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It Takes Love to Live by Lil Red

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 22 Reviews
Summary: This is the story of a girl, who falls in love with a boy. Sadly, this boy has to save the world. He refuses to love the girl until she's safe.

Ginny Weasley thought it couldn't get worse after her boyfriend, Harry Poter broke up with her. Little did she know, Harry was coming back to the Burrow, but not to see Ginny. He refuses to yield to her pleas of love, but love may be the only thing he has to help him survive.

Will Harry discover it takes love to live?
Prequel to Hero and Fortune Favors the Brave.

Rating for later chapters.

Written pre-book 7, so Book 7 Disregarded
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 10/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: Midnight Thoughts

Ok, mayve I worded that wrong. I should have said I could guess your age. I think it would be a good idea to extend your vocabulary. I really liked it though. Don't take it the wrong way. It was good, but we can improve everything :-) !

Author's Response: I\'m a perfectionist, so your commen will not only make me crazy trying to improve my writing, but it\'ll actually help me improve my writing!

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 10/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: Midnight Thoughts

Hey, I liked it, but I could tell you're a beginner.Try putting in more descriptions. I still like it though!


Author's Response: Note to self: Finish next chappy. Anyway, yeah, in the original chapter, there were more descriptions and all that good stuff, but when I was typing and editing, I couldn\'t put them in because I always ended up on a different track than I wanted to be on.

A Stolen Past by nuw255

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 418 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: Fifteen-year-old Harry Potter wakes up in his cupboard under the stairs at number four, Privet Drive with no memory of the past five years of his life. What happened to his memory? What do his strange dreams mean? And most importantly, how will he survive in a school for incurably criminal boys?

This is primarily a mystery, with a bit of shippiness thrown in here and there. Of course, if I told you WHO is involved in the shippiness, that would ruin part of the mystery, wouldn’t it?

This story takes place immediately after OotP (and thus disregards HBP).

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Memory Loss

Hmmm. This is interesting. I really want to read more. Good job for the opening chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks very much.

Sleeping With The Enemy by SnorkackCatcher

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 34 Reviews
Summary: "I can't see her -- Her! -- in the next bed, not through the hangings -- but I can hear her ... She's lying there peacefully, not a care in the world, while I'm lying here crying on my pillow ... After all, it seems She's the one Ron wants." Hermione/Ron/Lavender triangulation, set during HBP.
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: Story Text

That was very nicely written. The thoughts were played out good and making everyone think it's Hermione talking was just so foolishly crafty and cunning! Very good.

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad the cunning plan worked. :)

Teacups are the Nemesis of Small Furry Animals by InkandPaper

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 15 Reviews
Summary: During the first scene in HBP, Fudge turned a teacup into a gerbil, and the Prime Minister 'gave the gerbil to his delighted niece'. Here is the tale of the girl Annabel, and the rather unfortunate gerbil named Teacup...it's canon!
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 10/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: Of Gerbils and Other Tasty Things


Author's Response: Was it? Interesting perspective :)

An Unclear Past by Winged Artemis

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 52 Reviews
Summary: It's years after the trio is out of Hogwarts, Harry's found all of the Horcruxes, Voldemort's dying slowly and the Death Eaters are receding. All of the trio are married, and life is swell. But with one last flourish, Voldemort attacks Harry and Ron. The two defeat Voldemort, but lose their memories of their past since their first year, along with You-Know-Who, leaving Hermione, Ginny, the Weasleys and Harry and Ron's kids help nurse them back to sanity.

Author's Note: The Violence is mild in the first and fourth chapter, there is a bit, so I added a Violence warning. It's not graphic, though.

Currently on hiatus. See profile for more information.

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/08/06 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three - Dreams and Reality

Again, I loved it! Update soon, great plot, it did clear a lot of things up. I LOVE that you made Draco good, I don't believe that he's really as bad as he seems.



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I\'ll try to update... er... relatively soon!

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 11/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Inside St. Mungo's

This sounds really interesting! Maybe I should read it...?

Author's Response: Haha.

Author's Response: maybe you should!

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 11/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Inside St. Mungo's

Oooooh! I like it so far! I'll definately read on! Better do that, now.... Also, I found one place that you might want to revise:

She pulled out a book and started to read, but she couldn't digest the scribbles of ink on the pages. To her, it was a blank page with black scribbles on it.

It's the second paragraph. You used scribbles twice. I don't know if you wanted it to be like that or not, but it sounded weird to me. Otherwise, I loved it!

Author's Response: I realized that - I waas rereading it to a friend and I was like, \"uggggh. That sounds bad.\" I\'m working on another fic at the same time as the third chapter, so I don\'t really have time to fix errors. But thanks, I\'ll get around to it....someday.

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 11/09/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One - Returning Home

I don't think they wer really out of character. I liked it. I'm going ot put it on my favorites! Yes I am! I can't believe you killed Ronald, though! WAHHH!

Author's Response: lol, thank you.

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 11/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Inside St. Mungo's

HUHA! Ron's not dead! I was reading the reveiws. Yeah. I was kind of wondering because it sounded like they were both alive in the summary. YAY! He's not dead! He's not DEAD! Coolness.

Author's Response: Yes, Ron will be alive....eventually! *dun dun dun* and the plot THICKENS!

Beeping Boxes by Wand_Waver2006

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 11 Reviews
Summary: Ron, kicked out of the Leaky Cauldron for the day, goes in search of a thing Neville calls a "micawave". Is looking at Muggle-made objects really as interesting as his dad makes it out to be?

The One-Shot challenge--Muggle Artifacts by Wand_Waver2006 of Ravenclaw House.
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 11/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: Beeping Boxes

That was kinda funny. You should extend it. Write another chapter or a sequal or something.

Author's Response: Hmm, I\'ll think about it, thanks for the review!

The Man in the Box by the_evenstar

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 15 Reviews
Summary: What happens when Ron gets a midnight visit from a strange man in a glowing box?

One of five finalists in The One-Shot Challenge – Muggle Artifacts.
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 10/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Man in the Box

O-M-G! That was so FUNNY! And so very well written! I AH-DORE IT! 10/10!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I\'m so glad you enjoyed it! :D <3

Dudders by bajab

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 18 Reviews
Summary: Dudley Dursley never hated Harry Potter, but he did want what was in his room. Humour, one shot - post GOF.
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 10/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

HAHA! That was interesting, in a good way! YAY for interestin'! Okay, I'm done. I et very giddy sometimes, don't worry I'm normal. However, some people call me weird. Have you ever thought that maybe they're the weird ones and I'm just normal? Okay, back to the reveiw. I liked it. It was simple and enjoyable to read. It was pleasantly easy to understand. It was somewhat funny, though not to the extent to where I would giggle. Trust me, I giggle a lot. The one time when I got my friends underwear, we were at a sleepover, stuck on the ceiling.... Whoa! I probably woke up the whole neighborhood! Trust me! Anyways, I'm babbling. I think I'm gonna go ahead and stop it here. I liked it though.

10/10 Love it!


Author's Response: Thanks - I think :)

Draco's Trick-or-Treat by Schmerg_The_Impaler

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 88 Reviews
Summary: Three-year-old Draco goes trick-or-treating for the first time. His mother takes the opportunity to teach him some lessons and Malfoy family values that she believes will be important to her son later in life. This depiction of Draco is VASTLY different from the version of him that I write in "The Dark Lord's Blog."

Ridiculously short one-shot.

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One and Only!

Oh, that poor little girl! It justs goes to show that people end up how they are because of their parents. Very nicely done.



Author's Response: Why, thank you! I\'m glad you got the message in the piece! ^_^

Harry Potter and the Wicked Dream by Ron x Hermione

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 24 Reviews
Summary: When Harry Potter is battling the Dark Lord, Voldemort, will he sacrifice everything so there will be peace in the Wizarding World for his friends and more generations to come? Yes.

But what will happen... If Harry realizes that it has all be a dream?

All reviews will be responded to. Thanks for reading and enjoy!

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 11/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: Wicked Dream.

That was a really nice, cute one-shot! I loved it! I always thought of it something like that if J.K. Rowling was going to have fun with our minds! LOL! I really did like it though! Gr8 job!

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so much for your review! I\'m glad that you liked it so much!

After the Rain by JC_Cainstone

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 8 Reviews
Summary: Tonks is pregnant with Remus' baby, but Remus was killed in the Final Battle. Trying to escape her world of misery, who can she turn to?
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 11/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: After the Rain

This story was OK, but it was kinda fluffy. It went fast and it seemed a lot of things depended on luck and chance. It wasn't BAD, though. Try spacing the events out, and putting in more details.

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time for reading it. I know it went kind of fast and I was trying to avoid that, but at the same time I didn\'t want to linger too much on one emotion or scene, so I\'m sorry you picked up on it. Thank you so much again for reviewing, and next time I\'ll try harder!

From the Mods by MNFF Staff

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 72 Reviews
Summary: A collection of one-shots centered around celebration, happiness, family, or love. Each chapter is a different one-shot from a different mod-- a gift from us to you. Happy birthday, MNFF! *Bows to Authors*
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 11/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: Friends in Strange Places

Cute! I liked it. Simple to read, but also somewhat developed. It makes me feel like getting into the 'Holiday Spirit'! Lol!

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 11/27/06 Title: Chapter 2: A Moment in History

Aw! I really liked that! Short n' sweet! I'm guessong that it was Harry and Ginny. But maybe its somebody else? I guess you won't tell me, I suppose the 'secrecy' is part of the story, hmph! Lol. Joking, sorry I'm giddy. I really did like it, though!

New Beginnings by Ron x Hermione

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 19 Reviews
Summary: Ron and Hermione are in love, and nothing can stop their relationship. Or so they thought.

A terrible tragedy happens in Ron’s family. The two try to sort out their problems. But Ron just doesn’t have the will to pick up the pieces. Will he have the strength to carry on? And will Hermione help him through it?


She finally pulled away. “Are you alright? Do you need anything? Because I can just-”

Ron shook his head slowly, not even looking at her. He was in a daze. Hermione gave him a weak smile. “You’re really taking this hard, aren’t you?” she asked him gently. She put a soft hand on his shoulder.

Ron turned to look at her with an angry and hurt expression on his face. “Hard? HARD?” he yelled. He pushed her arm away.

Hermione almost gasped. This man didn’t sound like Ron at all. She hadn’t meant to offend him in any way.

This was originally written for the February One-Shot Challenge. I am Ron x Hermione, of Hufflepuff.
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 02/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: New Beginnings

That was very, very good! Great job. I thought it was sweet. However, you called Ginny "Mrs. Weasley" when they were going to the hospital wing. She would be "Ms. Weasley". Other than that it was as close to perfection as a one-shot can get!


Author's Response: Ha, ha ha! I saw that too, earlier yesterday! I\'ll go back and change that! Thanks for your review! ~Lindsey :)


Rated: Reviews
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 04/03/07 Title: None

AWESOME PROLOGUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want more! NOW!