this is really good! I was concerned as i had come up with the title 'phases of the moon; a while ago but had done nothing with it and despite that i was concerned as to whether you would do i justice and you've done more then that! I have a picture for the title if you want it- i tend to spend a fair while in photostudio 2000m its yours if you want! Love the story so far!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I\'m sorry about taking your title. :) I\'m glad you liked the story, though, and yes, I\'d love to see the pic you made! Thanks for the offer!
wow... really good except for the slight technicality - im being very picky right here so just ignore it- but right then at that moment Remus would be rather angry- you know furious with an undying passion more like at Sirius, he joined the dark side got Lily nad James killed and then killed Peter himself. So if that was me or anyone other than Remus he wouldnt be wishing Sirius a merry christmas. Though he might if he was being sarcastic so if thats the case even though i read it as if it isn't then just ignore this whole review! But bcka to the point- i really liked it!
Keep your writing coming and i might return which for someone without the net at home is a big feat- in my opinion anyway.