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The Hermione/Harry/Ron Relationship Explanation (in the context of my story)

In Behind those Emerald Eyes, I am trying to follow canon because duh, everybody loves it including me =) Because Hermione and Harry were best friends in the past (and went through MANY things that brought them closer to together as friends), I tried to show how much pain any person would go through at the loss of such a person in their life. Sorry if it seemed too romantic. I did try to show how Harry had feelings for Ginny (with leaving her a rose when he left), and how Hermione was interesting in exploring a relationship with Ron (its mentioned somewhere in the beginning of my story). With the scene of Hermione on the lake, I’d like to say that Harry was the last link to her memories of both Ron and Harry (as they were always a trio of friends), and so she was mourning the loss of her previous life. Because Harry did not return for Hermione (NOT because he loves her romantically, just because they are best friends and depend on each other in so many ways), Hermione feels that she knows he is dead, and so she gets rid of the last thing tying her to the painful truth and memories – the necklace. Anyway, there’s my lengthy and probably confusing explanation, but I hope you aren’t too critical =)

READ THIS!!!!!!!!: i forgot to mention it earlier, but i'm transferring schools in a week so i'm busy with all of that and much more. the update will be in a couple of months i think, but i can promise you a "juicy" chapter for sure. it will be pretty amazing, haha ;D thanks for understanding!

I love cheese. Well, I guess I could debate that with myself, seeing as I only like three kinds of cheese, and there are like a billion different cheeses in the world. Goat cheese is so totally gross though, and seeing as I come from Norway, where everybody loves the thin brown slices, I guess you could say I digress from the norm.

But enough about cheese. Let’s talk about my little “bio” here. I come from a land down under. Well, it’s no Australia, but it is beneath the North Pole. And quite cold, to be frank about it. Come to think of it, you can be frank about anything. I sit behind a Frank in math class.

But we are still straying from point. I love tangents. There are a huge part of my life. I feel that random conversation is the only way a person can ever truly get to know another person, be you talking about cheese or the pros and cons of carpet cleaner.

But yet again, I find myself not informing you, the curious reader thinking about what kind of crazy person would honestly write such a story, about who exactly that very person is. Or are you getting a pretty good picture? I love to confuse people, it’s one of those raw talents everybody is born with.

But my raw talent and strange joy in writing a Harry Potter fan fic is not mad, I can ensure you. Some people take up pottery, I took up a story. Hopefully one which all of you will enjoy.

So here’s to you, the fantabulous readers, and to me, the, I quote, “brilliant” author, so that we may join in joyous connection though writing.

Leave me reviews!! ; D

PS- If you are confused, feel free to email me. I love getting "fan mail" =)

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From My Perch by Waddiwasi chik

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Humans… Ya can’t live with ‘em, ya cant live without ‘em. Well, actually -- we could. We owls are perfectly capable of looking after ourselves. It’s the humans who need us. My name is Hedwig, or at least that’s what my so called ‘owner’, Harry Potter calls me. Everybody thinks he’s so special. I think it’s something to do with surviving death when he was a baby. I only hear snatches of conversation about it. He talks to me sometimes. Oh yes, he tells me just about everything. It can be dull, but over emotional and hormonally challenged youth often find comfort in confiding their every trouble and sorrow in their beloved pets. Poor Harry. He’s so miserable, it’s really quite pathetic, but I can’t help but love the guy. This is his story, from a different point of view. It's in! Please read and review chapter 11!
Reviewer: makinmagic323 Signed
Date: 12/31/06 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven: Loose Ends

I love how it's from Hedwig's point of view, and your last chapter was my favorite. Very hilarious word usage =D

Rage Against the Dying of the Light by forsakenphoenix

Rated: Professors •
Summary: When Voldemort began his rise to power, and the Blacks clutched to his beliefs as though they were a promise made of silver, Sirius seemed to be the only one who knew that silver could be tarnished.
Reviewer: makinmagic323 Signed
Date: 10/02/06 Title: Chapter 1: Rage Against the Dying of the Light

did you get your title from a song by across between?

Author's Response: Uh...no. It\'s from a Dylan Thomas poem, Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night.

Clair De Lune by Astrid Skywalker

Rated: 6th-7th Years •

It was full moon when the Dark Lord sealed a part of his soul within a magical amulet, and then broke it in half. One half was left to the faithful werewolves to guard. The other half was tossed into the impenetrable depths of time where no one but him could get it. When the first half has been found, the Order of the Phoenix selects Hermione Granger to go back into the past to search for the missing piece. What is waiting for her is a brutal task that will test her beyond her limits, and an undying love that extends beyond the boundaries of time.


No werewolves were harmed in the making of this story.

Winner of 2007 Quicksilver Quills Awards - Best Non-Canon Romance

Update (9 May): Chapter 17, Burning, is up! Enjoy!

Reviewer: makinmagic323 Signed
Date: 10/13/06 Title: Chapter 13: Crossroads

Absolutely brilliant. I think this has got to be my favorite fanfic of all time =) It's just so great how Hermione has found love but can't "have" the love, as least she thinks she can't, because it's her teacher!! Haha I love it =)

Reviewer: makinmagic323 Signed
Date: 10/02/06 Title: Chapter 12: Unbreakable

you really nailed the complexity of rowling's characters. great job. no wonder you were featured =)
Keep it up!

Reviewer: makinmagic323 Signed
Date: 04/18/07 Title: Chapter 15: He's Harry's Dad

oooooooooh finally! and it was awesome =)

Author's Response: Thank you, dear. : )

Reviewer: makinmagic323 Signed
Date: 11/21/06 Title: Chapter 14: Written in the Stars

love the flirty banter!!! such a wonderfully written piece of fiction =) BRAVO!! can't wait until the next update =)

Turning Saints Into the Sea by miss patil

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: James Potter is running out of time to win the heart of Lily Evans. In a last attempt to make her his, he formulates a secret plan.

Will the whole thing blow up in his face? . . . Or will Lily have some secrets of her own?

Warnings: Excessive amounts of romance, jealousy, and PMS.

I'm a'comin with the newest chapter!!
Reviewer: makinmagic323 Signed
Date: 12/06/06 Title: Chapter 11: The Halloween Party


Of Mistletoe, Charging Fan Girls, and The Answer To It All by Waddiwasi chik

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: One-Shot fic What do you do when you’ve got a horde of girls (all claiming to have met you under the mistletoe) after you? Harry has no idea, but he finds a solution that might put a stop to the scheming damsels. This is my variation of the day of Slughorn’s Christmas party.
Reviewer: makinmagic323 Signed
Date: 12/31/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

very cute =) I love your writing!

The Violin Teacher by stardust

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Wherever his reputation preceded him, he was unwelcome. So he kept inside and played his violin. And the music carried through his open window, and, unseen, he serenaded the city... Remus Lupin, as a Muggle, tutors one Hermione Granger, a brilliant young violinist with a promising career. (AU, slightly allegorical.)
Reviewer: makinmagic323 Signed
Date: 12/09/06 Title: Chapter 2: Hermione

Once again, beautifully written. You should definately comsider writing as a career.

Author's Response: Thank you, and I\'ll probably scribble no matter what else I do! =)

Reviewer: makinmagic323 Signed
Date: 12/09/06 Title: Chapter 3: Conversation

So I understand that Lupin is supposed to me a "muggle" and so is Hermione, so when she speaks of his "condition" in life, is she simply talking about him being poor and such? It is still so wondefully written nd poetic though. I'm so jealous haha =)

Author's Response: I\'m hoping to clarify/elaborate that when I touch up this story; he\'s supposed to be \"tainted\" somehow, I just haven\'t figured out what the proper parallel is yet. (Tell me if you have any ideas! hehe.) =D

Reviewer: makinmagic323 Signed
Date: 12/09/06 Title: Chapter 5: Heartsong

You have the most wonderful vocabulary of any author I have ever read on here. This is by far the best written story I have ever read, and I hope to read more of your stories soon! Congratulations!

Author's Response: Thanks so much; I\'m really humbled. I had a lot of help on this one from my friend the dictionary; I didn\'t want to bungle!

Reviewer: makinmagic323 Signed
Date: 12/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: Remus

So I forgot to mention two things and I also just read through some of your other reviews haha =)

Your writing style almost reminds me of modern-day Shakespearean. I absolutely adore Shakespeare, so it's a huge compliment!

One of the other reviews I read talked about your use of narrative versus dialogue, and suggested you use less narrative and write more conversation. I disagree. I feel that narrative is definately your strong point and that if you change the dialogue more into a narrative of what the said (even though it is very much like this already) it would make your writing even stronger.

Oh -- and I play the flute for a well-known symphony, so anything relating to music is definately an eye-catcher for me =)

Author's Response: *bowled over* Shakespeare is the KING. =D Gosh, I\'d be happy with one millionth of his talent!! You know, that\'s a really great suggestion and I\'ve been thinking along those lines... I really want to elaborate some things in this story and I think that so as not to disrupt the flow of what I\'ve already written, it might be a good idea to just incorporate some narrative dialogue. Thanks for the feedback! That is so awesome! You know, I\'ve said this before, but I think the best thing about this story, for me, has been having reviews from musicians! You all are the best. =)

Reviewer: makinmagic323 Signed
Date: 12/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: Remus

OH! And i forgot something AGAIN! It's amazing how forgetful I can be when I love a piece of fiction =)

If it's not to bold, would you mind telling us all your real name, so that when you eventually do get something published, (and believe me, you WILL) we can go out and buy it? Don't worry, I'm not some crazy psycho stalker person haha.

Author's Response: I have to say a big Thank-you again for all of these lovely reviews; they\'ve been a lot of fun!! And that\'s one of the nicest, most encouraging responses anyone\'s ever left. I\'m Ana-Maria - I\'m a bit leery of putting my full name - not because of you, because the internet\'s so huge - but I\'ll tell you what? If I ever get published, I\'ll track down every person like you and thank you personally for helping me in part on my way there. =D

Reviewer: makinmagic323 Signed
Date: 12/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: Remus

Whe I read this I seriously got lost in it. This could definately be a published work because you write so fluently and artistically and know exactly how to express a moment. LOVE IT.

Author's Response: Well thank you! I don\'t quite know what else to say. =D I\'m just glad you think it has merit as a piece of fiction!

I'll Be There for You by HG4evur

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: It's after the final battle. Many have died. A Marriage Act has been placed upon the wizarding world. Harry's got his eye in on a certain red-head!
Reviewer: makinmagic323 Signed
Date: 10/08/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

so this is kind of unbelievable, but funny all the same. good job.

What Are Sons For? by Raven_Stag

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Hermione has a date for Mr. Weasley’s retirement party, which has put Harry into a permanent funk for the evening. With a little assistance, however, the night may not be an entire disaster.
Reviewer: makinmagic323 Signed
Date: 11/05/06 Title: Chapter 1: Mother Mastermind


My Anchor by Blue Bell

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Would you be willing to leave behind everything you know, your whole life, in order to befriend an enemy, should it save a life? Hermione is, but she doesn’t realize just what it means until she travels back in time to 1944 and finds herself falling in love with the infamous Lord Voldemort, or, in his school days, Tom Marvolo Riddle.

Read and Review, please! Every review is appreciated!

Chapter 10 has been submitted and should hopefully be up in a couple of days!
Reviewer: makinmagic323 Signed
Date: 10/01/06 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So I don't want to simply repeat what everybody else is saying. But... ditto =)

I'm always interested in how people get the ideas for their stories. What was your inspiration? For my story, it just kind of came to me while I was thinking about masks....I don't even remember why I was doing that lol. But what was your inspiration?

Forever on the Closed Ward by Aelan Greenleaf

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: "I'm Harry. Harry Potter," the man smiled as he reached out a welcoming hand, "and who are you?" "Brian. Brian Harrison," the boy lied. He could feel the sadness rise in him as they shook hands, as if meeting for the first time.
Reviewer: makinmagic323 Signed
Date: 08/29/08 Title: Chapter 1: Forever on the Closed Ward

This was beautful.

Goodbye by Sarakime

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: On the last Hogwarts Express ride home, a certain Slytherin has very regretful thoughts.

Book 6 Disregarded


Check out the banner for this story on my author's page!!!♥
Reviewer: makinmagic323 Signed
Date: 03/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Train Ride

I really really enjoyed this! You were able to capture Draco's character perfectly and worked in his new feelings of sadness by having him admit they were strange! Awesome =)

Author's Response: Thank you! =]

Love Happens by Tenebrus

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: What happens when two friends, who had never thought of each other in a romantic way, meet in the most unlikely of situations? Love happens. Harry Potter and Hermione Granger, for one night, both just want to escape the confines of their own identities. When they meet, both under the influence of Polyjuice Potion, and fall in love, their lives become a comical mixture of dates and mishaps.

Reviewer: makinmagic323 Signed
Date: 10/08/06 Title: Chapter 2: First Date

haha it's a good thing i read this story before i wrote my second one. i was going to write about this very same thing!
great minds think alike =)

Author's Response: lol funny how things work like that.