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Phases of the Moon by BlackClaude
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 144]

Summary: In Remus Lupin's fifth year at Hogwarts, his devoted friends finally master the complex Animagus spell, beginning the adventures they will remember for the rest of their lives. But Remus must also face prejudice in the rising war, a test of loyalty versus love, and the danger of his dark secret being revealed.

Pet Peeve Disclaimer: Peter is not worthless, Lily does not have three friends who fall for the Marauders, and no one calls Remus "Remy."

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Violence

Word count: 39588 Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Published:
02/14/05 Updated: 04/27/07


Reviewer: Silver_Falcon Signed
Date: 04/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Reunion

this is really good! I was concerned as i had come up with the title 'phases of the moon; a while ago but had done nothing with it and despite that i was concerned as to whether you would do i justice and you've done more then that! I have a picture for the title if you want it- i tend to spend a fair while in photostudio 2000m its yours if you want! Love the story so far!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I\'m sorry about taking your title. :) I\'m glad you liked the story, though, and yes, I\'d love to see the pic you made! Thanks for the offer!

 

Summary: This story takes place on Christmas Eve at some point after the death of James and Lily. Miles apart and completely alone, Remus Lupin is homeless and Sirius Black is locked in Azkaban. Both struggle with the pain and loneliness of their current situations, reflect on the joy of the past and make Christmas wishes.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4855 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/28/06 Updated: 12/03/06


Reviewer: Silver_Falcon Signed
Date: 04/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow... really good except for the slight technicality - im being very picky right here so just ignore it- but right then at that moment Remus would be rather angry- you know furious with an undying passion more like at Sirius, he joined the dark side got Lily nad James killed and then killed Peter himself. So if that was me or anyone other than Remus he wouldnt be wishing Sirius a merry christmas. Though he might if he was being sarcastic so if thats the case even though i read it as if it isn't then just ignore this whole review! But bcka to the point- i really liked it!
Keep your writing coming and i might return which for someone without the net at home is a big feat- in my opinion anyway.
toodlepip
SF

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