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Real name: Ashlee Lauryn Nichole Latimer
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Hey everyone!
I'm an avid Harry Potter Hater turned Extreme Potter~Head! My favorite character is by far Sirius, with james being a close second. erikthephantom is my favorite fanfiction author, and she is the reason that I continued to read it after having some horrible reading encounters!
I love writing, reading, and editing fanfiction and I work on here as a Beta in my spare time. If you would like me to your Beta, just ask.

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So being as the queue on here is not really excepting any of my stories past chapter one--ever. I'm updating my stories on fanfiction.net now.

The titles are the same, but my screename is AsThingsSpokenTransferToPaper. Please review, I want at least ten for each chapter before I update. Thanks!

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Veiled Revelations by erikthephantom
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 514]

Summary: The Hogwarts Express brings mystery and mischief in the Marauders' seventh and final year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. James, Sirius, Remus, and Peter are facing a year of N.E.W.T.s, romance, intrigue, and, of course, a little mischief-making. There are plot twists galore! James (in the midst of saving the world) continues desperately to try to woo the incorrigible Lily Evans. Sirius deals with family problems while dealing with his incredible popularity and good looks (the horror!). Remus is provided with a backdoor to avoiding the prejudices of the inevitable real world, but at what cost? (dun-dun-dun) And Peter...well, Peter gets himself a girlfriend (but don't worry: it doesn't affect his hero-worshipping of James...or DOES IT?!)

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 103833 Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/08/04 Updated: 12/17/04


Reviewer: SiriusandJamesLiveOn Signed
Date: 01/16/05 Title: Chapter 1: Head Boy, Head Girl

I love this story soooooo much! It is superbly done and I think, that if JK will give you permisson, you should try and get it published. This is the best story i've read that had ANYTHING to do with HP. I'm Sirius! (well actually i'm not, Sirius is). But, anyways, I think this is (no offense to JK) even better then the real HP books. Several times during this story, i've had to pause and lat what you've written just sink in (I usually only have to do this when something is very well written). Because of aforsaid words in ()'s, I parctically had to pause in every paragraph. Throughout this story, i've had tears in my eyes (I do now in fact) and at the end of the book I was actually sobbing. You have portayed the Maruaders (and Lily) perfectly. You have done it as no one that i've read of (read their work I mean) has been able to do. You made it perfectly as I had expected it to be. In fact, if you would (PLEASE DO!) write stories for their other six years (I would be SOOOOOOO THRILLED, DELIGHTED, and whatever other happy adjectives that you can think of) I won't have to resot to starting a petition to get JK to do so. When i started reading this, you were at a three way tie for my fave fanfic about the marauders ever! No however, this story is a the top, then comes "The Ever Secret Diary of Sirius Black, and then "All in the Timing". This is done so magnifacintly that I just can't even describe it throughly. I mean, you had everything perfect! From how the Maruaders found out about Remus to the whole Lily and James thing (many have achieved getting down things like the whole them finding out about Remus thing down but you are the first that has portrayed the Lily and James thing with just the right amount of everything) to Sirius keeping an eye on James and Lily. You are the fist person so far to give such an accurate account of what happened with evrything that had to do with the Marauders. Okay, so maybe this isn't how JK would have planned it but this is how I deep down (even though I didn't know it until I read this) had planned it. I mean, everything ties together perfectly! PLEASEEEEEEE do the other six years!!! I could keep going on forever about this story but then, after all, I could finish writing this and have Mugglenet say that i've written to much and then I would have to keep on going back and rewriting this until I got everything that I wanted to say into just the right amount of words and that would be VERY boring. Not to mention that I wouldn't get to read all of your other stories and you (although i'm sure that people have asked you before but you haven't heard it from me yet) wouldn't be able to read my plea for the rest of "The Marauder Years" and then I wouldn't get to read and...and...well, you get the idea. So, now, in just a few, minutes anyway, I will end this review. But, first, your rating. Yes, yes I know they have a scale but I would prefer to use my own. So, without further ado my rating of you story (mind you, this could be almost as long as my review but, I promise that they are to defferent things) again, among other things, here is my rating of your story: Although as I said before, you have written the best HP thing that i've ever read and also the best fanfic, Marauders story etc..., My standards are very high and therefore you will not be recieving a 10 (though I would encourage you to write as you could, though I higly doubt it, get better) so, with that said here is my rating (again, among other things) for your story. I give you, a....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................100 BILLION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Along with...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................The 1st place award (we'll calls these the Maraudies, you know Emmy's Maraudies) for: 1. Having written the BEST HP fanfic EVER! 2. Having written the BEST HP book/story EVER (the real HP books are included in this) 3. The BEST HP mystery fanfic EVER! 4. The BEST Marauders story EVER! 5. The BEST JAMES and LILY story EVER! 6. The BEST SIRIUS story EVER (Siriusly loved the jokes by the way) 7. The BEST REMUS story EVER! 8. The best portrayal of Sirius and James EVER!. 9. The BEST portrayal of Sirus' and James' relationship EVER!. 10. The BEST "classic" Marauders moment EVER! 11. The BEST ending to a A. Marauders story. B. HP story. and C. Hogwarts graduation story EVER! ANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNND: 12. The HP story that meant the most to me and made me cry the most (this is a good thing I assure you!) awards. I will be working on designs for the awards and if you give me your e-mail, I can try and send them to you. My e-mail is Aurie113@yahoo.com(if you want, you can e-mail there and give it to me). Congrat's on winning all these awards! I truly mean it! Also, (I know I forgot something and I will proly write it later) I will proly come up with more awards and will post them later as well. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write the other 6 years!!! Siriusly, ~SiriusandJamesLiveOn~

 
Reviewer: SiriusandJamesLiveOn Signed
Date: 01/16/05 Title: Chapter 1: Head Boy, Head Girl

NOW I REMEMBER! I wanted to say that I think that your writing is even better then JK's! I not trying to insult her in any way mind. Siriusly, ~SiriusandJamesLiveOn~

Author's Response: AHHHHHHH THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! oh my goodness!!!!! i am HONORED!!!!! oh, im blushing like a mad(wo)man right now!!!! AND im going to respond to the super review before this, but i cant now coz i'm doing work! BUT THANK YOU in advance!!! ohhhh i dont deserve all this!!

 
Reviewer: SiriusandJamesLiveOn Signed
Date: 09/15/06 Title: Chapter 24: Now It's Forever

I just wanted to stop by and say again how very much I enjoyed this story. It offers an astounding backdrop for the real series, and the ending is spectacular! You truly are a wonderful author and I hope you continue writing for a long time to come!

 

Fate by Liisa
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 598]

Summary: Sirius returns miraculously from behind the veil, uncovering a secret that's remainded hidden for too long and was obviously not supposed to be found...He undertakes the task of trying to fix the mistake he made all those years ago on Halloween night

Categories: Mystery Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 135024 Chapters: 46 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/11/04 Updated: 11/15/05


Reviewer: SiriusandJamesLiveOn Signed
Date: 02/07/05 Title: Chapter 11: Just Tell Him

I love it! Please update soon! 10!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Oh new reader! thanks so much! more is coming!

 
Reviewer: SiriusandJamesLiveOn Signed
Date: 02/11/05 Title: Chapter 14: What Did You Just Say?

This is copied!!!!!!! Anyone that wants to read the REAL story, can go to fanfiction.net The username of the REAL author is SMH. She has like 50 chapters up or something. This girl is a fake!!! I'm rating THIS story as a -10000000 but the REAL story by the REAL author is a 10000000000000!!!!!!

Author's Response: >.< urgh....

 
Reviewer: SiriusandJamesLiveOn Signed
Date: 02/11/05 Title: Chapter 14: What Did You Just Say?

GOD!!! THIS IS SOOOO FAKE THAT SHE EVEN HAS THE SAME MISSING QUOTATIONS THAT THE REAL STORY HAS!!!!

Author's Response: ......>.< I don't understand this person....

 
Reviewer: SiriusandJamesLiveOn Signed
Date: 02/11/05 Title: Chapter 14: What Did You Just Say?

Ok, I would just like to let everyone know that what I said earlier was wrong. I mixed this story up with a different one called "Being 16 isn't as easy as it sounds". Their is another girl on here who is posting that story and in doing so, she is copying it from someone else. I had the fics mixed up and I am truly sorry! Liisa is the REAL author of this fic and I love it. Please don't think that she is copying anyone else's work!

Author's Response: Well at least you had the decency to do this...thanks ever so much (that was sarcastic)

 
Reviewer: SiriusandJamesLiveOn Signed
Date: 02/11/05 Title: Chapter 14: What Did You Just Say?

I just want to post another review saying how much I love this story! Liisa, I am sooooooo sorry! Please, everyone, know that what I posted about her copying this story, isn't true! I was just mixed up!

Author's Response: right....( still >.< )

 
Reviewer: SiriusandJamesLiveOn Signed
Date: 01/29/05 Title: Chapter 9: Ask Me Again

I love this!! Please update soon!!

Author's Response: your wish is my command

 

The Three Muggleteers by Maggie
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 75]

Summary: Everything went absolutely crazy in 6th year as Draco Malfoy and his cronies get sent as foreign exchange students to a muggle high school in America. It's all insane and completely unpredictable: Voldemort gets married to his teddy bear, Lucius & Death Eaters practise Irish-dancing in Azkaban before they break out to join Voldemort in his newest and stupidest yet evil plan to take over the world, Greg turns into a chimp from his brain transplant. Bullies at school, hillbillies, 60's groove dudes and random French Maid costumes will turn their world upside-down. Hopefully, reading this story will convince you that Draco is not pretty. *~*This week's highlights: Draco gets his first driving lesson.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 32003 Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/12/04 Updated: 03/14/05


Reviewer: SiriusandJamesLiveOn Signed
Date: 02/06/05 Title: Chapter 1: How Draco, Vincent and Gregory found out the bad news in a chapter with an extremely long title

HILARIOUS!!!!! I love it! It makes no sense but, it's great! Keep it up!

 

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Rated: [Reviews - ]

Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: SiriusandJamesLiveOn Signed
Date: 01/31/05 Title: None

I like this story. It doesn't seem to stay very close to the clues that JKR has given us (Lily ans Sirius being such good friends, and James only likeing her since Christmas). It's pretty good though.

 
Reviewer: SiriusandJamesLiveOn Signed
Date: 01/31/05 Title: None

Once again, I like it but it's not very fitting. It's geting even less so. I"m rating it lower only because I wish that it fit more.

 
Reviewer: SiriusandJamesLiveOn Signed
Date: 01/31/05 Title: None

Please update soon! I'm upping the rateing! I'ts gotten even better!

 

Summary: Emily Gardner's life was at best uneventful and at worst slower than a tourtise enjoying a day at the beach. Until, through a series of near fatal events, she falls under the care of the mauraders.Soon, all of their lives become just a tad more interesting. But then again, when you put a frightened rat, a failed Don Juan, a chivalrous werewolf, a handsome bastard, and an aspiring actress with a talent for sticking her nose in places where it doesn't belong together in one dormitory...interesting becomes an understatement. (rated for mild swearing and some sexual inuendo latter on)

Categories: Historical Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 45308 Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/15/04 Updated: 01/31/05


Reviewer: SiriusandJamesLiveOn Signed
Date: 01/23/05 Title: Chapter 16: The Difficulties of Involvment

Usually, in stories about the Marauder's I fall in love with Sirius. In this one, however, i'm totally falling in love with Remus! Thanks so much for writing this story! Please, please, please update soon!

Author's Response: Yes, Sirius does seem to get the upper hand in fanfiction doesn't he? Well, I'm glad I scored one for Remus here!

 
Reviewer: SiriusandJamesLiveOn Signed
Date: 01/23/05 Title: Chapter 17: Rule Number Three

LOVE IT!! Please update soon!!

 
Reviewer: SiriusandJamesLiveOn Signed
Date: 01/29/05 Title: Chapter 19: Crime and Punishment

I love this!! Please, please, please, update soon!!

 

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Rated: [Reviews - ]

Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: SiriusandJamesLiveOn Signed
Date: 02/05/05 Title: None

Well, I won't be adding this to my faves list. I might check back for updates though. There are quite a few mistakes though. Sorry. From what I've heard though, it's a lot better than the last version so, good job! This story has promise.

 
Reviewer: SiriusandJamesLiveOn Signed
Date: 02/05/05 Title: None

Well, I won't be adding this to my faves list. I might check back for updates though. There are quite a few mistakes though. Sorry. From what I've heard though, it's a lot better than the last version so, good job! This story has promise.

 

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Rated: [Reviews - ]

Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: SiriusandJamesLiveOn Signed
Date: 01/17/05 Title: None

Personally, though I can see many people like this fanfic, I HATE IT WITH A PASSION!! It's WAYYYYYYy to slutty, of charchter, poorly written, and just horrible. I'm sorry for sounding harsh but it's true. erikthephantom has much better stories!! I'm rating this a 1 but if I could, I would rate it a negative infinity!!

Author's Response: If you hated it so much why did you bother reading? And thank you sooo much for raising my review count! But one request; Please try to be slightly constructive in your reviews, otherwise I WILL get them deleted.

 

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Rated: [Reviews - ]

Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: SiriusandJamesLiveOn Signed
Date: 01/18/05 Title: None

I don't think that it's very good (the whole story I mean). Why? 1. It's prety racy. 2. You didn't do a very good job on how you interpreted the Marauders. 3. It's doesn't have a very good plot. So yeah, overall it's just not very good. It was ok to read to pass time but I definately won't be checking back for updates. The one that you wrote about the Marauders getting the idea to become Animagi was pretty good though. I give that one a 9. This one is a 1.

Author's Response: hiya, well thanx 4 ur opinion. BUT it is MY fic NOT URS so i can interperate the Marauders anyway i like. How can you possibly justify your statement when J.K.Rowling only wrote a small feature of them at that particular age. Therefore who says the way you interperate them is correct? You thats who. No1 elc. YOU. So if you don't mind i'd appreciate it if you could keep your negative connotations and overall slatering of my fic to yourself. I do not mind constructive criticism, but to go out of your way to totally rip my story to shreads is a bit over the top. Fair enough if you don't like it. Dont view it again. Who are you to distinguish a good plot? What is a good plot? How can you determine a "good plot" or if this is a "good plot" when the story isnt complete yet? I think i have said enough. Thankyou.

Author's Response: Actually i lied, i do have one more thing to say. You don't even have a fic, lol. That makes me laugh even more kido!!!

 
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