Love HP fanfics, and love to Beta read them. Haven't written any yet, but hope to get bitten by that creative bug soon!
I haven't read any of your other stuff, I'm not terribly into Marauder-era fics myself, but I just got in the mood for them last night...and finished this today after work. I just have to say, this was a very, VERY good story. Incredibly interesting. I admit, I winced at the use of your name LaLa (sounded a bit cheesy to me) but I got over it lol. Siriusly, this was very, very good. I actually really liked the parts that mimicked books 3-5, because I'd never really thought about Sirius's point of view before. You did a great job with this. Also, the end. You made me cry, you really did. That was SO GOOD! Anyway. Great job, don't know how long ago you finished this (I never look at dates, I'm terrible) or if you'll ever even read this but...really. Great :)
Author's Response: Hey, I always read and reply to reviews. Honestly. The name LaLa, I can see where you might be unsure, but she was named after a friend of mine who I wanted to include (since my name was in one of her fics). So that\'s why it was used. I\'m glad you liked the books 3-5 parts, because they took a lot of work, so it\'s good to know that paid off. Thanks very very much for reviewing, it really means a lot!