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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin Signed
Date: 09/01/06 Title: None

Too short! I'm the biggest Remus fan ever (think Gollum from LOTR. I'm Gollum- Remus is the One Ring. My precioussss...) and I want this story to be updated so I can read it!!! Update soon, no excuses, WHERE'S THE GOOD STUFF?!

Btw, do you have a beta? There are a few minor grammar mistakes but not really much worth mentioning. Just little things like commas or apostraphies.

Your Humble, Impatient Reviewer,
**Twizzle**

 

Summary: Trains, crazy old janitors, Fred and George mooning someone, this fic has it all. With Wizards all around them, Muggles are bound to see something weird everyonce in a while. This short story is taken from the beginning of Goblet of Fire.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2920 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/01/04 Updated: 12/01/04


Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin Signed
Date: 08/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: Waiting for Jovie

HAHAHAHA...I love the ending of this story!!! You've got a way with humour, my friend...I can picture Fred and George doing that, too. lol...Good job!

 
Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin Signed
Date: 08/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: Waiting for Jovie

HAHAHAHA...I love the ending of this story!!! You've got a way with humour, my friend...I can picture Fred and George doing that, too. lol...Good job!

 

The Stag by Tap
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 47]

Summary: OMG! ONE CHAPPIE AND 2000+ READS! TANKIES ALL! PLEASE REVIEW!


UPDATE! UPDATE! CHECK CHAPPIE 1!

A tree, a barn, more trees and some cows. These were the sights that flashed through the emerald eyes of a certain 17-year-old girl as she gazed out the window. The red-head tore her eyes off of the country that the train was passing by and placed her attention on a small brown something she was fiddling with in her hands. That certain something had black button eyes that were looking at her in a way that said I know something you dont know. It was a tiny stuffed animal, a stag in fact. Over the summer Lily Evans had received it from an unknown owl with an unknown owner. She had come to one conclusion about the person though. The person was a wizard or a witch, like her. Well, that wasnt much help to her considering she spent a great part of the year surrounded by hundreds of them. When the owl had first dropped the package on her desk and flown off, she had been sure the owl had made a mistake. But sure enough, around the neck of the stag had been a note: So you never forget me Lily. It was possibly the strangest and most bizarre gift Lily had ever gotten and the strangest note as well.
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A/N: Chapter two was rejected, so I had to add some bits from the next chappie to see if it will be accepted (MEAN MODS FOR NOT TELLING ME WHY!). So sorry for the delay! Chappie 2 preview has now been added!:D

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1247 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
01/08/05 Updated: 08/28/05


Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin Signed
Date: 08/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: A surprise surprise

Wassup? Are you sick of this site or something? I attempted to get to chappie 2 and the link didn't work. It said (and I quote) "The link you are trying to reach doesn't exist". If you could put #2 on this site I would totally be your servant forever! *puppy dog eyes*
Anyway, so far it's pretty good! Keep it up!

 

Silhouettes by SiriuslyPadfoot12
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: One-shot. It was on a warm summer's night, while the full moon shone in the sky, that five-year-old Remus Lupin learned to play catch in the backyard with his parents. It should have been perfect. It should have been. But when the ball rolls away into the forest behind their house, the lives of Remus and his family are changed forever. But his werewolf bite was only the beginning... Please read and review!!!

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2136 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/02/05 Updated: 02/02/05


Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin Signed
Date: 08/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

This. Is. Beautiful. I...I love this! It's so sweet, and sad, and...I don't know what to say. Keep writing!

 

Summary: One-shot. What exactly went through Sirius Black's mind as he fell behind the veil? Was he happy to die? Who did he think of? Written to the song "Whisper" by Evanescence.

QUOTES:
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"Seconds turn into eons. Will I fall for eternity? How long can my precious last moments last?"
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"My fall has at last come to an end. I am sliding through the veil. I can hear the indistinct murmurs of the dead fill my ears. Im staring my fate, my death, in the eyes. Unseen hands tug on me, bringing me down..."
Please read and review!

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1415 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/16/05 Updated: 02/16/05


Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin Signed
Date: 08/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: (one-shot)

*criescriescriescriescries* OMFG, this is so sad, and sweet, and now I'm tearing up, aw look, you made me cry! 1000000/10! Keep writing! PLEASE!

 

Life Happens by ColorOfAngels
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 2754]

Summary:

Life Is What Happens When You Are Busy Making Plans.




This is the story of Harry J. Potter and Ginny M. Weasley, their lives, friendships, realtionships and everything in between. Life doesn't always take the road they expect or want, but they soon learn that no matter what they do or how hard they try, the world stops for no man and that simply put, Life Happens.



Primarily Harry/Ginny but with Ron/Hermione background. Picks up after the end of book 5 and continues into Post-Hogwarts.




UPDATED 4/25

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Sexual Situations

Word count: 118251 Chapters: 34 Completed: No
Published:
04/11/05 Updated: 11/08/06


Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin Signed
Date: 09/07/06 Title: Chapter 30: Moments

First, LOVE this story, totally awesome, you rule! ;-)

I, personally, am enjoying the fluff right now. Maybe a chapter or two more, then bring a little drama and angst in, and I would love you for life. (jk, I'd only worship you, not love.) I'm so glad you started this story, I seriously screamed when it was updated. If THAT doesn't show what a fan I am, maybe this will:

It was two and a half months ago that I first discovered Mugglenet. I was looking at random stories, and I happened to spy "Life Happens" on the featured list. I glanced at it, and when I was done with all the chapters, I wouldn't look at any other stories the whole day, I just kept rereading this one. The next day only my brother kept me from rereading it again. (Thanks, little bro!)

Anyhoo, before they get back home, how bout a little "detour" of some kind stops their return from going as planned? I don't have any idea what could happen, but still, it might give you an idea, might not. Either way, please give it a shot!

Thanks for writing, please keep it up, and update ASAYAD! (that's "As Soon As You Are Done" in my lingo!)

Your Humble Reviewer,
**Twizzle**

 

Soap Pie by Lirael Astarael
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 112]

Summary: *ONE-SHOT* After carefully observing (ahem) a row between Ron and Hermione, Fred and George concoct an evil plan...and a pie. A sniff of Harry/Ginny and, of course, the odor of pie.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2075 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/11/05 Updated: 04/11/05


Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin Signed
Date: 09/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: Soap Pie

You should definitely keep writing fan fics- especially humor!! You've got a good eye- or ear?- for words.

I love the way you keep bringing up certain things- *coughbananascough*- and linking them-does that make sense? No, it doesn't...darn!

Ok, an example- at one point in the story, Ron goes "Loganiipoohead". Then, later, Fred says the same thing. I like the way you do that throughout the story!

Keep writing, please! You're good! :-D I'll keep an eye out for your penname on stories.

Your Humble Reviewer,
**Twizzle**

Author's Response: Now that was a quality review. (Wait, I mean, I like them all, this one is just particularly nice to read at the moment. Don\'t be sad other people.) I\'m sincerely flattered. I love words and I\'m glad you think that of me. I also love randomness...but organized randomness. Hence the repetition of the bananas, the Loganiipoohead deal, etc. Thanks very much.

 

Summary: Here you will find a jumble messed of ill-conceived poems. Perhaps, and the odds are firmly against it, you may stumble across a small smile, intriquing thought, or unique feeling in here. But, again, it's very unlikely. Verse XI has been validated.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2723 Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/12/05 Updated: 03/14/06


Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin Signed
Date: 08/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: Always There

Gimme a "B-E-A"
Gimme a "U-T-I"
Gimme a "F-U-L!"
Beautiful!
(The end's a little iffy, though.)

 
Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin Signed
Date: 08/24/06 Title: Chapter 4: An Advertisement for Weasleys' Wizarding Wheezes

Hahaha...I like it!

 
Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin Signed
Date: 08/24/06 Title: Chapter 6: Fallen Distant

I love it, but the line "Make him dead" doesn't seem to fit the poems style as well- it's not as poetic as the other lines. Other than that, very good!

 
Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin Signed
Date: 08/24/06 Title: Chapter 7: Final

*in whisper->* This is beautiful...I love the way you emphasize his feelings and unsurity (is that a word?) 10/10

 
Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin Signed
Date: 08/24/06 Title: Chapter 8: Untitled

This is so sweet and touching...

 
Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin Signed
Date: 08/24/06 Title: Chapter 9: Bertie Botts Every Flavor Beans

hahaha... this is hilarious! I love all the flavors you made up. Are there any good ones...?

 
Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin Signed
Date: 08/24/06 Title: Chapter 11: Snape's Verse

I like this, even if I don't understand that well...I've got a vague idea of what it's about, but I'm not sure...

 

Barbie Girl by CraftySlytherin
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 244]

Summary: It's just your average, boring Summer day on Privet Drive. Or is it? Harry is stuck doing another one of his many thankless chores, when he hears something VERY interesting coming from Dudley's room and goes to investigate.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1780 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/31/05 Updated: 05/31/05


Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin Signed
Date: 09/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

OK, I'll try not to send you to a padded room with my review. *deep breath*

O my word, this is hilarious!! A few suggestions, though. (OK, only one!)

Try to separate the lines in "Barbie Girl" a little better. It's kind of hard to read them all in one line the way you put them.

Other than that, a wonderfully funny story with a great plot. You're really good at humor fics!

Your Humble Reviewer,
**Twizzle**

 

Blind Intuition by Polaris Dakota
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 34]

Summary:

Serranes is blind but she can see. Wait-hold on a second! She cant really be blind if she can see. Why can she see? What do you mean she cant see when she can?! Is Serranes doomed to relive her past and be unable to help with certain "trials" that her friends face? Is she also to be consumed by her past and become unable to feel love or find it? What of the good and evil that dwell within her? Read and find out.
A sixth year fic (Pre-HBP)
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I am sorry to say that this story is now on an indefinate hiatus due to my illness. You may always e-mail me at xxeclipseangelxx@yahoo.com and complain directly. I still love my fans, so I leave you with Love!!!

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Mental Disorders, Self Injury, Substance Abuse, Suicide, Violence

Word count: 8925 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Published:
06/03/05 Updated: 10/10/05


Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin Signed
Date: 09/10/06 Title: Chapter 3: Disce Pati (Learn to Endure)

This is... so sad. You write beautifully! I feel so bad for Serra, and she doesn't even exist! Well, she does in my mind, anyway... but still!! What happened to Tempest was so sad...

This is a beautiful story...I-I don't know what to say! Are you sure you're not a professional writer in disguise? Because you sure write like one! There are a few little mistakes, like punctuation and stuff, but nothing major. It's all good!

This chapter is a little confusing at the start, though. No one really knows what you're talking about, so it's a little hard to understand how it fits into the story. But I'm glad you added the flashback about Tempest. That cleared things up for me really fast.

When is your treatment going to be over? I know it's a little selfish, but I can't wait for an update! I wish you good luck with your treatment, few visible scars, and no emotional ones. :-)

Keep up the writing, and heal fast!

Your Humble Reviewer,
**Twizzle**

Author's Response: My my, I had no idea I was still getting reviews! I thought that my fans had long since abandoned me! Give me time, I beg you, I am still working on myself before working on my writing.

 
Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin Signed
Date: 09/10/06 Title: Chapter 3: Disce Pati (Learn to Endure)

If you're already out of treatment, congrats!!!! *is happy for you* But that means I'm expecting an update! *sounds like McGonagall* hahaha...

If you're out of treatment, you may want to take that little note saying that you can't update for a while out of the summary. It confused me when I read that, then saw you had responded to reviews...

When will Serra meet other people? I can't wait until school starts! Hogwarts, that is. ;-)

Again, keep it up!

Your Humble Reviewer,
**Twizzle**

Author's Response: I was responding to reviews because I couldn\'t leave the people I care about hanging, wondering if I was getting better or not...but yes I will update as soon as I am able. Thank you for your reviews Twizzle, I enjoy your criticism. ^_^

Author's Response: I was responding to reviews because I couldn\'t leave the people I care about hanging, wondering if I was getting better or not...but yes I will update as soon as I am able. Thank you for your reviews Twizzle, I enjoy your criticism. ^_^

 

MOMENTS OF BLISS by moonymaniac
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 1198]

Summary: Remus Lupin is a man with a tragic past, filled with pain, suffering and sorrow. But it is also a past filled with great adventure, true friendship and…love? Even though the odds were against him, Remus found happiness at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. He had the Marauders, he was a prefect and his transformations were less horrible, thanks to his Animagi friends. What more could a teenage werewolf want? And how long could his happiness last? Remus and the Marauders prove that in the saddest of lives and darkest of times, there can still be moments of bliss.

Remus centric but with a lot of the other Marauders. This story is a romance, but has almost as much general Marauder era background and side story as romance.
Pre-HBP and DH, so some things from DH will be disregarded, as the warning indicates, but some Spoilers will be incorporated.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death

Word count: 435441 Chapters: 71 Completed: No
Published:
06/08/05 Updated: 02/25/14


Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin Signed
Date: 08/23/06 Title: Chapter 3: 1st Year: The Adventure Begins

I like the thought of Mundungus in the same year as the Mauraders...good job so far! I'm impressed!

Author's Response: Thank you. I just get the biggest kick out of Mundungus, so I wanted to throw him in. Glad you like it and thank you for reviewing, Twizzle_loves_Lupin. :)

 

S'mores by Crystallic Rain
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 115]

Summary: The truth about the fifth Gryffindor boy is revealed (Remus ate him), a comforter not-so-spontaneously combusts twice, James smells funny, and Peter likes chicken. And Natalie Blackwood snogs Sirius in a broom closet (yay inbred purebloods).

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 7592 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/31/05 Updated: 09/02/05


Reviewer: Twizzle_loves_Lupin Signed
Date: 10/01/06 Title: Chapter 3: Part Three

Yeah, everyone at my school pokes each other, so when I read that I got an image of my friend falling off her seat. (she does that when she gets poked.)

Would you like to be one of my favorite authors? You write really well...

Your Humble Reviewer,
**Twizzle**

Author's Response: Ha, that\'s definitely like what we do.. I would be honored to be one of your favorites. Thank you very much!

 
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