I am Sunflower at Dusk and I plan on writing my own version of Book Seven soon. Until then I'm going to keep reading other people's stories.
Aug 1, 2006
Wow that was amazing.
I like this story its very good so far.
awww thats really sweet. your a good writer. very nice
Who shows up????? ooooo please update soon
Author's Response: Er...Uncle Vernon. There I said it, and now its out in the open for everyone to see. lol. jk!!!! i won\'t tell!!! ~Sara
Very good chapter. Really looking forward to the next one!!!! =D
Author's Response: thank you!!
You should keep going and do other years this story is awsome!!! =)
Author's Response: Thank you very much!!! ~Sara
Wow . . . that was good Please Please Please get the next chapter up soon!!!
Author's Response: Sorry, but you\'ll have to wait another week. I\'m still at my dad\'s. The only reason i\'m on a computer is becuase I went to my dad\'s job. Thank you!!!
Winner of the QuickSilver Quills Award, categ. Best Marauder Era.What did being a Marauder truly mean?... Let's just say that some tunes cannot be played by a lone musician; and those four's lives were certainly not soloists' scores. In class or in detention, in Quidditch matches or full-moon wanderings, fleeing before monsters or confronting dark wizards, they wrote, measure after measure, their own eight-handed piece.
Messrs Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot and Prongs, are proud to present a Symphony for Quartet.
I like your story so far. The years feel a little short to me though. Such as you didn't write about Halloween, or Christmas day. What you do right is great.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I\'m not too keen on going through Halloween and Christmas, everyone does that so I tend to avoid it. I may do something like that in the coming years though, if I have nothing else to do.
Sorry my last review should have write not right. I really like your style of writing.
Author's Response: Thank you, and don\'t worry about typos. I make those often enough myself.
I Love this story!!! You write really well. I agree with you about Fred and George getting married.
Author's Response: Thanks, I\'m glad you liked it, and I like it when people agree with me too! =) I hope you\'ll read the sequel too!
This is an evil cliffe! I might even go as far to say as its a evil evil cliffe. I admit I really didn't want to believe that it was Frank. =( Update soon please please please
Author's Response: I don\'t even think this was much of a cliffhanger, much less an evil or evil evil one. The storyline around the chapter was finished and tied up neatly. Now the next chapter is evil at least, and perhaps evil evil. You\'ll have to let me know which you think it is, but either way, I think it will put this one back in perspective. =)
" . . .they would take the coveted Quidditch Cup right out from ^ Gryffindor’s nose." I think you forgot a word. Great story.
Author's Response: I guess I did. I\'ll see if I can fix it soon. THanks!
I think your a little too good and giving cliff hangers! I agree with peacock_girl15 you really should give Sirius a gf.
Author's Response: I\'m sure Sirius agrees with you both, but we\'ll have to see.
Grrr my computer never submits my first review. Anyway i'm done fuming. Excalent chapter. Realy looking forward to the next chapter. The winking charm made me laugh.
Author's Response: I\'m glad I got a laugh, hopefully the next chapter will be up soon!
YEA!!! It's updated (does happy dance)
Author's Response: Sorry it took so long, the next one should be out soon. =)
Nooooo not another cliffy!!!!!!! I think this chapter was really good, and it added tention and a seriosness (is that even a word?) of the situation that was going on to the story that wasn't there before. I think it was excalent . . . . even with the cliff hanger.
Author's Response: Yeah, every good story needs a good cliffhanger every now and again. Thanks! =)
I thought you couldn't apperate on Hogwart's Ground???? Other than that excelant chapter.
Author's Response: They are all deep in the forbidden forest, which as I understand it, is off Hogwarts grounds. Sirius can transport his way around Hogwarts because of his Animagus transformation, but that is found in canon, and further explained in Mind\'s Eye. Thanks!
Ooooo really good!!!!! I really like Ginny's reactiion and it fits perfectly
p.s. So far your story has gotten me out of cleaning twice. I got my Mom hooked on both your stories and she read Mind's Eye in one day.
Author's Response: Wow, that\'s cool. I like hearing that people are still enjoying Mind\'s Eye, and I hope I can keep up the standard I\'ve set. (and improve at the same time.)
Yay I like it. its awsome, but now I better get back to homework before I get yelled at . . . =)
Author's Response: Yeah... the end of a story and an era, and now it\'s time for homework again. Such is life. =)
Hmmm the dark lord cackling . . . definantly a new dark lord . . . . Off with his head. Not quite sane Ginny says I could tell that by the cackling. Everyones chained up! The last part is a little confusing. cliffies! You have definantly perfected your ability to write them. Good for you. Bad for us.
Author's Response: I\'m completely unapologetic about the cliff hangers. The dark lord is quite insane and I think for fairly good cause... I\'m sorry the last part was confusing, I really do try to be clear. I\'m glad you enjoyed the chapter!