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The name's Juliet.
Yes, Juliet as in Romeo and Juliet.
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A Fair to Remember by Therinian
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 44]

Summary:
Before going to a Muggle fair, Mr. Weasley tells his family, Harry, and Hermione: “Don’t attract attention to yourselves, do not use your wand for any reason, and lastly, don’t let anyone know you’re not a Muggle!”

The group tries to abide by these simple rules, but things don’t always go according to plan...



NOTE: This story takes place during the summer after the Trio's 6th Year and consists of 12 chapters.

***THANK YOU FOR YOUR REVIEWS.*** :)


Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 19709 Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/22/06 Updated: 11/19/06


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 11/05/06 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Awww, how sweet... That was a really cute chapter for couples all around. Again I applaud you on your characterization... Excellent tale.

~Juliet

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 11/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Och... -winces- I'm catching sight of the 15-year old Harry again, the angry, bitter one who was always shouting at everybody... Though you do make me wonder if he will return in book 7. Hmm. Something to be mulled over a hot cup of cider, for certain. Nice star - ' an interesting idea, for sure. Although either you or I seem to have misconstrued the Bat-Bogey hex. I was under the impression that they were, er... Flying bogeys? Nasty, to be sure. But still. Anyhow - I'm ranting. Good start here!

~Juliet

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 11/04/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hmm... That last part seems a bit unlike Hermione, but I do like that touch of inspiration there : "waiting for something to strike her down" was very brilliant. Another great chapter, and a wonderful way to have the story progress, although it seems Ron is not finding it in his schedule to be nice today, is he? ^^

~Juliet

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 11/05/06 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Can any of us understand boys? xD Great chapter here - I like Ron's "what muggles find scary" quip. And you've really added some intrigue as to what Fred and George are up to! Can't wait to find out.

~Juli

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 11/04/06 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ooh... Great characterization here, and, well, it really is a wonderful chapter again. I had forgotten that Ginny can't use magic yet.

I liked this part a lot:
When she grumbled about the meal, Ginny told Fleur--in a falsely sweet tone--that she could go a few miles up the lane to the Muggle village and use her Veela charms to get dinner. Amusing.

~Juliet

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 11/05/06 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ooh... The morse code thing is clever. Much intrigue here - Daisy. I like it. Nice and simple.

Good job!

~Juli

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 11/05/06 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ooh... Intrigue to the utmost. I really like this story - you always have so much mystery, such an exciting tale, and it's different every chapter because you split the charcters up.

One note, though - I don't think you meant for all of the bottom half of the story to be italicised?

~Juli

Author's Response: I fixed it! Thank you for letting me know--AND for the lovely comments! :)

 

Black Raindrops by Periwinkle
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 16]

Summary: She can stare, talk, and think but she cannot feel. She can hear, taste, and smell but she cannot feel. She wants to feel. She wants to feel pain or sadness or hurt, something other than her one emotion. She can only hate.


Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1006 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/26/06 Updated: 08/03/06


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 11/02/06 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Oh... Poor, poor Ginny.

This one is great (what a surprise! ^^ ). The emotion you put behind the story is so strong, so passionate, that - well, if I was a tissue reader, I'd have flooded the house. It's really an emotional artwork, but it flows so smoothly, so naturally - wonderful. Loved it! Magnifica!

~Juli

Author's Response: *grins again* I\'m becoming rather fond of your reviews. =D

 

Nifflers, Otters and Shrew by tickled_pink
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 211]

Summary: What happens when the man Hermione feels far too embarrassed to ever see again (due to events entirely out of her control ... well, almost ... ) turns up as the new Defence Against the Dark Arts teacher? The War is raging, the N.E.W.T.s are approaching, and the only question circling through Hermione's head (much to her annoyance) is whether or not five years older is too old.

It seems to be out of her control once again; avoiding Oliver Heaney for her entire seventh year seems not only difficult, but well near impossible ...


Excerpt from Chapter Eight


Oliver was a nervous wreck all through his seventh year class.

It took all of his will-power not to glance Hermione’s way every three seconds. He risked it only a handful of times, making sure never to do so when her face was looking in even remotely his direction.

As is usual with one who is out of control of a course of events one began, Oliver began to panic. Second-guessing himself was not something Oliver was prone to, and yet here he was, asking himself those terrifying questions. Did she get the note? Has she read it yet? What if it was all a bad idea? What if it all went horribly wrong?

What if she took the note straight to Minerva and told her everything?


Don't worry, this story hasn't been abandoned, just moving in a different direction than I originally planned!


Categories: Hermione/Other Character Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Student/Teacher Romance

Word count: 33071 Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Published:
08/14/06 Updated: 09/16/07


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/13/06 Title: Chapter 1: In Which Hermione Runs Into A Person At Hogwarts Whom She Did Not Expect To Meet

Oh, wow.


There were so many great things in that chapter I can't even begin to list them all.


Hermione's in for a rough year, I take it.


I especially liked these parts:


Oh holy Merlin. This was going to be awkward.
(Don't know why people always use Merlin, but there, it definently fits)


‘No, I find that if I curl my hair that leaves no time for me to paint my nails,’ Oliver said with a straight face.
Sylvester gave a short, bark of a laugh. ‘I like you . . . too bad you're stuffed.’
‘Sorry?’
‘Listen, I’ve been in this office for the past 400 years, and in the past, what, nearly fifty years? There hasn’t been a single Defence Against the Dark Arts teacher that’s lasted more than a year. We haven’t had a death in a fair few years though, not since — ’
‘Quirrel, I know,’ Oliver said, not really disturbed by this. ‘I was here when that happened.’
‘Hold up, I nearly forgot, Barty Crouch junior as good as died, didn’t he? Dementor’s kiss and everything. THAT was an interesting year — I witness a lot, hanging in here.’

‘Well, I’m not planning on dying, so I’ll just have to take my chances, won’t I? So anyway, how do I choose my password?’

‘You pick whatever you like, and then anytime you want to change it, you have to tell me your original password, so I know you’re not an imposter or anything.’

Oliver had never had to pick a password before. He searched around for inspiration, and his glance fell on Hagrid’s cabin towards the other side of the grounds through the window. ‘Umm…..ok, what about “Niffler”?’

Sylvester raised his eyebrows, but swung open. ‘You, know,’ he said, his voice slightly muffled, ‘the password someone picks reveals a lot about their character.’
‘So I’m cute and cuddly?’ said Oliver, laughing, stepping into his apartment....
...‘You go crazy in order to get the treasure,’ came Sylvester’s voice as the portrait shut over the doorway with a click .


He was back in the game.

Just a few of the many awesome components in this masterpiece of a chapter.

And wait! There's more! Must go read the "next".


~Juli

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/13/06 Title: Chapter 2: In Which Hermione Is Late And Argues In A Way She Normally Reserves For Ron Weasley

Ooooh, scandalacious.

Lovely story, lady. Lovely story. *nods* I simply adore how you have the portraits talking to each other... They sound so elderly, yet so loveable. And the confrontation was marvelous. Must keep reading. And you keep writing.

~Juli

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/13/06 Title: Chapter 3: In Which Oliver Burns His Finger And Ron Breaks A Beaker

Another intriguing chapter. I do believe this is a very good fic. I love the use of Dobby - and the oil in the paintings melting is pure genius. I love the portrait-people conversations. Brilliant.

~Juli

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/13/06 Title: Chapter 4: In Which The Gossiping Duo, Er, Gossip, And A Certain Two Share Stolen Glances

Ooooh... I loved that "so you are checking me out" part. Wonderfully written, again... And Tonks's part was marvelous. The ring was perfecto.

Bravissima, yet again.

~Juli

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/13/06 Title: Chapter 5: In Which Hermione Does Her Level Best Not To Blush And Fails Admirably

The horcrux was beautifully described... I would have never thought of that, but I love it! This chapter, in fact, this story, was and is amazing. Love it. And the comments on Hermione's knitting... An animal or a sock... Hillarious! You must keep writing.

As to length and updateness of chapters - I like them long, but quick. :) I exist to make life difficult.

And reads to reviews... I would love to know that! They should so post that information somewhere. Maybe it is posted. I'll have to look.

Anyhow... Terrific job!

~Juli

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/13/06 Title: Chapter 5: In Which Hermione Does Her Level Best Not To Blush And Fails Admirably

The horcrux was beautifully described... I would have never thought of that, but I love it! This chapter, in fact, this story, was and is amazing. Love it. And the comments on Hermione's knitting... An animal or a sock... Hillarious! You must keep writing.

As to length and updateness of chapters - I like them long, but quick. :) I exist to make life difficult.

And reads to reviews... I would love to know that! They should so post that information somewhere. Maybe it is posted. I'll have to look.

Anyhow... Terrific job!

~Juli

Author's Response: wow, juli, i just read all of your reviews at once, and i have to say thank you so so so much for your kind words - it\'s reviews like those that are really uplifting! yeah, i love having the portraits as little side characters, it\'s an interesting change from just people, don\'t you think? anyway, i did have the sixth chapter in queue, but it was rejected, so i\'ll have to work a little bit more on that, but i should have it up here soon! thanks again!!!

 

I AM a Killer by Cruciatus Love
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 10]

Summary: Draco Malfoy has had enough of everyone telling him who he is. He's had enough of other people wanting him to be who they want him to be. He wants to show the world that he's his own person, and that if he sets his mind on something he will do it. He will show the world that he truely is the dark character he says he is.

Written for the Extra Credit Challenge by Cruciatus Love of Slytherin.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death

Word count: 975 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/22/06 Updated: 08/25/06


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 11/02/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Killing

Oooh... Love it. Like it, love it, want it... Lovely. If there is one thing I must compliment you on, it is your characterization of Draco... It was perfect. Bravissima!

~Juliet

Author's Response: Thanks. I\'m so glad you enjoyed it!

 

Alone by BeautyInTheBreakdown
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 184]

Summary: How could one night change a life so drastically? Something as simple as choosing to take a walk could ruin a life forever.

Nell is a fifth year at Hogwarts, but she's not like the rest. She's been through more than most could even dream up.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Non-Consensual Sex, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 29878 Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/27/06 Updated: 11/10/08


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/13/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Wind's Whisper

Urg! Snape! *shudder* Watch - mind you, I'm probably wrong. (as usual) I suppose I'll have to read on and find out. (you already know you're wrong, what's the point of reading onwards?)


A strange thing called curiosity.

~Juli

Author's Response: *smirk* You\'ll find out who it is eventually. I\'m glad I\'m making you want to read on. That\'s a compliment... I think? Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/13/06 Title: Chapter 2: Alone in a Crowd

And watch, it was Sirius.

~Juli

Author's Response: ...maybe.....*smirk*

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/13/06 Title: Chapter 3: Déja-vu

Woah woah woah.

Not fair... No time to review, hello, goodbye, I'm late for the next chapter!

~Juli

Author's Response: lol! That\'s a creative review! Thanks!

 
Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/13/06 Title: Chapter 4: Hidden Scars

You.

Are.

So.

Mean!

Leaving me here like this, on a cliff, waiting to see - HOW COULD YOU - wanting to read, there's no next button - ARGH!!!

You really must write the next chapter very soon.


~Juli

Author's Response: I\'m sorry for being so utterly cruel. I\'m working on chapter five right now. I\'m glad you like it.

 

Silenced Whispers by LostMaeblleshire
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: Little is known of the ghosts which reside here within the walls of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. For some, their pasts have been entirely erased from memory, and all that remains is but a shadow of their former selves. We mortal beings know nothing of death, for it hides its secrets, only unearthing them as we pass beyond after our final moments, yet then, there are still some who fear what lies ahead once we are gone.

A book of death-day one-shots, put together in this manner because of the prologue. (Otherwise, it might be separate one-shots in a series.) This could be horror or angst, but I thought, as it isn't intentionally morbid, that historical would do best.

Categories: Historical Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Violence

Word count: 14944 Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/31/06 Updated: 02/03/07


Reviewer: EtherealElation Signed
Date: 10/13/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Brava... You captured Albus Dumbledore's voice exactly. Characterization is perfecto! I can't wait to read on and see the stories... Great idea, by the way!

~Juliet

 
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