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Lessons by Hallie Black

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Professor Sprout has just given 7th year Gryffindors a new project, where the class, divided in pairs, has to raise a rare plant. What’s gonna happen when Lily finds out who her partner is? And how will she survive in his sole company?
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 02/24/07 Title: Chapter 7: The end… or not?

Oh, good, a sequel. This story was very good. A reasonable length to read, but it didn't go anywhere with James and Lily, so it's good that there's a sequel. I really enjoyed it, though, and I will most certainly read A Cauldronful of Lessons.

The New Surprise by rache

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •

Hi everyone just to say this story is finished, there will not be any more chapters. Sorry if that wasn't clear beforeb>

Harry and Ginny are married, with a seven-year old daughter. As Ginny finds out she is pregnant with her second child, memories come back to her, good and bad. The war is over, and everyone feels safe. Shouldn’t they? Strange things are happening, mysterious plots are being formed, putting Harry and his loved ones in danger. Everyone knows he will do anything for the people he loves…Especially Ginny.

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 07/28/06 Title: Chapter 12: Tea

OMG! Ehmygod! I am in shock! One thing's for sure, you had better update soon! If you don't I'll... I'll... I'll tickle you!

Author's Response: Aah!! I am extremely ticklish!! Yes, I promise to try and update ASAP, because its th holidays now so no work execpt for this art thing grrr...lol thnx for reading!

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 09/16/06 Title: The New Surprise

AURGH! I h8 access denied!

Author's Response: I know me too :(. Sorry about having to wait. if its any consolation, im writing chapter 16 at the moment, so it should be finished by the time 15 gets submitted!

As the Wizarding World Turns by Canis Contentis

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Ever wonder what the world of Harry Potter would be like as a soap opera? Me neither – until now, that is. Set in Harry’s 6th year, think of this as the parts of the Half Blood Prince that JKR didn’t want us to see. If you're into unconventional ships, this one's for you! Behold… As the Wizarding World Turns

Episode 9 is up!

*****Excerpt from a later chapter*****

"Haven’t you heard the rumors about her – one date Weasley.”

“One date what!?” Harry stared at Hermione dumfounded. He turned his head towards Ginny who once again started snogging Dean. Dean’s hands wandered to his girlfriend’s bum as she pulled the lower half of his body closer. “Hmm… makes sense,” he admitted.

“Anytime she brings up that sort of thing, I try to act like I have loads of experience too, but actually I have no idea what I’m talking about.”

“But what about you and Krum?” Harry asked, still visibly uncomfortable about their conversation.

“Oooh big deal. So we kissed a couple times. That means I must be a demon in the sack,” Hermione answered sarcastically. “Look, I was thinking…” Hermione started to blush. “I need to find someone I know to you know… practice with.”
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 01/15/07 Title: Chapter 9: Episode 9 - Evil Plan C

Heh heh. Funny. Write more cuz I'll read it! Very nice humor fic.

A Whistle Through Time by crumple_horned_snorkack

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Eleven-year-old James meets Lily in Diagon Ally, about a week before school starts. Snippets of James's feeble attempts to make Lily come to her senses, from first year to seventh. Nice and fluffy one shot. James's POV.
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 09/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

I actually really liked it! Good work!

Author's Response: You \"actually\" did?! Great!

With Tired Eyes, Minds, and Souls We Slept by QuIDdITch_PlaYA

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Sequel to Revenge of the Serpent. The title is taken from a One Tree Hill episode title.

Harry and Ginny are happily married and living together. They are about to become parents. Still, life has never been normal for Harry Potter, and it may never be.

Edit: Final author's note was edited.
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 10/28/06 Title: Chapter 12: At Long Last

Helloooooo! I love it! You're right, this chapter was kinda 'just there'! It's not as good as the rest, but I guess it has to be in there. One question, why couldn't Harry be in the roomw/ Ginny while she was giving birth?

Author's Response: cuz he was kinda freakin out and it probably wouldnt help Ginny at all. =]

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 10/15/06 Title: With Tired Eyes, Minds, and Souls We Slept

AURGH! Ireally, really, really, REALLY want this to be validated! HUH! Oh, hurry up great administrators! By the way, are you going to post this story on HPFF.net? Just wondering. I know, change of mood there. Oh, well, I know I'm insane. They'd better hurry up thoug, that's all I'm saying.

Author's Response: sure i\'ll post it there! I didn\'t get many reviews on that site so I figured nobody really would want it much over there...


Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 01/06/07 Title: None

I really like this so far. I can't wait to read more. I can tell you've created a very good plot.

Happy Birthday, Lily Evans by Vindictus Viridian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Lily's eighteenth birthday is approaching fast. Will one of her friends figure out to do with a long-neglected organ?
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 02/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday, Lily Evans

Wow. That was... interesting. Very creative. I liked it. It was very... unique!

Author's Response: Thanks!

My Best Friend by nuw255

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Dave Jensen thought Harry Potter was just a fun story - that is, until he found out that his best friend was a witch. Join Dave as he learns her true identity and helps her to stop running from her past.

This is a semi-fluffy, and really quite silly (hey, that rhymed!) one-shot.

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: My Best Friend

Heh, that was funny. Very interesting plot line. I actually liked it. I think I'll read more of your stories. That was good.

Author's Response: Thanks very much. I hope you do check out my other stories, as I think they\'re all better than this one (but different, too).

Senses by Gryffinpuff

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Sense: a word of so many meanings. This is a story about senses. The common sense notion of self preservation that is lost when friends are in need, the senses of the body that can be damaged so easily, and the intuitive senses of the heart that tell you when things have changed. R/Hr focused with a little bit of H/G, not a lot of fluff, with rotating views between the characters on a truly horrific day.

Quicksilver Quills Runner-Up - Best Romance, Canon
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/17/06 Title: Chapter 13: Common Sense

Wow! That was really good! There's a really cool plot going on throught the whole story, since I can't remember if I reviewed, but anyways. I like it. You have some very creative ideas and are a great writer. Keep up the good work! I really want to read on very badly.

Author's Response: Three more chapters left I think, don\'t quote me on that but yea we\'re almost done! Thanks for reading

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 05/03/07 Title: Chapter 16: Epilogue

Beautiful. That's all I can think of to describe it.
I think there could be room for a sequal....

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 11/05/06 Title: Chapter 4: Sense and Reason

I really LOVE it! Its romantic, mysterious, and has very good descriptions! I'm excited to read the rest!


Author's Response: Thanks, I like to get a little of everything in there. Glad you are enjoying it so far!

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 11/05/06 Title: Chapter 5: A Sense of Foreboding

O-M-G! That must have been a rather large lie. I gotta read more!

Author's Response: It was a rather important one ;)

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 11/05/06 Title: Chapter 7: Sensing Fear

O-M-G! OMG! I LOVE this story! I probably sound like an obsessive freak, but this is really good! It's as good as J.K. Rowling herself! She doesn't go as angsty as this, and I kinda like stuff like that! Its wonderful! YAY!

Author's Response: That\'s a major compliment!! I\'m not sure I entirely deserve it, but I\'ll take it anyway =D I like a little bit of angst, too, and don\'t worry I love getting comments!

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 11/05/06 Title: Chapter 8: A Sense of Failure

Wicked, wicked author! LOL! Joking! Still lovin' it!

Author's Response: I know, I\'m evil. I freely admit it. Glad you are still enjoying the wickedness =)

Revenge is a Dish Best Served to a Weasley by CraftySlytherin

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: SEQUEL TO TRUTH BE TOLD. After the events of the day Hogwarts' pumpkin juice had been spiked with truth potion, Hermione vowed revenge. Many students were still under it's effects, even after it should have worn off. Hogwarts' most famous pranksters should have know better than to mess with Hermione Granger. She was about to show them that revenge is a dish best served to a Weasley.
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 11/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

I still love it! You really should write a sequal! It's really funny! Hehehehehe!

Mistakes by Pearle

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: St Mungo’s is a very busy place. And mistakes do happen. Try explaining that to Severus and Hermione.
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 11/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: Mistakes

LOL! That was pretty funny!

The Room of Rejection by Gmariam

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry had hidden the Half-Blood Prince’s potions book in the Room of Requirement to avoid turning it over to Professor Snape. On the morning of Dumbledore’s funeral Harry goes for a quiet walk through Hogwarts and ends up back at the Room of Requirement. He goes in, thinking to retrieve the book, but leaves with something quite different.

This is a missing moment - of sorts - from HBP. It is very reflective, as Harry ponders the choices he has made, and the choices he faces. But there is a brief touch of Hogwarts quirkiness at the end as Harry experiences a poignant connection with someone he’s lost.

Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 10/29/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whoa! I loved it. It was very well written and had a unique idea. Its short and all, but that's good. I loved the bowling idea too. I never would have thought up something like that! How could you remeber something like that? I bet you were reading SS over again and thought it would make a good story! Come on... admit it! LOL! Just joking! Loved it!

10/10 for creativity and writing style!

Author's Response: This is the second review for this story I\'ve gotten today, and I wrote it quite a while ago! Thanks so much for reading this little story, I\'m so glad you liked it! I\'m not sure where I got the idea, I think I was probably rereading HBP, though I know I went back to SS to look up bits about Dumbledore. Thank you so much for the compliments, and for leaving a review - I really appreciate it! Thanks!! ~Gina :)

Amoretti by Violet Phoenix

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It was no wonder my friends had abandoned me to the clutches of this couch that just happened to be in the same room as the girl I adored who just happened to hate me and who wished I had never been born. Definitely not a good day... Flip. That noise was going to drive me crazy, I swear it.

A James/Lily humour story that takes place before she changed her mind about him.
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 02/24/07 Title: Chapter 1: Amoretti

Cute, but it doesn't really go anywhere from here? I liked the writing and I only found one mistake. In the very first paragraph you used ellipses. You only have three, but because of the fact that its the end of a sentence you should have used four. Otherwise, it was great.