I hope anyone who reads my story reveiws!!!!!!
12 1/2 inches, cypress and unicorn heartstring. One
of the darker Gregorovitch creations no doubt.
Vengeful and seething with hatred, you wouldn't
let anything stand in your way, you ruthless
Which wand will yours be?
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“To be, or not to be? That is the question-
Whether ‘tis nobler in the mind to suffer
The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune,
Or to take arms against a sea of trouble,
And, by opposing, end them? To die, to sleep-
No more- and by a sleep to say we end
The heartache and the thousand natural shocks
That flesh is heir to- ‘tis a consummation
Devoutly to be wished! To die, to sleep.
To sleep, perchance to dream- ay, there’s the rub,
For in that sleep of death what dreams may come
When we have shuffled off this moral coil,
Must give us pause. There’s the respect
That makes calamity of so long life.
For who would bear the whips and scorns of time,
Th’ oppressor’s wrong, the proud man’s contumely,
The pangs of despised love, the law’s delay,
The insolence of office, and the spurns
That patient merit of th’ unworthy takes,
When he himself might his quietus make
With a bare bodkin? Who would fardels bear,
To grunt and sweat under a weary life,
But that the dread of something after death,
The undiscovered country from whose bourn
No traveler returns, puzzles the will
And makes us rather bear those ills we have
Than fly to others that we know not of?
Thus conscience does make coward of us all,
And thus the native hue of resolution
Is sicklied o’er with the pale cast of thought,
And enterprises of great pith and moment
With this regard their currents turn awry,
And lose the name of action.” --Hamlet
Hey! Got ur email and wanted to thank you for it. Okay-now for the tips. Since I'm a firstie girl too, I'm not that experienced; but, I'll tell you what I extracted so far: #1= Grammar. The dialogue is a bit twitchy. I find beta help to be very useful. Believe me-GRAMMAR IS EVIL! IT WILL BE THE DOWNFALL OF US ALL!---( ; jk #2= Occasional spelling errors. #3= If you can, I'd advise structuring your sentences a little differently. Put a tad bit more variation. #4= KEEP WRITING! I LIKE YOUR STORY SO UPDATE! he he he. Well- I would like to take this time to make a toast to the firsties! Cheers, mate!
SOOO friggin cute!!!!! I totally can picture Sirius and the stag just staring up at Lily! It's so cute!!! Now I need to buy a stuffed animal stag...lol
Author's Response: Tankies!
Hello! You reviewed for my story so I checked out yours, and it's awesome man! Luv the deepness and emotions. I hate waiting for updates, don't you? They really do take forever!
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Luv it! definitely a 10/10!
Cool cool- as usual! luvin it! If you have time, check out my fic!
11 DAYS? Wow, and I thought I had it bad! Email the staff; they usually take care of it, but sometimes they...well...don't give you much joy in life. Still, 4 days is the maximum holding time!
Koreans rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And so does your story! Check out mine if you have time! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: A fellow Korean! I liked your Anne character... *winkwink*.
lol I felt the same way when my third chapter was FINALLY accepted! Keep up the good work!
It was okay with the one exception that it really, really resembles my own story that I started writing a while back.......
Author's Response: I just read your fic, you're right in someways, but mine takes a totally diffrent twist, the only other problem is that I wrote for my second chapter a battle with Bellatrix, except it ends completley diffrent. Sorry, I guess great minds think alike!
Yes, there really isn't that much to review about is there? lol. It's written well for a firstie. As a firstie myself, I usually worry if I wrote too much. But in your case, I think you should worry about writing more! It's great besides the fact that it seems to be about only 500 words. Keep going! I'll be keeping an eye on this one...
Author's Response: Thanks. It's barely 500 words and was almost NOT accepted because of it's length! This is my first fic on mugglenet~I had others on Veritaserum and Godric's Hollow under a different penname. I'm glad I made the switch.
So that's what happened to all those Invisible Books of Invisibility! I like the descriptions you put in- I could smell the coffee!- and Sirius hurling. Can't have too much of that lol!
Author's Response: I'm glad someone caught the Invisible books. ;-) Thanks for your review! ~Norahpotter
Good- I'm the first to review! The first chapter was okay, though I don't know how you're going to tell more about Lily and James now. It seems more like a Harry fic... Well, keep at it! We're all waiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Except...it's actually a one shot. So, umm, no more on that count. Sorry!