Pyromaniac! only kidding...
Bday, 15th april, same as em ( who i no)
well, as this is where i rite bout my life so far, i guess id better start:
a monkey aged 118 years was bisecting an ostracised peanut while eating a very large piece of grass which had the essence of a pink elephants backside. then the elephant sed 2 the monkey, why do u eat peanuts and eat grass and walk in the centre of london? and the monkey replied, 'well, to know that i must tell u my life story' and so he told the elphant, and here it is:
there were 72 placated monkeys on a tree, having fun, wen a hunter came around the corner and shot one ded. it fell to the ground wiv a thump. then another monkey fell out of the tree, why i hear u ask? bcos it was attached 2 the first monkey. then, i, the third monkey in this story, fell out of the tree, bcos i was unfortunate enuff to think it was a game.......;(.......ive never been the same since. people tell me im not really a monkey, but how can i believe them when they all look the same, like shrivelled up mongooses. (sorry 2 n e 1 who is either a mongoose, monkey or elephant, not harm ment!)
Which HP Kid Are You?
Quick and agile, and probably a little on the small
side, you're a Seeker! You're the one person
who usually wins or loses the game for your
team by catching the snitch, but you don't
mind...you'll get that snitch if it kills you.
Which Quidditch position should you play? (Harry Potter)
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You're Harry Potter! You're willing to do anything
to help your friends, and they'll do anything
for you. You have been known to break a few
rules, but you do it for the greater good.
Brave and loyal, you're well-liked (both on and
off the Quidditch field!)Sometimes, you're
uncomfortable with your popularity, but you try
to be friendly regardless. Now, get on your
broom and get to practice- you've got to help
Gryffindor win the cup this year!
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wow, that was like a proper book, lol, i couldnt put it down, only thing is i noticed a lot of repetitive words in the same sentence etc, but im no grammer person, well done, good luck, and keep writing! (btw, its gt 2 be a 10)!
oops, soz, i put my review in the wrong place, lol, chapter 1, well it was my 1st review...=)
gr8 wrk again, hope u update soon, maybe in the 1st chapter u can hav some kind of flashback, not from ahrrys point of view, just a bit of fiction that could tie in wiv the rest of the story...?
gr8 story, until ending, lol, ur probly getin tired of hearin this eh?!
that was such a gr8 chapter, u really no how 2 xpress feelins really well, gr8 wrk! i luv the way u realted everything that happened into ur story, it fitted very well, and im anticipatin harry as an officer very eagerly! all the best, james
Author's Response: I hope I don't let you down. I'll be submitting chapter 8 probaly sometime this week. Just have some fine tuning to do.
yes, to be concluded. i know what concluded means, but do we have to wait for an entirely different story or will there be another chapter? your description is truly wonderful and i think that that is where you win your ratings. best of luck in the future. james. by the way, the only problem with your entire story was that the prophesy said that Harry had the power to destroy the dark lord, note this does not mention kill. i think personally that harry would never succumb to the dark arts and will be forced to find another way to destroy riddle. anhoo, its naturally up to you as its your fic. great work!
Author's Response: I have one more chapter for this story, however, I'm in the planning of writing a Prequel. Mostly for my own satification. But that may not happen, as I am extremely busy at the moment. I need to get back into finish writing my second book, and get that sum of a buck ready for submission to my publishing company, which is no easy task let me tell you. At anyrate, if you look into the prophecy, it says either must die at the hands of the other for neither can live while the other survives. Personnally I don't think Harry will ever surcomb to use the dark arts either. Nor do I think that Harry can use Avarda Kadervi on Riddle. But I'll leave that to JKR to write. Thanks for all your reviews, it's what keeps this writer going.
Well, where do I start! That was truly an amazing fanfiction. I loved every minute of it and i am so sad that it has to end. The ideas you came up with were unbelievable.
Naturally, as you are a US soldier yourself, you included the muggle armies in your story which provides a lot more depth and scope for things to happen.
Hermione and Harry got together the way I think they will, after they have each dated the respective Weaslys, though im not sure both Ron and Ginny will die, but then again, thats up to you, im just analysing!
Considering what you had built on for the final chapter, the names were just right for the ickle babies! Usually people call them James and Lily in H/Hr fics, but you were must more original and used past experience to come up with new names, even though you kept everyone favourite names entwined!
Thanks ever so much for the comment in the AN at the start, i really didnt deserve it that much!
I loved your new characters in the story, especially Daryl and Ernie! The quidditch training at the start of the fic was very enjoyable to read.
I loved the fact that you made the story based in America, your home country as it shows that you really want to interact with the characters and you are prepared to make the biggest possible effort to make your fic one of the greatest of all time!
Dumbledore was very, how can i say it, 'cool' in this and i think you got his character completely right, apart from the little bit about him and Mcgonagoll gettin together!
Also, the only other bit i found realistic, apart from Harry vanquishing of Voldemort which i will come to later, was the fact that you said about the teachers betting on how long it would take Harry and Hermione to get together, amusing, but unrealistic in my opinion!
However, i feel no need to criticise too much on these points as they were both in your last chapter, after the war which was obviously a time to be joyful and to joke around!
As i said before, the account of Harry beating Voldemort was insufficient but you countered very well saying that you felt it best to leave it to JK Rowling. I have no more problems with this, but i do have an idea for a one shot general fanfic which i think would be highly popular thanks to you! (Harry vs Voldemort)
I loved the battle scene, and the way the muggles and magical people and creatures worked together so well, it really was beautiful! Dumbledore was, of course, an added bonus!
And finally (yes im nearly done), thank you ever so much for reviewing my fic, it was really a great thing you did for me, which is why im writing this super wuper duper long review!
i really hope you either write a sequel or prequel, and i will of course be ordering your published book online!Harry and Hermione were so perfect for each other in that story, thank you for giving such a great insight!
I really do hope that you can write some more Hp fanfiction in the near future, you really are a true artist!
Yay, 1st review! Once again thank you for such a great read, i truly enjoyed it!
Please review my next chapter when its out. James
Author's Response: Hey it's not a problem that I reviewed your chapter, it was really good. You know, I was just reading my final chapter, and I had cut out a scene, mainly because I thought it sounded too much like the end of Star War: Return of the Jedi. It was a scene with the ghosts of Ron, Ginny, James, Lily and Sirius, It was set, just outside Dumbledore's Tent, but the more I think about it, maybe that was the wrong thing to do. But as a writer sometimes you have to sacerfice scenes of a special meaning, espically if it doesn't sound right. I really did enjoy writing this story. I have the plot-bunnys bouncing around like crazy, so maybe it's time to go and grab the old shot gun and start eliminate some of these plot-bunnies, and start on yet another story. Which'll make 4 stories I'm working on at the present moment. Now if sunchilde just finish her part for the story, the Diary of Lily Potter, I'd along with half the other people on this site will be very happy. But she's going through some extremely rough times at the moment too. So thank you once again for your review, they mean alot to me. I hope see you again, which I'm sure I will if these plot bunnies don't leave me alone. BTW I'm not sure if you read my other story that I have posted on here, It's called a Foretold Destiny? It's just a shot-one fict. Which I've recieved fantiastic reviews for. Have a great day, and I hope one day to see you as one of my reviewers again. BTW if you do order my book on-line, and you want a signed copy, let me know.
Author's Response: Oh yeah I forgot one last thing. When your writing your story and you get writers block, the biggest thing you could ever ask yourself is What if?
wow, u r truly the best author and co author and beta and everything else someone cud eva b. u r truly amazing, i bow down b4 u insted of tony blair (the lying ******). seriously though, u r really good at this kinda stuff. best of luck, james
Author's Response: Thank you. it's not the truth, but thank you
there are so many different feelings and meanings in the story, especially in the poem, congrats 2 whoeva wrote it. so sad, but so good. lol, harry has a gun
Author's Response: A joint Muggle Wizard Operation. lol He has to carry a gun. Just wait till you see Dumbledore during the battle!
lol, this has bin on my faves 4 ages, an i just realised i hvnt reviewed! soz. this is a gr8 story, u really manage to show the various situations the characters find themselves in to be almost realistic! its gr8 writing. hopin chp 7 will b up soon, but i no ur goin thru hard times rite now (ive bin readin the lily diary story (good wrk there 2!)). best of luck and undying faith, well, at least im hopin my faith doesnt die...! james
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind sentiments. I have submitted chapter 7 and I'm hoping it will be up shortly.
wot a gr8 chapter, hermione must be really confused and all, cos its not like her 2 hide stuff, well, the death oif her parents and voldy stuk in her hed wud probably hav an affect on her i spose! gr8 wrk 1nce again, eagerly w8in 4 nxt update, but dnt rush urslef, i no u must hav a real life 2 liv aswell!...james
Author's Response: and it doesn't get any easier for her from here on. Thanks a lot for the review, James. I'm glad you liked the chapter. I've got bits and peices of ch. 6 scttered in random books, sheets, and various napkins here and there so it's coming along... sort of
omfg, that was briliant, w8in 4 mor eagerly...cmon....hurryup!...im w8in!...
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, man. As for the next chapter, it'll be up and runnin as soon as i get it back form my beta.
i like it, just red all 3 chapterz, its good, udate asap plz
very fast, but very good, ur getin bettr!
Author's Response: thanks! that means a lot! =)
hey, nice job, yer i 2 think i no who medea is, and what was really riten on her arm wen harry saw I WILL KILL H- ... i wonder who else noticed wot could hav been writen there...=)
Author's Response: I'm very glad you got that, but I'm not telling you it has any real significance.
gr8 wrk so far, keep it up
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. I don't know when cahpter 4 will be up
keep it up, getin even better...!
Author's Response: Thank you
get off u stupid fish! I SED GET OFF! sorry about that, my pet fish is quite out of control today! anyway, wot a gr8 chapter. i am probably the only person who likes long chapterz, but i must complain half heartedly as this was such a good one i was attacked by a fish. well, not the last bit about the fish! anyway, thnx a lot for updatin so soon, hope u keep at it. i of course howeva appreciate that u do hav a real life 2 liv aswell, so no pressure on the nxt chapter! harry is the stupidist fish eva, he looks like a fish, acts like a fish, and even has the short term memeroy loss of a fish (i cant complain about fish being badd at acknowledgin feelins, cos, unfortunately, im not a fish!). thnx a lot 4 such a gr8 read, jmz
Author's Response: Thanks, I think. =) I appreciate the review, but have to say honestly I'm not sure I follow all of it. It sounds like a compliment, but I'm not sure I'm following your fish references. But, maybe I'm just to outdate with certain things to catch it. Thanks for the review, none the less. =)
kl, u still writin it?
u r the best author on this site, no question about it! gr8 story of trio after skl, took u a wile 2 update it though.......=(.....but it was worth every minute!.......=)......wen d'u think ulll hav the nxt chapter on site by? keep it up, jmz
Author's Response: Oh man, that's quite a compliment because there are some darn good authors here! Thank you for that! Sorry, it took so long...I re-wrote this chapter about 4 times...just took me a while to get it right I guess. Hoping it won't take me quite as long to get the next chapter done...thanks for the kind review!