Brilliant. You know what, I can really imagine them talking like that.
Your writing's so powerful that I actually feel very sorry for Snape.
This is a good story explaining why the marauders and Snape hate each other so much.
Another great chapter. There's no "e" after Madam by the way. I always imagined that there would be some chemistry between Lily and Remus. You know what, I think they suit each other. "Animal magnetism" - lol, I remember where that came from!
Author's Response: Thanks for catching the Madam/Madame error! I thought I'd gotten them all, but I'll go back and edit. I think Remus and Lily go well together, too. But we know it wasn't meant to be. :(
They're so terrible but they make me laugh!
Author's Response: :) Glad you like them!
That was sweet. So Remus has to choose between a girl and his best friend.
Author's Response: Yep, it's a hard choice for poor Remus. Thanks for reviewing!
Excellent descriptions of how Remus felt in the shack! You really caught the angst and I felt sorry for him. Interesting how you made Peter good at chess. I'm sure most authors portray him as a useless tag-a-long. You even added a bit of mystery with the dream. I think I have an idea of who the girl is.
Author's Response: I think if you have an idea of who the girl in the dream is, then you're probably right. ;) Thanks for the review!
Interesting. I like the way you make James and Sirius attention-seeking pranksters like they are but not show them as mean people.
Author's Response: I figured I'd get pretty sick of writing James and Sirius if they were jerks all the time like we saw in OotP. Thanks for reviewing!
It's fantastic. And I also think R.A.B. is Regulus.
How do you do it? I love all of your stories!