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Call me Mari. :)

Need a beta? Contact me; I'll be more than happy to do it!

I have recently returned from a year-long hiatus, but I'm back! I definitely am excited at the prospect of being able to write and to read the fics I love so much. I don't think I can stay away from this site for too long; I just love to write and be able to see my works posted and being critiqued and reviewed. :)

Five of my fics are over a year old, so if you want an accurate representation of my current writing, I do not suggest basing it off of at least the first three of the following list. The oldest to newest of those five are The Secret, Blind, It Means Nothing, Draconis Viridans, and Exposure. To Be Loved in Return was written in a similar time period as that of Exposure, but was not posted until my recent return. My newest fic, written post-hiatus, is Fall For You, which is probably my favorite of them all, though it is a very close call.

Well, I hope you enjoy my fics, and please review, if you do read them. Thank you! :)
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Sewing the Seeds by Werewolf_sympathiser
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: Lily Evans finds herself entering unchartered waters when she finds herself falling for that arrogant Potter. The second one shot in the Seven Steps to Ruin series.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1891 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/18/06 Updated: 09/18/06


Reviewer: pheonixflame Signed
Date: 09/18/06 Title: Chapter 1: Sewing the Seeds

i like this story, as well as "monthly suspicions". i like how you showed that james would do anything to get lily, like when she lowers his arm so he won't hex snape. and then, LILY asks james out, nice twist. keep writing, it's great! :]

 
Reviewer: pheonixflame Signed
Date: 09/18/06 Title: Chapter 1: Sewing the Seeds

i like this story, as well as "monthly suspicions". i like how you showed that james would do anything to get lily, like when she lowers his arm so he won't hex snape. and then, LILY asks james out, nice twist. keep writing, it's great! :]

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for your feedback :) I didn\'t even know this was up- didn\'t get an acceptance email lol I\'m glad you liked it and I hope you\'ll read the next one when I post it!

 

The Girl's Revenge by x_lily_evans_x
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 19]

Summary: A COMPANION TO 5369 TIMES... AND COUNTING.
In James's and Lily's third year, James's and Sirius's plan to throw a sparkler into Snape's cauldron goes wrong when Slughorn comes by, delaying their plan and causing the sparkler to become dangerously shorter. In desperation, Sirius throws it into a certain redhead's cauldron. When the redhead thinks that it's James, she comes after him in fury.
James had better watch his back... because she plays by the rules.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2254 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/27/06 Updated: 10/02/06


Reviewer: pheonixflame Signed
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot fic

Cute. =]

Author's Response: glad you thought so!

 

Nuttier Than A Fruitcake by Secret Lily
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 227]

Summary: Book Two in the 'Lily' series, Nuttier Than A Fruitcake, portrays Lily's fifth year at Hogwarts, a time filled with hormones, confusion, and of course, run ins with the ever obnoxious, James Potter.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 18424 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
10/01/06 Updated: 07/22/07


Reviewer: pheonixflame Signed
Date: 10/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: Return To Sanctity

Once again, very nice!
I'm going to enjoy reading this fic. =]
Hope the moderators approve your next chappie soon!

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: pheonixflame Signed
Date: 10/09/06 Title: None

Ooh nice story!
I like the prank, and how Dumbledore just waves it away, and thinking it's funny. =]
I really like it, update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you\'re enjoying it :) . I\'ll get the next chapter up soon!

 

The Auction by KASK
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 89]

Summary: Every Christmas Eve there is a dinner for the most prominent wizards, where dancing partners are auctioned off. Not only is Lily Evans forced into going to this auction, but because of a practical joke, she’s up for auction! But, thanks to a black-haired boy, the night may not be so bad…

This will be three chapters

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 6341 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/08/06 Updated: 12/03/06


Reviewer: pheonixflame Signed
Date: 12/26/06 Title: Chapter 3: Lily's Savior

Ohhh how sweet! I was smiling all throughout.

This is going to go on my faves for sure! :]

 

An Unclear Past by Winged Artemis
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 52]

Summary: It's years after the trio is out of Hogwarts, Harry's found all of the Horcruxes, Voldemort's dying slowly and the Death Eaters are receding. All of the trio are married, and life is swell. But with one last flourish, Voldemort attacks Harry and Ron. The two defeat Voldemort, but lose their memories of their past since their first year, along with You-Know-Who, leaving Hermione, Ginny, the Weasleys and Harry and Ron's kids help nurse them back to sanity.


Author's Note: The Violence is mild in the first and fourth chapter, there is a bit, so I added a Violence warning. It's not graphic, though.

Currently on hiatus. See profile for more information.



Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Violence

Word count: 7091 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
10/18/06 Updated: 12/08/06


Reviewer: pheonixflame Signed
Date: 10/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Inside St. Mungo's

Oooh so far, it's great!
It's quite vague... who's the guy? Harry possibly?
Can't wait for more!! =]

Author's Response: thanks so much! uhm, it\'s actually ron, but it would apply to harry, too. chapter one is in the queue, so many questions will be answered then. :)

 
Reviewer: pheonixflame Signed
Date: 10/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Inside St. Mungo's

Oooh so far, it's great!
It's quite vague... who's the guy? Harry possibly?
Can't wait for more!! =]

Author's Response: double post!

 

The First Kiss by LadyLuna
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 38]

Summary: James and Lily's first kiss. And the next one, and the one after that. Why did Lily give in? Did James start it? What happened?!

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 1513 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/23/06 Updated: 10/25/06


Reviewer: pheonixflame Signed
Date: 10/25/06 Title: Chapter 1: The First Kiss

Ohh how sweet! *tear*

Author's Response: Yay! You *teared* at it! This doth maketh the authoress happy.

 

Meet the - Children? by Winged Artemis
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 244]

Summary: Lily Evans is a cheeky, brainy, hopeless romantic seventeen-year-old Head Girl with a sour temper. James Potter is an arrogant, hilarious, prank-pulling seventeen-year-old Head Boy with an immature head on his shoulders. Lily loathes James and James loves Lily. Blahblahblah.

However, when a mysterious locket and a very wacked Headmaster inform the two of them that their son is in grave danger, James, Lily, and of course, Sirius, are magically transported to the future to meet James and Lily's son and the state that the magical world is in.

A twist of mystery, fun, romance and some Sirius humor! And with a wee bit of J/L, H/G, and R/Hr!

WARNING: Tree climbing Dumbledores, valuable pieces of jewelry, and an ecess of sugar are contained inside - oh, and HBP is disregarded.

See profile for update information.

Categories: Mystery Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 11269 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
11/15/06 Updated: 09/08/07


Reviewer: pheonixflame Signed
Date: 12/15/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two - To the Future

Ooh, I really like this story!

Keep up the good work.

And thanks for beta-ing my story. Sorry I haven't written in a bit over a month; I've been busy, but I'll try to write more soon! :]

Author's Response: Thanks for your review, and chapter three is in the queue!!

 
Reviewer: pheonixflame Signed
Date: 12/15/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two - To the Future

Ooh, I really like this story!

Keep up the good work.

And thanks for beta-ing my story. Sorry I haven't written in a bit over a month; I've been busy, but I'll try to write more soon! :]

Author's Response: Double post! Thanks again!

 

Promises, Principles, and Socks by Gmariam
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 37]

Summary: James Potter has resolved to get over Lily Evans and move on with life during his seventh year at Hogwarts. An incident after Potions changes all that when their verbal spat in the corridor turns into something more. As Lily struggles with her principles, James tries to win her over once and for all.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4843 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/17/06 Updated: 11/23/06


Reviewer: pheonixflame Signed
Date: 12/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Adorable.

It was all smiles and a warm heart for me. :]

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you liked it! What a lovely response, thank you very much for reading this story and for leaving such a nice review!! ~Gina :)

 

Slipping Through My Fingers by HPwizzzard
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: Katherine Granger was an ordinary dentist. Her daughter Hermione was an extraordinary witch. Is it any wonder they never quite connected? One-shot songfic to "Slipping Through My Fingers" from the musical "Mamma Mia!"

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1433 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/27/06 Updated: 12/01/06


Reviewer: pheonixflame Signed
Date: 12/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Woes of Katherine Granger

Oi, how depressing!

But, overall, I like this story and how easily it jumps from year to year of Hermione's life. I also like how you explained Katherine's feelings towards her daughter. :]

Author's Response: Thanks! And I was worried the transitions were choppy.... ;D

Author's Response: Thanks! And I was worried the transitions were choppy.... ;D

 

Summary: "Some mistakes are too much fun to make just once."

After Lily Evans, Head Girl of Hogwarts, starts a food-fight with James Potter, Head Boy of Hogwarts, they are both given detention for the rest of the year, and are assigned a 'detention journal', which the staff say will help to settle their 'overwhelming and disturbing differences'. We have come across Lily's journal; her take on why the whole affair ever started, her intriguing relationship with one ‘supreme git of the galaxy’, the extents to which she will go for revenge and where it will lead her...


"And if for some unknown reason you come across this, Potter, and the paragraph above does not manage to penetrate your unusually thick head and convince you of my stupendous dislike of you, I hope the following sentence helps: I HATE YOU!"

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations

Word count: 46326 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Published:
11/29/06 Updated: 09/18/11


Reviewer: pheonixflame Signed
Date: 01/07/07 Title: Chapter 2: Third detention...and my growing list of deranged people

I want more! :]

This is a very interesting plot you have here. I like the whole detention idea, and also how it's a diary, but not. You took a whole new spin on this!

This is the second chapter... so how come it says "Third detention.." ? *shrugs*

Anyways, hope to read more soon!

Author's Response: It\'s the third detention because I didn\'t write about the second. Lily spent that detention \'writing down all the names she thought Potter deserved\'. Lol, thanks so much for the review and I hope you\'ll be reading more soon too!

 

Conversation With An Angel by KASK
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 38]

Summary: James needs a miracle to get Lily to give him a chance. Luckily, Christmas is the time of miracles. From a simple conversation with a mysterious woman in Hogsmeade, James finds the courage to tell Lily how he feels.

Winner of the the Winter Tales challenge 'A Winter Miracle'.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2073 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/30/06 Updated: 12/07/06


Reviewer: pheonixflame Signed
Date: 01/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Conversation With An Angel

This is perhaps the sweetest James/Lily story I have ever read. It's also the most believable. :]

I love how the angel is a symbol, and that she appears to James when he needs the advice the most.

I found the characters to be very in character, and in their proper age. Good job!



Author's Response: Thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you!

 

Trick or Treat by Hallie Black
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 42]

Summary: It’s the Marauders’ first Halloween outside of school, and, persuaded by Lily’s assurances that it will be great fun, they agree to spend it ‘the Muggle Way’. But how can anything go as planned when you’re with Sirius Black and James Potter?



Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4782 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/01/06 Updated: 12/07/06


Reviewer: pheonixflame Signed
Date: 12/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: one shot

Love it. I'm usually tough to make laugh in fanfics, but this had me in a cheery mood, laughing to myself at the print. :D

I loved it, and also am a fan of another story of yours "First" so when I saw your name next to a title of a humor fic, I knew it was gonna be good! :]

 

How Predictable! by HPwizzzard
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 126]

Summary: The Marauders are having their first Divination lesson, and they quickly realize what a waste of time it is. In order to liven things up, Siriusmakes a few predictions without the aid of tea leaves. Obviously, he's no Seer, because there's no way James and Lily will ever get married, Peter will become an evil minion, or Remus will fall for Sirius' baby cousin... right?

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1721 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/11/06 Updated: 12/13/06


Reviewer: pheonixflame Signed
Date: 12/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: How Predictable!

Oh wow.

What a great story :]

I particularly liked the ending. I also like your writing style. It's very clear and easy to understand, yet is pronounced and well developed.

I love the way you portrayed Sirius, and made his predictions seem like fun and random guesses.

And lastly, I like how you ended it on a note from Remus that leaves people thinking about the boys' futures. You didn't just go like "Remus said [what he said] and then they went to the Great Hall and ate and blahblahblah" you know?

Keep writing, I love it :]

Author's Response: Thank you! I try. Your\'e another one for the favorite reviewers list. And of course I\'ll go on writing, I have almost no other purpose in life ;D

 

Sixth Sense by HPwizzzard
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 16]

Summary: Dumbledore has just died, and a relationship (or lack thereof) between two members of the Order of the Phoenix has been revealed. Hermione Granger decides something has to be done. Can she help bring a little more love to the world?

Categories: Remus/Tonks Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1577 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/18/06 Updated: 12/24/06


Reviewer: pheonixflame Signed
Date: 12/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Closed Book

Bravo for this touching story! :]

The format is a little hard to read, as it doesn't have any line breaks, so you might want to fix that.

But I really liked this story. Is it a one-shot or are you going to update? I think that either one would actually be fine, seeing as how this ended very nicely.

I like how you portrayed Remus here. It showed the quiet side of him that we all know so well, yet it seemed like a new side altogether, for some reason.

And lastly, I liked how you hid this story into HBP; it fits rather well, I think.

Keep writing! :]

Author's Response: Thank you! It\'s a one-shot, sorry. I shuld be used to being pestered for sequels though. I was in fact trying to give it a missing moment feel, you know, canon-y. It\'s Obnoxious!Cupid!Hermione, but more, well, human.

 

A True Gryffindor? by Biscuits
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: How would you react if your friends found out your deepest secret, a secret that, if revealed, you lead to you being outcast from wizarding society? When Remus Lupin's fellow Maruaders discover his lycanthropy, how can he cope?

References to suicide, hence the warning.


Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Suicide

Word count: 1266 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/20/06 Updated: 12/26/06


Reviewer: pheonixflame Signed
Date: 12/30/06 Title: Chapter 1: A True Gryffindor?

Very nice. :]

Maybe, he thought, it wouldn’t be as bad as he thought. If it was, he could kill himself later;

I really like this line. It shows Remus' reasoning, and it keeps him in character by thinking it out like that.

Not looking back, Remus entered the castle again, leaving the cold tower top, leaving the idea of death behind him.


I also like this line as an ending, especially that you said "Not looking back(...)" because we all know that the Marauders accept Remus for who he is, so there wouldn't really be a reason for him to think about suicide once more.

He had had to mature quicker than others, learn to cope with adult difficulties.

So true. Remus did have to mature faster and learn to cope. He knew the harsh realities of life and the cruelties of people.

I really liked this story; I hope to see more from you soon, so keep writing!

Author's Response: The ending took ages to get right, I was never really sure how I would resolve the issue. In the end, his courage came through so he could face his problems. And hopefully he never had a reason to think about it again. Thanks for the review, I\'m glad you liked the story.

 

Summary: A parody, obviously, on "Oh Little Town of Bethlehem," by wicked angel of Ravenclaw. Enjoy and a very happy Holiday to all of you!!

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 293 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/21/06 Updated: 12/22/06


Reviewer: pheonixflame Signed
Date: 01/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Oh Little Town of Godric's Hollow

Oh gosh, very, very nice. You have a way with words! :]

You won that challenge well, and you sure did deserve it!

Author's Response: thank you so much! still can\'t believe this little story won, but i\'m glad! thanks for reviewing.

 
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