Penname: MJ_Padfoot [Contact]
Real name: Mary Jane . . . but let's just keep it to MJ.
Member Since: 08/26/06
Beta-reader: No
Status: Member

Hey! Welcome to my bio's not all that exciting but it works. :) Anyway, I've been on MFF for awhile and I took a very long break from writing for MFF. So, as for now, I'm back and I hope that you will enjoy my stories! ~MJ



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Challenge 4 - The Twelve Days of Christmas submitted by MagicalMaddie331 of Hufflepuff My version of "The Twelve Days of Christmas" HP style!

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1194 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
12/21/05 Updated: 12/21/05

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot Signed
Date: 02/24/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Twelve Days of Christmas

Hahahah! I love that! This made my day brighter! Thank you so much! MJ

Author's Response: Hooray =] Thanks for the review.


Draco's Roses by Foxy Wolf
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 11]

Summary: Hermione never imagined that she would develop feelings for Draco Malfoy. She longs for him even though she knows she shouldn’t. Her heart tells her to act on her feelings and she knows that they’ll be perfect together despite what other people might think. But what happens when things doesn’t turn out as you thought. Draco receives a bouquet and a note with Hermione’s deepest thoughts.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 179 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
01/28/06 Updated: 01/28/06

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot Signed
Date: 12/13/06 Title: Chapter 1: Draco's Roses

I LOVE it! Just love it!

Author's Response: I\'m glad :-)


Bicycle Built for Two by grape_2010
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 39]

Summary: Lily is having some majorly confusing thoughts about what she feels for James Potter. One morning though, that's all cleared up in a jiffy.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1498 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
01/29/06 Updated: 02/10/06

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot Signed
Date: 12/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: Bicycle Built for Two

I LOVE this! Just amazing! I really like how you write Lily and James. It's just like them.


Worth Everything I Had by Auror81692
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 69]

Summary: I've been wondering for a while now about the perfume Ron gave Hermione in Ootp. this is my version of how, and why, he got it.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 6236 Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
02/01/06 Updated: 05/07/06

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot Signed
Date: 09/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: Possession, Plans, and Private Talk

It's a little on the fluffy side, but I still like it! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: i <3 fluff

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot Signed
Date: 09/19/06 Title: Chapter 2: Witches' Way

Awwww!!!! Cute, and sweet! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: yay i <3 reviews!

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot Signed
Date: 09/19/06 Title: Chapter 3: Unusual

Kind of a cliffy, this ending is! I really like it! Great job!

Author's Response: i <3 cliffy

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot Signed
Date: 09/19/06 Title: Chapter 4: Finally!

I love this story!!!!!!!!!!! I love this chapter! GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!! Really cute and sweet! I LOVE it!

Author's Response: I <3 my new friend MJ_Padfoot!


A Death Eater’s Revenge by Phenioxsong22
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 59]

Summary: Harry has finally defeated Voldemort and started a family. Then suddenly, an old enemy reappears putting the life of the Potters in danger. When drastic events take place, Harry must find a way to rise up to the challenge once again. Harry must use all of his skill, determination, and most importantly, his love to defeat one of his long time enemies once and for all. But with time against him will Harry be able to save his family?

This story is being revised! Please see note on my Author's page for more information.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 21903 Chapters: 7 Completed: No
02/17/06 Updated: 11/25/06

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot Signed
Date: 11/25/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Closed Door

(I hate getting bribed.) I really like this. Great begining to a story. Good job! I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love reviews too much!!! :)

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot Signed
Date: 11/25/06 Title: Chapter 2: Transportation Failure

Girl power rocks! Go Ginny!

Ahhhh!!!! Scary ending!

I've read this before! Are you a member of SIEY? I swear, I read this on that site! Holy cow!

Author's Response: I\'m not a member nor have I been on that site...What is it?? I hope no one is copying my work!!!! Yes, Ginny is a willful girl full of spirit...She\'s a favorite of mine!

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot Signed
Date: 11/25/06 Title: Chapter 3: The Ingredients of the Curse

Wow! Great story! Can't wait to read more.
Way on my favorites!

Author's Response: YEAH!!! I LOVE reviews like this. I\'m a favorite? My life is

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot Signed
Date: 12/02/06 Title: Chapter 2: Transportation Failure

No, I was wrong. It's not on siye. Siey is a Harry and Ginny fan fiction site:

Good site for more fan fiction! I really like this story. I think I read it once and forgot to finish it. So, sorry for the worries. *goes off and finishes reading the fiction*

Author's Response: You\'re fine! I\'ll have to check that site out! Thanks for all of the reviews! I love them!


Ditto by Auror81692
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 79]

Summary: After a horrifying nightmare, Hermione goes to the Astronomy Tower to clear her head. When someone else unexpectedly turns up, will hidden feelings finally come out into the open?
(Just a one-shot idea I came up with after dreaming about it...Yes, I am obsessed.)
(*Something, dunno what, won't let me respond to reivews, so I'm not ignoring you people! If a mod sees this please fix it so i can reply to my beloved readers!!!!!!!!!!!

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2717 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
02/17/06 Updated: 02/17/06

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot Signed
Date: 09/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: Ditto

Wow! That's a great fic! Really creepy at the begining of the story! Good job! =)

Author's Response: my dreams scare me sometimes...especially when orlando bloom inst in them to protect me


Mummy Loves You by expecto_patronum_this
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 45]

Summary: The night of Lily and James's death. As Lily watches the Dark Lord destroy everything in her life she has ever cared for, she realizes that she must explain to Harry why she can't be there for him forever, and make sure he knows that "Mummy loves you..."

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2810 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
02/28/06 Updated: 02/28/06

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot Signed
Date: 03/26/08 Title: Chapter 1: Mummy Loves You

This is the best fanfic I've ever, ever have read. I've reviewed over 300 stories and this one has got to be the best one I've read. "Remember, Harry, Mummy loves you," *tear* ~MJ


As the Ink Dries by SimplyMe
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 265]

Summary: Hermione died in the Horcruxes crusade. One year later, Voldemort was finally destroyed and Ron returned home, exhausted. His room was exactly the same as he left it. But awaiting him on his desk was a small pile of letters with a short note on top.

Mr. Weasley, we found those letters addressed to you in Hermione’s belongings. It was only fair they were returned to you. Signed, Mr. and Mrs. Granger.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 19273 Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes
03/01/06 Updated: 09/27/06

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot Signed
Date: 09/08/06 Title: As the Ink Dries

*SIts and stares stupidly at computer, waiting for the story. Gets up and pops popcorn.* "Do you want some?" She asks. Still staring stupidly at computer waiting for the mods.
It's going to be here any min.
do NOT give up HOPE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: pop corn is my favourite comfort food! You read my mind! I was planning on eating some pop corn with a huge glass of chocolate milk when this chapter is finally up. I know it\'s an unusual combination but the sweet balances the salty of the pop corn. So, yes, please, I\'ll have some pop corn! yummy!

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot Signed
Date: 09/28/06 Title: Chapter 6: P.S.

That was so powerful. My eyes are filling up with tears! I'm so sad. Amazing chapter! I love it! I'm so glad how this turned out! Good job! How many more chapters?

Author's Response: This was the last one, so no more chapters... thank you for the very nice review! I might write an epilogue or a short complementary story in some time but that remains to be decided. I\'m really glad you liked the story, though!

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot Signed
Date: 12/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: Home

Are you going to be writing anymore stories? I hope so, cause I love your two stories that are up.

Author's Response: A new one-shot is currently in the hands of my beta. It\'s quite different from this one and I\'m still a little confuse. I won\'t elaborate here. So, unless there\'s a mojor problem, I should submit it to the queue relatively soon. Hope you\'ll read it (and like it too!).

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot Signed
Date: 03/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Home

I was re-reading this fiction for the 100th time or so and I still am a HUGE fan of it. I remember when the first few chapters where still being posted and I was reviewing (with a different pen name/user name or A.K.A.: Hermionetonks), I just couldn't wait for the updates. But now it's over and I'm so sad. So I had to write my own Hr/R fiction and I did! All thanks to you! Thanks for writing this fiction and for my first Hr/R fiction! ~MJ

Author's Response: I don\'t know if you realize it but this is one of the very nicest thing you could tell me. The fact that you think that this story is worth reading twice (or more!) is such a nice thing to hear, because sometime you read a story and you think \'this is good\' and you kind of just forget about it and never go back... So, thank you so so so much. *gives you a bone crushing hug* And I\'ll be sure to check your story once I get some free time. Thanks again!

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot Signed
Date: 08/27/06 Title: Chapter 5: It's Time

{my old user was Hermionetonks and _Just_Me_ I put the wrong email and lost my password.}
This chapter is very sentimental. I could really understand what Ron was going through and it wasn't corny at all. Not once! I really love this story and I can't WAIT to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Glad to hear you\'re back. You\'ve gone from hermione to padfoot, he?! *smiles* I wonder why... Thanks for the great review. I\'m still working on last chapter and I will make my self-imposed deadline!

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot Signed
Date: 09/14/06 Title: Chapter 5: It's Time

'Ello again! =)
Okay, well I have just a couple of suggestions.
1. Maybe try revising somethings that [possibly] don't flow with the story. [no idea if that's even on the right track..but..]

2. Get a beta-reader. I would suggest, Rainbow. GREAT beta. [Just happens to be mine.] She gives great suggestions when one writter is having a "brain fart" as I like to call them. LOL! =)

3. Save chapter six then open up a new page and try re-typing it. Might come up with some creative and new ideas! Give it a try! =+)

4. Don't give up and read Harry Potter for help! =)

Good luck and enjoy!

Author's Response: you managed to make me smile, that\'s already something today. I\'ve done about four rewrites of this chapter in the past 3 months so my guess is that... I don\'t know, maybe the idea just isn\'t that good. I\'m currently in the process of finding a new beta. the one I had before was great but he hasn\'t shown sign of life since he worked on chapter four. It is hard to find a good beta, and one who wants to work with a work in progress. I\'ll keep searching anyway. I\'ll work on it this weekend and see what I can come up with. Thanks for the tips!

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot Signed
Date: 09/11/06 Title: As the Ink Dries

This is something that should cheer you up:
1. When in doubt read Harry Potter Books
2. When bored to death read Harry Potter Books
3. When your about to pull your hair out from your Harry Potter fan fiction...Read Harry Potter books
4. When School has got the pitts in homework and stuff....Read Harry Potter
5. When you don't want to write...Read Harry Potter

Anyways...Don't you DARE give up! The next chapter WILL get accepeted by the MODS sooner or later. I know excatly how it feels. It took me forever to get my stories up too. Don't give up! DO NOT GIVE UP!!! Don't give up and Read The Harry Potter Books! =)
Good Luck and have a *\ WAND-erful /* day!

Author's Response: You made me laugh! Guess I\'ll go and read some HP book then. which one? *stares at the books lined up on the shelves* too hard! really don\'t know. I\'ll go swim a bit before, maybe it\'ll help me decide. thanks for you encouragements. I won\'t give up.

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