Your story's really good! I like the idea.
However (dun dun dun), your summary is all bunched up! It is sore for the eyes, so ppl will not one to read it and then read your story! Please put some spaces between the 1st thing and Part One, Part Two, etc. It would be really nice to have more ppl read your story, but first it would be nice to encourage them to read your summary!
Again, great story. Thanks for writing it.
Summary: What if there were more to Remus Lupin's bite than a badly timed stroll in the woods? The arrival of a feral invokes secrets of the past and terror for the present...
Wow! This is a very good story! I'm glad it was in the Quicksilver contest, or I may never have gotten down to reading it!
If you like this story, and the author as well, you'll probably like Fading Into Gray by PuckerUpRemus. Try it.
oh wait, it's Fading Into Grey.
I like the way your doing this story. I've got to add it to my favourites.
Rated: [Reviews - ]
I'm confused too.
Author's Response: Well, it\'s a confusing chapter!
Summary: Starts where HBP leaves off.
Will Harry and his friends get to live happily ever after? Or will the Prophecy and You-Know-Who be too much to overcome?
This one has it all, folks! Love and lust! Money and power! Hob Nobs and Fairy Liquid! The Beatles and U2! C'mon! You know you want to read it...
Oh, yeah - it's got H/G and Hr/R romantic stuff, plus, you know, that war they're having.
BIG THANKS to my beta, Tabletop Joe (now, go read his brilliant fic!).
Next chapter is IN THE QUEUE. Thank you for the reviews, emails, and continued support of this story!
this is great
normally romance fics just go on about harry and ginny kissing and whatever and such emotional blah, but this has that, not overwhelmingly and it actually has a storyline! I think it is great, therefore.
Please update soon; I keep checking every week, though of course I understand that you can't write in superspeed, and I want a good chapter, not a rushed one!
Will Harry still keep drinking so much, and will ron take a stand with hermione and stop?
i seem to have been waiting an age. ok, ok, i know i'm impatient...
please write again soon!
Summary: CHAPTER 10 COMING SOON!!! - THANKS EVERYONE FOR THE COMMENTS! Rating: PG-13
Do you think it’s easy to run from your family?
When Sirius Black is ten years old, everything in his life is black and white. He is a wizard. He is the heir to his most noble house. He is eager to please and willing to be everything his parents have ever dreamt for him.
Then, at Hogwarts with the ability to explore the world differently he starts to question what he has been taught his whole life and finds that even though he is a brilliant wizard and studies and most things come easy to him there is still so much he needs to learn about life outside of Grimmauld Place.
Follow along with me as Sirius Black’s world starts Fading Into Grey.
Disclaimer: not mine etc.
ha! just read your last review and I'm so happy! Waiting is not my strong point!
May I take this oppertunity to again encourage fans to put this story on their favourites, when reviewing to other stories, write a PS recomending this one, recommend it to reviewers of your own story and tell all your friends about it!
you make me feel sad
now it's been months and you have not updated or replied. perhaps you no longer care...
and soon, they'll delete your story :(
where's the next chapter!
quick quick, before HP 7 comes out, quick!
Author's Response: Hiya! Sorry, my mind was completely fixated on DH! Haha, I couldn’t concentrate with the film and the book out this month. Chapter 10 is in the process of being completed tho, it’s probably 80% complete now, just have some holes to fill in! Thanks for reading & commenting & not giving up on me! =D
ahem... i have seen that 'chapter 10 is coming soon' thing for weeks now! is it REALLY coming soon?
What's with the 'woot!' ?
Great story. Yeah, it's a threat :). Okay, just don't take forever, or I'll take you off my favourites.
Just kidding! I can't get you on my favourites anyway. I add your story, and then it just comes off the next time I go on. Do you know what the problem is?
Also, you won't get Sirius to - ahem - get anyone pregnant etc will you, because I don't know if I'd like the main character to do that (considering I'm Christian and all). I mean, it's only a story, so the side on characters can, but I'd prefer if you don't dirty Sirius. Unless he's married. Which he isn't.
Author's Response: The \"woot!\" comes out when I\'m hyper...which is most times. Don\'t worry about Sirius, I\'m keeping this story as close to cannon as possible. Sirius is a naughty character, yes, but not *that* sort of naughty...um...at least no, not at 12 years old...blimey! Sirius will be...well he\'ll be Sirius. ;) Thanks for reading! Chapter 9 is probably 90% complete so keep checking back! Thanks again! =D
99% complete! AHHHHHHH!!!! You're holding me on a thread now, I can't take the tension. I am so very excited.
I think mourning time is over for the puppy, but I can't wait to see if Sirius is brave enough to tell his friends about it.
I think I'm getting really hyper now though. So I'll probably stop now before I go through the great one thing.
ah! I feel so guilty! I haven't reviewed for so long! I wouldn't be suprised if you don't remember me!
I am ex uk_rulz. Remember, the faithful supporter of the past. I will return to review practically everytime I go on-line. (i haven't gone on for a while).
Please forgive me, great one.
P.S. I love your fanfic!
Author's Response: Haha don\'t feel guilty! Chapter 7 is nearly 99% complete and I will be sending it to my beta within the next few days. Thanks again for reading!!! <3
uk_rulz is now TrueMarauder.
See, I told you this name was better.
Love your story! Can't wait for the next chapter! Hope Sirius'll be okay.
Author's Response: Well hullo TrueMarauder! I like both names actually because the UK does \"rule\"...I am going there next spring...*crosses fingers* I\'m working on Chappy 7...it\'s coming, just slower than I\'d like!
you really need to be careful.
isn't there a six month thing? and then you'll be deleted?
i mean, i dont want to rush you, because it's better late than rubbish
but you could at least let us know you haven't disappeared off the face of the earth
or have you?
This has got to be the saddest chapter you've written, I really feel for Andromeda, I even wanted to cry myself.
You cannot leave us waiting this time. I need to find out more. And soon.
Author's Response: Hahahhaa, is that a threat? =op I’m working on Chapter 9 and I will tell you it is coming much slower than Chapter 8. I wrote Chapter 8 in 2 days! That is unheard of for me! Anyway, I’m still debating on two directions to take Chapter 9, but I do promise to continue, no worries on that! Thank you again for reading & reviewing! Woot!
ok... i guess that's the end of this...
it was good while it lasted
i just wanted to say thanks for the entertainment, and i hope you do well in life
[i seem like a stalker, right? sorry]
I looked all over for your name in the Quicksilver Quill compo! I hope winners weren't chosen for votes, or I feel so guilty for not voting.
I'm sure all your fans here will work to help you be recognised by the wider public by PUTTING THIS STORY ON THEIR FAVOURITES! Right guys? And girls? Everyone?!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh, yeah: can't wait to read chapter 7 :)
Author's Response: Awww thanks, TM. Just to let you know, I\'ve sent CHAPTER 7 to MNFF so it\'s in the que. =D Thanks for the comment!!! <3
horray! you were great! this was great! EVERYTHING IS GREAT!
chapter 8 is coming along faster than the other chapters did. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
[jumps around like a crazy bunny]
Author's Response: Hahahaha sit down sit down crazy bunny you’re making me dizzy! Thank you for checking back and still reading! Woot woot!