Well, after a long hiatus, and a lot of life changes I'm back.
I've got one story for sure and possibly more. We'll just see how it goes.
Actually, mugglenet has been taken over by moderators drunk on their own power. Look for me on fanfiction.net under the penname: Sorcerer's Muse. I will be reposting all current stories there as well as any new work.
Your overall story is excellent. The way you have brought Malfoy over is the most believable I have read so far. I can't wait for your next chapter. One last thing please quit tormenting Ron with Hermione, have him grow a backbone so he tells her the truth
This was a really good chapter. Someone else forcing them to confront their fears. Harry should have know Dumbledore would approve of his lesson.
Summer post OoTP. Recovery after DoM tragedy. This time it's different, however. It's not Harry who's having nightmares. It's not Harry who gets hurt. It's not Harry who learns it all the hard way.
an outtake: >"Guess it’s time to admit it, Ron,” she whispered, knowing well, that he couldn’t hear her, “I did misjudged you. I did... And I don’t think I know you as well as I thought I did,” she closed her eyes, one last time touching his scarred arm, “And you’re not of the emotional range of a teaspoon, Ron. You’re much more... You’re so much more...”PEOPLE! I'LL POST NEXT CHAPTER ON SUNDAY!! PROMISE!
Mine isn't posted yet, a friend is reviewing it, but glad to see someone thinks Remus and Tonks would be good DADA teachers for the year.
I really like what you did with the ambush setting.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I can't wait to read your story! Yeah I love that idea too. Sorry, but 11th chapter doesn't have a singlke mention about DADA, I had to focus on Ron and Hermione, they are the most important ones in here, though ;)
If it was only so easy to figure out that someone liked you by having an invisibility cloak. She is going to kill him if she finds out he witnessed that.
Either up date, or write longer chapters, will you? It will be fun to see how you are going to make this all work out.
Author's Response: i did update!!! they juss dont like my chapters here GO TO HARRYPOTTERFANFICTION my name their is singergril
Interesting, I wonder exactly what is happening to Ginny as she helps Harry with his troubles. She still seems a bit put out from the attitude she displayed earilier in the story.
Author's Response: I have slightly altered that bit where they're talking in the dormitory. Hopefully it will make it a bit clearer. Thanks for reviewing! :-)
I'm sorry is it done or not? Either way fun to read
Author's Response: The next chapter is coming - just give me a chance!
Erm... I'm confused, is this the end?
Author's Response: Yes Chapter 13 is the end.
Man quit tormenting the two of them. Actually I really like this, you are taking your time, and I am not finding any holes in your story, like a number of others do. You don't jump all over the place, and keep your story flowing really well. I look forward to your next update. I also hope we get to see Harry and Ginny get back at Draco for the break up scene
Author's Response: Thanks for the extremely comprehensive review! I do try to keep the story in some resemblance of order, so I'm glad you picked up on that. Thanks again and please do keep reading!
AN interesting chapter, glad to see Ginny is alive, though the concept of a ransom demand for Harry is a little off. Especially since Dumbledore knows the prophecy. Don't Ginny, Ron and Hermione know it also in your story? I look forward to your next and is it last chapter you said?
Author's Response: I don't understand - why does knowing the Prophecy make any difference? Leave another review and I'll try to answer it. Yes - next chapter is the last!
Ok, I assuming something will safe Ginny. I hope. I'm not sure why Harry and Ginny ran from the battle in the first place. I don't think that would have happened. I liked Ginny taking charge in the common room, that was really cool and how I see her. I look forward to finding out what happens next.
Author's Response: I love that bit too. Ginny's doesn't take any nonsense!
I'd have to say the room worries me some. I'm a little more concerned with what the spell did to Ginny though, she seemed a little put out afterwards, almost channeling Harry's emotions.
Author's Response: Yeah I know, that spell is slightly creepy, especially the room! I think the spell has more effects than either of them really realise...
Well I guess it is time to go back under the invisibility cloak. Something seems to really be going on with Ginny still though, I look forward to finding out what it is.
Author's Response: She is very hormonal at the mo, I think that is probably part of it. However, as I said before, I think the spell is having its effects on both of them.
She must have killed him, good for her. How the heck did she get her wand? Who cares how she got it, she's alive.
I'll give yo a 10 just for having the guts to kill your own characters. Hope your not tricking me.
You didn't really kill them, not really surprised to tell you the truth your story is interesting lots of good twists and turns
keep it going. I'm curious as to why Voldemort is not going after Harry more, since he knows now that only Harry can beat him? I guess we sill find out by the time you end this whole thing.
Your story continues to be excellent
The rating is for your over all story, which is very good. It looks like we may finaly get to Harry and Ginny dating. You have been hinting at Ron starting to notice Hermione, any chance that you are going to work on the two of them also?
This story is really good, you are keeping the baseline, but developing your own ideas as well. Hurry and get the next chapter out