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I'm Michelle, your average singer and Harry Potter nerd. I love MNFF; it's like a passion, but sadly, school is taking over, and I have less time to go on the computer. But, here I am, still writing stories! YAY!
Let Me Be
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Beta: Lindsey (Ron x Hermione)
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All I Want for Christmas
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Feelings for Ron (2 chapters)
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Catagory: Poetry / School Assignments
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I'm in Hufflepuff House!
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Summary: PRE-HBP!!! Harry starts out his sixth year in sorrow at the loss of Sirius. Ginny helps him to overcome it, and our heroes learn a lot about life and love. This story has been completed! Special thanks to my mod, Danielle and to my fantastic readers!
I just started reading this and it is SO good!
ooooooo I like it.
I LOVE IT AS ALWAYS!
Summary: (Hi, I wrote this when I was 16, please keep that in mind. I'm keeping it up because people still like it.)
So, you want to be an evil villain? In this handbook that a certain Hogwarts student purchases, all of the rules, techniques, and frequently asked questions about evil villainy are explained. Do you have what it takes? And what will happen to the student who purchases the book? Another story from the strange, twisted, and slightly unfortunate Hermione's Revenge.
I love it. You should write a series to it!
Wow, this story is really nice! Even though I have read this like a million times, I can feel the love from Ginny to Harry!
To me, the letter shows that Ginny might be bored, and she wants to make Harry feel better. State the ouvious, right?
Harry looked and sure enough there was another page with Ginny’s hidden message “_/ _ _/ _ _ _ _/ _ _ _/ _ _ _/ _ _ _ _/ _ _ _/ _ _ _/ _ _ _ _ _”
I don’t know, how do you make a tissue dance?…
Uh, is this his guess for the hagman game? Because I got confuesed on what this meant.
Overall, great story!
Summary: Year six begins in the_bartender's crazy concoction that is the life of Harry Potter. Add one part Harry, two parts prophecy, a mixture of Ron and Hermione, a dash of Ginny, a splash of Dumbledore (and garnish with a certain new knightly character to add a little mystery!)...
Pour over the ice in Lord Voldemort's heart and voila!
You've got yourself a Power of the Prophecy Cocktail, sure to mess you up, spin you around, make you question your motives and turn your wizarding world up-side down.
Okay, I love this story. Your write the characters as though they were really alive.
[i]“Of course you weren’t, Mrs. Weasley,” said Hermione, patting her shoulder consolingly. “…You were preparing for little half-Weasley, half-Potters.”[/i]
You pulled that off. It shows that Hermione has changed and it shows more personality.hermione is not afriad to back down any more and you proved it.
It also nice that you fill in a lot of details and Harry's dream. It's like a cliff hanger. It was like a scary dream but then it's turns happy. I can't wait to read of rest of your story and Good luck!
Summary: CONTAINS HBP SPOILERS! Two weeks after his seventeenth birthday, Harry Potter sets out from the comfort and safety of the Burrow in search of the one who murdered his mentor. Along the way, he meets someone who is also searching for the traitor, but for very different reasons...
I like your story a lot for a reason. You share all the characters emotions perfectly! It might be kinda short (No offence!), it shows how everyone feels and looks. I also LOVED how you showed Arthur and Ginny. It's like they had a different personality.
Summary: Auror-in-training Kingsley Shacklebolt is learning to blend in with the crowd in downtown London. There, he meets a small, lost girl, and learns how much impact a simple act of kindness can really have.
This story is really good! I like how you add in some of Kinsley's thought's about helping that little girl. Also, it's like you made the girl sound like Hermione. hermione is Mature for her age and smart. Well, when that girl is talking with Kingsley, you made her sound Mature and smart, even if she was crying in the beginning. You add really good details and you explain each characters personality.
"Yes!" she declared, nodding her head furiously as she primly sat in an adjacent chair, hands folded neatly. "I want to help people, you see, and catching bad people is helpful, right?" -from the story.
It sounds like she has a strong mind, and a nice personality. As I said, i really like this story. Keep up the good work with your others!
PS: I know this is a long review!
Summary: Harry, Ron, and Hermione make a trip to Godric's Hollow to visit the Potters' graves. There, Harry speaks to his parents for the first time, and in so doing, discovers that the dead are never truly lost. (One-shot. Bring your kleenex.)
Sorry, I guess my review was too long before. I guess it deleted itself, so I'll just sum up my review:
Your story was brilliant! I loved the setting (Very dark/angst!) and I loved the characterization (How Ron wasn't as macho as we thought.) I thought the best part was the talk that Harry gave. It made me cry. It was filled with a lot of heart and emotion.
Hi everyone just to say this story is finished, there will not be any more chapters. Sorry if that wasn't clear beforeb>
Harry and Ginny are married, with a seven-year old daughter. As Ginny finds out she is pregnant with her second child, memories come back to her, good and bad. The war is over, and everyone feels safe. Shouldn’t they? Strange things are happening, mysterious plots are being formed, putting Harry and his loved ones in danger. Everyone knows he will do anything for the people he loves…Especially Ginny.
I like this chapter a lot. The reason I'm reviewing this one instead of chapters 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, and 15 is because I think this one has lots of backround in it.
To start off, I would like to say that Ginny is definatly pregnant. The potion or whatever it was [stick?] was out of date, I'm sure. I'm glad that you put that though, because it shows that things aren't always a happy ever after and that even though Ginny wasn't planning to have another baby, we see that she is still upset that the test was false.
I also like that you put flashbacks on how Ginny reacted to when she found out she was going to have Lisle (how do you say that? Lis-lee? Li-zell?) and how she planned to tell Harry, because that way we aren't guessing on how everyone took it.
Other good news is this: No errors that I found in grammar and spelling, and everyone seems to be OC. Tipical Ron, invading on a moment with news of Pudding! :D
I hope that you keep writing!
Summary: He was innocent. That much he told himself over and over as he sat in his cell, and years later, it seemed that that was enough to keep him sane. But despite this, Azkaban left scars on Sirius that could never be healed. Part I is set when Sirius was in Azkaban.
Wow! This story was very nice. I loved how you showed time passed when you inserted all of those numbers.
I don't know if you metion this, but who is telling this story? Is it one of the Marauders? Or am I just totally missing something?
My favourite part of this story is when Fudge is talking with Sirius. It shows that Sirius doesn't really mind being in Azkaban, and that he is bored. To me, it also shows that Fudge is Brave, because he went talking with a prisoner.
Overall, I love this story.
PS: I hope you know what this was for! =]
Summary: The hunt for the Horcruxes begins. Harry has to decide who to trust as he moves closer to fulfilling his destiny. Will he be able to find and destroy all the Horcruxes? And at what price? Will he be able to find the strength within himself – the Power the Dark Lord Knows Not – in order to succeed in vanquishing Voldemort? And…can he do it and still get the girl? Join Harry and his faithful friends on their quest to finally defeat a Dark Lord.
NOOO! You ended the story. Okay, you have to promise me that you will make a sequel! I will even beta and give you idea's if I have to! PLEASE make a sequel because I love your stories.
Author's Response: Ohh, thanks very much, but I think I\'m going to attempt something original for my next project. We\'ll see how that goes ;
Okay,I have 5 words for you: I.LOVE.THIS.STORY.SO.MUCH! Hmm...that was 6, oh never mind! I love how you can write with so many words and how you express the characters feelings perfectly! And how you give very good describtions and how you update quickly! I rate this 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 out of 10. Please update sooner!
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I thought this story was very well. First off, I thought that you did really well pulling off first person point of view. I know how hard that could be, and here you did it very well.
I also like the fact that you wrote about Luna - not just the usual characters of the trio. I say this because the way you wrote Luna is probably the way that she would tell herself.
If I had to tell you something that you could have improved on (which is really hard since I love this story), I would say that I would have thought that at lest one person may like her. In this story, no one really likes her. I think that you should have showed us that she does have friends besides Ginny. And - this is just a Pet Peeve - I think the story would be more wonderful if to added more to it. And, one more thing before I go:
He looks troubled, but he smiles and waves at me. I haven’t seen him much since Professor Slughorn’s party. I had a nice time; it was quite the best party I had ever gone to.
I don't really think that the first sentance is believeable that much. Whenever Harry is troubled or upset, he usually is in a bad mood, and does not want to talk to anyonr beside Ron and hermione. I just thi nk that if he's troubled, he would smile and wave at Luna. I also think that 'quite' is not the right word to use in the last sentance. It doesn't really flow with what you are talking about.
This review may sound like I'm being mean, but I really did like this story. I just think that if you improve, this stor could be even better. But I do love this!
Summary: War is hell. Years after the Final Battle, the man remembers, and writes the letter he has written so many times before. [Post Hogwarts; one shot]
It was good but I thought you could have written a little more because it looks like you could have explained that friend that Harry had to kill. But it's only my thoughts.
Summary: Snape is recuited to Romania to aide Charlie Weasley in preparing dragons for the TriWizard tournament. While there, however, Charlie develops a very strange and deadly illness, and Snape must somehow find a way to get him to St. Mungo's in time.
Entered for the Gauntlet "Journey to St. Mungo's" challenge by StaceyLC of Hufflepuff house.
Wow! I really like this story! I wonder why you keep saying 'This is Albus' fault' though...
It's really unique that you put Snape in Third Point of view (Or is that first?). I like how you made Albus and Snape. At the begining of this story, they were kinda funny, or maybe that's just me.
Overall, great Story!
Author's Response: Oh, it\'s Snape saying, well... narrating... \"this is all Albus\' fault\" over and over again because he is Snape, and annoyed, and Dumbledore told him to go to Romania to begin with. And I\'m glad you thought it was funny :D After HBP Snape seems OOC to me, even, but... it was supposed to take place before we knew him so I got to have fun.
Summary: It's years after the trio is out of Hogwarts, Harry's found all of the Horcruxes, Voldemort's dying slowly and the Death Eaters are receding. All of the trio are married, and life is swell. But with one last flourish, Voldemort attacks Harry and Ron. The two defeat Voldemort, but lose their memories of their past since their first year, along with You-Know-Who, leaving Hermione, Ginny, the Weasleys and Harry and Ron's kids help nurse them back to sanity.
Author's Note: The Violence is mild in the first and fourth chapter, there is a bit, so I added a Violence warning. It's not graphic, though.
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I love your story! I'm not saying this because I have to, but I love how Hermione and Ginny are OOC, but then it looks like they are still acting the way they usually act. Also, how you express the feelings is great. I felt like I was really there. Plus, I got the hints, so you did good on not giving give-a-ways, but you made it so that everyone could get it. How Ginny and Hermione are first sad, then mad, then sad again, is very tricky to do, but I think you pulled it off.
I just have one question. Did you get the name for your other characters yet? If so, I can't wait to read them. Overall, good story. I can't wait till you update!
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Author's Response: Thanks so much! If find I have a natural talent for writing Angsty fics, lol. As for the characters, yes, I did. If you want to leave any suggestions, I\'d love to hear them, either way. Oh, and the fourth chapter is with a Beta now. Thanks again!