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: Sirius and Number Twelve Grimmauld Place have much in common. It's known.


But they also have some parts that are just not known.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 161 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/03/06 Updated: 10/05/06


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: Not Known

Wow... Great poem, lovely, even... Very good. I like the short quips - short, but strong. Brava!


~Juli

Author's Response: Thanks! I like shortness too...

 

Founder's Treasures by Alluria
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: A poem about the artifacts left behind by the four Hogwarts Founders.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 226 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/03/06 Updated: 10/05/06


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: Founder's Treasures

Marvelous... Good mystery with the whatever the item was, the others never knew. Great job!


~Juli

 
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