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Summary: Sirius Black, the most saught after male in the history of Hogwarts, has just had another successful friday night...but the girl he's with is not who he expected (one shot, rated for implied sex and some language, total humour!!!)

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1077 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/29/05 Updated: 01/29/05


Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 02/24/07 Title: Chapter 1: Sirius's Worst hangover ever...

lol. funny...

 

Ginny's Task by RobinMNFF
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 98]

Summary: Ginny Weasley finds out how her relationship with Harry Potter will affect the outcome of the war against Voldemort. The sequel to Ginny's Task has been posted! It's called 'In Search of Her Heart'

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 16931 Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/31/05 Updated: 07/25/05


Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 10/20/08 Title: Chapter 6: Prophecies and Girl Stuff

I like it, but one thing; if the mark is over her heart, wouldn't it be on her left side, but your right side if you were facing her?

 

The Power Of Suggestion by FriendsOfSnape
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 650]

Summary: "Be careful what you wish for," the old adage goes. So what happens when Hogwarts is under a spell where what you say is what you get?


Chappie 14 is UP! And while it is the end, let us not be sad, but instead read the insanity that has driven so many to review and nearly wet themsleves with delight.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 27684 Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/10/05 Updated: 07/21/06


Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 01/07/07 Title: Chapter 2: Creepy Creatures and Walking Plants

OMG! Wow. This is veeeeeery interesting. I have to read more! Love it.
~AliKt716~

Author's Response: Oooh, veeeeeeeeery interesting? That\'s a lot of e\'s!

 

Summary: Mr. Weasley has a talk with Ron about his developing relationship with Hermione.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1600 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/15/05 Updated: 03/15/05


Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 07/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: Plugs and Outlets

That was hilarious! You really should consider writing a story called quills and ink bottles!

 
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 07/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: Plugs and Outlets

That was hilarious! You really should consider writing a story called quills and ink bottles!

 

Blood of the Heart by kjpzak
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 915]

Summary: Past Featured Story7th Yr Sequel to Ancient Magic. It is now known the power of immortality resides inside Harry and Ginny. Will their combined powers be enough to protect them from the Dark Lord?

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 266365 Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/27/05 Updated: 04/02/06


Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 07/18/07 Title: Chapter 38: Balance

Wow. That was amazing! Your story is so well rounded. Overall I give you ten/ten! Characters were great and everything seemed very well though out. I was pulled in. It was magnificent! I went to bed late at night with my mind wondering where Anna is and my eyes telling me to sleep. Great original characters, too, by the way. It was so original. It's believable to the extent of Harry Potter. You put in great ideas and it was so developed. This was definately NOT a typical Harry/Ginny story. I loved your Blood Bond idea and everything flowed very well. The battles were done very well and I liked your original spells. I really think that you could carry this on to do something with the summer. You've left a lot of room with Anna and Nathan's baby, Harry and Ginny's internships and engagment, and Ron's Chudley Cannons try-out. Even though this is finished its going on my favorites along wth Ancient Magic because that was simply fabulous! 10/10!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m really glad you enjoyed it - I had fun writing it. I think the greatest compliment is the loss of sleep! :)

 

Summary: This particular plot bunny was born while I was watching the closet scene in the movie “13 Going on Thirty.” If you’re a shy, inexperienced teenager, what could be more hellish than being trapped in a closet for seven minutes with someone you barely know? Or with someone you know, but don’t like in that way. Or with someone you like in that way but don’t know if they like you. Or . . . well, I think you get the idea. Although H/Hr is the primary ship, this story does contain other ships as well.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 7317 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/01/05 Updated: 04/21/05


Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 07/06/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: LET THEM TALK!

Okay, I'm not even sure why I read this, as I ship R/Hr and H/G. I think that you're a gret writer and this would have been very good if you replaced Harry with Ron. I think Harry was a bit out of character, not just because I don't ship H/Hr, but because Harry is an orphan and he can't remember anyone ever loving him. I honestly don't think he'd be as open with his feelings as you portrayed him to be. I think in the last chapter he would think Hermione didn't like him at all.

 

A Complete Life by Dan_D_Lion
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 59]

Summary: ~One shot~
On the night of December, a young lady wakes up to a strange feeling. Having the house to herself, she finds out some big news that will surely change her life. She's holding a life within her.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1091 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/08/05 Updated: 10/25/05


Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 02/24/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Complete Life

That was really sweet and James seemed to be in character nicely.

 

Soap Pie by Lirael Astarael
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 112]

Summary: *ONE-SHOT* After carefully observing (ahem) a row between Ron and Hermione, Fred and George concoct an evil plan...and a pie. A sniff of Harry/Ginny and, of course, the odor of pie.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2075 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/11/05 Updated: 04/11/05


Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 09/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: Soap Pie

Beautiful like a banana.

Author's Response: Yes, well, thanks.

 

A Dark Day by Dan_D_Lion
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 11]

Summary: Peter decides to tell someone of his one huge mistake that had started the war. That someone is his mother. Hear on what he has to say.


~Excerpts~

“I told… Ma, promise you won’t stop loving me when I tell you this. Promise me,” he squeezed her hand tight, “I-I told You-Know-Who about James and Lily! I did it!”

~

Peter rolled up his sleeve and looked down at it, “He gave me this you know. You-Know-Who did this to me. Many say that I am lucky to have received such a complement because many just got the mark from Lucius.”

~



R&R please!

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1694 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/29/05 Updated: 05/04/05


Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 02/24/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Dark Day

That was certainly different, but in a good way. But whyy didn't you just use "Obliviate" instead of forgetfullness?

 
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 02/24/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Dark Day

That was certainly different, but in a good way. But whyy didn't you just use "Obliviate" instead of forgetfullness?

Author's Response: Because I didn\'t do my homework. Thats why. I just wrote this story on a whim. I had no books on me and didn\'t think of searching elsewhere.

 

Luna Lovegood by loverofluna
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 46]

Summary: A short poem about Luna Lovegood! Please R&R! It would mean a ton to me!!!

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 64 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/06/05 Updated: 05/06/05


Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 01/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Short poem

Cute!!!! I liked it!

 

The Last Chapter by Hallie Black
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 58]

Summary: I guess I should write AU… Anyway, this is how I would like the last chapter of Book Seven to be… What do you say?

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 1046 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/18/05 Updated: 05/18/05


Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 02/24/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Last Chapter

Cute. It would be interesting if that was the last chapter, but hopefully it's not. I would DIE! If it was though, it would be really sweet, but then he wouldn't know his friends and I'm gonna stop before I make this too long. The point is: I liked it, it was really cute!

 

Summary: If Sirius Black can handle Severus Snape for 7-years at Hogwarts, then watching baby Harry, his godson, for the weekend should be a breeze right? WRONG! Find out what really happens when James and Lily leave Harry in his watch.




**This story was written in collaboration between me and the wonderful author, Crimsonphoenix1.**

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 6659 Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/10/05 Updated: 12/21/05


Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/09/06 Title: Chapter 5: Home Again

HEHE! That was funny! I loved it!
10/10

~AliKt716~

Author's Response: Thanks!! :-D

 

Take My Heart Away by Hatusu
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 959]

Summary: Past Featured Story Hermione goes back in time with one mission: to kill Tom Riddle before he ever comes to power. A difficult task, correct? An impossible one, she realizes, as a love between them grows stronger than anything she has ever known. Now Hermione has a choice to make. Will she condemn the Wizarding world to almost certain destruction, or will she take the life of the one boy she has ever loved?

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 39417 Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/27/05 Updated: 12/17/06


Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 15: Pieces of Agony

AURGH! I absolutely, positively HATE ACCESS DENIED! I got 3 (3!) e-mails saying that it's been updated, but NO!

~AliKt716~

P.S.~ Can't wait for the mods to get done! :-)

 
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 10/02/06 Title: Chapter 14: Price of Immortality

OMG! I absolutely love it! That was really good. Like, him choosing her over them, was just like, WOW! Ans then it was all YAY! I like this chapter a LOT!

10/10!

 

Truth Be Told by CraftySlytherin
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 354]

Summary: What happens when Fred and George Weasley, Hogwarts' reknowned kings of pranks, decide to spike a shipment of pumpkin juice bound for Hogwarts with truth potion? A day filled with true confessions of Hogwarts students!!!!!

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Alternate Universe

Word count: 4564 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/06/05 Updated: 07/06/05


Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 11/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Hehehehehehehehe! I read this, like a really long time ago, but I couldn't reveiw because I wasn't a member! WAH! It's still as funny as EVER though! I laugh everytime I read it! O-M-G! I love it. I'll have to read "Revenge is a Dish Best Served to a Weasley", now!

9/10

 

Summary: The fact that opposites attract might be one reason for Ron and Hermione’s new endearment towards each other. By the time the Hogwarts Express pulls into Hogsmeade Station for another year at Hogwarts, every witch and wizard on the train knew something had changed drastically between the two friends. Harry and Ginny on the other hand decide to keep their relationship a secret because of a “dream” Harry has about ‘You Know Who.’ If their secret love is discovered by the wrong people it could possibly cost Harry and Ginny their lives.


The sequel is on it's way! It's been submitted so I hope you enjoy it everyone!

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 64708 Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/02/05 Updated: 03/20/07


Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 06/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: Good Laughs And Bedrooms

Ron was incredibly cheesy but I loved it.

Author's Response: thanks. It get\'s less like that as it goes.

 
Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 06/28/07 Title: Chapter 1: Good Laughs And Bedrooms

Okay, I finished the last chapter. I really liked it! It wasn't the greatest, but I can tell you have potential. Good job! What is the title of the sequel? I wanna read it!

Author's Response: I am still currently untitled but I should choose one by the end of the week. Thanks for the review!

 

A Lesson In Human Anatomy by Dianne
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 24]

Summary: Set in the summer before Harry's seventh year at Hogwarts. Harry and Ginny use Polyjuice Potion to impersonate one another to enable Harry to sneak out of Privet Drive to watch a Quidditch game with Ron. When Harry does not return at the appointed time, unforseen problems arise in an embarrassing way, such as having to go to the bathroom and such in a body of the opposite sex. Humour abounds in the first half of the chapter, but angst takes over after that as Harry is caught in a lie and endures Uncle Vernon's wrath for it. Harry is rescued from Privet Drive and at first, Ginny feels responsible for having encouraged Harry to get out and have a little fun. Originally written for a challenge where the object was to describe a birthday cake with as much detail as possible, so I must warn you, Fred and George made the cake and I can say no more than that.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Substance Abuse, Abuse

Word count: 11242 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/09/05 Updated: 09/09/05


Reviewer: AliKt716 Signed
Date: 12/31/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Lesson In Human Anatomy

Tee hee! That was funny! It was sincere at times, creative, and humorous. Good job.
9.5/10
~AliKt716~

 
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