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Sliding Drawers by Loup_garou
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 48]

Summary: It is argued that the most minuscule of occurrences can shape the course of history irrevocably. Butterflies flapping their wings overzealously, missing a train/forcing open the sliding doors of a train and catching it/getting your finger stuck in the sliding doors of a train as you attempt to force them open and having to run alongside it for the duration of the journey as an alternative to having it ripped off…and other such minutiae. Thus it was that, on a cold, wet night seventeen years ago, in a room above the bar at the Hog’s Head Inn, that Severus Snape made his (skid)mark. The History of the Potterverse is now at stake, and it remains for Lily Potter (with a little help from Lupin) to sort it all out. BE YE WARNED - this story contains pants. Underpants. (This story is intended as a bit of light-hearted fun and should be read as such, even if it is rather OOC!) Final chapter is up! Gather round, my children, and witness the astonishing finale!

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 6543 Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/06/06 Updated: 08/27/06


Reviewer: Jenn22291 Signed
Date: 08/30/06 Title: Chapter 1: Sliding Drawers

Heyyyyyyy! Nice story, you know, but, no offence, really, it's just kind of like a cool type of story without anything to do with Starwars or fishing really. Next time, Maybe? lol.

Author's Response: I\'ll bear that in mind...

 

Ocean Soul by AstroFire
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 27]

Summary: They say no one is born being evil. Is Tom Riddle an exception? A one-shot about the night a boy lost his innocence; the night everything changed for everyone. A story about how a boy turned into man... HBP spoilers. Please review. I'm very, very sorry for the weird problem with the format. It is now fixed, but I'm sorry if you had to read it without any spaces D:

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1940 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/17/06 Updated: 05/29/06


Reviewer: Jenn22291 Signed
Date: 09/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: Ocean Soul

Well done. Very emotional. It all most made me cry. I loved it. I have always believed that there had to be some good in Tom. I think the way you portrayed him was very realistic. I loved how you put so much detail into your descriptions. I can see why you like this story so much. Well done!

-Jenn

Author's Response: Ah, thank you very, very much! It\'s great to know that you enjoyed it so much :) Well, you obviously know that I believe that, too ;) This story is special for me. I do hope that the next things I write will outdo this one though; it\'ll let me know I\'ve improved. Thanks for reviewing :D

 

A Perfect Christmas by Gmariam
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 50]

Summary: Harry is once again enjoying Christmas at the Burrow, as he takes a short break from his hunt for the Horcruxes to spend time with family and friends. When Harry and Ron Apparate to Diagon Alley to do some shopping, they are surprised to learn from Fred and George that Victor Krum has begun working at the Ministry of Magic. Returning to the Burrow, Ron is upset to learn Hermione had lunch with Victor, and he questions his relationship with her. Ginny helps Ron understand and plan his next move. But when Hermione arrives, they fight once more over the Bulgarian Quidditch player. Will Ron be able to put aside his feelings of jealousy and insecurity and finally tell Hermione how he feels?

This is a rather long, very fluffy one-shot for Ron and Hermione and their perfect Christmas.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 6486 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/27/06 Updated: 07/01/06


Reviewer: Jenn22291 Signed
Date: 09/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Perfect Christmas

Aww, That was so cute! I loved it! Nice job!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I\'m so glad you liked it! Thanks for taking time to leave a review!! ~Gina :)

 

Starlight Dreams by AstroFire
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 25]

Summary: Nothing is as fragile or as powerful as a dream… That is what Harry, Ron, Hermione, and Ginny will realize as they go through their years at school. As if life wasn't enough to deal with, the discovery of some mysterious, old books will send fear and shock through the Order of the Phoenix.

Alliances will be disbanded, and new enemies will step up. With the appearance of a new Defence Against the Dark Arts professor, whose past rivals with Snape’s, they will have to learn the meaning of trust... before time runs out.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 3645 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
07/19/06 Updated: 08/31/06


Reviewer: Jenn22291 Signed
Date: 09/15/06 Title: Chapter 2: Letters and Dreams

I absolutly loved the ending! Very suspensful. Hermione seems a bit OOC though, and it's a tad bit cliché for her to be so emotional over Ron. Overall though, great chapter! I can't wait to read more. :)

Author's Response: I was hoping the ending would grab the readers\' attention :D There\'ll be more about that in the next chapter... OOC? Hmpff... that\'s what I was afraid of. Yet, I can\'t say I totally agree with you. I\'ve always been reticent of that scene, but somehow, I do imagine Hermione feeling that for Ron, although only, and I underline \'only\', when she is alone. Why? Because she hasn\'t come to terms with those feelings yet. However, I\'ll take your opinion into account for future chapters! I rewrote the third chapter for the same reason, although that was some time ago :) Thank you for reviewing, and hopefully, you\'ll be seeing next chapter really soon!

 
Reviewer: Jenn22291 Signed
Date: 09/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: Old Wounds, New Beginnings

Hey! Nice job so far, aside from a few minor grammar mistakes and a non-British spelling (it's "realised" not "realized.). I liked your descriptions and the overall mood of the chapter. Well, on to the next! (By the way, strange review Zacko.)

Author's Response: Hi, Jenn :D I\'m quite glad to see you here ;) Oh, yes. I\'m always lame when it comes to \'\'s\'\' and \'\'z\'\' for british spelling :/ I hope you enjoyed it! (and yes, it is a strange review, heh)

 
Reviewer: Jenn22291 Signed
Date: 09/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: Old Wounds, New Beginnings

Hey! Nice job so far, aside from a few minor grammar mistakes and a non-British spelling (it's "realised" not "realized.). I liked your descriptions and the overall mood of the chapter. Well, on to the next! (By the way, strange review Zacko.)

Author's Response: Hi, Jenn :D I\'m quite glad to see you here ;) Oh, yes. I\'m always lame when it comes to \'\'s\'\' and \'\'z\'\' for british spelling :/ I hope you enjoyed it! (and yes, it is a strange review, heh)

 

A Marriage of Convenience by Madame Marauder
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 15]

Summary: “Oh, Harry,” she whispered to the empty room. “If only you were still alive. Then, maybe, it would be the day before our wedding. Maybe I wouldn’t be marrying Draco.”







Ginny Weasley volunteered to spy on the Malfoy family. But now, she'll need to become one of them to be successful. In twenty-four hours, she's going to marry Draco Malfoy.... And looe her freedom forever.











Written by Madame Marauder of Gryffindor for the Summer Weddings Challenge.

Categories: Draco/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 1017 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
08/09/06 Updated: 08/10/06


Reviewer: Jenn22291 Signed
Date: 08/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prolouge: Reflections

Very interesting. I never would have thought that Ginny would marry Draco under any circumstances, but you have managed to make it believable. Great job. Can't wait to read more.

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Jenn22291 Signed
Date: 11/01/06 Title: None

Hey Phil, it's Jenn :). I just read chapter one again and I still like it just as much as when I beta-ed for it. I'm working on chapter 4, and I can't wait to see chapter 3 up!

-Jenn

 

After the War by honeydukes_10
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 22]

Summary: Harry has just gotten home, to the Burrow, and many surprises are in store for him. What has happened to Ron? How will he react to the changes? Why is he getting a letter from the Ministry? Does he have to leave again? All these questions and more are answered in this story of love, hate, and secrets.



Chapter 2: Surprises Now Up! Please, guys, read and review! I would love to hear what you think about the story!

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 3899 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
10/30/06 Updated: 05/20/07


Reviewer: Jenn22291 Signed
Date: 11/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1:Welcome Home, Harry

*squee* Hey Andrea! I have to say that I'm as excited as you are about your story being validated. I disagree with one of the previous reviewers, I don't think it started out dully. I like the improvement that you made to Mrs. Weasley and Harry's conversation that we talked about. You did a great job. I really like this story, and I can't wait to see the next chapter! *adds to favorites* :)

-Jenn

Author's Response: Thanks Jenn! Thanks so much for reviewing! This all would not be here if it weren\'t for you. You really are the best. Thanks again for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Jenn22291 Signed
Date: 11/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1:Welcome Home, Harry

lol, The Mrs. Weasley thing was my fault. I told her that it might be slightly OOC for Mrs. Weasley to act that way. After all, Harry is like a son to her too, right? Sorry.

Author's Response: Don\'t worry, I think you made it better. I do think that the way I had it was slightly OOC, but I do think that I should have kept it in there, just cleared it up some or something.

 

To Be Or Nott To Be by Schmerg_The_Impaler
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 57]

Summary: Theodore Nott has never had much respect for anyone but himself. But after being summoned by Lord Voldemort to join the Death Eaters, his world turns upside down, and he finds himself questioning everything, including his own values and beliefs. Darkish, but with surprisingly light and fluffy bits, kind of like my Dad's pancakes or a truly hideous dress that my Mum once bought for me.

Written by Schmerg_The_Impaler from Hufflepuff House for the Gauntlet's 3rd run. Whoot!

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 6599 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/13/06 Updated: 11/16/06


Reviewer: Jenn22291 Signed
Date: 11/17/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Adventures of a Self-Centred Cynic

Wow, this story was really good. In fact, it deserves to place! I love your writing style, it's so witty and clever! I really liked the part when Nott comments on Voldemort's poetry, and the Switzerland part! It's cool watching Theo's personality change, and I really liked November. Very, very well done!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I worried that integrating humour into a darkish story might be a problem, but apparently, people like it. I\'m glad you liked November, too, since she\'s loosely based on me (although you don\'t see as much of her quirky side in this story, since she\'s basically being strong for Theo.)

 
Reviewer: Jenn22291 Signed
Date: 11/17/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Adventures of a Self-Centred Cynic

Sorry Scmerg, it will probably be disappointing for you to see that you have 2 new reviews and come to see that it's just this nonsense.

Justin time, that was cold. It is not your job to tell her whether or not it's acceptable to review her own story. There is nothing wrong with it. What IS frowned upon by the site is making rude remarks such as that one. Next time, if you are going to review someone's story, make sure you've actaully read the story and have something to say about it. Thanks.

Author's Response: It\'s okay. It was stupid of me to post the review!

 
Reviewer: Jenn22291 Signed
Date: 11/17/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Adventures of a Self-Centred Cynic

Sorry Scmerg, it will probably be disappointing for you to see that you have 2 new reviews and come to see that it's just this nonsense.

Justin time, that was cold. It is not your job to tell her whether or not it's acceptable to review her own story. There is nothing wrong with it. What IS frowned upon by the site is making rude remarks such as that one. Next time, if you are going to review someone's story, make sure you've actaully read the story and have something to say about it. Thanks.

Author's Response: *Avada Kedavras the double post*

 

I Hate You by sakata_sarah
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 24]

Summary: Many people have said that true love is the strongest emotion. It is unbreakable, beautiful. They are wrong

There is hate

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1081 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/01/06 Updated: 12/06/06


Reviewer: Jenn22291 Signed
Date: 12/18/06 Title: Chapter 1: I Hate You

I think you did a good job capturing Ginny’s emotions throughout the fic. They were powerful and deep, and I can definitely see Ginny thinking these things about Harry. However, there are a few things that need improvement.

There were a few grammar and punctuation mistakes, and I would suggest finding a beta on the forums or at PI. They help greatly. I also think that you should work on your descriptions a bit, perhaps put in a bit more detail.

Here is something that I found in the first paragraph. [I]“Everyone else sees you the same way and like you.”[/I] It think it would sound better if it were something like this: [I]Everyone else sees you the same way, and yet they still like you.”[/I] But that’s just my opinion.

The one line of the second paragraph is: [I]But not like me. Not how I do.[/I] I think it would sound better if it were: [I]But not like me. Not the way I do.[/I]

These are just a few. There were also some formatting errors.

I think that you have potential as an author, though. The story was interesting to read and caught my attention. I think you should write more Harry Ginny romances, because I’m interested to see what you can to with their relationship. You are good at characterization and tapping into the thoughts and emotions of characters. I also liked the ending.

[I] I hate it how you don’t understand it. I hate it how you don’t understand me. But, most of all, I hate how I’ve tried, tried to kid myself. Tried to pretend. But I can’t hide it anymore.

I hate you because I can’t.[/I]

This was a great way to wrap up the story because it reveals a lot about what Ginny was thinking throughout the fic. Nicely done.

Author's Response: Wow...... I didn\'t realize I made that many mistakes so thank you very much for the corrections. Now that I\'ve re-read the story it sounds better with your suggestions than the original. I\'m definetly working on more H/G romances but right now I\'m trying to get some R/Hr ones on the site. Thank you for the kind critisizm

 
Reviewer: Jenn22291 Signed
Date: 12/18/06 Title: Chapter 1: I Hate You

Um... Sorry I tagged that wrong. I used the forums tags instead of the HTML tags. *Hides head in shame*

Author's Response: Ah well, your awesome review makes up for it!

 

Unexpected Gifts by Ron x Hermione
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 19]

Summary: Ron and Hermione are in a rut this Christmas. They’re married, yet they don’t have that much money to buy each other gifts; especially after they have already bought all of their family and friends things.

Ron and Hermione both realize they know what to get each other, but when they go to buy it, they know they don’t have the money. They can’t get the gift.
Unless…

Ron and Hermione realize that as long as they have each other, they’ll get through anything.

This was written for the Christmas Challenge, the prompt, Gift of the Magi. I am Ron x Hermione, of Hufflepuff.

Won second place in the Prompt!

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1930 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/19/06 Updated: 12/22/06


Reviewer: Jenn22291 Signed
Date: 12/31/06 Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected GIfts

Hi Lindsey! Sorry it took a while to post this review. I've been rather lazy of late, to be honest.

Nice job on the story. I enjoyed reading it. Ron and Hermione were very well-characterised and I think their jobs suit them well. However, one thing I noticed was an overuse of commas. Just something to watch out for in the future. There were also a few dialogue errors. Still, I think you did a good job.

One other thing I would like to see in your writing is a bit more detail. I would have liked to see Ron and Hermione while they were trading in their possessions to buy Christmas presents for each other and how they felt about it. Also a bit more insight into their emotions through the rest of the story as well and perhaps a bit more description.

Nice job on the story and I'm looking foward to reading more from you! :)

~Jenn

Author's Response: *giggles* Hi Jenn! *waves* Okay, I understand about the dialogue. I\'ll look back on it too, eventually, because I\'m being lazy too. It\'s the Christmas holidays for me until...er-Wednesday. *groans* I\'ll hopefully go back and fix some things by then. Thanks for your help and your lovely review, buddy!! ~Lindsey :)

 

Lily, Did You Know? by megan_lupin
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: “Lily, did you know / That your baby boy / Would some day conquer evil?”

A short song parody about Lily and her young baby son, Harry Potter.

Written for “Winter Tales Challenge Two: A Christmas Carol – Parody” by megan_lupin of Gryffindor.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 389 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/22/06 Updated: 12/29/06


Reviewer: Jenn22291 Signed
Date: 02/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Lily, Did You Know?

I've been meaning to read this ever since I saw your video for it, so I had to review it for the crew! I loved the connection you made from the real song to Lily. I think it fits quite nicely. They lyrics you came up with were excellent and very powerful, especially toward the end. Nice job! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Jenn! I\'m thrilled that you liked it! And you saw the video, too? Squee!

~Megan

 

An Autumn Night's Tale by stareyed_in_LA
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: There is a grove of trees that bordered the property of the Egan family called the Hallows. To the youngest Egan, Maisie, it was a forest filled with danger and death and it was called "The Deathly Hallows." One autumn night, Maisie comes to her sisters room for comfort when she is told a story about the origins of the Deathly Hallows.



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New Years Challenge Prompt #1 The Deathly Hallows.

Stareyed_in_LA for Gryffindor.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2251 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/10/07 Updated: 01/15/07


Reviewer: Jenn22291 Signed
Date: 01/15/07 Title: Chapter 1: An Autumn Nights Tale

Very well done. I enjoyed this story quite a bit. Your writing style is simply marvelous. Your descriptions are chilling and the story was very believable and well thought out. I would like to know more about these Deathly Hallows. It almost makes me wish it was a chaptered fic.

One thing that I did notice throughout the story is a few dialogue errors. For example:

“I promise.” she said casually, not taking an eye off her sister sitting across from her.

should be:

“I promise,” she said casually, not taking an eye off her sister sitting across from her.



“That’s better. Come in.” her sister said promptly, ushering her in.

should be:

“That’s better. Come in,” her sister said promptly, ushering her in.


and


“No,!” yelled Cassandra.

Should be:

“No!” yelled Cassandra.


Other than that, it really was a marvelous story. It had me intrigued and eager to keep reading. You did a splendid job!

Author's Response: *blushes* I\'m really flattered. The idea for the Deathly Hallows came while I was watching this Johnny Depp movie called Sleepy Hollow. I thought of something really dark and scary and I came up with the idea for a forest.

 

The Next Great Adventure by Madame Marauder
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: An acrostic elegy to Professor Albus Dumbledore.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 101 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/16/07 Updated: 01/17/07


Reviewer: Jenn22291 Signed
Date: 02/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Next Great Adventure

Oh, how sad! Wonderful job. Very powerful and emotional! It summerizes very well the tragedy of Dumbledores death and his character flaw of trusting people too easily. The last two lines excellent and nearly brought me to tears. Lovely!

 
Reviewer: Jenn22291 Signed
Date: 02/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Next Great Adventure

Oh, how sad! Wonderful job. Very powerful and emotional! It summerizes very well the tragedy of Dumbledores death and his character flaw of trusting people too easily. The last two lines excellent and nearly brought me to tears. Lovely!

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