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Real name: Juliet
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The name's Juliet.
Yes, Juliet as in Romeo and Juliet.
No relation.

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Silenced Whispers by LostMaeblleshire
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: Little is known of the ghosts which reside here within the walls of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. For some, their pasts have been entirely erased from memory, and all that remains is but a shadow of their former selves. We mortal beings know nothing of death, for it hides its secrets, only unearthing them as we pass beyond after our final moments, yet then, there are still some who fear what lies ahead once we are gone.

A book of death-day one-shots, put together in this manner because of the prologue. (Otherwise, it might be separate one-shots in a series.) This could be horror or angst, but I thought, as it isn't intentionally morbid, that historical would do best.

Categories: Historical Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Violence

Word count: 14944 Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/31/06 Updated: 02/03/07


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/13/06 Title: Chapter 2: The Bloody Baron

Ooh...

Marvelous. Simply... brilliant. It suits the Baron perfectly! This was wonderful. A good take on the first of many ghosts at Hogwarts. Can't wait to read on!


~Juliet

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/13/06 Title: Chapter 3: The Grey Lady

Egh... *shudder* Bubbling fingers... *second shudder*

That was another spectacular tale. You described the Muggle feelings towards suspicious activity several hundred years ago with skill. Do you study much History, I wonder? I do have one question, though - one more question, that is, as it would seem I've already asked one of you. Why did they become Ghosts at Hogwarts, instead of around their homes? Seems like they should have died at Hogwarts, like Moaning Myrtle. But, then again... I'll go read the OotP again, the part about ghosts.

Bravissima!

~Juliet

 

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Rated: [Reviews - ]

Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/16/06 Title: None

Oh... Well, I don't quite picture Lily like that, but Alice was good, as was Mrs. Longbottom elder... Very good - I liked the reference to Lily and James as the "golden couple". And I had something else to say, but I forgot it. So I guess I'll post it in the next review. If I remember. Brava!

~Juliet

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/16/06 Title: None

Oh! That's what I was going to say. I keep picturing the apartment that the Ricardos stay in in "I Love Lucy" as to where Frank and Alice live... Pregnant women and whatnot, I guess.
This is awesome! If there's one thing I had to pick out that I loved, it was your wonderful characterization of the Marauders, and your absolutely lovely description of Frank. I've never imagined him as good-looking before - maybe because of Neville - but that was wonderful. Love this story!

~Juli

Author's Response: Yeah I\'m just trying to make my story different but still canon. So far its working.. I think. haha thanks for your reviews!

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/16/06 Title: None

Oh... This is great. Awesome characterization now - Lily, Alice, Marauders, and all. Can't wait for the next chapter! If it doesn't come soon.... I'll... Not be pleased. xD Nice research, and, erm... Write more soon, or else.

~Juli

 

Summary: The Harry Potter Literary Storm has caused quite the sensation around the world, JK Rowlings magnificent series of books touching the hearts of people of all ages. But what if Harry Potter was never written by JK Rowling in the first place? What if another genius was behind it?

Many thanks to the fantastic people who nominated this story for the Quicksilver Quills: Best Humour Fiction award. I'm truly flattered.

Chapter Seven, Part Five is now up - yes, that is the final chapter!

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 37366 Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/10/06 Updated: 01/05/07


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/15/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two: A Hoggy, Wartsy Happening

Ooooh... Even better.
I love the "bird, plane, superman!" thing you have going on. Reminds me of one of my friends - I tell you, she's completely obsessed with that little curl he has...
Anyhow - wonderfully funny, yet again.

~Juliet

Author's Response: Well, I like to think they might get better as they go on - more rumours to use and more complicated plots to... uh, destroy O_O. Again, thanks. I got all of these at once, and am dancing. *Dances*

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/15/06 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three: The Furry Teacher

Hah! Another great one... You should have done the Red Riding Hood thing with Lupin... "Oh, what big teeth you have!" and such. But then again, "the better to eat you with" wouldn't have quite worked out. Maybe at the end. Anyhow, loved it, yet again.

~Juliet

Author's Response: Yeah, I could have but... well, he\'s acting more like a lovable mutt. Also, the idea of Lupin impersonating a grandmother is slightly disturbing in itself...

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/15/06 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four, Part One: The Next Book About the Guy With the Thing

Yes indeed, you'd better not eat me! *runs and hides* I do agree, though - reviewers are like that best kind of chocolate you've been craving for days and finally just got from your boyfriend. Awesome.

Anyhow. This was great - I love the constant reference back to previously mentioned things, and the subtle insertions of "squashed rubbish" rumors.

I missed Superman this time, though.

~Juli

Author's Response:

Yeah, a bit like that. Every time I get a review, my super!dark Gauntlet story-writing is completely killed, because I suddenly get a rush of \'omghappy!!!111\'.

No pun intended. Really, I swear.

Ooh - I keep thinking, \'now this persons\'s really going to love [insert chapter number here]. So hopefully you\'ll stick around - Superman will certainly get his day...

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/15/06 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four, Part Two: The Next Chapter About the Next Book About the Guy With the Thing

Ah, lovely Professor Squirrel... "Hair from the enemy, taken without much effort..." Ah, you'll have me laughing for days, you will! SO cruel.

~Juli

Author's Response:

Yup. I\'m evil.
And dude, you\'re on a roll! I\'ll be smiling for... for... I don\'t know. But my poor dark story... *pats*

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/15/06 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five, Part One: A Troublesome Flashback

xD That's awesome. Completely brilliant.

Lucius Malfoy = Superman :: I agree. :)

~Juli

Author's Response:

You\'re awesome too. Also brilliant. And possibly Superman - I\'ll have to check up on that.
Thank you so much for all of these comments. I suddenly have this massive smile on my face... ;)

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: Little Baby Potter and the Hut Out at Sea

Oh! Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh....
This was marvelous. Spectacular. Absolutely genious, and so...
Funny.
Loved it! I simply must read more. Great use of Pyrite, by the way.


~Juli

Author's Response:

Yeah. PYRITES FOR PRESIDENT!

...

You know, or maybe not? But thank you for reviewing!

 

After The Summer Ended by sand_dollar
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 385]

Summary: Harry swore to go after Voldemort by himself. Ron and Hermione have promised to help him, even if it means not going back to Hogwarts. But can three underqualified wizards stop the Dark Lord alone? My version of Book 7...

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 246774 Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/11/06 Updated: 02/03/07


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: Going Home

Ooh.... This was spectacular. Simply fabulous. A long chapter - very long - but lots of progress made, and an excellent, excellent take on Book 7. I love the twists - I can't begin to name them all, bu eems as though I'm almost reading Book 7, except for the first person. But that only adds to the experience. Amazing! Bravissima!

~Juliet

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/19/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Wedding

Ooh... A beautiful chapter. Another, that is. I loved the bit on love potions... Wonderful addition, sparking mystery - Superb.

~Juliet

 

I Do by theghost
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 10]

Summary: Harry hands Ginny a piece of parchment. She unfolds it slowly and starts to read...

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 185 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/13/06 Updated: 09/13/06


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: I Do

Hah! That was sweet. Fluffy, as you said, but sweet. I liked it. Funny how the best things come from boredom, eh?


~Juli

Author's Response: thanks! :) i totally agree!!!

 

Someone Help Me by BeautyInTheBreakdown
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: Thsi is a poem to go along with my story, Alone. It is written through the eyes of someone watching Nell, a bystander.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 105 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/13/06 Updated: 09/13/06


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/13/06 Title: Chapter 1: Mirrored Pain

You are cruel... You know that, right? I think that we, at least, as faithful readers (whatever) should have the right to know who's point of view this is from. Now I have to guess. (but you hate guessing games!)


Ginny? (no, you dolt - maybe you should try reading the story first?)


Oh - right.

The concience won.


~Juli

Author's Response: Well, if you knew whose point of view this was from, it would ruin Alone! Is this review good or bad? Either way... thanks for the review!

 

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Rated: [Reviews - ]

Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/16/06 Title: None

Hmmm... Sounds very, very interesting! Brava on getting a good story started!

~Juli

Author's Response: Thanks!

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/16/06 Title: None

Hmmm... That's interesting! I wonder what effect leaving out a personality will do. Though I doubt that Hermione would quite help them with this... Seems like she would disapprove. xD

~Juli

Author's Response: Oh you\'ll find out what happens...mwahaha! Thanks!

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/16/06 Title: None

Hmmm... Sounds very, very interesting! Brava on getting a good story started!

~Juli

Author's Response: Thanks!

 

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Rated: [Reviews - ]

Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/13/06 Title: None

Oooh... Very, very nice. I love this one - you kept Tom in such nice character from where Jo left off with him - I must give you a hearty congratulations. Great story here. I look forward to seeing more!

~Juli

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/13/06 Title: None

Ooh... Riddle the kid. He's murderous, you know, although I can see this budding respect. Excellent job! Keep me updated soon!

~Juli

Author's Response: Haha when I find the time to finish off the next chapter, I\'ll be sure to post it as soon as possible!

 
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