im 15 yrs old
i like to run
i enjoy conversing with people that have intellectual thoughts about the universe. and/or if you amuse me.
oh and don't be offended if i give you an unsatisfactory review. it's really nothing personal; i'm just sort of brutally honest like that.
guess thats it for now.
Viva a la Harry Potter!
hehe ive never watched sliding doors before but it sounds good.
this is a great story but i was a bit confused at times with your writing, wat with the "cockrels" thing i still have no idea what that passage meant.
okay im also a little confused with the snape dressing thing, was time altered because of him wearing the pants instead of going out in just boxers, and b/c of him not wearing socks or just one? which one? perhaps you should have just said somewhere at the end notes thing, "time was altered because of his dressing options" instead of "time was altered because of the pants" leaving the shoes/socks out, or do the non-socks have any signifigance at all?
i still lurved this story, excellent plotline...lots of potential if you were more clear on somethings, maybe you ought to edit it a bit... hmmm
Author's Response: Time was altered because of his underpants.
hahahaaha this one is sooooooooooooo funnnyyyyy haaaa
i choffed inwardly so much at the snape thing "his frustration at having his undergarments continually falling down", also at "Lily and James exchanged a look of horror and both tried to back away as tactfully as possible, trying very hard not to think about the horrors concealed within Dumbledore’s voluminous robes"
But i can't resist telling you...i really don't thing the "Wand That Was Good For Charms" thing should have been capitalized as it is foreign and distracting.
but besides that it was soooooooo funnyy i shall read all of the further stories of this series...
Author's Response: Foreign? What???
That was deff awesome! It was almost as if JKR wrote it herself, which is very rare i find...
haha for a moment in the bathroom i thought harry was going to suggest he practice withhh him!! lol
Once upon a time in the far, far, away land of California, Miranda Aramintha Rowena Ysabella Slyvia Ursula Evangelista- Mary Sue, for short- accepted an invitation to Hogwarts. As she searches for her one true love, will her soul mate be Draco? Harry? Snape? Colin? Fred and George? or...gasp...Voldemort?
Nominated for a Quicksilver Quill for Best Humour Fiction.
er, you do know orlando has brown eyes, not blue?
but anyway, this story was sooooo funnyyy especially the witch/bitch thing and like the absurdity she gets to test each of the houses out. the only thing i can voice critism on is how hagrid stammers in her beauty. i dont care how mature she seems, hagrid would never be all pervish towards a student...but anyway, it was really sunny and ill read what ever more sequels of this you write! :)
Author's Response: Orlando also has curly brown hair, lol. This wasn\'t the Orlando, just a Legolas version of him, who lives in another dimension of the Potterverse with Mary Sue. (I pity him) :D One of the Mary Sue rules (that are more like guidelines, really) is canon males must fall at her feet, even if they act OOC to do it. He doesn\'t drool over the Marauder Era Hippie Chick Sue, though, so I hope you enjoy that one even more! Thank you so much for reading! ^_^
that was so sad...*sobs*
uhhh..wow...that just wasted twenty minutes of my life...it was rambling, nothing happened.
actually. its pretty...good. (okok! i admit it, i skipped a lot because it got a bit confusing) although i still can't get used to sirius being harry's lover..urgh..
Author's Response: *sporfle* Well, it would look ramblish if you skipped parts...and Sirius didn\'t actually do the deed, so no need to squick over it... ;)
haha cute story
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!
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it was kinda weird how he could have whispered in her ear but then gone? but besides that great chapter
Author's Response: he is a creepy kind of guy...
hahaha. nell is such a spaz.
Author's Response: not supposed to be funny...
damn these one-word reviews, but it doesnt need anymore:p
Author's Response: if you say so... thanks for the review, even if it is only one word long
whoa this is deff the best-written story ive ever read on fanfic, and the storys rly interesting as well. CAPTIVATING:]
now wheres my second chapter, eh????
Author's Response: \"whoa this is deff the best-written story ive ever read on fanfic\" Holy Moly. That\'s big. I\'m like speechless! The second chapter is being reworked to fit more of Nell\'s thoughts in. Thank you so much for the review. You\'ve made my night.
AHhhh no fair!! Post it post it post it
Author's Response: I'll submit it tomorrow morning. I've had a rough night. Thanks for reading.
ooh snapples now theres a mystery on who this boy who i thought was tom riddle is....hmmmm...
well then i am guessing either snape or sirius...but as i believe snape was poor, he wouldn't be living in a huge mansion so...sirius you bastad!
Author's Response: *smirk* That\'s all I have to say. Don\'t you wish you had that second chapter?
Oohhh I want to know what happens!!You wrote this beautifully, as usual. Plz hurry with the next chapterr
Author's Response: I will write as quickly as possible :)
lol the last line saved the ending i think bc i was sooo sad!!
you HAVE to make a follow up sequel! When school is finished, and then remus and nell meet once again...
Author's Response: I am going to make a sequel :P Thanks for reading and thanks for the review!
yayy! i lurrve the new addition.
i want to see the next onnnneeeee:D
Author's Response: I\'m working on it, dear. Thanks for the review.
your style of writing annoys me very much, but i nonetheless enjoyed this story. good job.