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I'm Michelle, your average singer and Harry Potter nerd. I love MNFF; it's like a passion, but sadly, school is taking over, and I have less time to go on the computer. But, here I am, still writing stories! YAY!
Let Me Be
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Beta: Lindsey (Ron x Hermione)
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All I Want for Christmas
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Feelings for Ron (2 chapters)
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Catagory: Poetry / School Assignments
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I'm in Hufflepuff House!
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I just started reading this and it is SO good!
ooooooo I like it.
I LOVE IT AS ALWAYS!
I love it. You should write a series to it!
Wow, this story is really nice! Even though I have read this like a million times, I can feel the love from Ginny to Harry!
To me, the letter shows that Ginny might be bored, and she wants to make Harry feel better. State the ouvious, right?
Harry looked and sure enough there was another page with Ginny’s hidden message “_/ _ _/ _ _ _ _/ _ _ _/ _ _ _/ _ _ _ _/ _ _ _/ _ _ _/ _ _ _ _ _”
I don’t know, how do you make a tissue dance?…
Uh, is this his guess for the hagman game? Because I got confuesed on what this meant.
Overall, great story!
Okay, I love this story. Your write the characters as though they were really alive.
[i]“Of course you weren’t, Mrs. Weasley,” said Hermione, patting her shoulder consolingly. “…You were preparing for little half-Weasley, half-Potters.”[/i]
You pulled that off. It shows that Hermione has changed and it shows more personality.hermione is not afriad to back down any more and you proved it.
It also nice that you fill in a lot of details and Harry's dream. It's like a cliff hanger. It was like a scary dream but then it's turns happy. I can't wait to read of rest of your story and Good luck!
I like your story a lot for a reason. You share all the characters emotions perfectly! It might be kinda short (No offence!), it shows how everyone feels and looks. I also LOVED how you showed Arthur and Ginny. It's like they had a different personality.
This story is really good! I like how you add in some of Kinsley's thought's about helping that little girl. Also, it's like you made the girl sound like Hermione. hermione is Mature for her age and smart. Well, when that girl is talking with Kingsley, you made her sound Mature and smart, even if she was crying in the beginning. You add really good details and you explain each characters personality.
"Yes!" she declared, nodding her head furiously as she primly sat in an adjacent chair, hands folded neatly. "I want to help people, you see, and catching bad people is helpful, right?" -from the story.
It sounds like she has a strong mind, and a nice personality. As I said, i really like this story. Keep up the good work with your others!
PS: I know this is a long review!
Sorry, I guess my review was too long before. I guess it deleted itself, so I'll just sum up my review:
Your story was brilliant! I loved the setting (Very dark/angst!) and I loved the characterization (How Ron wasn't as macho as we thought.) I thought the best part was the talk that Harry gave. It made me cry. It was filled with a lot of heart and emotion.
I like this chapter a lot. The reason I'm reviewing this one instead of chapters 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, and 15 is because I think this one has lots of backround in it.
To start off, I would like to say that Ginny is definatly pregnant. The potion or whatever it was [stick?] was out of date, I'm sure. I'm glad that you put that though, because it shows that things aren't always a happy ever after and that even though Ginny wasn't planning to have another baby, we see that she is still upset that the test was false.
I also like that you put flashbacks on how Ginny reacted to when she found out she was going to have Lisle (how do you say that? Lis-lee? Li-zell?) and how she planned to tell Harry, because that way we aren't guessing on how everyone took it.
Other good news is this: No errors that I found in grammar and spelling, and everyone seems to be OC. Tipical Ron, invading on a moment with news of Pudding! :D
I hope that you keep writing!
Wow! This story was very nice. I loved how you showed time passed when you inserted all of those numbers.
I don't know if you metion this, but who is telling this story? Is it one of the Marauders? Or am I just totally missing something?
My favourite part of this story is when Fudge is talking with Sirius. It shows that Sirius doesn't really mind being in Azkaban, and that he is bored. To me, it also shows that Fudge is Brave, because he went talking with a prisoner.
Overall, I love this story.
PS: I hope you know what this was for! =]
NOOO! You ended the story. Okay, you have to promise me that you will make a sequel! I will even beta and give you idea's if I have to! PLEASE make a sequel because I love your stories.
Author's Response: Ohh, thanks very much, but I think I\'m going to attempt something original for my next project. We\'ll see how that goes ;
Okay,I have 5 words for you: I.LOVE.THIS.STORY.SO.MUCH! Hmm...that was 6, oh never mind! I love how you can write with so many words and how you express the characters feelings perfectly! And how you give very good describtions and how you update quickly! I rate this 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 out of 10. Please update sooner!
I thought this story was very well. First off, I thought that you did really well pulling off first person point of view. I know how hard that could be, and here you did it very well.
I also like the fact that you wrote about Luna - not just the usual characters of the trio. I say this because the way you wrote Luna is probably the way that she would tell herself.
If I had to tell you something that you could have improved on (which is really hard since I love this story), I would say that I would have thought that at lest one person may like her. In this story, no one really likes her. I think that you should have showed us that she does have friends besides Ginny. And - this is just a Pet Peeve - I think the story would be more wonderful if to added more to it. And, one more thing before I go:
He looks troubled, but he smiles and waves at me. I haven’t seen him much since Professor Slughorn’s party. I had a nice time; it was quite the best party I had ever gone to.
I don't really think that the first sentance is believeable that much. Whenever Harry is troubled or upset, he usually is in a bad mood, and does not want to talk to anyonr beside Ron and hermione. I just thi nk that if he's troubled, he would smile and wave at Luna. I also think that 'quite' is not the right word to use in the last sentance. It doesn't really flow with what you are talking about.
This review may sound like I'm being mean, but I really did like this story. I just think that if you improve, this stor could be even better. But I do love this!
It was good but I thought you could have written a little more because it looks like you could have explained that friend that Harry had to kill. But it's only my thoughts.
Wow! I really like this story! I wonder why you keep saying 'This is Albus' fault' though...
It's really unique that you put Snape in Third Point of view (Or is that first?). I like how you made Albus and Snape. At the begining of this story, they were kinda funny, or maybe that's just me.
Overall, great Story!
Author's Response: Oh, it\'s Snape saying, well... narrating... \"this is all Albus\' fault\" over and over again because he is Snape, and annoyed, and Dumbledore told him to go to Romania to begin with. And I\'m glad you thought it was funny :D After HBP Snape seems OOC to me, even, but... it was supposed to take place before we knew him so I got to have fun.
I love your story! I'm not saying this because I have to, but I love how Hermione and Ginny are OOC, but then it looks like they are still acting the way they usually act. Also, how you express the feelings is great. I felt like I was really there. Plus, I got the hints, so you did good on not giving give-a-ways, but you made it so that everyone could get it. How Ginny and Hermione are first sad, then mad, then sad again, is very tricky to do, but I think you pulled it off.
I just have one question. Did you get the name for your other characters yet? If so, I can't wait to read them. Overall, good story. I can't wait till you update!
~*~Queen of Strange Happiness~*~
~*~Queen of Harry Potter~*~
Author's Response: Thanks so much! If find I have a natural talent for writing Angsty fics, lol. As for the characters, yes, I did. If you want to leave any suggestions, I\'d love to hear them, either way. Oh, and the fourth chapter is with a Beta now. Thanks again!