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The Room of Rejection by Gmariam
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 14]

Summary: Harry had hidden the Half-Blood Prince’s potions book in the Room of Requirement to avoid turning it over to Professor Snape. On the morning of Dumbledore’s funeral Harry goes for a quiet walk through Hogwarts and ends up back at the Room of Requirement. He goes in, thinking to retrieve the book, but leaves with something quite different.

This is a missing moment - of sorts - from HBP. It is very reflective, as Harry ponders the choices he has made, and the choices he faces. But there is a brief touch of Hogwarts quirkiness at the end as Harry experiences a poignant connection with someone he’s lost.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2117 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
06/04/06 Updated: 06/08/06

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 10/29/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whoa! I loved it. It was very well written and had a unique idea. Its short and all, but that's good. I loved the bowling idea too. I never would have thought up something like that! How could you remeber something like that? I bet you were reading SS over again and thought it would make a good story! Come on... admit it! LOL! Just joking! Loved it!

10/10 for creativity and writing style!

Author's Response: This is the second review for this story I\'ve gotten today, and I wrote it quite a while ago! Thanks so much for reading this little story, I\'m so glad you liked it! I\'m not sure where I got the idea, I think I was probably rereading HBP, though I know I went back to SS to look up bits about Dumbledore. Thank you so much for the compliments, and for leaving a review - I really appreciate it! Thanks!! ~Gina :)


Amoretti by Violet Phoenix
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 20]

Summary: It was no wonder my friends had abandoned me to the clutches of this couch that just happened to be in the same room as the girl I adored who just happened to hate me and who wished I had never been born. Definitely not a good day... Flip. That noise was going to drive me crazy, I swear it.

A James/Lily humour story that takes place before she changed her mind about him.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2170 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
06/11/06 Updated: 06/14/06

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 02/24/07 Title: Chapter 1: Amoretti

Cute, but it doesn't really go anywhere from here? I liked the writing and I only found one mistake. In the very first paragraph you used ellipses. You only have three, but because of the fact that its the end of a sentence you should have used four. Otherwise, it was great.


No Wands Allowed by HarryPotter is my LIFE
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 68]

Summary: What happens when Ron and Hermione's rowing becomes too much for Harry to take? Only at Hogwarts could such a phenomenon occur. In an insult match that includes the entire school, what could be the outcome?

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 1381 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
07/17/06 Updated: 07/22/06

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 07/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: No Wands Allowed


Author's Response: Thank you...I think! Well, you know what they say, the story is a copy of the author. (Well, no, actually nobody says that, but in this case it\'s true!)

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 07/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: No Wands Allowed


Author's Response: Thank you...I think! Well, you know what they say, the story is a copy of the author. (Well, no, actually nobody says that, but in this case it\'s true!)


I've Got My Eyes On You by little_kitty
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 55]

Summary: Past Featured StoryAn anonymous person has been sending letters to Harry. He is told to carry out a "secret task" according to a set of instructions, and if he fails, the consequences will be strange and unusual. His best friends' lives may also be at stake. After several unsuccessful attempts to ignore the letters, Harry reluctantly decides to carry out the task, only to learn a very unexpected moral at the end.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3111 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
08/06/06 Updated: 08/15/06

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 11/28/06 Title: Chapter 2: Arousing Suspicions

In my last reveiw, when I said '10/101' I ACTUALLY meant to say '10/10!'. It was way better than 10/101.

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 11/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: Anonymous Letters

OMG! Congrats about being featured and all, that's how I found this story. I absolutely LOVE it so far! Its hilarious! I am going to read the next chapter. This is going on my favorites! I can feel it!

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 11/21/06 Title: Chapter 2: Arousing Suspicions

HA! I love i! I really hope you update soon, its friggin' awesome!




Storm of Darkness by dashofmagic
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 176]

Summary: After the long fight, after all of their hard work, it is over. Voldemort has triumphed, and the Wizarding world has been thrown into darkness. Ginny is the servant of the Malfoys, her free will sucked away from her. Ron is forced to join the Death Eaters, threatened with his family's lives. Hermione is taken prisoner by creatures of the night. But, far away, weak and barely alive, is the one who can pull them out of the storm...if love can survive the challenge.

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Violence

Word count: 38186 Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
08/10/06 Updated: 02/17/07

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 02/17/07 Title: Chapter 16: In Closing

So sweet! I loved it. You should write a sequel because you have done an excellent job here! Very well done. I really loved it.

Author's Response: i haven\'t decided if i\'m going to do a\'s a good possibility, though!!! i know i lot of stuff i could use. thanks for being so supportive!

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 01/16/07 Title: Chapter 12: A Final Understanding

OMG! Whoa! Okay, I'm done 'wowing'. Well, I really liked this chapter, yet again, I know. It explained a lot and opened a new path for th story. I also liked your writing style and techniques. Very nicely done. Please update as quick as you did this time!
10/10 (again, aren't you lucky, lol)

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: Swallowed

Wow. That was really good. It feels like you have a good plot line and it sounds worked out. I really like it so far. It sounds very professional and you used a nice cliffhanger. It's really good.

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: Swallowed

That was 'sposed to be AliKt716, if you didn't get that typo. I have a need to correct myself. I'll read ch. 2 now. This is probably going on my favorites.

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/12/06 Title: Chapter 2: Among the Dead

OMG. That was almost scary. I can't believe it! Wow. That was really nicely written, but I am in shock. I'm definately going to keep reading.

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/12/06 Title: Chapter 4: The Muggle Cabin

Well, it's starting to clear up! I love this story! And I just started it!


Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 01/07/07 Title: Chapter 10: Dimming Light

Whoa. Never saw that one coming! I REALLY want to read more! PLZ get it up SOON!

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/12/06 Title: Chapter 5: One of Us

Wow. That's brutal, but it's really good. Wow. That is like, all I can say. Its really good. Keep writing, because you're good.


Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/12/06 Title: Chapter 6: Healing

I still love it, but I have a question!

Right here:
“I have to save her!” Harry cried, but Snape silenced him.

“Yes, that is what I am going to try to allow you to do,” he said,

Does this mean that Hermione can be saved? Her becoming a vampire is the part that gets me. That's just inhumane! But, I understand that it's part of the story. Voldie and Valil are inhumane, not you. :-)


Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/12/06 Title: Chapter 7: Deliverance

Harry Potter is alive! This is one of the best stories I have ever read. The things happening are so horrible, but the little spark of hope makes it really great!


Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 01/15/07 Title: Chapter 11: Dead

That was good! I loved how he was crying for her. It was so sweet when she woke up and he was crying for her. If she really is alive, that is. This is one of the BEST chapters yet.
11/10! (yes, I liked it THAT much)


The Things I Do For L.O.V.E by Pussycat123
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 473]

Summary: Hi, I’m Lily Evans. You know, there are a lot of fics about me out there. I’m flattered that you spend time thinking about me, but sometimes sickened. How could these fics not mention my bonkers beautiful cat, Missy? And what about my evil and malicious extremely helpful conscience? Or the fact that I make a fool out of myself at every opportunity am unique?

Well, this fic has all of these things. It also has L.O.V.E (I’m the ‘L’), the elite group of cliquey lovely girls that I am part of. And our rival, the sarcastic cynic also unique Iola Potter (cousin and partner in crime to James). But does it have an actual plot? Of course not Absolutely! And it starts with me getting a detention with Iola (through no fault of my own, of course). And we kind of ... almost ... well, we get on alright. A friendship sparks, shall we say. I have no idea how it happens It is meant to be. But it’s going to take some fighting for if we want to keep it. It would be a lot easier to just stick to what we know, really. We were perfectly happy hating each other. But ... well. I guess you’ll have to find out!

Read this or I’ll curse you Read this and I’ll love you!

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 50755 Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
08/19/06 Updated: 06/19/07

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 03/27/07 Title: Chapter 10: A Life Without L.O.V.E Is Like A Life Without Chilblains

All I can say is UPDATE!

Author's Response: I\'ll try my best! Thanks for reviewing!


Summary: What happens when you cross Ginny Weasley with the death of Harry, a tyrannic Voldemort, unwanted fame, and the betrayal of her best friend? You get a very pissed off Ginny, with an agenda for revenge.

A dystopic version of what happens after the final battle, and a bad (in a good way) Ginny that certainly takes her revenge on Voldemort in spades. The 'girl-power' super heroine you've all been waiting for- brought over from another site due to popular demand!

All lyrics are copyrighted by the band Garbage, and no infringement is intended- I thank them for inspiring this plotbunny!

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Violence

Word count: 52833 Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
08/23/06 Updated: 12/20/06

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 01/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Version 2.0

This sounds really good. I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Glad to hear it!! Read on, my friend!

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