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Devil's Advocate by AlexisTaylor
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 11]

Summary: Set in the universe I wrote before book six came out, Hermione and Draco are ill-met by moonlight.

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 1505 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/26/06 Updated: 08/26/06


Reviewer: sunrays brother Signed
Date: 10/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: Devil's Advocate

loved it!!!
especially the funny ending

 

Do You Carrot All For Me? by looseboregs
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 10]

Summary: James Potter is the ideal man in any girl's book. He's good-looking, he's smart and he's Quidditch Captain. There is just one book in which he does not register. That book belongs to no other than Lily Evans, the one girl James has ever loved.



Lily Evans does not care about looks - they might add a bit of comfort, but not much more than that, she does not care about Quiddich skills either. All she wants is a man with kindness, sweetness, and sensitivity in him. Basically, the Bullying Toerag by the name of James Potter is not the man for her.



How will James ever win Lily over?



At the same time, trouble is arising in Hogwarts. Attacks have been occurring. The ones being held responsible is Lord Voldemort and his pet Death Eaters.



The only way to stand strong against such evil is to unite. The only way to stop the evil is to show strong bonds of friendship, love and trust.



And that is what this story is all about - Friendship and Love.



Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 2529 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
09/09/06 Updated: 10/25/06


Reviewer: sunrays brother Signed
Date: 09/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved it's intriging make nother chapter soon.

Author's Response: Thanks Ryan! Next chappie will be up soon!

 

Summary: Even though he's gone, he still lives on through her--inside. The only problem is that she's with someone else...

Completed one-shot.

Categories: Various Pairings Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 950 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/10/06 Updated: 09/14/06


Reviewer: sunrays brother Signed
Date: 09/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Crusade Between Mind and Heart

i really liked it acctually i loved it, just one thing in the fic you keep on saying how cho loves cedric but adores michae,l i think you should of made fewer times because she starts sounding like she is going insane.

Author's Response: Okay, thanks for the constructive crisitism. I\'ll keep that in mind for the next one!! =) Thanks so much!! --RP

 
Reviewer: sunrays brother Signed
Date: 09/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Crusade Between Mind and Heart

i really liked it acctually i loved it, just one thing in the fic you keep on saying how cho loves cedric but adores michae,l i think you should of made fewer times because she starts sounding like she is going insane.

Author's Response: Thanks again!! =)

 

Summary: The last day of Sirius's life. He's got a lot of free time to hit the bottle and brood on life, memories, people, etc. Order members come and go, and it all ends with the battle and a certain mysterious veil.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Substance Abuse

Word count: 14955 Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/13/06 Updated: 06/26/07


Reviewer: sunrays brother Signed
Date: 09/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

great!!!!!!
i loved it

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad to hear it! :D

 

I'll Try by guiding ray of sunlight
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: Draco Malfoy is caught in an internal battle. Will he ever be free of it?

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 1438 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/14/06 Updated: 09/14/06


Reviewer: sunrays brother Signed
Date: 09/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: I'll Try

loved loved loved its really touching

Author's Response: thank you so much for reviewing, I\'m glad you like it!

Author's Response: thank you so much for reviewing, I\'m glad you like it!

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