I hope anyone who reads my story reveiws!!!!!!
12 1/2 inches, cypress and unicorn heartstring. One
of the darker Gregorovitch creations no doubt.
Vengeful and seething with hatred, you wouldn't
let anything stand in your way, you ruthless
Which wand will yours be?
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“To be, or not to be? That is the question-
Whether ‘tis nobler in the mind to suffer
The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune,
Or to take arms against a sea of trouble,
And, by opposing, end them? To die, to sleep-
No more- and by a sleep to say we end
The heartache and the thousand natural shocks
That flesh is heir to- ‘tis a consummation
Devoutly to be wished! To die, to sleep.
To sleep, perchance to dream- ay, there’s the rub,
For in that sleep of death what dreams may come
When we have shuffled off this moral coil,
Must give us pause. There’s the respect
That makes calamity of so long life.
For who would bear the whips and scorns of time,
Th’ oppressor’s wrong, the proud man’s contumely,
The pangs of despised love, the law’s delay,
The insolence of office, and the spurns
That patient merit of th’ unworthy takes,
When he himself might his quietus make
With a bare bodkin? Who would fardels bear,
To grunt and sweat under a weary life,
But that the dread of something after death,
The undiscovered country from whose bourn
No traveler returns, puzzles the will
And makes us rather bear those ills we have
Than fly to others that we know not of?
Thus conscience does make coward of us all,
And thus the native hue of resolution
Is sicklied o’er with the pale cast of thought,
And enterprises of great pith and moment
With this regard their currents turn awry,
And lose the name of action.” --Hamlet
Hey! Got ur email and wanted to thank you for it. Okay-now for the tips. Since I'm a firstie girl too, I'm not that experienced; but, I'll tell you what I extracted so far: #1= Grammar. The dialogue is a bit twitchy. I find beta help to be very useful. Believe me-GRAMMAR IS EVIL! IT WILL BE THE DOWNFALL OF US ALL!---( ; jk #2= Occasional spelling errors. #3= If you can, I'd advise structuring your sentences a little differently. Put a tad bit more variation. #4= KEEP WRITING! I LIKE YOUR STORY SO UPDATE! he he he. Well- I would like to take this time to make a toast to the firsties! Cheers, mate!
Summary: OMG! ONE CHAPPIE AND 2000+ READS! TANKIES ALL! PLEASE REVIEW!
UPDATE! UPDATE! CHECK CHAPPIE 1!
A tree, a barn, more trees and some cows. These were the sights that flashed through the emerald eyes of a certain 17-year-old girl as she gazed out the window. The red-head tore her eyes off of the country that the train was passing by and placed her attention on a small brown something she was fiddling with in her hands. That certain something had black button eyes that were looking at her in a way that said “I know something you don’t know.” It was a tiny stuffed animal, a stag in fact. Over the summer Lily Evans had received it from an unknown owl with an unknown owner. She had come to one conclusion about the person though. The person was a wizard or a witch, like her. Well, that wasn’t much help to her considering she spent a great part of the year surrounded by hundreds of them. When the owl had first dropped the package on her desk and flown off, she had been sure the owl had made a mistake. But sure enough, around the neck of the stag had been a note: “So you never forget me Lily.” It was possibly the strangest and most bizarre gift Lily had ever gotten and the strangest note as well.
A/N: Chapter two was rejected, so I had to add some bits from the next chappie to see if it will be accepted (MEAN MODS FOR NOT TELLING ME WHY!). So sorry for the delay! Chappie 2 preview has now been added!:D
SOOO friggin cute!!!!! I totally can picture Sirius and the stag just staring up at Lily! It's so cute!!! Now I need to buy a stuffed animal stag...lol
Author's Response: Tankies!
Hello! You reviewed for my story so I checked out yours, and it's awesome man! Luv the deepness and emotions. I hate waiting for updates, don't you? They really do take forever!
Summary: James is passionately in love with Lily, but she despises him. Each year things seem to get worse for the love sick boy. When he finally finds the courage to tell her the truth about how he feels, how will Lily react? Will her heart finally make a change?
Follow the two through each year at Hogwarts as hearts are wrenched, twisted, and finally touched as the two struggle to find the love they were destined for…
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Luv it! definitely a 10/10!
Cool cool- as usual! luvin it! If you have time, check out my fic!
11 DAYS? Wow, and I thought I had it bad! Email the staff; they usually take care of it, but sometimes they...well...don't give you much joy in life. Still, 4 days is the maximum holding time!
Koreans rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And so does your story! Check out mine if you have time! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: A fellow Korean! I liked your Anne character... *winkwink*.
Summary: It's the seventh year for the Marauders and Lily. James still hasn't given up on his dream girl and is trying his best to woo her. Lily unfortunately is stuck being head girl with the boy she never would have thought of. James Potter. Read this story as James has his ways of wooing such a girl.
OMG! Chapter 2 has been accepted! Wow! I am just... so happy! *burst into tears*
lol I felt the same way when my third chapter was FINALLY accepted! Keep up the good work!
Summary: We all know the ending...Lily and James fall in love. But what happened in between that. This story is their seventh year...what pain they went through...betrayl and death. And what happens after they graduate...and lets not forget the threat of Voldemort...will their soon-to-be love triumph against evil or will friendships and love fall at evil's hands?
It was okay with the one exception that it really, really resembles my own story that I started writing a while back.......
Author's Response: I just read your fic, you're right in someways, but mine takes a totally diffrent twist, the only other problem is that I wrote for my second chapter a battle with Bellatrix, except it ends completley diffrent. Sorry, I guess great minds think alike!
Those Whose Hearts Hath Tried: the Chronicles of Lily and James Potter by norahpotter
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 41]
Summary: "Oh who can tell, save those whose hearts hath tried.” -Lord Byron. Inspired by a line of poetry by Lord Byron, this is the first in a series (hopefully) on Lily, James, and eventually Harry Potter. Lily and James' seventh and final year at Hogwarts. Post HBP with a bit of AU thrown in.
Yes, there really isn't that much to review about is there? lol. It's written well for a firstie. As a firstie myself, I usually worry if I wrote too much. But in your case, I think you should worry about writing more! It's great besides the fact that it seems to be about only 500 words. Keep going! I'll be keeping an eye on this one...
Author's Response: Thanks. It's barely 500 words and was almost NOT accepted because of it's length! This is my first fic on mugglenet~I had others on Veritaserum and Godric's Hollow under a different penname. I'm glad I made the switch.
So that's what happened to all those Invisible Books of Invisibility! I like the descriptions you put in- I could smell the coffee!- and Sirius hurling. Can't have too much of that lol!
Author's Response: I'm glad someone caught the Invisible books. ;-) Thanks for your review! ~Norahpotter
Summary: James and Lily are enjoying a quiet evening at home with their little boy. But all that is about th change in a flash of green light.
Song fic from Phantom of the Opera.
Good- I'm the first to review! The first chapter was okay, though I don't know how you're going to tell more about Lily and James now. It seems more like a Harry fic... Well, keep at it! We're all waiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Except...it's actually a one shot. So, umm, no more on that count. Sorry!