hi, u are an awesome writer..i am eagerly waiting for ur other chapters. i think the plot is going on well and that pity Harry cnat really have his parents back and his normal life. write ur next chapters soon.
Summary: Sirius returns miraculously from behind the veil, uncovering a secret that's remainded hidden for too long and was obviously not supposed to be found...He undertakes the task of trying to fix the mistake he made all those years ago on Halloween night
THAT WAS SOME STORY!!! it was really good. Especially the coordination and the distinguishing between the past and present Marauders.
WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTERS QUICKLY. CANT WAIT!!
Author's Response: yay! another new reader! new chapters are coming up! (I'm currently working on chapter 32, so the only delay is the submission process :p )
Hi, U r a gr8 writer. I really like the way u wrote it and i am very, very desperately waiting for the future chapters of this story. WRITE FAST AND QUICKLY!!!!!!!!!
Summary: Voldemort is after Harry Potter, a boy "...born to those who thrice defied him...". But ever wonder what Lily and James did to defy him thus? This is a story about passion, both love and hatred. Follow James and Lily through their 7th year as they unite as Head Boy and Girl, ultimatly fall in love, and deal with the rising Dark Forces and the feared Dark Lord. Final chapter up!
hi i think ur story was very good. ur ending was especially touching and very.... very... well can't describe it but it was very um... i hope u got it.
it was really cute of ron and hermoine to patch up. and Ron is just so sweet. he is so protective of his sis. Good story!! keep writing, waiting for further stories.
Good luck!! Marauders rule!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, Ron is so sweet when he is in his 'big brother'-state!
i think ur story is great and that u should update it reallly FAST and i am really waiting for it. i promise u that u atleast have two readers, me and my twin. so write fast. good luck.
Author's Response: the story is finished, i just have to post all the chapters. i'm glad you like it Thanks